New Chapter for Beyond the Veil
Beyond the Veil
AntiPixie15 Reviews | 7.13/10 (15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
What happens to a man beyond that shadowy veil that is death? Is it an eternity of peace or torment? Perhaps neither. Perhaps heaven is nothing more than a long, healing dream. A balm that can save even the most broken soul. And when you wake up... you are free. Warnings and rating for later chapters.
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AntiPixie
Member Since 2008 | 1 Story | Favorited by 2 | 8 Reviews Written | 14 Review Responses
I'm a terribly sporadic writer, capable of both peaks of genius and troughs of ineptitude.
Please take care of me, even though I'm unworthy!
All of the music recommendations found in my fics can be found through the Pandora website I have listed. Mostly under the "Roclassical" station. Highly recommended for mood music. I also try to add anything I recommend to my bookmarks for a quick sampling. Enjoy.
Reviews for Beyond the Veil
Wow. This was so beautifully written. THe image of her having no throat! Oh, my! ANd I love how you said how we see them as objects once the soul is gone, I have never thought of it that way...
I can't explain how much I liked this chapter... I'm just at a loss for words, but I really am loving this story... I do hope there will be much more to come.
This is an interesting way to tell the story and I really like it so far. I like how they had an unspeakable understanding between them. Good.
what is he planning?
I did not see that coming. At all....at all. You suckered me right in!I can't wait for your next update to follow what happens to Snape. Well done!Beth
A very interesting beginning, and I'm hooked. The way you portray Snape gives this reader insight into the man behind the mask. Hermione's undaunting courage in the face of Snape's rejection belies her basic cheerful nature.Thank you.Beth
Here I thought Hermione would be needing a time turner but instead it's Snape! Great story, you have me hooked.
Oh, wow. That was amazing.
love this ficcan't wait to see where this goes,lovely snape too
And you did that so effing well. Set us up in the first chapter to think we know where we're going, and then here?Yank the flying carpet right out from under our feet.Brilliant. Bloody brilliant.
Hum. Since this is only the first chapter, I am looking forward to the plot you have in mind...
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Thank you. Further chapters will be appearing shortly!
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Thank you. Further chapters will be appearing shortly!
This is quite interesting and quite unique, and as much as I read, that is saying something. I really am looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Thank you very much! I hope the direction I intend does not disappoint.
this was great, hope to see more soon! :)
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Thank you, you certainly shall!
Ah one of My Own People, lovers of movie musicals (Danny Kaye no less). You have captured my attention and my heart already. Find the POV fastinating indeed.
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Oh yay, another Danny Kaye lover! Be my best friend forever! Seriously though, there are far too few of us. Hope you continue to enjoy!
I love this so much! I just quiver for sweet young Hermione and her crush, and yet the chutzpah she shows when she keeps checking up on him even when he's rejected her.I am so thrilled and honoured to have inspired this in any way.And now, I have to wait for more....
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Heehee, my marvelous muse Mia strikes again! Pardon the alliteration, but your reviews DO make me happy, and proud that my dedication was so very well appreciated. :P I'm now happily working on chapter 4 (Act II Part I) in which the angst quiets down.If you're interested, tonight I can post the next bit of (unedited) work I've done on my livejournal for you to peruse early, so you don't have to slog through the queue periods. I don't use LJ for blogging anymore, so I may as well put that net space to some sort of good use!
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
If you haven't already, friend me so I can friend you back and read it!
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
I already did! Plus I've left comments in your LJ (as AntiPixie - see a trend here?) so you should just be able to click on my user ID. I've already posted Part III - warning, though: LOTS OF ANGST. And if you can, get ahold of my music recs. The main rec for that chapter would be the first link when you youtube search Cocoon Joydrop.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Angst. Yum. And, sniffle. I love your music, have been sampling it. Yay!
lovelovelovelovelove this. I really enjoyed how he was able to challenge her interest in him and direct it elsewhere. I also really liked how Hermione was checking in on him, because it showed a continued interest. Good job!
Response from AntiPixie (Author of Beyond the Veil)
Thank you very much, and thank you for being my first review on TPP!! There are already 2 more chapters completed and waiting for a few final edits and to get through the queue, and one in production. So hopefully you'll continue to lovelovelove it!