78- Castigation
Chapter 82 of 84
Good_WitchSnape's trial is over, but his trials have just begun. When Spinner's End is overrun with guests, events take a surprising turn. Will anyone be able to help keep Snape out of Azkaban?
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Author's Note: We're winding down, folks. I honestly think we're 2-3 chapters away from this story finishing. LOL Yeah, only six years later... Anyway, here's hoping that this latest rush of writing continues and allows me to be able to get it all done before Infinitus! ;) Thanks to Ladyofthemasque, Becky, and all you lovely folk who read and review and make my life happier. *hugs you all*
Chapter 78- Castigation
Snape sank back into the chair, exchanging a wary glance with Dumbledore.
Conroy leant back in his seat and beckoned imperiously at another Wizengamot official. A stack of papers was handed down the row to Conroy, who sneered in disgust at Snape before paging through them. As the minutes ticked on, muted spates of conversation buzzed on all sides, and Snape looked up at Dumbledore, his brow furrowed in apprehension. Dumbledore shook his head minutely, frowning, unsure of what was happening.
Periodically, Conroy would glance up at Snape with a malignant smirk before flipping through more papers, pausing to make notes on a pad to one side. Snape's unease grew, and he looked at Hermione, who locked anxious eyes with him.
Exhaling gustily, Conroy sat back and lifted his face to the court, his expression triumphant. "Mr. Snape, while you purport to have not broken any written laws, it is clear that you traversed freely in the grey areas of the written rules. Your behaviour showed flagrant abuse of the unwritten yet completely reasonable expectations for a professor. It is your job to teach, guide, and care for the safety and well-being of your students, not prey on their emotions and use their regard for your personal ends."
Snape leant forward, goaded to reply. "I did my job! Ask anyone!"
Conroy narrowed his eyes at Snape again, lips thinned in annoyance. "Hold your tongue, Mr. Snape."
At that, Dumbledore interceded, saying, "I beg your pardon, Interrogator Conroy, but Mr. Snape has a point. The Wizengamot Charter of Rights states that any accused person may call witnesses to his defence. If Mr. Snape wishes to do so, he is within his rights."
Conroy fumed, and another Wizengamot official leant in close to whisper in his ear. Jaw pushing forward in mulish defiance, Conroy huffed and said, "Very well then, Mr. Snape, whom do you wish to call in your defence?"
Snape cast a startled glance at Dumbledore, who said, "You may ask anyone you like who can speak to your competence in protecting the students entrusted to your care."
Snape blinked in dismay. Wide-eyed, he turned to look at Hermione, and was taken aback to see several people seated near her perched on the ends of their seats and gesturing at him.
Hermione glanced around at her cast-mates and felt tears welling up. Ginny, Ron, McGonagall, Neville, Parvati, and Millicent all had their hands in the air, demonstrating their willingness to be called to testify. Even the Grangers had their hands raised.
Behind Snape, Dumbledore twinkled and beamed at them as he leant down and murmured, "Just look how many you have to choose from, Severus."
Snape, overcome with gratitude, cleared his throat and said, "Professor McGonagall," acknowledging that she was his best ally and friend.
McGonagall shot to her feet and marched down to the floor, haughtily gazing over her spectacles at the assembled Wizengamot. Conroy growled, "State your name and give whatever testimony you deem appropriate to this case."
"My name is Minerva Catherine McGonagall, and I am Deputy Headmistress, Head of Gryffindor House, and Transfiguration professor at Hogwarts. I have known Severus Snape since he was a child. Ever since he began teaching at Hogwarts, he has always protected the students, both in and out of the classroom." She paused to fling an exasperated glance at Harry, Ron, and Hermione.
"Severus has been Head of Slytherin House for many years, and, as we all know, spent his adult life spying on Lord Voldemort as a member of the Order of the Phoenix. If that doesn't demonstrate his willingness and ability to sacrifice and work to protect all of our society, and not just the students at Hogwarts, then I can't imagine what can!"
There was a rumble of agreement from Snape's supporters, and even the rest of the spectators looked thoughtful.
Conroy gazed at McGonagall for a moment, then said, "Can you honestly say that you have no qualms about the fact that your colleague became intimately involved with a student...in your House, no less?"
McGonagall drew herself up with a regal air and primly addressed the entirety of the Wizengamot. "I believe that Severus and Hermione had nothing but the best of intentions after being chosen...and forced, mind you...to perform in the Tri-Wizard Musical Competition. Had they not been thrown together by the Ministry, I stake my very life on the fact that Severus would never have looked twice at any student in an inappropriate manner. However, seeing that they did fall in love, and Severus quite honourably made his intentions clear in the very proposal of marriage for which he is being denounced, I support both him and Hermione. They are both conscientious, decent, admirable people, and I am pleased that two people for whom I have such high regard managed to find the sort of love they have found in each other. That is a gift many of us never receive. And they deserve it!"
Hermione's eyes welled with tears again, and she covered her trembling lips with her hand. Snape stared at McGonagall, rapt, until she finished her vehement statement. When she turned to look at him, he stood and took her hand, eyes bright as he murmured, "Thank you, Minerva."
McGonagall smiled fondly at Snape and patted his hand. Her whisper was barely audible as she leant forward and said, "What else are friends for?"
As she swept back to her seat, Conroy growled, "Anyone else?"
Snape looked back at the group and once again noticed the Grangers. Aware that their support was extremely meaningful in regards to his future with Hermione, he inclined his head to them and said, "Geoff and Dione Granger."
The Grangers exchanged a look and stood, hands linked as they strode down to the floor. Dione looked to Geoff and he spoke.
"My name is Geoffrey David Granger, and this is my wife, Dione. Hermione is our daughter. We are not wizards, clearly, so we only know of this world through her. However, we have heard nothing but good things about Severus protecting the students of Hogwarts. Even when the headmaster sent them on assignment to London, Severus escorted Hermione and kept her safe. As far as our personal knowledge of his efforts, we can vouch for his shrewdness in helping Hermione look at every aspect of her proposed Ministry contract, assisting her in ways we couldn't, since we aren't familiar enough with how things work in the wizarding world."
Dione added, "It may have been quite a shock to learn that Hermione and Severus were engaged, but we accept it...and Severus, as part of our family."
Dione peered up at Geoff and he nodded slowly. "I'm not sure how your legal system works, but I think that, even though the situation is unexpected, Severus is not a criminal." He looked over at Snape and tilted his head. "I guess that's all."
Snape inclined his head and stepped closer to clasp their hands. His voice was gravelly as he said, "That's more than enough. Thank you."
Dione flashed a tight smile as she and Geoff returned to their seats. Snape looked over to see Millicent stubbornly holding her hand in the air. Acknowledging the girl from his House, he said, "Miss Bulstrode?"
Millicent rose and took a deep breath, flicking a glance at the nearby Neville, who flashed an encouraging grin at her. McGonagall nodded in approval as well, and Millicent lifted her chin and marched down beside Snape.
"My name is Millicent Agnes Bulstrode, and Professor Snape was my Head of House the whole time I was at Hogwarts. He was always making sure that the little kids didn't get bullied by the older ones, and knew how to fix damage and heal hexes so we didn't have to report to Madam Pomfrey all the time and get into more trouble whenever there were scuffles in the common room. He may not have been the nicest person, but we Slytherins all knew we could go to him when it counted. So don't you go saying that he didn't do his job of protecting us, 'cause he did." She ended her statement with a jerk of her head for emphasis, then nodded at Snape and hurried back to her seat before Snape could thank her.
Neville was beaming at her and hissed, "Well said again!" Then, he shot to his feet and announced, "My turn, Professor," as he made his way to the floor. Snape was staring at him as if the young man had grown another head, but Augusta Longbottom was smirking with pride at her grandson's initiative.
Smiling cheerfully at Snape and Dumbledore, Neville faced the Wizengamot and said, "I'm Neville Franklin Longbottom, and I was terrified of Professor Snape until very recently." There was a spate of chuckles at his frank admission. "But, Professor Snape not only worked hard at our performance...in addition to his regular Hogwarts duties...he helped the cast get past our stage fright. If it hadn't been for his guidance and leadership, we may not have won the competition...or, at least, several of us would never have managed to work up the courage to perform so well. And, he made sure no one harassed Hermione about her role, even going so far as to punish a student in his own House for insulting her!"
Snape shook his head minutely in wonder at Neville Longbottom, of all the students he had terrorized over the years, coming to his defence. The boy had truly grown up, and didn't deserve Snape's former disdain any longer.
Neville looked back at Hermione and then at Snape. "I don't know what you're going to do about Professor Snape and Hermione getting engaged, but I think that if you had ever seen them perform, then you'd understand how special their connection is." He flicked a glance at Parvati and settled his shoulders with dignity. "And I think it's poor form to punish consenting adults for loving. If there's one thing I learned from the war, it's that love is the most powerful force for good in this world." He paused again, noting the poisonous scowl on Conroy's face, and blinked. "But anyway, Professor Snape did his job well, protecting us, or the good side may not have won."
Neville looked at Harry, who was sulking and staring at the wall. Sighing in disappointment, he turned back to Snape and proffered his hand. Snape, almost speechless, gripped the younger man's hand firmly and said, "Thank you."
Neville smiled and said, "No, sir. Thank you." Then he trotted back to his seat.
Conroy growled, "If this parade is over..."
Shooting up from his seat, Ron barked, "Oi! It's not over yet. I haven't had my turn!" Glaring at Conroy in indignation, he bounded down to the floor and said, "All right, if you're in such a hurry, I'll make this quick. My name is Ronald Bilius Weasley, and I just want to say what everyone else has been beating around the bush about. Professor Snape saved lots of us...but Harry mainly...loads of times. And even though the war ended, he didn't stop. Even Professor Dumbledore can tell you that it was Professor Snape's quick reflexes that saved Harry's neck...literally...during rehearsal! If he hadn't stopped that noose, Harry could've been really hurt. So grumble all you want about him and Hermione having an 'inappropriate relationship,' but leave off about him 'breaching trust' and not doing his job."
He scowled right back at Conroy, then turned to nod at Snape and Dumbledore before rejoining Hermione in the stands. As he edged past Harry and Ginny, Harry stared up at him, frowning. Ron sat down and Hermione hugged him, Ginny reaching past her to pat him on the back in approval. Harry watched his friends for a moment, then turned his attention to Snape and Dumbledore on the floor.
Snape, chest and throat tight with emotion at the unexpected swell of support, coughed and said, "I daresay that's enough to make a point. Albus, have you anything to add?"
Dumbledore smiled and said, "No, indeed. Everyone else summed it up quite brilliantly, I think."
Conroy sniffed loudly, then said, "Very well then. We shall confer on the remainder of your punishment."
He sat back, gesturing for the officials on either side to lean in. He riffled through the stack of papers in front of him and pointed at his notes as he muttered to the others. They frowned and shook their heads, making notes of their own. After a few more moments of hushed consulting, one ripped the page from Conroy's pad and passed it down the row so the rest of the Wizengamot could see it. There were some nods and murmurs of agreement as well as some huffs and frowns of disagreement. Some even went so far as to scribble their own notes on the page.
Finally, the paper made its way back to Conroy. He scanned the adjustments and snorted, but pushed forward in his seat anyway, saying, "Severus Snape, please rise and face the court."
Snape stood, smoothing his robes and breathing deeply as he waited for Conroy to continue.
"Although testimony has been brought forth claiming that you performed your duties, it is also abundantly clear that you allowed yourself liberties beyond what is deemed acceptable in your position of authority over students. Therefore, it has been decided that you are not entitled to the full compensation for your duties, as you did not fulfil them in a respectable fashion. As per your own words, your inappropriate relationship with Miss Granger began in November. From that month until the end of your teaching contract, which our records show to be through June, you will be fined 90% of your base salary for those eight months, not including any extra stipends or perquisites. This penalty is due to the Wizengamot by the close of business Friday, in full, or you may face other penalties as well."
Snape's eyes went wide and he felt as if all the air had vanished from his lungs. That much? I don't have that much left! Not after all the bills, and Hermione's ring, and furnishing the house... Where am I going to get that much money by Friday? With my reputation, I doubt I can get a loan from any respectable source. I can't ask for a salary advance, not when Fern is fronting all the money right now anyway, until we can get stock into stores. I can't bear to ask Hermione to pay for my folly with her salary! I guess it's a good thing that we're not married yet, else she'd be responsible for this fine anyway. Merlin, I don't know what to do...
While he was reeling at the rest of his punishment, Conroy continued, "I just want to remind you, Mr. Snape, that it would be very unwise to attempt to flee jurisdiction." His smirk was pure venom. "We'll be looking for your payment by Friday." He brandished the paper at Dumbledore, who collected it and brought it back to Snape. It detailed the complete amount he was expected to pay. Lifting the gavel with a flourish, Conroy said, "These proceedings are over. You may go," then banged the gavel for emphasis.
The Wizengamot and spectators began to file out of the courtroom, conversations buzzing. Snape and Dumbledore stood motionless in the centre of the floor. Hermione, grateful that Snape was only fined, watched Snape's stunned expression with growing worry.
Arthur Weasley crossed to Snape and Dumbledore, gesturing for them to precede him toward the stands where Snape's supporters remained. Hermione jumped up and raced down to Snape, hurling herself into his embrace. The Grangers and the rest of the Weasleys followed, Ginny dragging Harry along by one hand. Neville, his grandmother, and Parvati sidled up to one side of the group, and McGonagall herded Millicent to join them as well.
Snape looked up from resting his cheek on Hermione's head and said, "I can't thank you all enough for everything you've done here. Your support means more than I can say. Thank you."
Hermione lifted her head to see Orly Yarly edging closer, patently hoping to hear their conversation so she could use it in her gossip column. Incensed and worn out from the stress of the trial, Hermione backed up in Snape's arms and said, "I already told everyone upstairs that I wouldn't be back in the office today. Not with this happening, and my having to go buy a computer." She felt Snape cringe faintly and wondered why. "But we really do appreciate you all coming."
Orly was just a few steps away, scribbling furiously, and Hermione said, "Why don't we all go back to the house where we can relax away from prying busybodies!" She glared at Orly, and everyone turned to see what she was looking at. Voice hard, she said, "You're all welcome to come along. We can Floo to Spinner's End."
Snape didn't particularly want to have his home overrun by Weasleys and more, but he felt the Rita Skeeter vibe coming off the eavesdropping woman and understood Hermione's concern. Gripping Hermione's hand, he stepped toward the door. "Hermione's right. You're all welcome." Tugging more urgently on her hand, he said, "Let's go."
Hermione beckoned for their friends to follow as she and Snape exited the courtroom and made their way to the lifts. When they had all piled into lifts, Hermione watched with no little satisfaction as Orly Yarly scowled in frustration at losing her targets.
Bulling their way through the milling crowd avidly talking about the trial they had just left, they Flooed home, unsure who would follow. Snape excused himself and immediately went to the W.C. to splash water on his face, leaving Hermione to play hostess to those who appeared.
When he felt composed enough to return, he slowly made his way back into the living room, where he saw Arthur and Molly standing near the front table with the picture of him and Hermione, Fred and George flanking the doorway into the dining room, the Grangers sitting on the couch with Hermione, Ron leaning against the arm of the couch beside her, McGonagall in one armchair, Dumbledore in the other, Harry leaning against the wall near the corner, and Ginny glaring at him nearby.
With so many people in the room, he suddenly felt claustrophobic and stopped on the threshold. Hermione looked up and recognized his panic. Immediately standing and crossing to him, she said, "Severus, I was just saying that anyone who hasn't already been here was welcome to take the two-Knut tour. Why don't you show them what you've done with the place and I'll scare up some refreshments."
McGonagall rose and said, "I'll help you with the food, Hermione. I know well enough where things are."
The Grangers stood too, and Dione said, "We can help."
Dumbledore pushed to his feet and said, "I'd love to see your improvements, Severus, especially that lab Minerva raved about."
Fred and George jerked to attention. Exchanging a look, Fred said, "Lab?" and George said, "Can we see it?"
Snape felt Hermione's reassuring grip on his hand and took a deep breath. These people are on your side. Be gracious and grateful. Looking about the room, he said, "Follow me."
He backed into the entrance hall, and Hermione stepped through the doorway into the dining room, McGonagall and the Grangers in tow. Dumbledore, Fred, and George stepped out to join him for the tour, leaving Molly, Arthur, Ron, Ginny, and Harry in the living room.
"Well, this is the front door. You've seen the living room. Through there is the dining room and then the kitchen. We'll see them on the way back down to see the lab." He led the way up the stairs.
In the kitchen, Hermione and her mother were rummaging through the refrigerator and pantry, and McGonagall was taking dishes out of the cabinets. Geoff stood out of their way until they had something to give him to do.
In the living room, Molly was staring at the photo, clearly conflicted. Wringing her hands, she turned to the others and said, "I couldn't believe it when I heard. It seemed so preposterous! And I couldn't imagine Severus allowing such a thing to happen..."
Ron and Ginny turned entreating faces on their mother, and Ron said, "But, Mum, you heard him. And you've seen them. What's so hard to understand?"
Ginny added, "Isn't love a good thing, like Neville said?"
Arthur put a comforting arm around her shoulders and said, "Molly-love, who are we to judge? We eloped, ourselves! I'd say it's obvious enough that no one is taking advantage of anyone else here. Hermione may be young, but with the war, these kids have grown up beyond their years. She's safe, she's happy... Her parents accepted it. Who are we to criticize?"
Against the wall, Harry squirmed uncomfortably, unnoticed by the Weasleys. He peered past Molly at the photo, digesting the fact that Hermione was practically radiant beside Snape.
Molly made an impatient gesture and sighed. "I hear what you're saying, Arthur. It's just... difficult."
At that, Ron snorted with rueful laughter, rubbing the back of his neck. "No kidding, Mum. But just look at it this way: isn't it better to be surprised by something like this than by Dark Lords?"
Ginny sniggered and flashed a grin at her brother. Then she sobered and crossed to her mother. "I know you love Hermione like she was one of us, Mum. We do too. And Professor Snape loves her just as much. She doesn't need your protection anymore. She's got him."
Molly washed her hands together again, and Ginny hugged her. Resting her cheek against Ginny's hair, Molly sighed again and said, "I'll try."
Ginny bounced up and kissed her mother on the cheek. "That's good enough, Mum. You're the best."
Molly patted Ginny's back and turned to Arthur. "I just feel so out of place here. Can't we go now?"
Arthur nodded and said, "I'll tell Hermione we're leaving. I should get back to work anyway. Not that anyone will be able to concentrate on doing anything, what with the trial to gossip about..."
He crossed into the dining room, and Ron stepped up to hug his mother as well. "Gin's right; you're top notch."
Molly looked at her children and said, "Will you be coming with us?"
Ginny shook her head. "Not yet. I want to have a chance to catch up with Hermione first."
"Same here." Ron looked up as his father returned. "Say, Dad, is the food ready yet?"
Ginny rolled her eyes and smacked Ron in exasperation. "Honestly, Ron, can't you think about anything other than food?"
Ron cringed and backed away, his hands up. "Oi! I was nervous for Hermione earlier and couldn't eat much breakfast. Now that the trial's over, and Snape's not going to Azkaban or anything, I'm hungry!"
Arthur chuckled and shook his head, tucking Molly's hand in the crook of his arm. "I'm sure they'll have something soon. I'll see you all at dinner tonight." Looking at his wife, he said, "I'm going straight back to the Ministry, love."
They crossed to the Floo and Arthur disappeared first, leaving Molly to follow a moment later on her way to the Burrow.
Ginny glanced at Ron again and said, "I'm gonna' see if they need any help in the kitchen." As she crossed to the dining room, she saw the Grangers entering from the other side, laden with trays of sandwiches to place on the table. Pausing, she turned and said, "Food's ready, Ron."
With that, she and Ron went into the dining room, leaving Harry alone in the living room. He pushed away from the wall and peeked around the doorjamb to see the others gathered around the table, plates in hand, eating and chatting. Glancing out of the doorway into the hall, he crossed to the front table and stood gazing down at the picture of Snape and Hermione.
He was standing there, fists shoved in his pockets, when he heard footsteps coming down the stairs. Whirling guiltily, he saw Snape pass through the hall with the twins and Dumbledore behind him. Snape's voice carried through into the living room.
"Ah, I see that we have some refreshments in the dining room. I'd like to show you the rest of the house before we eat."
Fred said, "Please do. I want to see this lab."
Snape led them past the dining room to the entrance into the kitchen, then around and down the stairs into the basement. When they had all reached the bottom, George let out a low whistle.
"Wow. This is really something!" George exchanged an impressed look with his twin, who nodded.
Snape crossed to check on the status of the long-term contraceptive potion he was making, then went to the long marble counter where several different ingredients were in neat piles of varied preparations. "This is where I've been preparing the larger amounts of ingredients for making batches of potions for Fern."
Fred and George frowned in confusion at each other just as Dumbledore said, "Fern? Isn't that the woman with whom you are working to start a new company?"
Snape demurred, saying, "Well, I'm working for her, but yes, she's the owner and manager of Vial and Vessel. I'm the producer behind the scenes."
George stepped forward, one hand stroking his chin, and said, "Vial and Vessel, eh? What sorts of potions will you be making?"
"Well, Fern wants to make the standard health and beauty products," and his lip curled in derision, "but she wants to make them as 'all-natural and environmentally friendly' as possible. Frankly, I'm more interested in showing that our products will be of the utmost consistent quality..."
Fred interjected, "Naturally."
Snape squinted at the twins, who bore identical speculative expressions, and warily said, "Why do you ask?"
George grinned and clapped his hands together, saying, "I'm glad you asked. You see, my lesser half..."
Fred barked, "Oi!"
"...and I realized that if we were to create products that incited headaches and rashes and things like that, it would be a good idea to also sell products that could treat the results of our prank items!"
Dumbledore chuckled behind them, and Fred stepped up beside his brother, elbowing him in the ribs as he said, "We were looking into distributors, but hadn't really got that far, when Ginny told us you were going into business now that you'd left Hogwarts."
George continued, "So, we thought we'd see whether or not the company you were with might be interested in stocking product with Weasleys' Wizarding Wheezes."
Fred added, "And not just the normal, everyday stuff that you could sell elsewhere as well, but developing things specifically for post-Wheeze 'issues.'"
Snape was momentarily bereft of speech. Never in his wildest imaginings would he have thought that he'd be legitimately propositioned for business by the Weasley twins. Blinking, he faltered, "I-I'd have to talk to Fern, but... But I think the idea has merit."
Fred and George exchanged smug grins, and George said, "Of course. You know where to reach us, right?"
Fred leant forward and said, sotto voice, "Weasleys' Wizarding Wheezes, 93 Diagon Alley."
Dumbledore sniggered again, and Snape managed a faint smile. Inclining his head, he said, "I'll contact you once I've talked to Fern. I know she's just starting the campaign to get shops to stock us. I'm sure she'll be interested."
As one, Fred and George said, "Excellent," and thrust their right hands out. Snape shook one after the other, then gestured toward the stairs.
"Shall we head back up for some lunch?"
All four men climbed the stairs and joined the others in the dining room. McGonagall had already had a sandwich and some tea, and was just waiting for Dumbledore to return before she left. When they entered from the kitchen, she ducked past them, plucking at Dumbledore's sleeve to get his attention. He spun and stepped back into the kitchen with her.
"I'm sure Severus and Hermione will have plenty to talk about, and no doubt it's wearing to have company right now. Why don't we let them be and go back to Hogwarts? If we leave, perhaps it will spur the others to go too, and give them their privacy back."
Dumbledore looked wistfully at the sandwiches, but nodded. "Good point. Let's say our goodbyes."
They edged into the full dining room again and Dumbledore said, "Thank you for the lovely tour, Severus. Minerva and I have some things to attend to at Hogwarts. We'll leave you to the rest of your day."
Snape rose from the chair he had dropped into and said, "Thank you, Albus, for defending me once again."
Dumbledore smiled and waved his hand airily. "It was the least I could do, dear boy." Snape shot him an aggrieved glance for the endearment, but Dumbledore just chuckled. "Hermione, my dear, good luck with your department. And both of you, keep in touch."
Hermione smiled. "Of course, sir." She gripped his hand as he passed her on the way to the living room.
McGonagall paused by Snape and said, "I expect to be invited to the wedding, you know."
Snape chuckled and submitted to her hug. "Thank you, Minerva."
Smirking at him as she hugged Hermione too, she said, "Anytime, Severus. Just... try not to need it again, all right?"
Everyone laughed as she waved, following Dumbledore to the Floo, where they disappeared back to Hogwarts.
Fred and George were leaning against the wall, mirroring each other with a sandwich in one hand as they discussed which products they wanted Vial and Vessel to develop first.
Dione poured Snape some tea, quietly patting his shoulder in comfort as she passed it to him. He looked up, and she offered a faint smile of encouragement. To one side, Geoff and Hermione were discussing where she wanted to go first on their shopping trip, and what features would best suit her needs.
Laying their plates on the table, the twins looked at Snape and Hermione, and Fred said, "Thanks for the nosh, Hermione."
George said, "And thanks for the tour. That's quite an outfit you've got down there."
Smiling, Hermione said, "Thank you for coming today." She reached over and clasped Snape's hand. "We appreciate it."
Snape nodded, then said, "I'll owl you when I know more."
Clapping his hands again, George said, "Jolly good! Come on, Fred, we'd better make sure Verity hasn't let the place burn down in our absence."
Affecting mock-weariness, Fred laid his hand across his forehead and said, "It's so hard to find good help these days."
With parting grins, he and George Disapparated from the spot, leaving the others to laugh at their dramatic departure.
Harry sidled past the group and into the hallway, looking up and down the corridor. He saw the door under the stairs and crossed to it, guiltily remembering the unhappy child-Snape he had seen in Snape's memories during those abortive Occlumency lessons and wondering if the door could lead to something similar to the cupboard under the stairs he had grown up in at the Dursleys'. Hand on the knob, he paused, uncomfortable with the clenching of his gut at the thought that perhaps he and Snape had more in common than he had previously thought. Taking a deep breath, he opened the door...and exhaled in relief to see that it was not a dusty prison, but a simple toilet and sink.
Back in the dining room, on the tails of the laughter at the twins exit, Dione said, "Hermione, dear, shouldn't you and your dad get going if you want to hit all those places to comparison shop first?"
Snape's head snapped up from his absent staring at the table and he looked at Hermione with alarm. Composing himself, he cleared his throat and said, "Your mother is right, however, could I have a word with you before you go?"
Hermione nodded and stood at the same time Snape did, wondering what he was so upset about, and said, "Of course." Nodding at the rest of the group, she said, "Excuse us," and followed Snape into the hallway.
Harry heard movement and turned to see Snape backing into the hallway from the dining room. Flustered, Harry ducked into the W.C. and shut the door quietly behind him. Leaning against the door, heart pounding, he chastised himself for panicking. What is wrong with you? It's a toilet, for gods' sakes!
Snape and Hermione stopped in the hallway and glanced back at the others, then Snape drew Hermione further down the hall toward the kitchen entrance. He didn't want the others to hear their conversation.
Hermione peered up at his anxious expression and murmured, "Severus, what's wrong? I can see something's upset you."
Snape's eyes closed as he scowled. Looking down in shame, he said, "Are computers... terribly expensive?"
Hermione jerked back, blinking in surprise. Bewildered, she said, "Well, they're certainly not cheap, but they're not exorbitant. Why?"
Grinding his teeth, eyes closed again, Snape said, "I'm so sorry..."
Mystified, and growing more alarmed at Snape's manner, Hermione gripped his arm and said, "Sorry for what? Severus, you're scaring me. What's wrong?"
Exhaling harshly through his nose, Snape said, "I promised to take care of you, to provide for you, and now I can't, and I..." He stopped suddenly, unable to continue.
Searching his face, Hermione said, "What on earth are you talking about?"
His voice sounding like it was being ripped from his throat, Snape said, "The fine! I don't have enough. I spent so much already, on the house, and... other things." His eyes inexorably flicked to the ring. "And now you need this computer, and I can't afford it. I don't have enough to pay the bloody fine, and I don't know how or where to get it, and if I don't, then they'll probably cart me off to Azkaban, and I won't be able to pay the bills on the house, and I could lose it, and I wouldn't be able to take care of you, and I could lose you too!"
His voice rose in anguish and he raked his fingers through his hair, gripping it and grimacing at the sting on his scalp as well as the pain in his heart.
Hermione gaped at him in horrified understanding. Throwing herself against him and wrapping her arms around his ribs, he hugged him fiercely and said, "Don't! It's all right. It'll all work out. We'll be fine, dearest. Just stop punishing yourself!" Backing away enough to reach up and untangle his hands from his hair and meet his tortured eyes, she said, "As far as this computer thing goes, don't even worry about it. My father already told me that he and Mum decided they would buy it for me as a congratulations for finishing school with top marks and getting such a great job. I wasn't expecting you to pay for it anyway, love! I have my own money...some, anyway, and we'll figure out how to get the rest for the fine... together. You're stuck with me, Severus, no matter what. I love you."
The knot of guilt and shame in Snape's gut loosened a little and he tried to take heart from her declaration that things would work out. Aware once again of how much he loved the woman before him, he crushed her to him in a fervent embrace, kissing her hair and murmuring, his voice shaky, "I love you. I'm so sorry to put you through this..."
They were silent for a moment, taking comfort in each other's arms.
In the W.C., Harry was plastered against the door, barely breathing as he listened with all his might to the hushed conversation happening on the other side. Unexpected sympathy tightened his throat, and his cheeks warmed with embarrassment that he was eavesdropping on such a private moment even though he made no move to stop.
Finally, Snape backed away and said, "Your father is waiting. Go; do what you need to do. I'll... think of something."
Hermione stretched up and kissed him. "Don't fret, love. We'll figure it out."
Hand in hand, they returned to the dining room. Harry listened to the footsteps and exhaled, wondering if he could make it back without anyone noticing. Carefully opening the door, he peeked down the hallway. He could hear the voices in the dining room and tiptoed to the doorway, where he then crossed to the far wall of the corridor and crept past it, hurrying to the entrance to the living room. Ducking in, he stepped over to the doorway into the dining room and leant against the doorjamb, hopefully looking as if he had been there the whole time.
Fortunately for him, when Snape and Hermione had left the room, Ron and Ginny had asked questions about computers, and Dione and Geoff were trying to explain them. Plus, as he had been acting quite the sullen brat, no one had been paying much attention to him all day.
Exchanging an amused look with Ginny, Ron said, "Too bad Dad couldn't be here. He'd love hearing about all this stuff!"
Ginny giggled and said, "There'll be other times, I'm sure."
The Grangers crossed toward the doorway to the living room, and Harry backed out of it, watching them as they headed to the Floo. Ron and Ginny followed, with Snape behind them.
"Come on, Mum. Dad and I are going to Floo to the house with you, and then we're going to drive out and about."
Ginny sighed and said, "We'd better get going too. I was hoping to get a chance to hang out and catch up, but you've got more important things to do."
Hermione darted over and hugged her friend, smiling. "We'll get together soon; I promise." Then, hugging Ron too, she added, "Thanks again for coming out."
Snape spoke up. "Indeed. It was an unexpected pleasure. I appreciate your help."
Ron beamed and waved his hand. "It was nothing, really. Just helping out a friend."
At that, Ginny frowned and said, "I would have testified, too!" She turned to Snape with a petulant yet accusing look and said, "You just never called on me."
Snape couldn't help but chuckle. Shaking his head, he said, "I doubt the court could have handled your testimony, Ginny."
Preening at the unanticipated compliment, she smirked and said, "Hmm, you may have a point," then laughed.
Hermione crossed to Snape and said, "I'll be back tonight." Bouncing up to kiss him, she added, "Don't you have a potion to finish while I'm gone?"
The gleam in her eyes made Snape smile even in the midst of his worry. "I do. Have a good trip."
Flashing a dazzling smile at him, she said, "Love you!" as she rejoined her parents at the hearth.
"Bye, Severus. See you soon." Dione and Geoff waved as they Flooed away, Hermione a step behind them.
When they were gone, Ron and Ginny headed toward the fireplace as well, then looked for Harry. Beckoning for him to follow, Ginny said, "Harry, come on."
Still grappling with the conflicting thoughts and feelings stirred up by his unintentional discoveries, Harry, his hands shoved in his pockets, skulked over to the hearth, flicking a glance at Snape.
"Thanks for lunch." Ron nodded again to Snape as he stepped into the Floo. Snape lifted his hand in farewell. Harry followed without saying a word.
Just before she stepped into the flames, Ginny grinned at Snape and said, "I'm so glad they didn't send you to Azkaban."
Snape's brows rose in agreement and he nodded as the girl spun out of sight. When they were all gone, he heaved a deep sigh and turned to clear up the remains of the sandwiches before heading down to the lab.
Back in the Burrow's crowded kitchen, Harry was waiting for Ginny to show up. Ron had already gone into the living room, and Mrs. Weasley was in the garden. Ginny spun out of the fireplace and stopped short at the sober look on Harry's face.
One hand in his pocket and the other running through his hair, he said, "Uh, can I talk to you for a second?"
Crossing her arms and glaring at him, she retorted, "Are you finished being a colossal prat?"
Harry winced and rubbed the back of his neck, his cheeks flushing. "I deserved that."
Instantly, Ginny dropped her aggressive pose and crossed to him, one hand cupping his elbow. "True, but you're better now, right?"
Harry half-shrugged and looked at her, his expression sheepish. "I'm sorry I upset you. Your mum had it right: it's just difficult." He paused, heaving a deep sigh and moving to lean against the table. Taking off his glasses and scrubbing his face, he said, "It's a good thing for Hermione that they didn't sentence Snape to Azkaban."
Ginny stepped over and leant against the table beside him, her shoulder against his. "No kidding." Turning her head to gaze at his profile, she said, "So, are you gonna' apologize to Hermione as well?"
Harry snorted faintly. "Yeah, I better... I guess I'll owl her and ask when she's free. Obviously she wouldn't be there today."
Patting his thigh in encouragement, Ginny said, "I'm sure she'll be happy to hear from you." There was a long moment of silence, then she said, "So, want to get Ron and play some Quidditch?"
Harry frowned in thought and flicked a glance at her. "Actually... I've got some things I need to look into. I'll be back before dinner, all right?"
Ginny's brows rose in query, but he just pushed away from the table and half-smiled in reassurance as she said, "Where are you going?"
"I... don't know that I can say. It's nothing bad; I promise. Just... tell everyone I'll be back for dinner...and that I'm sorry for being such a git. Okay?"
Squinting at him in confusion, Ginny murmured, "All right. See you later."
Harry grinned, ducked closer to her, and kissed her lightly before stepping back and Disapparating.
Baffled, Ginny muttered, "Harry James Potter, what on earth are you up to?" as she went to find Ron.
Unbeknownst to the Weasleys, Harry popped into Ron's room, where he was staying, and rummaged through his trunk. He pulled out his robes and Invisibility Cloak, smiling. Shrugging into the robes, he stuffed the cloak into his pocket and Disapparated again.
*** ***
Snape was in his lab, scraping willow bark, when he thought he heard something from above. Pausing and lifting his head toward the basement door, he listened. There! Was that knocking? Several faint thumps had happened, and he remained still. Perhaps it was just something outside. After a few beats, they happened again, so Snape put down the willow bark and climbed the stairs.
At the top of the stairs, he paused again, listening. When the knocking resumed, it was louder, and he could tell that it was coming from the front door. Frowning in irritation, he strode through the house and flung open the front door to see...
Nothing.
No one was on his doorstep, nor was anyone even near his house. Eyes narrowing in suspicion, he looked up and down the street and even lifted his gaze above him. No sign of anyone or anything that could have been knocking on his door. Huffing, he backed up, about to slam the door shut when he heard a soft whisper saying, "Professor?"
Snape went still, except for his hand creeping toward his wand in his pocket. Again, he heard, "Professor, it's me, Harry." With that, suddenly a pair of spectacled green eyes appeared in front of him.
Snape's eyes went wide, and he jerked back, hissing, "Potter! Get in here before someone sees you!"
Harry's eyes disappeared, but Snape heard his footsteps coming into the house, and he slammed the door shut, whirling to see Harry emerging from his Invisibility Cloak.
"What the bloody blazes are you doing, boy?" Snape glared at Harry, growling, "Why are you even here? Hermione's with her father; but you should already know that!"
Harry wadded up the Cloak and looked away, muttering, "I'm not here to see Hermione. I wanted to talk to you."
Snape threw his hands in the air in defeat and spun, charging into the living room as he said, "I give up! I thought this day couldn't get any worse..." Harry followed to see Snape dropping dramatically into an armchair and gesturing to him. "Well, go on then, Potter. You did nothing but sulk the whole time you were here earlier...didn't say word one! What, were you afraid to say how you really feel in front of everyone else? It's obvious, or you wouldn't have been acting like such a spoilt brat."
Harry scowled back at Snape, stung by the truth of the older man's words. Hands balled into fists at his sides, he glared and barked, "Just shut up, all right? You don't know everything!"
Sneering, Snape retorted, "Don't I? Fine, then, Potter. Enlighten me."
Sinking heavily onto the edge of the other armchair's seat, Harry ran his hands through his hair and focused on the floor. "Look, I thought we were good...after the performance. You were nicer; things were better. But then you... and Hermione..."
He trailed off, clearly struggling, and Snape growled, "Hermione and I what, Potter? She loves me, and you can't stand it. Look at you, you can't even say it!"
Harry whipped his angry gaze to meet Snape's and yelled, "Stop antagonizing me! I'm not here to fight!"
Leaning forward in his chair, Snape retorted, "Then what areyou here for?"
Harry shot to his feet, looking ready to launch himself at Snape as he shouted, "I'm here to try and help you, you stonking great git!"
Rearing back and flinging his hands out, Snape cried, "Oh! Here's the childish name-calling..." Then he stopped, pinning Harry with a suspicious glare as the rest of his statement sank in. "What did you say?"
Fuming, Harry bit out, "I said I'm here to try to help you. For Hermione."
Eyes narrowed, Snape said, "And just how do you propose to do that?"
To Snape's surprise, Harry averted his eyes, cheeks flushing even more, his expression one of guilt and shame. Walking away until he was behind the couch...almost as if he needed it for cover...he crossed his arms defensively and mumbled, "I heard you and Hermione earlier."
Snape, more disturbed by the boy's demeanour than his words, said, "When? What are you talking about?"
Taking a deep breath, Harry said, "I was in the loo when you and Hermione were in the hallway. I heard what you said."
Snape's eyes widened so much that a ring of white was visible around the black centres. His hands gripped the arms of the chair until the yellow of his knuckles was visible beneath the taut skin. Humiliated and incensed that the boy had eavesdropped on his private shame, Snape's whisper was deadly as he said, "Get out."
Harry flicked a frightened glance at Snape and lifted his hands in a calming gesture. "Just listen..."
"Get. Out."
"But..."
"Now!" Snape pushed to his feet, grabbing his wand as he stood.
Harry immediately snatched his wand from his pocket and held his ground, breathing hard as he faced Snape's rage. Desperate to stave off a duel, he blurted, "I can loan you the money!"
Snape's lip curled, baring his teeth as he advanced. Harry cast a Shield Charm, just in case.
"Do you want to take the chance of losing this house, of hurting Hermione?"
Snape stopped, glaring daggers at Harry, his hands clenched into fists.
"I can loan you the money. Honest. No catch. I've already been to Gringotts. I've got enough; you need it. I know you'd pay it back, so what's the problem? Don't you think Hermione's gone through enough? Why can't you just accept my offer and get over it?"
Harry's words filtered through the red haze of Snape's ire and he growled, "Why?"
Swallowing hard, trying to still the racing of his pulse, Harry said, "Look, it's not easy to get over years of hate, okay? But I love Hermione, and if she loves you, then we have to be able to get along, 'cause neither of us is going anywhere."
Snape, unblinking, merely waited for Harry to continue.
"Everyone said it at the trial: you've saved my life time and again. I owe you."
Snape remembered their truce after the performance. Finally starting to let go of his anger, he rumbled, "I told you: we're even."
Harry shook his head. "Nice sentiment, but not true. You've done far more for me than I ever could do for you. Now it's my turn to return the favour." He watched Snape relaxing from his battle-ready tension and ended the Shield Charm. "We can go to Gringotts and have the goblins draw up a proper loan...it's not charity."
Snape cut a dark glance at the boy and went back to his chair, sinking wearily into it and cradling his head in his hands, his elbows propped on his knees. His voice was low as he said, "Who put you up to this? Ginny?"
Offended, Harry, said, "No! I didn't tell anyone what I heard. No one knows I'm here." He paused and gave a weak chuckle. "So, uh, please don't kill me and use me for potions ingredients, 'kay?"
Snape snorted and drawled, "I'm making potions, not poisons, Potter."
Grimacing, Harry said, "Oh, ha ha." He edged around the couch and sat. "I told her I'd be back for dinner, but not where I was going. It-It's none of her business unless you want to tell her."
Snape jerked his head in acknowledgement. Faintly, he said, "You don't even know how much I need."
Harry took a deep, cleansing breath and said, "It doesn't matter. My inheritance has been drawing interest for years. Whatever you need, we can work out a loan. Tell me how much you need, how much you can pay each month, and we'll settle on a decent interest rate and figure out how long it'll take to pay back...which doesn't matter. It can take as long as it needs to take." He eyed Snape's still-hanging head and said brightly, "So, do we have a deal? We can make an appointment at Gringotts tomorrow and get the damned Ministry paid off before that jackass Conroy can give you any more grief."
Snape was staring unseeingly at the floor. His gut writhed with mortification and resentment and relief. He didn't want to be indebted to a Potter...again...but the boy...young man...was offering up a perfect solution on a silver platter, no strings attached. He'd never be able to find a better loan from anywhere else, and he was adamant that he wouldn't broach Hermione's money for his punishment.
Harry could tell that Snape was struggling with his offer. His newly-awakened sympathy kicked in again and he tried to lighten the mood. "Just say yes and let's move on. I swear I won't hold it over your head or anything." Snape lifted his head to cut an acid glance at Harry. Taking that as an encouraging sign, Harry continued, "I mean, I'm not afraid of you or anything; I'm afraid of Hermione."
Snape cocked one eyebrow at Harry's owl-eyed, earnest statement and snorted. "As well you should be."
Harry flashed a lopsided grin and Snape sat back in his chair, looking absolutely wrung out. Rising, he crossed to Snape and said, "So, meet you at Gringotts tomorrow morning?" extending his hand.
Snape eyed the proffered hand for a long moment, but Harry didn't back down. Looking up with a resigned expression, he gripped Harry's hand and shook it once before releasing it and letting his own hand drop back into his lap.
Harry beamed with relief that his idea had worked, and he hadn't ended up hexed to bits. "Brilliant! How's ten sound to you?"
Snape shrugged. "Fine."
Rubbing the back of his neck, Harry exhaled heavily and said, "All right then. I'll see you tomorrow at ten." He sought Snape's eyes and held his gaze. His voice was soft as he said, "You won't regret it."
Snape snorted again and rolled his eyes. "We'll see about that." Shoving to his feet, he said, "I have work to do..."
Smirking, Harry said, "You don't need to show me out. I'll just get out of your way, then."
Harry loped up to the fireplace and tossed in a pinch of Floo powder. Before he could step into the flames, Snape's quiet voice said, "Thank you... Harry."
Harry spun, a pleased smile on his face, and said, "No worries, Professor," as he stepped backward into the Floo and whirled out of sight.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)