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This story was wonderful! My favourite so far of any Hermione time turner fics ive read. I really like the way you wrote Severus' character. You didnt make him too whiny, or too mean like some other fics that Ive read. Your writing style is also fun to read. Im looking forward to reading others stories of yours.

“I know. I didn’t know you were his girlfriend; if I had known, I swear I would never have made any advances on you.”“I know, that’s my and Severus’ fault.uh that totally is not her or severus' fault. it doesnt matter if she is seeing someone-he just shouldnt do that period. he was extremely forceful and god knows how far he would have went.

im pretty sure her bruise wont appear that quickly.

wow that was awesome!ha :) if it was a book i wouldn't be able to put it down but in this case i wasn't able to put my laptop down :P nicely done!it made me go aww at the end

bloody superb story! I started it and couldn't stop reading it. Normally time turner fics are quite similar, but it was different and throughly enjoyable! Credit to your writing skills. It s 5 star from me!

Great chapter!, hot and touching...I'm thrilled at  the idea that Severus has loved her all along.Very much enjoying this story!

This chapter was really sweet and romantic! Your portrayal of young Severus is fascinating!Very well written my dear :)

Lovely chapter!I enjoyed how you have portrayed young Severus...still him, but a lot more vulnerable!And your Sirius?? OMG, he's hilarious! I love this:Sirius came strolling over to where they were sitting and plopped down next to Hermione, sighing with relief. He had pink lip prints on his cheek, his hair was untidy, his shirt was buttoned wrong, and his shoelaces were untied. “Yep. Those twins in Ravenclaw have more energy than a crazy Cornish Pixie.”Very well done my dear!!!

Thanks for a new wonderful time-travelling story! They are my favorite. I loved this one very much.

Yay! A LOVELY, PERFECTLY WONDERFUL HAPPY ENDING!!! I love happy endings. I think you can tell. But all the same, I cannot wait until your intended ending goes up. I suspect it will have something. . . or everything. . . to do with Bellatrix and Lucius and Rodolphus, but I don't care. Sad endings are better for you anyway. Even if happy endings make you feel tingly inside, like this one.Anyway, amazing story! Please write more?~Katie

What an intriguing start! I loved how Hermione's thoughts kept oscillating from the past to the present. Very well done!Lovely use of imagery too...I particularly liked this one:" I've always thought I was a pebble in your shoe.”I can see you are a very talented artist and writer! :)

I suppose Harry has heard about his parents from lots of people, but to hear it directly from his best friend who had just left them must make them seem a lot closer. I loved the ending Severus deseves some happines. Talk about foreshadowing tho....

A happy ending...I love it.

I can't believe it - they are still alive.Until the last line I half expected those fugitive Death Eaters would come around and kill them both on the beach or something like that...Thank you for an amazing story!

Very nice ending.  I'm glad Harry was able to learn a bit about his parents from Hermione.  I suspect it did them both good.

A blissfully wonderful ending.Bravo!

Thanks! Great finish to a great story and I look forward to the alternative ending. Question for you - Why use the word Professor in Hermione's dialog when they orgasm? Hermione has been calling him Severus prior to it and after it. I did a double-take and I just felt it 'jarred'. Um, I suppose it reminded me of his older Professorial self and schoolgirl Hermione rather than the couple that had been built up during the story. I am just interested in your choice there....Notwithstanding that, I truly loved it *:-) and claps enthsiastically*.

Oh, I can't wait to see what this other ending is! I like that you decided to break it up and provide two endings.

Nce nice ending loved the part about his body being 20 years older and him concerned! But I wonder what you are planing next?...........great story!

A well wrapped up story. I really enjoyed the tale. I especially liked Severus's thoughts of panic at the end of the chapter.

Great finish, nice to see them out in the sun, well presumably he gets out in the sun at some stage!

That's mean to leave it as a cliffie, but you are forgiven with the sequel coming.  You're gonna kill one of them off aren't you--

First reviewer! Wheeeeee!

I should take a cue from you and review as I read, because I don't want to forget things.

First of all, this was the best of ALL the chapters, for a lot of reasons, and I think you ended it perfectly (especially with that little bit of foreboding). It's like, this is a movie, and now we are ready for the sequel!

I liked how they told everyone. It was clear, concise, didn't tell more than they needed-- it was discreet and respectful to themselves. Second, I liked when she and Harry talked about his parents. That was really well done. I don't like Harry, but I could totally feel for him-- here was someone who not only knew his parents, but knew them just a short time ago!

I loved Snape getting the room ready. His thoughts-- this is honesty, I thought. Of course he would feel like "my body has changed" and "I'm not an 18 yr old boy with stamina and energy and a perma-erection". That was fantastic. If he had been all cocky (haha) I don't know if I would've believed that. That insecurity was true and real and made me love him!

I have a thing for him wearing just black trousers and nothing else, so... unh. It has to be barefoot and bare-chested, too. I would totally attack him like that.

Now, the spanking scene. Read twice. Leaving this review now to read again. Damn. I'm glad I hadn't read that before my detention scene-- I would've stolen it, LOL! Fucking perfect. Oh. God. Perfect. I can't even tell you which part was best. Throwing her onto the bed so that she bounced across it? Fuck. Me. Not letting up when she refused to follow directions? Yeah. Yeah.

Re-read! You rule!

Oh, and thanks for the sweet shout-out. I was all like, Yeah, I talked to Shell, uh huh....

Author's Response:

Okay, first of all... I just wanted to thank you for supporting me, I mean you do in private, but to actually come on here and leave not just a review, but a lengthy review... well, that means more to me than you think.

I am so happy you approved of the ending!

And of course he wouldn't be cocky about his body! That's lucius... hehehehhe.... But, I'm so glad that you and others believed in that because that was a fun scene to write... espeically when he forces her to look at the Dark Mark...

Uh duh. Black trousers and nothing else. That is the fucking sexist thing!!! I could seriously orgasm without having to touch myself by just looking at that man dressed in nothing but black trousers!

And omg the spanking--when i read your dention scene, I was like--oh dear... I have that in TT! heheheh... we have sick minds, yes?  And you are killing me! "Fuck.Me." bwhahahahah

Just whwen things can finally go right for them, we find there is still a danger out there for both of them. Sigh. Will they ever get their happily-ever-after?