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Green-Eyed Monster

sshg316

34 Reviews | 6.88/10 (34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A certain green-eyed monster helps bring Hermione and Severus' secret relationship out into the open.

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Just an avid reader who somehow stumbled into HP fanfiction. I read and sometimes, I write.

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10/10

mick42

" And a little child shall lead them "

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Hee. Thank you! This one was so fun to write.

10/10

ofankoma

Which green-eyed monster? Oh... this is perfect. Just perfect. A hilarious and all-too-believable glimpse of a toddler in the throes of a jealous rage. Utterly charming.

10/10

kittyperry

A fabulous story. I loved it.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you!

0/10

ricker23

Very nice story!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you!

10/10

antaneli

What a wonderful story! Thank you :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! :)

10/10

snitchette

It's very cute. I would love to have witnessed Severus with the little girl on his lap. Should be a great father this one.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! Yes, I like to think he woul dbe a good father. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! Yes, I like to think he woul dbe a good father. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

la Chatelaine

That's Darling. Thank you so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

9/10

helshez

*chuckle* Dude, toddler tantrums are bad enough without adding inate magic into the fray! Hermione is one lucky woman, in more ways than one!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL Isn't that the truth? Thank you!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL Isn't that the truth? Thank you!

10/10

kittylefish

ah, that was sheer delight. i never saw it coming that little lily was the green-eyed monster. and such a cute little monster, too. : )

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! She really is adorable. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it - I wanted to take the prompt in an unexpected direction. It's nice to know it worked! :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! She really is adorable. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it - I wanted to take the prompt in an unexpected direction. It's nice to know it worked! :D

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

LOL how adorable. :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you, Southern! :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you, Southern! :D

0/10

sunny33

Very sweet. He was obviously as besotted as Lily!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

I like to think he was ... not that he'd ever let anyone else know that. ;) Thank you!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

I like to think he was ... not that he'd ever let anyone else know that. ;) Thank you!

10/10

Lysithea

Oh this was lovely. Sort of wish there was more of it, but it is wonderful as is. And little Lily is so terribly cute.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! It's always a wonderful compliment to hear that a reader wants more. :) I wanted more, too, but there was a word limit to the challenge. LOL But I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. Thanks, again!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

10/10

Mari01

Cute!

10/10

livvy6

Wonderful story! Although my heart goes out to little Lily! I remember being so little and being besotted with a man and devestated that I would never have him to myself. I just hope Severus sat her down and soothed her hurting heart!Livvy

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! He certainly does understand unrequited love, so I feel quite sure that Severus, who is just as besotted with her, would have cuddled and comforted poor Lily. And who knows, in a future challenge I may write more about little Lily and how Severus deals with her infatuation. ;)Thanks, again! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

9/10

CharmedForce

OMg, that was fabulous! I love that the green-eyed monster was Harry's daughter. Absolutely fitting!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I wanted to something a bit unexpected with the prompt. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I wanted to something a bit unexpected with the prompt. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

0/10

ChrissyJones

That was hilarious! I love how Lily was the one who went into a jealous rage -- fabulous! Amazing! I loved it! Fantastic job, by the way.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D

9/10

JoKK2

What a delightful glimpse of new dilimmas for Severus. Matched to two powerful witches -- a big one who he chose and a little one who chose him. Whatever is a wizard to do. Thanks for sharing such fun. Any chance of more from this little story? -- JoAnne

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much, JoAnne! I'm glad you enjoyed this. You know, I've grown quite fond of little Lily, so I may revisit this universe in a future challenge. She's too adorable to resist! Thanks, again!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

10/10

MoreThanSirius

What an utterly adorable green-eyed monster! I can see small children flocking to Severus. Sort of like the dog picking the one person in the room who doesn't particularly like animals. It's very sweet that he would allow himself only the smallest show of affection with his stroking thumb. Also very Slytherin in that said thumb was stroking her to sleep, which is the most tolerable of states in toddlers.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes you're right! LOL My husband is one of those who really dislikes dogs, but they LOVE him, so I know just what you mean. And you caught me. Yes, he has dual motives most of the time, and this was no different. LOLThanks, again!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

10/10

Gardengirl

Cute! And nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

0/10

kimbee73

Very cute!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you! :)

0/10

Jade_W

Oh, that was very cute!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you very much! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you very much! :)

10/10

Sampdoria

I loved it:-))

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

0/10

Snapeaholic

Adorable! From experience, there's just no reasoning with a 2-year-old. *says as tries to explain to said 2-year-old that 5 am is no time for little boys to be up and tries in vain to put his squirmy butt back to bed*

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL Isn't that the truth? Ugh. 5 am is definitley not time for little boys to be up (although mine often is up early, as well). ;) Thank you! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL Isn't that the truth? Ugh. 5 am is definitley not time for little boys to be up (although mine often is up early, as well). ;) Thank you! :)

10/10

aura

I think I would have done the same thing plus or minus the magical bit in Lily's place... Poor Hermione though, that must've hurt! Very cute!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL I think there might be a line of women all saying, "MINE!" ;) Thank you so much!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

LOL I think there might be a line of women all saying, "MINE!" ;) Thank you so much!

10/10

gabi1791

Ooooh, how cute!!!

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thanks, gabi! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Response from sshg316 (Author of Green-Eyed Monster)

Thanks, gabi! I'm glad you liked it! :)

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