Haunting, disturbing, and beautifully written.

Wow. This is a very dark piece, and hauntingly sad for both characters. I'm not really certain what to put into a review of this nature, so I'll leave it with the knowledge that I have attempted a review rather than be simply a silent reader.

Elura

This is the kind of story that sticks with a person. You have done a wonderful job in the horror theme. I only wish there were more stories like this.

ooooh creepy I really like it at least the voices in my head liked it! ;-}

Wow.

Frightening. Everything that people fear about mental illness. This is along the lines of some of the best psychological horror I've ever read and I'm glad I read it in daylight. ;)

Wow, spooky

Powersul and VERY Dark. Love it.

Love Sonia :)

That was, well, unsettling. which was probably the idea.

This story is creepily excellent.

That was creepy.

You definitely posted this to the right site. I love originality. I love stories that push the envelope instead of follow the norm. I love stories that shock the reader and make them feel something different for a change. Thanks for posting.

Bravo, finally a story outside of the box.   Tamara

Intense and chilling ...  :) Love the last lines!