Chapter 5
Chapter 5 of 9
shellsnapeluverHermione accidentally, on purpose, uses a Time-Turner. What happens when she travels back to the Marauder era? What will become of her future? Travel with her as she embarks on a journey that no one, especially Severus Snape, will forget.
All of Hermione's friends went home for the Holidays, except Severus. Another month had passed, and the year 1976 would be coming to an end in a few days. After classes let out, Severus and Hermione had spent almost every moment together. They would meet each other in the Great Hall every morning and then would spend each day doing something different.
Severus tried teaching Hermione to conquer her fears of flying on a broom, inside the Quidditch Stadium one afternoon. But, after her second fall, she ended up throwing the school broom at him, enchanting it so that it would beat him across the head and knock some sense into him. She had told him she was scared of flying, but he hadn't listened. They spent the rest of that evening in the hospital wing. Severus had received several cuts from the broom and some splinters in his face from the handle.
They explored the school grounds and had lurked into unknown territories a few times. He had taken her deep inside the forest and showed her where the unicorns gathered. They spent several hours in silence, watching the gorgeous creatures, and he had to literally drag her away from there to go eat dinner.
Hermione had taken him back inside the Room of Requirement, but this time, she'd requested the room to transfer into her parents' home. She had wanted to show him where she grew up. She told him she was feeling homesick, which she was, but Hermione had ulterior motives as well.
They were now standing inside her bedroom. Severus was looking at some of the pictures she had on top of her dresser, and she was sitting on the bed, waiting for him to come to her.
Severus turned around and looked at her while pointing at a certain picture.
"These were your friends?"
"Yes."
"This kid looks a lot like Potter!"
Her eyes widened. "Ah, yeah... I... I guess he does, how funny. Um... Severus, why don't you come sit next to me?" She had to get him away from that picture before he started asking more questions.
Severus gave her a wicked grin. "I'd rather you sit on me," he said softly. He walked over to her bed and sat on the edge of it. She stood up and straddled him, placing her knees on the bed. She wrapped her arms around his neck and started kissing him softly. She felt him harden beneath her, and her body responded with a freshet of moisture.
This had been the first chance they'd had to be alone, without fear of interruption-- since that time on the hill overlooking the Black Lake. Friends and school usually got in the way. Of course, they had made out plenty of times, until she'd felt like screaming for him , but nothing was going to interrupt them today.
Hermione began grinding herself into his lap and Severus moaned deeply. He pushed her back and grabbed her bottom, stood up and flipped her onto the bed. She scooted herself toward the headboard. When she was comfortable, he slowly crawled over her, dragging his hips over hers. His lips found her neck and he started sucking hard, giving her a love bite. Hermione was fumbling with his buttons, trying to remove his shirt. She slid her fingers over his nipples and gave them a tight squeeze making him hiss with desire.
Then, he sat back onto his knees and took his shirt completely off. Hermione had been wearing her halter top and had untied it. Severus helped her pull the top over her head, revealing a lacy strapless bra. She rolled to the side, and he slowly unhooked it and pulled it off. Severus couldn't take his eyes off her breasts. He leaned over and kissed each one, rolling each nipple lightly between his teeth. Hermione was running her fingers down the black trail of hair that led to the top of his pants. She loved the feeling of its texture across her fingertips and wondered what the rest would feel like against her skin. Severus slid his hands down her sides, giving her chills, and found the top of her pants. Together, they unbuttoned each other, but as Hermione tried to slide his pants over his hips, he stopped her.
"Are you sure?" he asked.
"As long as we have taken precautions."
"I have, I've been taking the potion since I asked you to be my girlfriend."
"Good, keep going, then."
"I can't promise how long I'll last, but I can promise that you will be satisfied, okay?"
"Thank you."
He took her lips again before he pulled her pants and knickers down. Severus was surprised at how well groomed she was, and the sight of her reddening lips made him eager. He ran his fingers lightly over her pussy and inhaled deeply. He wanted to taste her.
Hermione felt suddenly shy. She had never gone this far with anyone else, but when he growled after putting his tongue directly on her clit, her nervousness went out the window. He pushed her legs further apart and started lapping at her slowly. Her folds ran slick with juice, and he took one of his slender fingers and scooped it up and entered her warmth. He kept circling her clit with his tongue and slid another finger in her; this time she squirmed.
"Did that hurt?"
"Oh gods no, keep going. Add another one!" she panted.
Severus pushed a third finger inside of her, this time with more difficultly. Slowly he pumped and licked her. Suddenly, she grabbed his head and pushed his face deeper into her. "Mmm! Oh... so good!"
He pulled his third finger out and pushed the other two as deep as he could go and slammed into her. He flicked his tongue faster as he did this, then he felt it; she clamped down around his fingers and her body started to shake.
"Yes! Yes!" she screamed.
He pulled out of her and scrambled out of his pants. She wrapped her legs around his waist as he found her opening.
"It's going to hurt, so make it fast," she huffed.
His dick was throbbing, and he thrust into her as hard as he could, ripping her hymen. She screamed from the pain and dug her nails into his back. Severus saw the tears forming in the corners of her eyes, but he was too far gone to try to stop. Harder and harder he drove into her until he felt his balls tightening up.
More and more groans from them both.
She had begun grinding her hips into his pelvis, trying to forget about the pain. He was so full inside of her, and the mere thought that she was finally having sex with Severus Snape pushed Hermione into another orgasm.
"Oh!"
"Mione! You feel so good!"
Hermione managed to find her clit with her fingers and started massaging it, so she could cum at the same time as her lover. Tension built between them until Severus was bucking into her mindlessly. Finally, he expelled inside of her, and she hollered, feeling the rush of another satisfying orgasm. He fell limply over her, and his long hair engulfed them in darkness. They were breathing hard as he kissed her lips again.
"I love you, Mione," he said softly.
"I love you more, Severus."
His heart melted. He slowly rolled off of her and pulled the blankets on top of them, where they slept in each others' arms for the rest of the afternoon. After they woke, Hermione went to the bathroom and tried to clean herself up, but Severus followed behind her and they showered together.
They washed each other's hair and Severus lathered them both with the soap. Then, he brought her closer and kissed her until the water had washed away all the bubbles. He even dried her hair with his wand and helped her curl the tips out.
"My mother had long hair, that's why I know so much about how to take care of it. I know I get teased about my own hair, but I don't care about the way I look. Well... only sometimes," he said.
"I like your hair just fine, and I really like it when you do my hair."
Hermione wasn't surprised that she found some of her old clothes in the closet; the room had amazing magic, and she decided to take what was there, packing it away in a small bag. Then, after looking at her photos one last time, they left the Room of Requirement and went down to dinner.
Since James and Sirius were gone, they took a trip to Hogsmeade on the last weekend before the students came back from holiday, where they bought each other belated Christmas gifts.
Severus had bought Hermione an antique silver headband that had small diamonds and pearls interwoven together. He had also purchased her some nail polish that changed colors depending on the type of mood she was in. Hermione couldn't believe how extravagant the headband was, however, Severus assured her that he had been saving his money, not really needing anything himself, and that it was his honor to buy something so beautiful for her.
Hermione had bought Severus a new book bag, his old one was in tatters, and a pewter stirring stick for his potion making. Although it took most of her money, she knew that with good care, pewter sticks could last a lifetime. She'd even had his name inscribed on it. It wasn't until he had unwrapped it and told her that he would cherish it forever, that Hermione realized he wasn't kidding.
"This is a special potion that we are going to be making, Miss Granger. It requires the best of the best in equipment--not the basics that you are used to using in class. I will provide everything that is needed, but I must impress upon you how valuable and priceless some of my personal collection is."
"Yes, sir. I will be very careful with anything you allow me to borrow."
"I know. That's another reason I chose you to assist me."
Snape pulled off a white sheet that had been covering the lab table.
"As you can see, we are going to use a gold cauldron; it will help keep the potion from overheating. These glass bottles are hand blown; they are very delicate, yet will hold the hottest liquid without cracking." He walked down the table and continue showing her the different items.
"And this," he said while picking up a long stirring stick, "is my most prized possession." He looked directly into her eyes. "Someone very special gave this to me years ago. Pewter stirring sticks can last a lifetime if they are well cared for. I trust you will handle this with the utmost care." He handed her the stick, and she ran her fingers along the inscription: Severus Snape.
"Yes, sir, you can count on me to take care of this." She placed it back on the lab table and looked up at him. He was smiling.
At the time, Hermione thought it was strange that he had been smiling, actually grinning from ear to ear. But now, she understood. She had given him the stirring stick and he'd held onto it, keeping it near and dear to his heart. She suddenly felt like a frog was in her throat.
He was hinting to me, all along. I'm not sure when I go back to the future, but he, apparently, has always loved me. That's why he was smiling. He must have known I would be going back to the past and that I would end up buying this for him. He was trying to share this with me, so hopefully there will be a chance for us when I go back to the future!
After Christmas, Hermione was floating high. She knew Severus of the past loved her, but knowing that Severus of the future had always loved her, made her amazingly happy.
Unfortunately, this didn't last long because she started to feel torn. She wanted to go home and be with his older self, but she wanted to stay in the past, too. She decided that once her friends returned for the new term, it was time for her to start warning them about their futures; she didn't belong in the past, no matter how badly she wanted to stay with the young Severus.
"Okay, we searched Malfoy Manor. Remus came along and didn't smell her scent anywhere in the house; she hasn't been there." Arthur said.
"Well, it's now been seventy-two hours. Have you heard anything from the underground?" Harry asked Lupin.
"Nothing, all is quiet actually."
"I'm still working on that ancient magic, probably another day or two until it's ready. This could be a good sign, though. If Voldemort had taken her, I have a feeling that we would have known about it by now--however, we still need to be prepared for the worst," Dumbledore said.
"So this is all we can do? Wait to see if Snape shows back up? Or wait on this ancient magic that you're trying to create?" Ron asked.
"I'm afraid so." Dumbledore said.
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119 Reviews | 6.66/10 Average
This story was wonderful! My favourite so far of any Hermione time turner fics ive read. I really like the way you wrote Severus' character. You didnt make him too whiny, or too mean like some other fics that Ive read. Your writing style is also fun to read. Im looking forward to reading others stories of yours.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
!! I really love time-turner fics so I appreicate your review very much. My other writings are a lot darker, just to warn you... lol!Shell~
“I know. I didn’t know you were his girlfriend; if I had known, I swear I would never have made any advances on you.”“I know, that’s my and Severus’ fault.uh that totally is not her or severus' fault. it doesnt matter if she is seeing someone-he just shouldnt do that period. he was extremely forceful and god knows how far he would have went.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
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im pretty sure her bruise wont appear that quickly.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Well, it did.
wow that was awesome!ha :) if it was a book i wouldn't be able to put it down but in this case i wasn't able to put my laptop down :P nicely done!it made me go aww at the end
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Wow, thanks!!!! That is such a beautiful compliment, you are too sweet!!*hugs*
bloody superb story! I started it and couldn't stop reading it. Normally time turner fics are quite similar, but it was different and throughly enjoyable! Credit to your writing skills. It s 5 star from me!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much!!! It really makes my day to know someone couldn't put down my story... you are so sweet.Thank you again.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much!!! It really makes my day to know someone couldn't put down my story... you are so sweet.Thank you again.
Great chapter!, hot and touching...I'm thrilled at the idea that Severus has loved her all along.Very much enjoying this story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
So glad you are! Thank you... yes lots of love from Sev!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
So glad you are! Thank you... yes lots of love from Sev!
This chapter was really sweet and romantic! Your portrayal of young Severus is fascinating!Very well written my dear :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Why thank you! :)
Lovely chapter!I enjoyed how you have portrayed young Severus...still him, but a lot more vulnerable!And your Sirius?? OMG, he's hilarious! I love this:Sirius came strolling over to where they were sitting and plopped down next to Hermione, sighing with relief. He had pink lip prints on his cheek, his hair was untidy, his shirt was buttoned wrong, and his shoelaces were untied. “Yep. Those twins in Ravenclaw have more energy than a crazy Cornish Pixie.”Very well done my dear!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
hahahahah... Thank you for the clapping dude! This is why I loved writing this story... because I can do things with characters we don't really know too much about... like Sirius, Remus, James, Lily and Young Sev. So much fun!:)
xoxoxo
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Thanks for a new wonderful time-travelling story! They are my favorite. I loved this one very much.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
I really like them too! They are so much fun! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! Cheers!
Yay! A LOVELY, PERFECTLY WONDERFUL HAPPY ENDING!!! I love happy endings. I think you can tell. But all the same, I cannot wait until your intended ending goes up. I suspect it will have something. . . or everything. . . to do with Bellatrix and Lucius and Rodolphus, but I don't care. Sad endings are better for you anyway. Even if happy endings make you feel tingly inside, like this one.Anyway, amazing story! Please write more?~Katie
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Hi Katie,I'm so happy you loved the ending! Squee!!And you suspect right... the three ARE on the loose...Stay tuned and more will come!!!Thanks for reading and reviewing too, :)Shell~
What an intriguing start! I loved how Hermione's thoughts kept oscillating from the past to the present. Very well done!Lovely use of imagery too...I particularly liked this one:" I've always thought I was a pebble in your shoe.”I can see you are a very talented artist and writer! :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
You have made me so happy that you are reading this! Yes, the past and present mixes a lot in this story!Squee!!Shell~
I suppose Harry has heard about his parents from lots of people, but to hear it directly from his best friend who had just left them must make them seem a lot closer. I loved the ending Severus deseves some happines. Talk about foreshadowing tho....
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you for reading the story and reviewing! Yes, it means so much to Harry to actually hear about his parents from his best friend... it's something he will treasure always.Oh good... so you see some foreshadowing... lol yes, yes... what will happen???
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you for reading the story and reviewing! Yes, it means so much to Harry to actually hear about his parents from his best friend... it's something he will treasure always.Oh good... so you see some foreshadowing... lol yes, yes... what will happen???
A happy ending...I love it.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yes, happy! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I can't believe it - they are still alive.Until the last line I half expected those fugitive Death Eaters would come around and kill them both on the beach or something like that...Thank you for an amazing story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Wow--I didn't think others would think that I might kill them off! I just wanted the readers to know that there was still a danger out there...Thank you for saying it was an amazing story, that warmed my heart.
Very nice ending. I'm glad Harry was able to learn a bit about his parents from Hermione. I suspect it did them both good.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much. Yes, I thought it would be nice for Harry to hear about his parents, to get an insight to them...
A blissfully wonderful ending.Bravo!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
*bows* hehehhe... Thanks!
Thanks! Great finish to a great story and I look forward to the alternative ending. Question for you - Why use the word Professor in Hermione's dialog when they orgasm? Hermione has been calling him Severus prior to it and after it. I did a double-take and I just felt it 'jarred'. Um, I suppose it reminded me of his older Professorial self and schoolgirl Hermione rather than the couple that had been built up during the story. I am just interested in your choice there....Notwithstanding that, I truly loved it *:-) and claps enthsiastically*.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thanks for your question--I think one of two things happened... that might have been apart of the old version, and I just forgot to change it, or it was because she was finally free to call him that, like it had been forbidden for her to say that because 1. she was in the past and 2. because it always has been severus and now it was just a naughty fantasy to scream that out... I didn't think much of it. Maybe I should change it?But otherwise, thank you for the clapping... *grins*
Oh, I can't wait to see what this other ending is! I like that you decided to break it up and provide two endings.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yeah, I decided to take the ending and just make a whole new story out of it, so it will be a sequel. And you can figure out who will be making an apperance...
Nce nice ending loved the part about his body being 20 years older and him concerned! But I wonder what you are planing next?...........great story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you. I thought it was important to know that over time, your body changes... and she still loves him no matter what he looks like.Yes, what AM I planning next? Well, I wonder who is on the loose... heheheheh
A well wrapped up story. I really enjoyed the tale. I especially liked Severus's thoughts of panic at the end of the chapter.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
. I'm glad you understand his panic... it's very valid. And very real.
Great finish, nice to see them out in the sun, well presumably he gets out in the sun at some stage!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
hahahha... yes, that was totally her idea to get to the beach... as you can tell, the sun and him don't mix well, but he lives through it... for her.
That's mean to leave it as a cliffie, but you are forgiven with the sequel coming. You're gonna kill one of them off aren't you--
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Muwhahahah... what am I going to do?? hmm.... thanks for reading!
Anonymous
First reviewer! Wheeeeee!
I should take a cue from you and review as I read, because I don't want to forget things.
First of all, this was the best of ALL the chapters, for a lot of reasons, and I think you ended it perfectly (especially with that little bit of foreboding). It's like, this is a movie, and now we are ready for the sequel!
I liked how they told everyone. It was clear, concise, didn't tell more than they needed-- it was discreet and respectful to themselves. Second, I liked when she and Harry talked about his parents. That was really well done. I don't like Harry, but I could totally feel for him-- here was someone who not only knew his parents, but knew them just a short time ago!
I loved Snape getting the room ready. His thoughts-- this is honesty, I thought. Of course he would feel like "my body has changed" and "I'm not an 18 yr old boy with stamina and energy and a perma-erection". That was fantastic. If he had been all cocky (haha) I don't know if I would've believed that. That insecurity was true and real and made me love him!
I have a thing for him wearing just black trousers and nothing else, so... unh. It has to be barefoot and bare-chested, too. I would totally attack him like that.
Now, the spanking scene. Read twice. Leaving this review now to read again. Damn. I'm glad I hadn't read that before my detention scene-- I would've stolen it, LOL! Fucking perfect. Oh. God. Perfect. I can't even tell you which part was best. Throwing her onto the bed so that she bounced across it? Fuck. Me. Not letting up when she refused to follow directions? Yeah. Yeah.
Re-read! You rule!
Oh, and thanks for the sweet shout-out. I was all like, Yeah, I talked to Shell, uh huh....
Author's Response:
Okay, first of all... I just wanted to thank you for supporting me, I mean you do in private, but to actually come on here and leave not just a review, but a lengthy review... well, that means more to me than you think.
I am so happy you approved of the ending!
And of course he wouldn't be cocky about his body! That's lucius... hehehehhe.... But, I'm so glad that you and others believed in that because that was a fun scene to write... espeically when he forces her to look at the Dark Mark...
Uh duh. Black trousers and nothing else. That is the fucking sexist thing!!! I could seriously orgasm without having to touch myself by just looking at that man dressed in nothing but black trousers!
And omg the spanking--when i read your dention scene, I was like--oh dear... I have that in TT! heheheh... we have sick minds, yes? And you are killing me! "Fuck.Me." bwhahahahah
Just whwen things can finally go right for them, we find there is still a danger out there for both of them. Sigh. Will they ever get their happily-ever-after?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
I know... I'm so mean. lol.