Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 9
shellsnapeluverHermione accidentally, on purpose, uses a Time-Turner. What happens when she travels back to the Marauder era? What will become of her future? Travel with her as she embarks on a journey that no one, especially Severus Snape, will forget.
Hermione was thrilled that Severus had finally opened up and admitted that he liked her. She wondered what had changed his mind. She was excited about her date and wanted to look good, but of course, she didn't have too many clothes.
Very early Saturday morning, Hermione snuck up to the Room of Requirement and asked for more Muggle clothing. Some nice jeans and a halter-top appeared in front of her. She picked up the shirt and looked at it with reservation. I surely will make him nervous if I wear this! Oh, well.
Hermione took her belongings and ran down to the bathrooms, where she showered and put herself together. Then, she rushed down to the Great Hall. Everyone that was going to Hogsmeade was meeting by the Hogwarts gates, so the large room was relatively empty. She didn't know what time he was going to show, but she waited patiently. Slowly, the doors cracked open, and her heart started fluttering. Severus walked in, and Hermione blushed after seeing him.
He was wearing black trousers and boots and a black, long-sleeved, button up shirt, with the sleeves rolled up his to his elbows. He had pulled his hair back into a slim ponytail, leaving several strands around his face. These were apparently his best clothes; she knew he didn't have a lot, but neither did she.
"I didn't know if you would be here yet," he said as he walked up to her. She rose from the bench and picked up her sweater.
"You look dashing," she said.
He smiled. "You look... delectable."
"Thanks," she gushed. "So, where are you taking me?"
"To my favorite spot. Of course, it's somewhat of a hike. So, are you up for it?"
"Yes--lead the way."
"Here, let me help you; it's a little chilly outside." He reached for her sweater and helped her put it over her bare arms. Then he cast a warming charm over the both of them.
They walked out past the doors and down toward the boathouse.
"I have to ask and then I will drop it, but why me? Why not Black?"
"You just are very enchanting to me. Sirius is a flirt. I mean, don't get me wrong, a girl does like to be flirted with, but not when it won't mean anything the next day... Do you understand that?"
"I believe so."
"What made you change your mind about meeting me?"
"Someone pointed out that I was acting like a fool. And I was. I get suspicious about things."
"Well, whoever it was is right. You were acting like a fool. I know this is new to you, but I hope you can trust me. I wouldn't do anything to hurt you... unless you hurt me first, then--WATCH OUT!" She put her hands up like claws and growled.
"Oooh. Scary."
"Yes--you'd better be scared! I'm a very powerful witch!"
"I've been noticing. Some of the things you do, they... remind me of myself. Especially your work in Potions class. You use some of the same techniques that I do."
Hermione had to laugh. Of course I would, Severus! You were the one who taught me!
"Why are you laughing?"
"Just because, um... I didn't think you noticed me, actually, and yet you have been watching me very carefully. That's just funny because I can't seem to take my eyes off of you."
He stopped walking and looked at her calculatingly like he did when she was his student in the future.
"Something wrong?" she asked.
"No. You are very open with your feelings. I'm not, so please don't think something is wrong when I get quiet. You just stun me sometimes. Nobody has really ever paid any attention to me in a good way; this takes some getting used to."
She didn't know what to say to that, so for once she kept her mouth closed and looked at him with loving eyes.
"Come. We are almost there," he said while holding his hand out. She slowly placed her hand into his and laced her fingers between his. She was very impressed that he had made such a bold move.
They walked silently the rest of the way, holding hands. Hermione took this opportunity to remember another time when he had left her speechless during that special summer.
"Professor! You're back!"
"Indeed. How is the potion brewing coming along?"
"Very well; no problems with it. But I'm another story," she said.
"How do you mean?"
"You've been gone for almost a week; I've been stuck in this room, almost going stir crazy. I need a break. I mean--don't take this to mean I'm not excited that you are safely back, because I am; I just need to relax my mind."
"I can tell. You start rambling when you get exhausted."
"Oh, I'm sorry."
"It's okay; I've had those days. In fact, I had a similar week, stuck somewhere where I did not want to be."
"With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?" she said quietly.
He looked up at her calculatingly.
"I'm not stupid, Professor. I know you're a Death Eater."
"I never said you were. How long have you known?"
"Since the end of fourth year."
"Really? And that doesn't bother you?" he said, surprised.
"Nope. I know where your loyalties lie. What bothers me most is knowing that you might be summoned one day and never return." Before she turned around, she saw his eyebrow shoot up.
"Well, since you know where I was, then you will understand that I, too, need a break. The potion will be fine for now; we have plans."
"Plans?"
He walked up to her and handed her two tickets to a play in Muggle London.
She looked up at him.
"We both need to clear our heads."
"Thank you! I can't wait, but, sir, is this appropriate?"
"Do you think this Death Eater gives a damn?" He smirked. "Besides, I already informed Dumbledore what I was going to do two weeks ago, and he had no problems with it."
She stood there speechless, realizing that he had planned on taking her out to get some fresh air before he was summoned. And he was making a joke! About being a Death Eater, no less.
"Okay, climb in," Snape said when they reached the boathouse, jolting her back to reality.
"We're going for a boat ride?" she said as she stepped into the small boat.
"Yes, every time there is a weekend at Hogsmeade, I get into a boat and go across to the other side. I don't go into town for two reasons: Black and Potter."
He finished helping her in, stepping inside himself. After a few wand movements, the boat started moving out of the slip and onto the huge lake. "You see, last time I went there, they ambushed me and left me there, hurt. They only received a week's worth of detention."
"Why did they do that?"
"Probably because when they were walking into Zonko's Joke Shop, I made all their clothes disappear, leaving them starkers. It was very cold that day, too. Needless to say, I haven't gone back. I'm no fool; I know if they were able to get me alone there again, they might kill me. It wouldn't be the first time they have attempted that."
"I know. I mean--that's horrible, Severus Snape! So you DO start some of the battles."
"You know? They told you they tried to kill me a few years ago?"
"No... I didn't know that. I meant that I know they would probably do something terrible to you if they caught you in Hogsmeade again." She needed to change the subject. "So, I hear there is a giant squid in this lake?"
"Yep, and he fancies Gryffindors, especially girls... Hold on now!" Severus started rocking the small boat back and forth, almost causing them to tip over.
"SEVERUS SNAPE! STOP IT! THE WATER IS FREEZING! YOU'RE GOING TO MAKE US TIP!"
Snape was howling with laughter, watching her panic. She had jumped closer to him, hitting him in the arms, trying to make him stop. Water splashed into the boat, and he decided enough was enough. He grabbed her waist and pulled her closer to him, sitting her on his lap.
"Did I scare you?" he said. His face was inches from hers; she knew he was flirting with her.
"A little," she said in a small voice.
The boat lurched forward as it hit the small bank of sand. But, he didn't let her go.
"We're here," he said as he gazed into her chestnut eyes.
"Okay," she said absentmindedly. She felt her pulse raging throughout her body.
Kiss me.
They were silent for only a moment, listening to the wind whistling through the trees and the water splashing against the boat. Severus leaned into her, brushing his lips against hers, keeping his eyes opened to see if she rejected him. Then he saw her close her eyes, and he fully kissed her.
He was tentative at first, barely touching her lips, and then she relaxed and let him come to her. He felt her kiss strengthen as he leaned to the side to fully capture her lips. She slowly parted them, and he put his hand on the back of her head, bringing her further in.
Slowly, their tongues found each other, and they were breathing heavily through their noses. Then, they pulled apart and looked at each other intensely. Severus was fully hard and knew that if she didn't get away from him, he was going to embarrass himself by ejaculating into his own pants. "Let's get out of this boat. I think you will enjoy where we are going much more." He pushed her off his lap, hoping that she didn't notice his erection.
"Thank you; that was wonderful," she said as he grabbed her hand again and started walking up a large embankment.
He squeezed her hand, and he knew that she had enjoyed that as much as he did. They finally reached the peak of the hill. It looked over the Black Lake and had a spectacular view of Hogwarts in the background.
"Wow," she said.
"I knew you would like it here better than going to Hogsmeade. Watch out--I brought us something."
"You did?" She moved to the side and watched him pull a tea towel from his pocket and transfigure it into a large blanket. Then, he conjured a small picnic basket that held two place settings, butterbeer, and some sandwiches.
"Severus, this is really lovely. Thank you."
She sat down on the blanket and watched him pour their drinks into clear glasses. "I told you I wasn't going to be an arse. I'm a Slytherin; we are taught how to treat a lady."
"Really?"
"Indeed. It's called having class."
"I think they need to teach that to all males. Who teaches this to you?"
"Well, it's been a tradition for Slytherins for many years. Currently, a former student teaches us. He graduated in my second year; his name is Lucius Malfoy. Have you heard of him?"
"Umm, no," she said uneasily.
"Hmm. Well, you will. He's very rich and powerful and has many ties to the Ministry."
"You don't say."
"Of course, it's the basic stuff that he teaches, says we have to use our own cunning minds. So, I figured since you seem to be a lot like me, you would enjoy this view, the peace and quiet and a nice lunch to go along with it. I'm glad to see that you like it."
Well, that made her feel a little better. He had planned this date all on his own, without the help of Lucius!
"Yes, I really do love this."
They lay down on the blanket and talked for hours. Hermione hated having to lie to him about certain things. She did her best to be honest, but twisted the truth to make it look like she really had come from Beauxbatons. Luckily, her parents had made her learn to speak French, so she talked to him for a while in the beautiful language. He had propped himself up on his side and listened intensely as she talked. He was mesmerized by her ability--of course, he had no idea what she was saying, so he didn't know she was confessing her undying love to him--not yet anyway.
Snape actually broke down some of his walls with her. He mentioned how his parents fought a lot and that he hadn't been home for the holidays since his third year. He also told her about different ways of casting spells and creating potions. He flirted with her more and teased her about her hair. Then he did something that particularly touched her; he made her sit in front of him as he took his wand to her thick, bushy hair and straightened it, leaving it long, sleek and smooth.
"I love it! You'll have to show me that spell!"
"You'll have to earn it," he said.
She pinched him and giggled, scrambling to get away. He chased her around the top of the hill and started tickling her.
"Think you can pinch me and get away with it?"
She was laughing hard. "YES! STOP!! Oh gods, I'm so ticklish!"
He was so much bigger and stronger than she was, and he easily wrapped his arms around her, carrying her back over to the blanket, all the while tickling her. He dropped her on her feet, but she stumbled from laughing so hard and fell to the ground on her bottom. He dropped to his knees and leaned over her, still wrestling with her.
"If you don't stop, I'll hex you!" she squealed.
He was now hunched completely over her, using one hand to prop himself up over her body. He placed his knees between her legs and stopped tickling her. He reached up and moved a piece of her hair that had fallen across her face, giving Hermione goose bumps. She stopped laughing and placed her hands around his waist, helping him to lower himself on top of her. Slowly, his lips came down on hers again, as well as his body. She felt his erection stabbing her in her crotch, but she wanted his kiss more than anything.
He clutched her hair and pushed himself harder into her. She moaned through the kiss and started to suckle on his lower lip. "Oh, damn woman!" he said as she pulled away from his lips. He hungrily went for more. By this time, they were dry humping, but then Severus pulled away and rolled off of her.
"Mione. No. Not like this. I've been taught better."
"What do you mean, not like this?"
"This is our first date; it's disrespectful for me to act like such an animal. Besides, we aren't prepared; at least, I didn't drink any contraceptive potion, did you?"
They were breathing deeply, lying on the ground and looking toward the darkening sky.
"No, I didn't. I'm sorry for rushing you. You just make me so excited." You are going to scare him off! You've been in love with him for a while now, and he just started acknowledging his feelings for you... give him time!
"You, rush me? I thought I was rushing you!" he said as he rolled over and looked at her.
"No, you didn't; I would have told you to stop if you had."
"You've been telling me to stop all day."
"You know what I mean," she snorted. "I wouldn't be laughing and giggling if I was serious."
"Come on. It's starting to get dark. But I promise you, I don't want to leave. I just know it's the right thing to do."
"I know. You're right. We should be prepared," she said.
"Not only that, but, Mione... would you like to go steady with me?"
"I was hoping you would ask. Yes, of course." She smiled so hugely that her jaw hurt. After sealing their new union with a kiss, they stood up, gathered their picnic belongings and headed back down to the boat.
During the ride across the lake, they heard howling. Hermione closed her eyes, thinking about Remus in the Shrieking Shack. She decided that she would get some chocolate and have one of the house-elves deliver it to his bed, so that when he returned, he would have something to help soothe away the effects of his transformation. She remembered how he used to always offer her chocolate to make her and the boys feel better, and now it was her turn to return the favor.
They walked back to the castle, holding hands, and left each other at the stairs. He was going down to the dungeons, and she was going up to the seventh floor. He kissed her on the cheek, and she watched him walk away.
She was finally his girlfriend.
Thanks to Lariope!
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119 Reviews | 6.66/10 Average
This story was wonderful! My favourite so far of any Hermione time turner fics ive read. I really like the way you wrote Severus' character. You didnt make him too whiny, or too mean like some other fics that Ive read. Your writing style is also fun to read. Im looking forward to reading others stories of yours.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much,
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
!! I really love time-turner fics so I appreicate your review very much. My other writings are a lot darker, just to warn you... lol!Shell~
“I know. I didn’t know you were his girlfriend; if I had known, I swear I would never have made any advances on you.”“I know, that’s my and Severus’ fault.uh that totally is not her or severus' fault. it doesnt matter if she is seeing someone-he just shouldnt do that period. he was extremely forceful and god knows how far he would have went.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
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im pretty sure her bruise wont appear that quickly.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Well, it did.
wow that was awesome!ha :) if it was a book i wouldn't be able to put it down but in this case i wasn't able to put my laptop down :P nicely done!it made me go aww at the end
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Wow, thanks!!!! That is such a beautiful compliment, you are too sweet!!*hugs*
bloody superb story! I started it and couldn't stop reading it. Normally time turner fics are quite similar, but it was different and throughly enjoyable! Credit to your writing skills. It s 5 star from me!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much!!! It really makes my day to know someone couldn't put down my story... you are so sweet.Thank you again.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much!!! It really makes my day to know someone couldn't put down my story... you are so sweet.Thank you again.
Great chapter!, hot and touching...I'm thrilled at the idea that Severus has loved her all along.Very much enjoying this story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
So glad you are! Thank you... yes lots of love from Sev!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
So glad you are! Thank you... yes lots of love from Sev!
This chapter was really sweet and romantic! Your portrayal of young Severus is fascinating!Very well written my dear :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Why thank you! :)
Lovely chapter!I enjoyed how you have portrayed young Severus...still him, but a lot more vulnerable!And your Sirius?? OMG, he's hilarious! I love this:Sirius came strolling over to where they were sitting and plopped down next to Hermione, sighing with relief. He had pink lip prints on his cheek, his hair was untidy, his shirt was buttoned wrong, and his shoelaces were untied. “Yep. Those twins in Ravenclaw have more energy than a crazy Cornish Pixie.”Very well done my dear!!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
hahahahah... Thank you for the clapping dude! This is why I loved writing this story... because I can do things with characters we don't really know too much about... like Sirius, Remus, James, Lily and Young Sev. So much fun!:)
xoxoxo
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Thanks for a new wonderful time-travelling story! They are my favorite. I loved this one very much.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
I really like them too! They are so much fun! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! Cheers!
Yay! A LOVELY, PERFECTLY WONDERFUL HAPPY ENDING!!! I love happy endings. I think you can tell. But all the same, I cannot wait until your intended ending goes up. I suspect it will have something. . . or everything. . . to do with Bellatrix and Lucius and Rodolphus, but I don't care. Sad endings are better for you anyway. Even if happy endings make you feel tingly inside, like this one.Anyway, amazing story! Please write more?~Katie
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Hi Katie,I'm so happy you loved the ending! Squee!!And you suspect right... the three ARE on the loose...Stay tuned and more will come!!!Thanks for reading and reviewing too, :)Shell~
What an intriguing start! I loved how Hermione's thoughts kept oscillating from the past to the present. Very well done!Lovely use of imagery too...I particularly liked this one:" I've always thought I was a pebble in your shoe.”I can see you are a very talented artist and writer! :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
You have made me so happy that you are reading this! Yes, the past and present mixes a lot in this story!Squee!!Shell~
I suppose Harry has heard about his parents from lots of people, but to hear it directly from his best friend who had just left them must make them seem a lot closer. I loved the ending Severus deseves some happines. Talk about foreshadowing tho....
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you for reading the story and reviewing! Yes, it means so much to Harry to actually hear about his parents from his best friend... it's something he will treasure always.Oh good... so you see some foreshadowing... lol yes, yes... what will happen???
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you for reading the story and reviewing! Yes, it means so much to Harry to actually hear about his parents from his best friend... it's something he will treasure always.Oh good... so you see some foreshadowing... lol yes, yes... what will happen???
A happy ending...I love it.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yes, happy! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I can't believe it - they are still alive.Until the last line I half expected those fugitive Death Eaters would come around and kill them both on the beach or something like that...Thank you for an amazing story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Wow--I didn't think others would think that I might kill them off! I just wanted the readers to know that there was still a danger out there...Thank you for saying it was an amazing story, that warmed my heart.
Very nice ending. I'm glad Harry was able to learn a bit about his parents from Hermione. I suspect it did them both good.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much. Yes, I thought it would be nice for Harry to hear about his parents, to get an insight to them...
A blissfully wonderful ending.Bravo!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
*bows* hehehhe... Thanks!
Thanks! Great finish to a great story and I look forward to the alternative ending. Question for you - Why use the word Professor in Hermione's dialog when they orgasm? Hermione has been calling him Severus prior to it and after it. I did a double-take and I just felt it 'jarred'. Um, I suppose it reminded me of his older Professorial self and schoolgirl Hermione rather than the couple that had been built up during the story. I am just interested in your choice there....Notwithstanding that, I truly loved it *:-) and claps enthsiastically*.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thanks for your question--I think one of two things happened... that might have been apart of the old version, and I just forgot to change it, or it was because she was finally free to call him that, like it had been forbidden for her to say that because 1. she was in the past and 2. because it always has been severus and now it was just a naughty fantasy to scream that out... I didn't think much of it. Maybe I should change it?But otherwise, thank you for the clapping... *grins*
Oh, I can't wait to see what this other ending is! I like that you decided to break it up and provide two endings.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yeah, I decided to take the ending and just make a whole new story out of it, so it will be a sequel. And you can figure out who will be making an apperance...
Nce nice ending loved the part about his body being 20 years older and him concerned! But I wonder what you are planing next?...........great story!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you. I thought it was important to know that over time, your body changes... and she still loves him no matter what he looks like.Yes, what AM I planning next? Well, I wonder who is on the loose... heheheheh
A well wrapped up story. I really enjoyed the tale. I especially liked Severus's thoughts of panic at the end of the chapter.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
. I'm glad you understand his panic... it's very valid. And very real.
Great finish, nice to see them out in the sun, well presumably he gets out in the sun at some stage!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
hahahha... yes, that was totally her idea to get to the beach... as you can tell, the sun and him don't mix well, but he lives through it... for her.
That's mean to leave it as a cliffie, but you are forgiven with the sequel coming. You're gonna kill one of them off aren't you--
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Muwhahahah... what am I going to do?? hmm.... thanks for reading!
Anonymous
First reviewer! Wheeeeee!
I should take a cue from you and review as I read, because I don't want to forget things.
First of all, this was the best of ALL the chapters, for a lot of reasons, and I think you ended it perfectly (especially with that little bit of foreboding). It's like, this is a movie, and now we are ready for the sequel!
I liked how they told everyone. It was clear, concise, didn't tell more than they needed-- it was discreet and respectful to themselves. Second, I liked when she and Harry talked about his parents. That was really well done. I don't like Harry, but I could totally feel for him-- here was someone who not only knew his parents, but knew them just a short time ago!
I loved Snape getting the room ready. His thoughts-- this is honesty, I thought. Of course he would feel like "my body has changed" and "I'm not an 18 yr old boy with stamina and energy and a perma-erection". That was fantastic. If he had been all cocky (haha) I don't know if I would've believed that. That insecurity was true and real and made me love him!
I have a thing for him wearing just black trousers and nothing else, so... unh. It has to be barefoot and bare-chested, too. I would totally attack him like that.
Now, the spanking scene. Read twice. Leaving this review now to read again. Damn. I'm glad I hadn't read that before my detention scene-- I would've stolen it, LOL! Fucking perfect. Oh. God. Perfect. I can't even tell you which part was best. Throwing her onto the bed so that she bounced across it? Fuck. Me. Not letting up when she refused to follow directions? Yeah. Yeah.
Re-read! You rule!
Oh, and thanks for the sweet shout-out. I was all like, Yeah, I talked to Shell, uh huh....
Author's Response:
Okay, first of all... I just wanted to thank you for supporting me, I mean you do in private, but to actually come on here and leave not just a review, but a lengthy review... well, that means more to me than you think.
I am so happy you approved of the ending!
And of course he wouldn't be cocky about his body! That's lucius... hehehehhe.... But, I'm so glad that you and others believed in that because that was a fun scene to write... espeically when he forces her to look at the Dark Mark...
Uh duh. Black trousers and nothing else. That is the fucking sexist thing!!! I could seriously orgasm without having to touch myself by just looking at that man dressed in nothing but black trousers!
And omg the spanking--when i read your dention scene, I was like--oh dear... I have that in TT! heheheh... we have sick minds, yes? And you are killing me! "Fuck.Me." bwhahahahah
Just whwen things can finally go right for them, we find there is still a danger out there for both of them. Sigh. Will they ever get their happily-ever-after?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
I know... I'm so mean. lol.