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sshg316A certain green-eyed monster helps bring Hermione and Severus' secret relationship out into the open.
ReviewedA/N: Written for the Live Journal community, Romancing the Wizard's "Bring Out Your Dead" Challenge.
Prompt #34, a jealous rage. 750 words exactly.
“Will we be attending together or separately?”
Hermione looked up from the mountain of parchments, her breath hitching as she caught sight of him casually leaning against the doorframe, his frock coat already unbuttoned and his teaching robes slung over one arm. In his hand was a piece of pale pink parchment, identical to the one she had received that afternoon.
His mouth curved upward in a lazy smile. “Best mind your work, Professor,” Severus drawled as he entered her office. He half-sat, half-leaned against her desk, craning his neck to read the topmost parchment. “I don’t believe Mr Thomason will appreciate your additions.”
Puzzled, she followed his gaze to the surface of her desk, gasping as she saw red ink drip from her quill onto the student’s essay. With a wave of her wand, the offending ink disappeared, salvaging Geoffrey Thomason’s hard work.
“Together or separately?” he repeated.
Hermione lowered her eyes and worried her lower lip between her teeth.
“Stop that,” he admonished, lifting his hand to her cheek and rubbing his thumb against the abused flesh.
She leaned into his touch. “I missed you today.”
A ghost of a smile flitted across his features. “And I, you. Answer the question.”
Hermione sighed and turned her head to press a kiss to his palm. “I’m sorry, Severus. I’m just not ready.”
He stiffened, the smile falling from his lips as he attempted to remove his hand, but she lightly clasped her fingers around his wrist.
“Are you ashamed to be seen with me?”
Her eyes flew to his. “What? No!” She quickly stood, walked around the desk, and threw her arms around his neck. She clung to him tightly, inhaling his familiar scent, until he finally returned her embrace. “I don’t want to have to answer their questions yet—I want to keep you to myself for a bit longer. That’s all.”
He buried his nose in her hair and was silent for several agonising minutes. “All right,” he agreed reluctantly. “For now.”
Lily Luna Potter loved her daddy. Everyone said so, and everyone was correct in that assumption. However, she utterly adored only one man… and she heard his voice downstairs.
She was carried by her daddy into the sitting room, where she was immediately greeted with loud cries of “Happy birthday, Lily!” She blinked owlishly before she finally grinned and clapped her hands wildly, much to the relief of the guests.
Then she saw him.
“Sev’rus!” she cried, wriggling from her father’s grasp and making her way across the room as quickly as her little legs would allow.
His glaring eyes and unsmiling face did not deter her in the slightest. “Up!” she demanded, thrusting her arms above her head. “Up!”
Hermione valiantly tried not to pay unwarranted attention to the little red-headed girl seated upon a black-clad knee, but she couldn’t help it; it was just too adorable.
Severus had been holding the birthday girl—“I two now,” she had informed everyone—since her arrival. She opened her presents, and even ate her cake, from her perch on Severus’ lap. Lily absolutely refused to budge. She was presently curled against his chest, sucking her thumb as her green eyes surveyed the room.
Hermione was probably the only one who noticed Severus’ thumb stroking the little girl’s arm, attempting to lull her to sleep. For all his bluster, he adored her as much as she adored him.
Soon, everyone headed outside to play games. Hermione shooed Molly out and began to wash up. She was standing at the sink when she felt a familiar body press against her back. She dropped her head to his shoulder, and he nibbled on her neck.
“May we leave now?”
“Where’s your girlfriend?” Hermione teased.
“With her mother,” he murmured against her skin, sending a delicious tingle down her spine.
She turned into his embrace, and he lowered his mouth to hers. Neither heard the door swing open….
“Sev’rus MINE!”
“Kneazle’s out of the bag, love,” Severus muttered as he carefully Summoned the last bit of glass with the magical tweezers.
Lily’s jealous rage had caused her to lose control of her innate magic, exploding the contents of the sink and showering Hermione in glass and ceramic shards. Lily's shrill cries had brought the entire Weasley clan indoors. They’d had no choice but to explain.
“Perhaps it was time,” Hermione replied. “Hiding was becoming a bit tiresome.”
Severus pulled her into his arms. “Remind me to thank the green-eyed monster.”
Thank you to Subversa for beta reading!
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" And a little child shall lead them "
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Hee. Thank you! This one was so fun to write.
Which green-eyed monster? Oh... this is perfect. Just perfect. A hilarious and all-too-believable glimpse of a toddler in the throes of a jealous rage. Utterly charming.
What a wonderful story! Thank you :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! :)
It's very cute. I would love to have witnessed Severus with the little girl on his lap. Should be a great father this one.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! Yes, I like to think he woul dbe a good father. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! Yes, I like to think he woul dbe a good father. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
That's Darling. Thank you so much!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
*chuckle* Dude, toddler tantrums are bad enough without adding inate magic into the fray! Hermione is one lucky woman, in more ways than one!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL Isn't that the truth? Thank you!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL Isn't that the truth? Thank you!
ah, that was sheer delight. i never saw it coming that little lily was the green-eyed monster. and such a cute little monster, too. : )
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! She really is adorable. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it - I wanted to take the prompt in an unexpected direction. It's nice to know it worked! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! She really is adorable. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it - I wanted to take the prompt in an unexpected direction. It's nice to know it worked! :D
LOL how adorable. :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you, Southern! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you, Southern! :D
Very sweet. He was obviously as besotted as Lily!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
I like to think he was ... not that he'd ever let anyone else know that. ;) Thank you!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
I like to think he was ... not that he'd ever let anyone else know that. ;) Thank you!
Oh this was lovely. Sort of wish there was more of it, but it is wonderful as is. And little Lily is so terribly cute.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! It's always a wonderful compliment to hear that a reader wants more. :) I wanted more, too, but there was a word limit to the challenge. LOL But I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. Thanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! It's always a wonderful compliment to hear that a reader wants more. :) I wanted more, too, but there was a word limit to the challenge. LOL But I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. Thanks, again!
Cute!
Wonderful story! Although my heart goes out to little Lily! I remember being so little and being besotted with a man and devestated that I would never have him to myself. I just hope Severus sat her down and soothed her hurting heart!Livvy
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! He certainly does understand unrequited love, so I feel quite sure that Severus, who is just as besotted with her, would have cuddled and comforted poor Lily. And who knows, in a future challenge I may write more about little Lily and how Severus deals with her infatuation. ;)Thanks, again! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! He certainly does understand unrequited love, so I feel quite sure that Severus, who is just as besotted with her, would have cuddled and comforted poor Lily. And who knows, in a future challenge I may write more about little Lily and how Severus deals with her infatuation. ;)Thanks, again! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
OMg, that was fabulous! I love that the green-eyed monster was Harry's daughter. Absolutely fitting!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I wanted to something a bit unexpected with the prompt. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I wanted to something a bit unexpected with the prompt. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
That was hilarious! I love how Lily was the one who went into a jealous rage -- fabulous! Amazing! I loved it! Fantastic job, by the way.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D
What a delightful glimpse of new dilimmas for Severus. Matched to two powerful witches -- a big one who he chose and a little one who chose him. Whatever is a wizard to do. Thanks for sharing such fun. Any chance of more from this little story? -- JoAnne
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much, JoAnne! I'm glad you enjoyed this. You know, I've grown quite fond of little Lily, so I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. She's too adorable to resist! Thanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much, JoAnne! I'm glad you enjoyed this. You know, I've grown quite fond of little Lily, so I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. She's too adorable to resist! Thanks, again!
What an utterly adorable green-eyed monster! I can see small children flocking to Severus. Sort of like the dog picking the one person in the room who doesn't particularly like animals. It's very sweet that he would allow himself only the smallest show of affection with his stroking thumb. Also very Slytherin in that said thumb was stroking her to sleep, which is the most tolerable of states in toddlers.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thanks, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes you're right! LOL My husband is one of those who really dislikes dogs, but they LOVE him, so I know just what you mean. And you caught me. Yes, he has dual motives most of the time, and this was no different. LOLThanks, again!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thanks, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes you're right! LOL My husband is one of those who really dislikes dogs, but they LOVE him, so I know just what you mean. And you caught me. Yes, he has dual motives most of the time, and this was no different. LOLThanks, again!
Cute! And nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Very cute!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you! :)
Oh, that was very cute!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you very much! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you very much! :)
I loved it:-))
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Adorable! From experience, there's just no reasoning with a 2-year-old. *says as tries to explain to said 2-year-old that 5 am is no time for little boys to be up and tries in vain to put his squirmy butt back to bed*
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL Isn't that the truth? Ugh. 5 am is definitley not time for little boys to be up (although mine often is up early, as well). ;) Thank you! :)
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL Isn't that the truth? Ugh. 5 am is definitley not time for little boys to be up (although mine often is up early, as well). ;) Thank you! :)
I think I would have done the same thing plus or minus the magical bit in Lily's place... Poor Hermione though, that must've hurt! Very cute!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL I think there might be a line of women all saying, "MINE!" ;) Thank you so much!
Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)
LOL I think there might be a line of women all saying, "MINE!" ;) Thank you so much!