52- Valentine's Day... of Doom? Part Two of Two
Chapter 55 of 84
Good_WitchValentine's Day arrives, with surprises in store for quite a few people! Some are delightful beyond compare, and others... not so much.
ReviewedPlease see previous chapter for Disclaimer and Author's Note.
*part two of two*
As her hands snaked over his chest and down his body, Snape uttered a groan, then pulled back, pinning her with a smouldering gaze and saying, "You bloody vixen; if you're going to start something, then you had better make sure your door is locked, and Silenced for good measure."
Brows climbing in acknowledgement of his statement, Hermione dutifully picked up her wand, casting a couple of different locking spells and changing the password to her door. Then, with a wicked glance at Snape, she cast a Silencing Charm as well, flourishing her wrist in a variation of the standard movement.
Snape cocked an eyebrow at her. "What was that? Did you just do what I think you did?"
Hermione assumed a prim air and retorted, "Well, if you think I just cast a spell that works both ways, then yes. Not only will we not be heard in the corridor, but we won't be disturbed by anyone trying to knock on my door. And, tomorrow, if anyone asks, I'll just tell them that I felt unwell and did exactly that." She shrugged and flashed a cheeky grin. "I think they can manage without me for one night. Not like I get bothered much anyway."
Snape's eyes lit up with surprised appreciation for her tactic. "Of course, if you like, we could always adjourn back to my room."
Hermione shook her head and said, "No. It's only fair that we get to stay here, too. Besides, I won't mind being able to smell your scent on my sheets later..."
Snape's cock twitched at her words. Heart speeding up as his desire increased, he lowered his lids, eyeing her with predatory intent, and she gasped. His lips spread in a feral grin and he closed the distance between them, purring as he pinned her with a fierce kiss.
Hermione moaned into his mouth, goose flesh erupting all along her body in response to his mouth on hers. They grabbed at each other, limbs entwining, pressing against each other heatedly as they snogged. After several minutes, in which their breath came faster and shallower, Snape wrenched away and flicked his fingers, muttering, "Nox." The lights in the room all guttered out, and Hermione voiced a sultry laugh.
The moonlight was streaming through her window, giving them enough light to see by, and washing them in a cool glow. Revelling in the chance to abandon themselves to desire, they found themselves impatiently tugging at clothing, trying to slide buttons through buttonholes and slip hooks from eyes. Frustrated with the awkward struggling, they separated, sighing in exasperation and grimacing.
Catching Snape's eye, Hermione chuckled, wryly pointing out, "You had a point earlier."
"Which one?"
"About how things I may read about can differ from reality. Clothes always seem to miraculously disappear in stories!" She rolled her eyes and Snape snorted.
Reaching for his wand, he tilted his head and said, "I am a wizard, my love. It may not be miraculous, but it can be magical..."
Bursting out laughing, Hermione shook her head and reached toward her feet. "I'll pass this time. But I am going to get more comfortable." She started untying the laces on the hiking boots she had worn to Hogsmeade, and Snape surreptitiously toed his boots off, stripping his socks off and stuffing them into the boots. Fortunately, her room was warm enough that he didn't think his feet would get cold.
Hermione cast a sheepish grin at him as she followed his lead, peeling her socks away and furtively shoving them under her bed. Then, standing, she crossed her arms, gripping the hem of her jumper to lift it over her head.
Snape watched her hungrily. She had dressed very much like she had when they had gone to London, and when she removed the jumper, a long-sleeved knit top was revealed. Snape absently shrugged out of his robes, idly pushing them off the foot of the bed onto the floor.
Hermione tossed the jumper toward her hamper and looked back at Snape, pausing to goggle at him in just his shirtsleeves and trousers. Her chest tightened as the intimacy of it hit her. Granted, she had seen him in less, and in more, but never yet had she seen him in what he regularly wore beneath his stark, imposing teaching robes. He had truly revealed himself to her, and she ached with the joy of it.
She gazed at him in wonder, crossing to stand between his knees as he sat on the edge of her bed. Cupping his face, she kissed him, travelling back to nuzzle his ear and murmur, "I love you, Severus. I'm so happy you're here."
Snape's arms tightened convulsively around her and he exhaled heavily before replying, "As am I. I couldn't wish for anything more, my love."
She pulled back and locked eyes with him, and he was stunned by the heat crackling in her gaze. Her voice was low and seductive as she said, "I could..." With that, she eyed him with a determined look and pressed against his shoulders, pushing him back onto the bed. Snape blinked, taken aback by her aggression. He fell back onto his elbows, watching her as she slid her fingers down his chest.
Hermione licked her lips, methodically opening each button on his shirt. When she had reached his waist, she flicked a glance back up at Snape, tugging to untuck his shirttails from his trousers. Snape's stomach muscles contracted and his hips twitched as she resolutely reached for the closures of his trousers, carefully opening them.
Snape's heart pounded and his breathing came short and shallow. The roaring in his ears intensified as Hermione slowly undressed him. His head was spinning; he had never experienced anything quite like the intimacy involved in such an act.
When she had pulled his shirt from within his trousers and opened his trousers at the waist, she slipped her hands beneath the fabric and smoothed up his stomach and chest, sweeping the front panels of his shirt to the sides, baring him. Her eyes burned as they stared intently at the thin line of dark hair that trailed from his navel down beneath his waistband. She could see that he was hard for her, and her body throbbed with want.
Snape's hunger for Hermione mounted, and he sat up, gripping her hands where they lay on his chest. Kissing her fiercely, he placed her hands on his shoulders and then reached down to the hem of her shirt. His fingertips snuck under it and traced lightly along her waist, making her shiver at the ticklish sensations. She twined her fingers in his hair as he leisurely stroked his way up her sides, shoving the fabric up as he went. When he felt her bra under his questing fingers, he slid his thumbs forward, slipping over the swell of her breasts, across her nipples.
Hermione moaned at the sweep of his thumbs over her tight nipples. His hands were warm as they cupped her breasts, gently fondling them through the fabric of her bra. Hermione pressed toward him, and a low growl from Snape sent a jolt of heat through her again. She gasped, and Snape took the opportunity to nuzzle along her jaw toward her neck. Her erratic gasps and sighs fired his ardour, and he gathered her shirt, guiding it over her shoulders. Hermione took the hint and backed away, allowing him to pull it off her.
Her hair tumbled down over her face, dishevelled from removing the knit top, and she reached up to shove it out of her eyes. Snape, his own shirt hanging behind his shoulders and around his upper arms, simply stared at her. Standing there, clad in her jeans and bra, hair tangled, lips full and glistening, eyes dark, gilded by the moonlight...Snape was awed by how beautifully erotic she looked.
His voice was a hoarse rasp as he said, "Good gods, Hermione, you are a vision."
Hermione smiled shyly at the compliment, ducking her head modestly. She bit her lip, then glanced back up at him through her lashes. "Speaking of vision," she murmured, "can I please see you tonight?"
Snape's eyes snapped open wide, and his breath caught. Everything they had done had been in the dark, by touch only. He had seen quite a bit of her the next morning when he had tried to wake her, and he had seen even more when he had snuck up to her room to find her nude atop her covers, but she hadn't seen him. His cock jumped vehemently.
Swallowing hard, he whispered, "I think that could be arranged."
Hermione's chest heaved in response, and her eyelids fluttered. Eyes glittering, she cast a heated gaze at him and breathed, "Join me?" Gesturing at the bed, she tilted her head and climbed onto it. Snape scrambled to turn around and crawl further up, alongside her. They faced each other, on their knees, sitting back on their heels. Hermione shot a faint smile at him and nodded pointedly at their position. "Like in London..."
Snape recognized the similarity and smiled. Hermione reached forward and pushed his shirt completely off, wrapping her arms around him and pressing her breasts against his chest. Snape dipped his head to nip her neck and murmured in her ear, "Only better..." With that, his hands travelled up her back and unhooked her bra.
Hermione moaned, arching her back. Snape's fingers grazed over her shoulder blades, pushing the straps over the points of her shoulders, letting them fall down, along her arms. Even though it was still winter, the heat they created between them boiled their blood and fired their desire, keeping them warm without each successive layer of clothing. Hermione leant back, letting Snape's lips trail down her throat and over her collarbone, his nose nudging her bra away from her breasts until it fell to her elbows, at which point, she pulled free of it and flung it away.
Snape covered her breasts with soft kisses, delighting in the softness of her skin. When he laved one nipple, Hermione cried out, shuddering. She raked her hands through his hair, dragging her nails across his scalp and tightening her fists, holding him there. Not that he really wanted to move anyway...
Snape's cock throbbed painfully, trapped within his trousers. In an attempt to relieve some of the pressure, he guided Hermione to turn and lie back, so he could lie beside her. Once she was comfortably stretched out on her back, he fitted his long frame to one side of her, his mouth still lavishing attention on one nipple as his hand snaked down to unbutton her jeans. Hermione moaned encouragement, reaching down to help him.
Once undone, he tugged and she squirmed, and together they managed to pull her jeans down below her arse. Punctuated by frustrated huffs, Hermione finally struggled out of them and kicked them to the floor. Snape slid one leg along hers to rest between them, enjoying the feel of her squeezing her legs around his and rocking. He could feel her heat through her knickers and his trousers.
They were practically devouring each other, hands roaming, when Hermione broke the kiss and panted, "Your turn." Snape blinked at her, perplexed, and she pointedly reached for his waistband, tugging at it.
Breath catching, Snape closed his eyes briefly, feeling the surge of sensation in his cock. Swallowing hard, he rolled away, lying on his back and furtively reaching for the half-opened fly of his trousers. Hermione propped herself up on one elbow, facing Snape, her breast pressing against his bicep. Snape cast a quick glance at her, and was slightly taken aback by the avid interest in her eyes as they were trained on his groin.
Carefully, he lifted his hips and hooked his thumbs beneath the fabric, easing the trousers down without catching on his erection. Rocking up to a sitting position, he pulled the trousers completely off, flicking them over the end of the bed. Looking over his shoulder, he saw Hermione breathing quickly, her lips parted. She reached up and wrapped her hand around his upper arm, urging him to lie back down. Heart pounding in anxiety, Snape eased back until he was once again lying beside her. Both of them stared fixedly at his boxers, tented so much so that the elastic was pulling away from his hips.
Hermione laid a hand on his belly, rubbing in soothing circles, spiralling out until she dipped beneath the elastic. Snape twitched under her caresses, hyper-sensitive to her touch. Hermione squirmed further down the bed, curling forward to rest her head on his ribs. Reflexively, Snape's hand rose to stroke her hair. He closed his eyes and concentrated on the exquisite sensations of her explorations.
Hermione slipped her hand within his boxers...she was only slightly surprised to see that they were plain white cotton...and wrapped her fingers around his shaft, squeezing gently. Snape's groan simply served to encourage her. Stroking along his length, she pressed his cock toward his belly, bending her wrist to shove the fabric away. Once the glistening head was free of the elastic, she shoved the waistband down further, letting his cock spring forward again, this time with the fabric bunched at the base of his erection.
She paused then, gazing with rapt fascination at him. In a flurry of movement, she cast a whispered Lumos at the candle nearest her, spilling faint golden light along his lean form in addition to the milky glow of moonlight. She had learnt his contours by touch, but now she could see the colouration, the springy curls at the base, the flare of the head, the tracing of veins along the length. It looked so awkward. It certainly wasn't a thing of beauty, but it did send sparks through her centre, knowing as she did how much pleasure it could give...to both of them!
Snape, in the meantime, had tensed, his brows drawing together in a worried frown. As soon as she had exposed him, he sucked in a breath and held it, without meaning to. When she ever-so-gently touched him again, that breath exploded out of him in a huge whoosh, and pinpoints of light swam against his closed eyelids. He felt his cock bouncing in response to her feather-light touch, and his stomach muscles contracted, lifting his shoulders off the bed and startling Hermione.
Whipping around to look at him, Hermione's eyes were wide with alarm as she said, "Are you all right?"
Snape collapsed again at the absence of her touch, and he panted, "Yes... I think so..."
Gazing at him with concern, she queried, "Did I hurt you?"
Snape opened his eyes and stared at the ceiling. "No. I'm fine. Just..."
He paused so long that Hermione frowned. "Just what?" Wriggling back up the bed to peer into his face, she murmured, "Severus?"
Snape forced himself to look at her, and the solicitous concern in her eyes blanketed him. By sheer force of will, he opened up to her and admitted what he perceived as a weakness. "It's a bit... overwhelming."
To his surprise, Hermione's worried expression melted into a huge smile. She wrapped her arms around him and whispered, "I know. It is. But, it's wonderful. And so worth it. Trust me."
He felt as if he were drowning in the love pouring from her. She had a point. She had been the one experiencing so many new things with him, and he had been the one gentling her through everything. Now, their positions had reversed, and he realized that if she trusted him so completely, he had to extend the same courtesy.
Caressing his chest, Hermione murmured, "Relax, dearest. I merely want to enjoy you as much as I can. There's nothing to worry about."
Snape swallowed again, grinding his teeth. Breathing deeply through his nose, he eyed her solemnly and nodded. Hermione flashed a beatific smile at him and slithered back down his stomach so she could explore again. This time, when she ventured to push at his pants, he reached down to help her. Once they were past his knees, he moved his legs, kicking them away.
Finally, he was lying there, in all his naked glory, for her to enjoy. Hermione sat up, her hair tumbling forward and covering her breasts. Sucking on her lower lip, she looked brazenly at Snape and lifted onto her knees, pushing her knickers past her hips. Snape's eyes flashed as he watched her intently. She sank to one side, wriggling out of her knickers and dropping them over the edge of the bed.
They stared at each other for a long moment, etching the image of the other's nude form in their minds. Snape reached for her, catching her hand in his, and she lifted their hands, pressing his palm to her cheek and leaning into it.
"I love you."
Snape's chest tightened at her impassioned words, and his thumb swept forward over her lips. "I love you, Hermione."
She smiled and laid her other hand on his belly, just below his navel. He gasped and his muscles twitched. She let her gaze travel over him, seeing the smattering of dark hair on his chest thinning to that devastating treasure trail along his belly, circling his navel and continuing down to widen again into a thick triangle framing his cock and balls, then thinning back out on his legs. His cock stood at attention, bobbing erratically as he breathed.
She reverently reached out and wrapped her hand around his shaft again, stroking up and down. Snape groaned again. Leaning forward, she propped herself on her other hand and whispered in his ear, her curls tickling his face, "I want to watch it this time. I want to do to you what we did before, but I want to see you."
His eyes rolled back in his head and he moaned. "Let me touch you."
Hermione pulled back up, gazing at him in confusion. Snape's hand scrabbled between them, sliding along her knee and between her legs until he could cup her mound in his hand. She jerked, gasping in surprise, and her hand squeezed spastically on his cock. A startled, "Oh!" burst from her lips.
Snape gloried in the slick heat that coated her curls under his fingers. He caressed her swollen lips and she stroked his cock in return. A ragged groan was wrenched from his throat, and Hermione renewed her actions with vigour.
Shifting beside him, she spread her knees in invitation, sinking back on her heels as she settled close enough that she could easily stroke him and he could touch her. For every one of Snape's grunts and groans, Hermione voiced a matching whimper and moan.
Hermione was always a quick study, and having learnt something, didn't easily forget it. Thus it was that she remembered how to touch Snape, pumping her fist along his cock, stroking and squeezing in her mission to bring him pleasure. Their breathing and noises came faster and louder, so willing were they to abandon themselves to their bliss.
Snape slipped one long finger along her cleft, delving into her, fluttering within her and thrusting shallowly. Hermione increased the pressure and pace of her stroking, rocking against Snape's hand as she went. Tilting her hips, she ground her clit against Snape's wrist, almost shrieking, "Severus!" in her shock as she suddenly crested her peak, climaxing with a convulsive shudder, drenching his hand even more.
Snape felt her orgasm approaching, and his balls tightened. He knew he was so close. When her cunt clamped down on his finger, and she keened in ecstasy, he let loose a ragged groan, chanting, "Yes, yes, come for me. Gods, yes, Hermione, love, oh gods, yes, now, Hermione, now!" He nearly howled that final "now" as he bucked upward, thrusting into her hand as he came, shooting forth and dripping over her knuckles.
Spiralling down from her orgasm, Hermione heard Snape's litany and snapped her eyes open, her fevered gaze locked on the spectacle that followed her peak. She watched his muscles ripple along his entire body, the cords of his neck standing out, rigid, as his head canted back and he grimaced in divine agony. His hips rocked shamelessly, driving his swelling cock into her hand. Then, with a shudder that washed over him from head to toe and back again, she felt and saw the milky liquid spurting forth, warm and slick as it coated her hand.
Snape's hand was limp under her, and he lay there panting as he came back to reality. Hermione watched him, unblinking, unwilling to move until he told her to. Finally, he swallowed and rasped, "You may let go now." Dutifully, Hermione released him, snatching her hand back quickly. Fascinated, she stared at his cock as it slowly seemed to deflate, coming to rest against his thatch of dark hair.
Her hand was still wet with his come, and she peered at it with interest. Snape forced himself to open his eyes, casting a wary glance at her. She realized he was looking at her and caught his eye. Snape gingerly pulled his hand from between her thighs, and she shivered. His hand was coated with her juices as well. They both kept looking between their hands and each other, until finally Hermione lifted her hand closer to her face, and with a defiant, triumphant look, flicked her tongue out to taste.
Snape groaned, then greedily brought his fingers to his lips, sucking them clean as he watched her with smouldering eyes. She licked delicately at the fluid, pausing thoughtfully as she considered the flavour. Soberly, she locked eyes with him and purred, "Definitely interesting. I bet it would taste better directly from your cock, though."
Snape sucked in a sharp breath, utterly unprepared for such a wanton statement. Before he could reply, they were startled by Crookshanks meowing, pouncing at the floor by her door. His tail was straight up, and he kept jumping and batting at the floor in a predatory fashion.
Annoyed, Hermione hissed, "Crookshanks, hush!" She flashed an aggrieved look at Snape and muttered, "I'm sorry, Severus, I don't know what has got into him. What a way to spoil the mood."
Snape finally propped himself up on his elbows, frowning at the cat's antics. He reached for his wand to cast cleansing charms, quirking a wry, lopsided grin. "Love, after a performance like that, even he..." He glanced back at the animal, trailing off. Brow furrowing in concern, he rolled to the side, leaning forward to get a better look at what Crookshanks was attacking.
His gut turned into a block of ice. It wasn't a bug. Well, not in the literal sense. An inch or two inside the door, a small flesh-coloured blob was visible at the end of a strand that stretched under the door. Body tensing with almost paralytic fear, Snape's eyes went wide, and Hermione said, "Severus?"
Snape slashed his hand toward her in a violent motion to be quiet. Swiftly, quietly, he shot to his feet, shoving his feet into his trousers and yanking them up. He approached the door with his wand at the ready, and Hermione crouched on the bed, bewildered yet terrified at the abject horror on Snape's face. Scrambling for her robe, she shrugged into it and crawled across the bed, peering down at the blob. Dread froze her heart, and she shot an agonized look at Snape, who was plastered along the wall by her door, preparing to fling it open.
They locked eyes, both recognizing the thing that had attracted Crookshanks's attention. It was none other than a Weasley Extendable Ear.
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Hermione wasn't the only one who had been irritated by public displays of affection all day. But, in his case, he was merely irritated that he wasn't participating in said displays with Hermione. He started to wonder about her and Neville, particularly since she had been practically hanging on him for most of the day. It had proved nigh on impossible to separate her from her other seventh-year friends. So, giving up on getting a chance to approach her while in Hogsmeade, he went about his business of buying her a gift, planning to surprise her with it later that evening.
At dinner, he had been trying to catch her eye, wanting to ask her to be his valentine, but she kept looking elsewhere. Finally, as she had left, and Neville had made his announcements to the others that she didn't want to be disturbed, a flare of excitement washed over him, simmering in his belly in anticipation.
Upon crossing through the common room on his way to his dormitory, he had averted his eyes from the passionate embraces of the couples scattered in the corners, cheeks flushing with the desire to be one of those couples, snogging Hermione. Drawing the curtains of his bed, he dug her gift out of his bag of purchases. Remembering her reaction to the mousse at Christmas, he knew she really liked chocolate, and he had bought a deluxe assortment from Honeydukes. Wrapping gold ribbon around the gift box, he tied a bow, slipping the charmed rose he had found at Madam Puddifoot's into the knot. The rose was stasis-charmed, so it was kept at the peak of its beauty. He had purposefully chosen a red rose, hoping she would understand how much he liked her.
His stomach roiled with anxiety as he waited for the evening to wane. He knew she didn't want to be disturbed, but surely she only meant not to bother her with problems. Certainly she would be pleased to be surprised with such a romantic gesture of tender feelings. Still, he worried that she might not answer. And, there was that gnawing fear that perhaps her excuse was really a ruse to spend the evening with Neville. He had made a big deal about telling the others to leave her alone...
His brows lowered in a fierce scowl. Ignoring the other boys in the dormitory, he wrenched his curtains open and lunged down his bed toward the trunk at the foot. With a grim, determined air, he rooted around in his trunk until he found the box of gags and other items he had ordered from Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. His eyes lit up and a calculating smile spread his lips as he pulled out the long, stretchy, flesh-coloured strand that was one of a pair of Extendable Ears. Coiling it around his fingers, he backed up onto his bed again, re-closing the curtains.
Time seemed to drag on forever as he waited for his fellow sixth-years to go to sleep. Once the lights were all doused, and he heard nought but breathing, he carefully slipped from his bed and tiptoed out of the room, Hermione's gift hidden under his robe.
There were still a few couples in the common room when he passed through. But, they were so involved with each other that they never noticed his presence. He gingerly scampered past them, hurrying down the corridor to Hermione's room. At the end of the corridor, he faced her door. Screwing his courage to the sticking point, he took a deep breath and knocked. He didn't want to startle her, and he didn't want anyone else to possibly hear from within the common room, so he knocked softly at first. When there was no answer, he tried again. Still nothing.
Knocking harder, he said, "Hermione? Are you there? I need to talk to you." After a beat of silence, he tried again. Wondering at the lack of response, he leant forward and laid his ear against the wood. That was when he felt the tingle of magic against his skin.
"The door is charmed! It must be a Silencing Charm. No wonder she hasn't answered. She probably hasn't heard me... I wonder if she's asleep. Or maybe she has someone in there with her...Neville!" He frowned again, spitting the other boy's name. Jealousy rose up within him, and he dropped to the floor on his knees, placing her present in front of him and unwinding the Extendable Ear. Fitting one end in his ear, he fed the other end under her door. Once it passed the edge of the wood, he heard it: harsh breathing and moaning.
Rocking back on his heels, his eyes flew open in astonishment. She was in there with someone! Shaky fingers pushed the other end further in, morbid fascination taking over, making him want to know just who had managed to land such a prize as Hermione.
The sounds of passion rose, and he heard her voice climbing in pitch as she suddenly cried, "Severus!"
It was as if the world had stopped. Completely frozen in shock, he hardly breathed or blinked as his mind reeled with the import of that name. Thus, when an answering voice began chanting her name, howling in ecstasy, he struggled to draw breath, trying to keep from passing out in amazement. He knew that voice. He knew that name. That was Snape in there with Hermione, so obviously engaged in lustful activity!
He didn't know what to do. So traumatized was he from the surprise that he couldn't seem to form a coherent thought in his overwhelmed brain. He could barely fathom the words that he heard following the explosive climax from within. Even so, at Hermione's low voice saying the word "cock," his eyes rolled back in his head, and he sucked in a breath, swaying on the spot. His heart was pounding painfully fast, and his head was swimming. He heard Snape's distinctive voice saying something and trailing off, followed by Hermione once again saying "Severus," but he wasn't aware enough of what their exchange could mean as he knelt in the corridor, eavesdropping on their liaison.
Thus it was that he was thoroughly taken by surprise when the door slammed open and a terrifying hiss pronounced, "Petrificus Totalus!"
He felt his body straightening out and going rigid on the floor, and his eyes flew open in time to see Snape, half-dressed and dishevelled, pointing his wand at him from Hermione's doorway. In the background, he saw an equally dishevelled Hermione crouching on the bed, her hands over her mouth to stifle her shriek of, "...Colin!"
In a matter of seconds, Snape had ducked out of the door and dragged Colin into Hermione's room, her package scudding along the floor ahead of him. With the door shut behind them, Snape hastily cast an Imperturbable Charm on it, having learnt that lesson from the current disaster.
Snape's face was paper white, and his eyes were huge with fear and worry. Tears were spilling over Hermione's fingers where they were still covering her mouth. The room was charged with emotion, and one corner of Colin's mind idly wondered if the Full-Body Bind would keep him from losing bladder control in his terror.
Snape stooped to lift the Extendable Ear from the floor, his knuckles white with the ferocity of his grip. His chest was rising and falling rapidly as he panted in shock. Hermione's breathing was erratic as she shuddered with sobs.
Snape and Hermione locked eyes, at a loss for what to do next. Gulping back a wail, Hermione extended a hand toward Snape, who leapt across Colin to enfold her in his arms, stroking her hair and muttering soothing assurances to calm her.
"Shhh. Hermione, love, we'll figure something out. I promise. I don't know what yet, but we'll come up with something. It'll all work out. Shh. It's okay."
Colin wondered if he were somehow trapped in a nightmare. Had he fallen asleep while waiting to leave his dormitory? It was the only explanation that made any sense. He gazed at the floating blossoms near her ceiling in dazed fascination.
Hermione's hands clawed at Snape's back as she wept. Snape continued caressing her hair, but he turned his head enough to cast a murderous look at Colin's petrified form. If he had been able, Colin would have screamed in fear at the doom in Snape's black eyes.
Finally, Hermione's sobs eased enough that her choked words were understandable. "He could... destroy us... Dumbledore... what... do we do... now?"
She pulled away from Snape's chest, peering up at him, only to see him glaring balefully at Colin, his expression promising torture beyond imagination. Taken aback by the merciless threat in her lover's eyes, she cupped his cheek and guided Snape to look at her.
In a faint rasp, she said, "No, Severus. Don't hurt him. You can't. It'll only make things worse."
The menace in his low growl chilled both Hermione and Colin. "Even though he so rightfully deserves it?"
Hermione closed her eyes and rested her forehead on Snape's. "Don't. Just don't. I know how you feel, Severus, but we've seen enough violence to last several lifetimes."
Snape grimaced, his jaw throbbing as he ground his teeth. He exhaled harshly through his nose, muscles tense. On the floor, Colin felt the cold, wet trails of tears as they streaked along his temples. He prayed to any god he could think of to save him from Snape.
Snape seemed to shudder, and he squeezed Hermione so tight she gasped. But, she knew he had regained control of his rage, and she kissed him gratefully. In his head, Colin heard his own voice shrieking in outrage and horror at the sight.
Hermione gently urged Snape to sit with her on the bed. He moved to join her, then abruptly turned away to finish fastening his trousers. Colin's eyes rolled back in his head. Hermione wrapped her robe around herself and tied the sash firmly. Snape slid onto the bed beside her, and they stared down at Colin.
Snape wrapped his arm around Hermione, and she clasped his other hand in hers. Together, they sat, gazing dazedly at the catastrophe that was Colin on the floor in front of them. Snape eventually murmured, "We need to know how much he heard. How long was he out there?"
Hermione nodded quickly. "I suppose we could release him and ask. I don't see his wand, do you?"
Colin nearly choked on the agonized sob trying to rise from his paralyzed throat. She was right! He was completely defenceless.
Snape seemed to consider for a moment, then said, "I could always bind him and then release the spell. It won't matter if he screams; not with that Imperturbable Charm on the door." He tossed his head in frustration and spat, "Dammit! Why didn't we think of that in the first place? Damn those Weasleys and their bloody pranks!"
Hermione shot a reproachful look at Snape. "That's not fair, Severus. Just think how helpful the ink has been for us. It's not their fault that Colin crossed all lines of decency." She turned a fuming glare on Colin.
Snape pursed his lips, seething. "Hermione, there's only one way out of this."
She turned curious eyes on him. "Do we swear him to secrecy like we did with Ginny? I don't know that we can trust him, not with the low tactics he's already displayed."
Colin protested vehemently in his head, wishing he could defend himself and his actions. He just wanted to get closer to her! He did everything because of how much he liked her!
Snape cut a withering glance at Hermione and heaved an exasperated sigh. "Of course we can't trust him! There is no enjoining someone to keep our secret this time. You were ready to take the step with Ginny..."
Hermione's eyes widened in comprehension. "Obliviate him!"
Snape's head inclined in a slow nod. "Exactly. But, to do the thing properly, we need to know how much time needs to be erased, and we'll have to figure out something to explain why he's in the corridor outside your door. Unless you can think of some way to reasonably get him elsewhere. But, that's a bit trickier, since that means we might run into others."
Hermione stared into the middle distance, eyes flickering as she thought furiously. "A really good memory charm not only removes the target memory but also allows what amounts to a sort of post-hypnotic suggestion to replace it. We've learnt about them in theory, but actual practice is left for those who proceed on to further education toward joining the Ministry. All we've learnt is the basic memory charm, and it only erases about fifteen seconds at the most." She cast a worried look back at Snape. "How do you propose we find out how much we have to erase?"
Snape cocked a brow as if to indicate that was hardly a question worth asking and retorted, "Legilimency, of course."
Hermione rolled her eyes, disgusted that she hadn't thought of that herself and nodded. "Of course." Then, she gazed back at Colin. "Go on, then."
Snape's expression hardened as he rose and stalked over to peer down at the boy. He stood beside Colin's head and stared down at him. After a beat, he gracefully dropped to a squat, pinning Colin with an icy, determined gaze. Colin tried to blink, but he couldn't, and Snape stabbed into his mind with a viciousness that left him reeling under the onslaught.
Images of Hermione flooded his brain, showcasing just how much he had been watching her. The way he followed her and the other seventh-years around, his gift purchases, his anxious wait in his dormitory, the trek to her door, the earth-shattering discovery of Hermione's relationship with Snape through his eavesdropping... all of that flashed by, and Snape's face contorted with fury and hate above him. Withdrawing ruthlessly, Snape shot to his feet and spun, his hands in trembling fists at his sides.
Hermione watched the invasion with a sense of pitying horror. Then, she clamped down on her feeling of pity and steeled herself for the necessity of what they had to do.
Snape's eyes were hard and flinty as he rasped, "He heard everything. We have no choice."
Hermione swallowed against the lump that kept rising to her throat. Snape crossed back to the bed and dropped to his knees in front of her. Gripping her arms, he locked eyes with her, willing her to be strong. "Hermione, love, I know you don't want this, but we have to wipe his memory. And, you must convince him, for good, that you want nothing to do with him. I know it hurts you to hurt others, but you must. If you don't, then he may continue pursuing you, and we may not get a chance for damage control next time."
Hermione bit her lip to still its trembling and nodded, misery drowning in the tears that insisted on welling up again. Snape reached up and tenderly caressed her cheek, wiping away a tear with his thumb. Then, he snapped his attention back to Colin.
Crossing back to tower over the boy, Snape said, "I will use Legilimency to aid me in Obliviating him, and then we will release him and place him back in the corridor. Once we remove the Imperturbable Charm, you'll be able to hear his knock. I'll hide, and it'll be up to you to get rid of him once and for all." He cast a grim look at Hermione. "Be merciless. There is no room left for pity."
Sniffling, Hermione croaked, "I know."
After a beat, Snape huffed and focused on Colin, about to begin his task, but Hermione gasped, "Wait!"
Scowling balefully, Snape cut a glance at her and growled, "What?"
Gesturing about the room, Hermione hissed, "What about all the flowers? If he sees them, it's going to be even harder to throw him off. How would I explain them?"
Snape's eyes darted around the veritable bower he had created, and he rebelled at having to dispose of it all so quickly. Lip curling, baring his teeth in mutinous, impotent fury, he shot a death-glare at Colin. In a terrifying hiss, he said, "Damn you, boy. I could cheerfully Crucio you for ruining my gift."
Hermione's soft, sympathetic-yet-warning, "Severus..." stopped him. Once again exhaling harshly through his nose, teeth grinding, he brandished his wand at the flowers, whirling them into a vortex that disappeared with a "pop."
The sweet scent was all that remained of his surprise. Chest heaving, Snape returned to Colin, invading his mind with Legilimency, pointing his wand at him and muttering, "Obliviate," keeping his wand trained on the boy until he had erased enough. Then, while Colin was under the temporary fog that followed a memory charm, he dashed to the door, opening it a crack and peering out. Seeing the corridor empty, he roughly shoved the boy out the door, kicking the box of chocolates after him. Then, with only the tip of his wand still sticking through the door, he released the Full-Body Bind and shut the door with a snap.
Whirling, he pinned Hermione with a meaningful glare and swept past her to her bathroom, pausing only long enough to lift the Imperturbable Charm from her door before shutting her bathroom door between them.
Hermione felt dazed from the roller-coaster of emotions she had already experienced. She sat, rigid with tension, waiting for Colin to knock. Eventually, it came. Wiping her face and sniffling again, she crossed to her door, summoning all of her acting abilities to pull off the most important "role" of her life so far.
She opened the door a crack and peeked out. Colin, still looking a bit woozy, was standing there with the box of chocolates. He blinked at her and said, "Hermione?"
Deciding to be harsh from the start, Hermione frowned at him and said coldly, "What do you want, Colin? It's late, and I thought I had made it perfectly clear that I didn't want to be disturbed."
Colin flushed faintly. With an attempt at a winning smile, he said, "Oh, I thought you meant not to bother you with problems. But, I have something for you." He proffered the package, complete with the rose in the ribbon. Ducking his head shyly, he continued, "This is for you. I know you like chocolate. And... and the rose is for you, too." He blinked rapidly as he recited, "Sweets and beauty for someone sweet and beautiful. Will you be my valentine, Hermione?"
Hermione closed her eyes and bowed her head. After a pause, in which she could feel Colin's anxiety growing, she looked back up at him, expression tightly controlled and grim. "No." Colin's hopeful expression crumbled, and he looked as if he had been slapped in the face. Hermione forged on, "I cannot accept your gift, Colin. And I won't be your valentine." Colin's outstretched hands dropped, and his eyes widened.
Hermione opened the door more so she could face him completely. Hands in tight fists at her sides, she drew herself up stiffly and glared at Colin. "Get this through your head once and for all. Stop following me. Leave me alone. I don't like you, and I'm not going to like you. Ever. Keep your chocolates. I don't want them, and I don't want you. I tried to be kind about it before, and I tried to tell you how I felt, but you refused to listen! I'm sorry to have to be so horrid, but you've left me no choice! Find someone else to pin your pathetic crush on, and let me be." She paused, breathing heavily with emotion.
Colin looked devastated. He stared at her like a betrayed puppy. In the moment of silence, he pulled the rose from the ribbon and tried once more to give it to Hermione. His voice shook as he said, "Then... w-would you at least keep this... as a token of... how much I like you?"
Hermione's stomach clenched painfully, and she took the rose, twirling it in her fingers. Then, in a move calculated to cause the most pain, she locked eyes with Colin and dropped the rose to the floor, stepping on the bloom and grinding the petals into the stone. Colin let loose a noise reminiscent of a mouse being trod on, and Hermione fought to keep the tears from welling up again.
Completely aghast, Colin stared at Hermione, eyes bright and glassy, face blotchy, and breath ragged. He struggled to swallow. Hermione ground her teeth and uttered a hoarse, "You have your answer, Colin. Go to bed. Don't make me go to McGonagall and tell her how much you've been harassing me."
Colin sucked in a breath, sounding like he had been kicked in the gut. Blinking at Hermione like he had never seen her before, he backed away unsteadily. Hermione gripped the door frame, refusing to back down until he was gone. She watched him as he stumbled down the corridor, shoulders bowed and head down. Once he turned the corner into the common room, he ducked back to cast one last look at her, and she pointedly kicked the crushed rose across the corridor into the opposite wall. His eyes fluttered closed, and he shrank back around the corner.
Hermione forced herself to wait, just in case he tried to come back, then, stomach roiling, heart thundering, she backed into her room and slammed the door shut, collapsing to the floor in a heap.
Snape peeked through the bathroom door and saw her crumpled by the door, leaning against it as sobs once again tore from her throat. Casting another Imperturbable Charm at the door as he went, he rushed through her room to her, kneeling and cradling her in his arms.
Snape's murmur was gentle as he said, "You were marvellous, love. I know it was horrid, but you were brilliant. I daresay he'll never bother you again. We're safe now. It's okay. I promise. We'll be fine."
He and Hermione rocked back and forth, Snape stroking her soothingly until she quieted. His chest was wet from her streaming eyes and nose, but he didn't care. When she was once again calm, he guided her to stand and sit on the bed. Handing her a quickly Summoned handkerchief, he sat beside her, peering worriedly at her blank expression.
"I'll be right back, love. Don't move." Snape squeezed her hand and stood, Disapparating. He popped into existence in his bathroom, wrenching open his cabinet and searching for a Calming Draught. Clutching it like a talisman, he Apparated back to Hermione's room.
Hermione hadn't budged. She sat, morosely staring at the floor. Snape urged her to swallow a dose of the Calming Draught, and she submitted without protest. Carefully tugging her to her feet, Snape pulled the covers down the bed, then helped her out of her robe. She was still naked under it, but Snape was far too concerned about her to be distracted by her nudity. He guided her to lie down, frowning again in worry as she almost immediately curled up on her side in a foetal position.
Crookshanks jumped onto the bed, sniffing at her, and she grabbed him, hugging him to her. Snape, grateful that the animal seemed to comfort her, heaved a sigh and doused the remaining lights, shrugging out of his trousers again and crawling into the bed behind Hermione. Fitting himself against her, he drew the covers over them and wrapped her in his embrace, listening to Crookshanks's lulling purr.
There was a long moment of near-silence, then Snape whispered, "I'm so sorry, Hermione. Try to rest, dear heart. I'm here. I'm not going anywhere. I'll take care of you. I promise I'll be here when you wake up. Just rest. You'll feel better when you wake." He pressed a fervent kiss against her trapezius and murmured, "I love you."
He lay awake for a long while, listening to her breathing finally even out as she dropped off to sleep. Sadness overtook him at the disastrous end to their blissfully-begun liaison, and he fell into a fitful doze, primed to wake at the first sign of Hermione rousing.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)