PhenomenalTamara

This is brilliant, you are brilliant.  I really must keep going.  Tamara

This is bloody brilliant.  I would say more but I really need to go on to the next chapter.  Tamara

love it.  Tamara

This keeps getting better and better.  Tamara

Oh man, this is cool.  I have never read anything like this.  It's brilliant.  Can't wait to move on to the next chapter.  So I will.   Tamara

"a snarky knight in black wool armor" - ah! this line made my day. :)

Top fiction - I loved every minute of it and this is a true gem in the archive- I hope more people find it and read it because it was great.

Great chapter - even the seasoned Firewalker had not encountered a projection that strong. I am so glad that you let them both live.

Two days - oh wow - this is getting good. I cannot wait to see your version of the final battle.

Well at least he might be able to cool some of the anger with Black - they better work quick on the potion if the gleem in Lucius's eye means anything.

I love his nickname for her - Vixen - how sexy can you get - even the familiar calls her that. The sex scene in this chapter was frantic and I loved every second of it.

Great chapter - very sensual - and what a "fuss" that you made it - whew is it hot in her. I loved it and Turpin was hysterical - I was laughing out loud reading his part- he is priceless.

Oh crap - Severus scared me in this one and then after he calmed down - oh he was too sweet - I am rushing to the next chapter - I want to see what you wrote in regards to the "fuss" - LOL

Give the man a chance to think and he over works everything and pushes away any chance of happiness... please let him come to his senses.

Yippie - the escape plan worked - he knows she wants him and loves him- she knows he feels the same - the last part of the chapter has me worried - what trouble now for her ? Yikes.

Way to go - they are on the rescue mission - poor Severus - I do hope he is not mad. I loved who you sent to go get him and why - very good writing and creative thinking.

I feel so sorry for Hermione and Turpin - the Firewalker was so right when she said only a few will love you truly. Severus is in Azkaban - how horrible - but Hermione can save the day if she throws her shields up - she can march right past them - at least that my theory - LOL

Oh man one kiss is all he gets before he disappears and now Jarvey is crying and thinking he is killed - this chapter has me on pins and needles.

Well at least she finally gets it - two people who think the other one does not love them cannot get anywhere - one person who knows they love the person and that the person loves them - can bridge the gap. I love Turpin - he is so blasted snarky and sneaky as well.

ahh - sweet chapter and now he thinks she wants only friendship and has decided to at least take her up on that - well it is a step for him towards life and a future - I love the jarvey - he is a good familiar for him.

Oh no - Severus cannot be dead - no wonder she is projecting so much pain - it could very well destroy her since she is so new to her powers.

I love how you have her hug him and often - he needs that more than anything - a balm to his heart and mind. I was sad to see the Firewalker go - she was a great character. I am so excited about this story that I cannot wait to finish reading it.

I love the firewalker - cannot say that enough that your OC is a great creation. Loved the spicy take-out... and the grindsman comment - sure gold.

Poor Severus - so resigned to the fact that he is not going to make it out alive in this war - why bother to try when you are going to be dead. You captured the dark despair of his nature so well. I cannot wait to see where you take them.