13- Detention with the Phantom
Chapter 14 of 84
Good_WitchHermione faces a long weekend after her fight with Harry, followed by her detention with Snape. Just how bad can a detention with Snape be, anyway? Or how good, for that matter?
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Chapter 13- Detention with the Phantom
Saturday morning, Hermione ventured into the common room to find Ron and Ginny playing Wizard's Chess. Harry was nowhere to be seen. The swift, knowing look that passed between the siblings was enough to warn Hermione that Harry was being difficult. They both gave her overly bright smiles as they stood, moving to flank her.
"Morning, 'Mione! Ready for breakfast? I could eat a hippogriff, I'm so starved!" Ron gently gripped her elbow and pushed her toward the portrait hole. Ginny rolled her eyes at Ron's exaggeration.
"Yeah, well, make sure you don't let Buckbeak hear you say that... So, Hermione, did you like your costumes last night?" Ginny was clearly determined to steer Hermione's thoughts to topics other than Harry's whereabouts.
Hermione sighed, both in annoyance over Harry's childish behaviour, and with affection for her friends' attempts to soften the blow. She stopped and resisted the persistent tug of the two herding her toward the portrait hole. "Listen you two. I'm not glass. I won't break." She smiled patiently at the redheads, noting their identical expressions of anxiety. "Let me guess: Harry's sulking in bed and refuses to see me, even though he was the one who wanted to talk so badly."
Ron's shoulders sagged and she knew she was right. Looking calculatingly at Ron, she added, "And you're supposed to smuggle up breakfast for him, right?" She swallowed a laugh at Ron's hasty gulp and shook her head as he sheepishly raised a hand to rub the back of his neck, eyes darting all around.
Ginny planted her hands on her hips indignantly, and glared at Ron. "Ronald Weasley! You are not going to steal food for that great prat, are you?" she said, warningly.
Hermione snorted at the clear sides being taken and held up her hands, one in front of each of them. Ron's ears were pink and Ginny's brown eyes were snapping. "Stop it. Both of you. It's bad enough Harry's acting like a child, I don't need you two to start bickering. Ron, I know how he is. I've known him as long as you have. Ginny, I don't care if Ron sneaks him breakfast. At least I won't have to try to eat with him glaring at me the whole time. When he calms down, I'll be more than happy to talk to him. Besides, you should really hear my side too." She cast a sidelong glance at Ron as she said the last bit, knowing that Harry had undoubtedly spilled his guts to Ron about everything. Ron jumped, and Hermione knew the shot hit home. Dropping her hands to her sides, she huffed and said, "Come on, let's go eat."
She stepped toward the portrait hole and Ron and Ginny fell into step behind her. Ginny grimaced at Ron and favoured him with a smart thump on the back of his head. Ron gaped in protest, but refrained from making any noise as he didn't want Hermione to yell at him. Instead, he rubbed his head and glowered at Ginny, pointing at her, and then shaking a fist in her direction. She rolled her eyes haughtily and flicked her fingers at him in a clear gesture that meant, "Talk to the hand."
Hermione knew that some exchange was occurring between the two siblings, but didn't care to address it. She brooded over Harry's reaction all the way to the Great Hall.
The three of them were fairly back to normal, eating and chatting about their costumes. Hermione was surprised to hear that one of the coming rehearsals would be a transfiguration lesson for each actor, teaching them how to do their own spells for costume changes. Ginny looked at her, confused.
"You mean, Dumbledore didn't tell you that? He told all of us after he went through everyone's costumes."
Hermione shrugged and opined, "Well, I was late, and then as soon as he finished with me, he started immediately on Professor Snape, since we were behind schedule at that point. I guess it just slipped his mind."
Ginny squinted at Hermione, even more confused. "How were you late? You sat by the door the whole evening!"
Hermione's lips thinned in remembered annoyance and her eyes darkened. Ron and Ginny exchanged surprised glances and Ron murmured, "So, uh, I guess maybe you should tell us your side..."
Hermione looked up at them eyeing her intently. She sniffed primly and began, "I was here the whole evening, and when Harry was done, he came over to tell me Dumbledore was ready for me. He was pretty rude about it, but I told him he looked good in his costume anyway, 'cause he did..." Her eyes flashed and her jaw clenched. "Then, he just... grabbed me and dragged me outside the doorway! He said he missed me and kissed me again. I was so angry! I couldn't believe him. I pushed him off me and went off on him again." She sighed, weary of the drama. "So, by the time I went back in to Dumbledore, Harry had made me late. He was disappointed and said he thought I would have taken the responsibility seriously." Ginny and Ron gasped in indignant defence of Hermione. "I thought I was going to be in more trouble, but..." She trailed off, suddenly unwilling to finish that statement, and reveal that Snape had lied on her behalf.
"But what?" prodded Ginny.
Hermione shook herself and retorted hastily, "Nothing. He didn't say anything else. I apologized. I just couldn't believe that Harry would make me late for Dumbledore just to persist when he already knew I would talk to him today! I mean, what if Dumbledore had seen him kissing me in the corridor right then? Or what if Professor Snape had caught us again?!" She trailed off again, noticing the looks of horror and consternation on their faces, but it was a faint niggling idea that distracted her.
What if Snape had caught us again? He was right behind me when I went into the Hall. Could he have seen us? But, if he did, why didn't he punish us again? ... But, he didn't look angry when I looked at him. He seemed... amused? About what? She felt like cold water had oozed through her gut as she pondered. Could he have seen me yelling at Harry? That might explain the amusement. But... why did he lie to Dumbledore? I can't figure that out!
She shook herself from her musings and quirked her eyebrows knowingly at the others, who were still reacting to the idea of how awful it would have been if either the headmaster or Snape had caught them again. They were silent for a few moments, and then Hermione saw Ron try to surreptitiously wrap some toast in a handkerchief and stuff it in his pocket. Snorting at his lack of stealth, she pulled out her wand and shrank the parcel into a square inch. Ron yelped at the feeling of the bundle shrinking in his pocket and glanced wildly about.
Hermione smirked at him and he looked abashed. "Honestly, Ron, you're a wizard, use your head!" She chuckled at his embarrassed expression and said, "Go on, fix him a proper plate. I'll shrink it for you if you want. He may be acting like a prat, but going hungry won't make it any better."
Ginny looked at Ron in disdain, but refrained from comment since Hermione was being magnanimous. Ron hastily piled a plate with eggs, sausages, bacon, potatoes, and toast. He hesitated only a moment before he reached for a pitcher of pumpkin juice. Glancing imploringly at Hermione, he inclined his head at the pitcher. She rolled her eyes and nodded, casting a charm to seal the pitcher and keep the juice from spilling. Once Ron had everything piled in one spot, she shrank the lot of it and watched Ron furtively shove it into his pockets.
"Thanks, 'Mione. You're the best. I think I remember the counterspells. If I don't, Harry should." He stood, brushing crumbs from his lap. Leaning across the table, perilously close to knocking over a bowl of porridge, he covered Hermione's hand with his and whispered, "I'm glad you told me your side. I'm sorry he's acting like this, but..." His face suddenly creased into a lopsided grin and he winked. "Hey, it's not his fault that you're a girl to fall hard for." He squeezed her hand as Ginny giggled and he waved jauntily as he left.
Hermione sat, slightly dazed by the brazen compliment. She glared at Ginny from the corner of her eye before succumbing to the giggle that was bubbling up. It felt good to laugh. She and Ginny giggled in waves. As soon as one would start to subside, the other one would grin and wink, and it would set them off again. Hermione ignored the curious looks from other students, some smiling at the infectious laughter.
But, she couldn't ignore the sudden tingle she felt on her neck and turned to see Snape watching her. The laughter died on her lips. Ginny saw her wide-eyed gaze and followed it to its destination, her mirth guttering out like a candle flame. She cleared her throat and looked at her food.
Hermione gazed at Snape, reminded of her curious thoughts earlier. Her amused expression turned thoughtful, and she couldn't look away from the endless inky depths of her Potion Master's eyes. She watched him holding her gaze, felt the raw power exuding from him, and felt the roiling in her stomach again in reaction. Her pulse sped up and a flush crept up her neck to her cheeks.
His eyes narrowed, and she felt an odd whoosh, like a breeze in her mind. Startled, she blinked and looked away. The stirring disappeared. Once again faced with her physical reaction to Snape, she tried to quiet her pounding heart, to slow her hastened breathing. Beside her, Ginny watched her, concerned. She nudged her friend to get her attention.
"Hey, 'Mione, what say we get out of here. You look like Snape still has you pretty rattled."
Hermione heard the warning bells go off in her head. "Uh, yeah. It was pretty awful. Sure, let's go." She stood, pointedly avoiding looking back at Snape. Mustn't give Ginny anything to figure out!
The two girls departed quickly, heading back to the common room to begin their homework.
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Snape walked into the Great Hall through the staff door and saw Hermione laughing with Ginny Weasley. Her other cohorts were absent. Trying to stifle the surge of hope he felt that their absence meant what he thought it meant, he took his seat and served himself, unceasingly gazing at the girls. Potter must still be angry. Good. Arrogant boy needs to learn that he won't always get what he wants.
A bare moment after he entered and sat, Hermione turned to look at him. More calmly than he felt, he held her gaze, unblinking. Ginny turned and saw Snape staring at Hermione and looked away quickly. Snape was intrigued by the curious, thoughtful look in Hermione's eyes. When he saw her blushing, he couldn't stand it any longer and, eyes narrowed in concentration, he stabbed into her mind, using Legilimency.
He was surprised at how easy it was to gain access to her mind, then realized it was easier because her mind was focused on him. He saw her view of him when she had whirled on him the night before, when he had surprised her by excusing her to Dumbledore. He read her shocked and confused thoughts. He was about to delve into her other images of him from the night before, which were all hovering about, but she blinked and looked away, effectively cutting him off.
His eyes widened again as he came back to himself. Struggling between shame that he had invaded her head again and frustration that he hadn't been able to see more, he kept his gaze locked on her, hoping she would look at him again, so he could have another chance. He was both disappointed and relieved when she stood and left with the younger girl.
Dumbledore would have my head if he had any idea I did that. He inclined his head, letting his hair fall forward to shield his face as he ate. His thoughts were on Hermione as he mechanically ate his breakfast, wondering why so many images of him were swimming in her head. Absently, he pushed away from the table and retreated to his dungeons.
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Hermione went about her business the rest of the weekend, acting as if everything was normal, even though Harry was still behaving like a spoilt child and ignoring her. At least he had given up boycotting meals and sat in the Great Hall with the rest of them after that first breakfast. That he purposely took a seat several spaces away from her, putting Ron and Ginny between them, didn't surprise Hermione. She simply put on a civil face and ignored the situation. Frankly, she was exasperated with his attitude. In her opinion, the drama should stay on the stage... which was where she was certain to face more, all things considered!
Hermione made a conscious effort to not look at Snape during meals. She knew that she would get drawn into those ebony tunnels and she was afraid that someone would figure out how she felt. And with her relationship with Harry already strained, and affecting her relationship with Ron too, she didn't dare give anyone a chance to discover something else objectionable about her! But, her decision had no effect on the buzzing she felt whenever Snape was present. She knew when he entered the Hall because she could feel it. It was like she was a Muggle radio tuned to his frequency, and the static began whenever he was in the same room. Add to that the tingle that slid over her when he watched her, and she was hyper-aware of him at all times.
Meals became an exercise in control. Ignoring Harry's attitude and ignoring the thrum of her body under Snape's watchful eye required strength of discipline that Hermione hadn't used before. However, her ability to focus so single-mindedly on her studies helped her adapt quickly. She was both relieved and frustrated that she didn't have Harry and Ron to distract her as usual. It was easier to focus without them as distractions, but instead they were one of the things she had to focus on ignoring!
As the weekend wore on, she spent more time on her own, since Ron spent more time with Harry than her. She snorted to herself. It's like Harry got Ron in the divorce! Smirking at the ridiculous nature of it all, she put away her books, contented to be two full weeks ahead in all of her classes. The only problem was, now that she had no school work, she didn't know what to do with herself. Usually, Sunday evenings were spent spending time with the boys and helping them prepare for Monday, since they usually had put too much off practicing Quidditch over the weekend.
Her mind wandered to Monday. Her homework was complete...a full two and a half times the required length, of course...and she was ahead in the readings. Maybe there'll be a rehearsal. Suddenly she frowned, remembering the detention she had to serve the next night. I hope there isn't a rehearsal after all, or I'll have to miss it. Then again, since Snape and I would both be needed, Dumbledore might just make him reschedule it if there is a rehearsal.
Hermione frowned, wondering what she would have to do for detention. Her stomach fluttered at the thought of being alone with Snape again. The memories of everything that had happened the last couple of times she had been in the classroom washed over her. Just stay calm and professional. No more staring at him or talking back. Just go and do whatever is assigned and get out.
Images of Snape in his Phantom costume paraded in her head. Again she felt the rush of warmth cascading over her. Musing over how different Snape looked in his costume, she opened her music box to practice softly. As she listened, she heard each actor's voice in her head over the recorded one. Once the Phantom began, she bit her lip at the ripple that ran through her centre.
Gods, it's not fair for Snape to have such a seductive voice! How did I manage to not notice it before? ...
I can't get over how much he affects me. It's torment to be around him! But, gods, I love it. ...
Wonderful, I'm a Snape addict! She snorted at herself, ruefully.
Honestly, why did you have to choose the most unlikely person to fall for? He's old enough to be your father; he's your professor; he's horridly rude and sarcastic; he's not handsome; all extremely good reasons for him to be off limits! ...
Then again, he's brilliant; he's loyal; he's noble; he doesn't suffer stupidity; he's got that amazing voice; he couldn't be so good at being sarcastic without a razor sharp wit; he's intriguing; he cleans up well; he's elegant; he's a man, not an immature schoolboy; and he's forbidden; even more reasons to be interested in him! ...
It's so true that what's forbidden is more tempting. The more I know I can't have him, and can't even try to get him, the more I want him!
Hermione tightened her hands into fists and slammed them onto the bed in frustration. She noticed that she had completely ignored the music in favour of her thoughts. Realizing that she wasn't going to be able to focus on it, she closed the music box and got ready for bed. With a resigned sigh, she crawled into bed with her latest acquisition from the Restricted Section of the library, intent on immersing herself in magical theory until she felt tired enough to sleep.
It worked, to a certain degree. Every once in a while, she would find herself rehashing one of several thoughts, the most frequent ones being, "What am I going to have to do at detention?," "Why did Snape lie for me?," and "Did he see me and Harry fighting?" Eventually, she nodded off, and the book slid from her hands. Her dreams were a tumult of images of Snape and Harry and the Phantom of the Opera.
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Monday went by a little easier for Hermione. She had got used to ignoring Harry and Snape at meals, and it was easy to ignore Harry in class, since they weren't supposed to talk anyway. However, she did catch Harry surreptitiously glancing at her during dinner a few times. Idly, she wondered if he was finally getting over himself. Her question was answered when, as she looked at the time during dinner and got up to leave, to get to her detention on time, Harry called to her. Surprised, Hermione looked at him.
Harry looked uncomfortable, and his cheeks were red. He was having trouble meeting her eyes, but he got up anyway. Stepping closer to her, he shoved his hands in his pockets and stammered, "Hermione, I just wanted to say I'm sorry you got in trouble and got detention. I hope it won't be too bad. I wish I could serve it for you. Look, I know I've been a right bastard lately, but... I want to be friends again." He finally looked at her, his green eyes wistful.
Hermione smiled gently at Harry and said, "Harry, I've been your friend the whole time. I don't want to be late, so I'll have to talk to you later. But, I'm glad you're talking to me again." She offered him her hand, and his face split into a grateful smile as he grasped her hand in his.
"I am too, 'Mione. Um, good luck with Snape." He grimaced and squeezed her hand before releasing it and smiling shyly at her again.
Hermione smirked and shrugged. "Thanks. See you later." She spun and hurried from the Hall toward the dungeon. When she arrived at the classroom door, she paused to collect herself. Relax. Just be calm and respectful and professional. It can't be anything worse than gross... Taking a deep breath, she knocked on the door.
"Enter."
Opening the door with a shaking hand, she stepped into the room, shutting the door behind her. She took measured steps to the front of the room and stopped in front of Snape's desk.
He had stopped himself from raising his head when she entered, contenting himself with peering up through his hair, covertly watching her. When she was standing silently in front of his desk, he straightened in his seat and looked at her.
"Miss Granger, how fortunate it is that you were not late for this appointment." His lips twitched before settling into a line, but even that line was not as hard as usual. Hermione stared at him, taken aback by his gibe. She didn't know how to respond.
She managed a non-committal, "Yes, sir."
Snape gazed at her, drinking her in. Hermione shifted uneasily on her feet, feeling the blush suffusing her face. After a few silent, tense moments, she felt as if she would scream if nothing was said. As she was about to blurt something out, Snape sniffed and drawled, "You are aware, I'm sure, of why you received this detention..."
Hermione, embarrassed, looked down and stammered, "Yes, sir. I was... we were... that is, Harry and I... well, I was engaged in conduct unbecoming a student, particularly one who has been accorded the position of Head Girl."
Snape scowled blackly. "Indeed. Miss Granger, you were the one who insisted that you are an adult. Groping another student in the hallway is not mature behaviour."
Hermione hung her head even more. "Yes, sir."
"Very well then. Now, am I correct in assuming that such a puerile display will never happen again?"
Hermione was puzzled by his tone of voice. He was imposing and severe, but then it seemed as if there were an undercurrent of amused satisfaction. Curious, she looked up as she answered, "Yes, sir. That is correct."
He was glaring down his nose at her, one eyebrow arched. Once again, Hermione thought she saw a sparkle of humour in his obsidian eyes. His lip curled faintly and he began straightening his desk. In a low murmur, he sighed, "Excellent."
Silence reigned for a few moments, with Snape absently toying with the parchment on his desk and Hermione once again shifting uneasily. Snape glanced up at the uncomfortable girl and smirked. He preferred having the upper hand and could tell she was off-balance. Curiosity and apprehension nearly poured off her.
Finally, he leant back in his chair and said, silkily, "Miss Granger, you look as if you'll burst if you don't ask whatever is on your mind. In that case, to save you further embarrassment, you have permission to speak."
Hermione inhaled sharply, about to ask the burning question of why he had lied to Dumbledore, but at the last second, she thought better of it and paused. Snape's eyebrows rose as he watched her, a smug smile quirking his lips. Hermione straightened her shoulders and said politely, "Professor, what am I to do for detention?"
Snape's smile vanished, and his brow furrowed. He wasn't expecting that. He had been certain she would ask him about the little fiction he told Dumbledore. After seeing that image in her mind, he thought it must have been gnawing at her, and he was completely surprised that she didn't take the opportunity he gave her. Recovering from that minor shock, he rapidly glanced about the room.
There were the cauldrons in the corner that could be cleaned. His books could be dusted and straightened. She could actually be helpful in brewing potions if necessary. But, he didn't like being thrown for a loop, and he wanted to regain the advantage of keeping her off-balance. Sweeping his gaze over his desk, he was struck with an idea.
Brilliant!
"Well, Miss Granger, as you so amply demonstrated at our first meeting, you know the play from memory. I, having lacked the opportunity you had, do not. Therefore, as we are certain to have a read-through for Act Two later this week, I wish to be prepared. I have already made progress myself, but it will undoubtedly be beneficial to have someone with which to practice. You will perform your role with me tonight to help me learn mine."
Throughout his speech, Hermione went from relief that she wasn't going to have to scrub cauldrons, to a twinge of disappointment that she wouldn't get to see his books, to a surge of excitement that she would be practicing the play with her sexy-voiced Potions Master, to sick dread that she would embarrass herself again like a randy teenager.
Snape watched the play of emotions across her face and was satisfied with the result. Pointing one long graceful finger at the seat in front of him, he opened a drawer and withdrew the music box and script. Hermione sank into the seat, her legs trembling. She swallowed against her suddenly dry throat and tried to slow her racing pulse.
"I believe I have learnt up to 'Don Juan Triumphant.' It's there that I may not have it completely memorized yet. I will begin where my parts are, and your assignment is to not only perform your part, but also stop me if I make a mistake." He smirked at the goggle-eyed look of incredulity she gave him. In a low rumbling tone, he added, "Miss Granger, you will not offend me if you are following my instructions. If you do not correct me when necessary, I may be forced to change your assignment to one rather less intellectual." He nodded pointedly at the stack of cauldrons and quirked one corner of his mouth at her meaningfully. She glanced in their direction and wrinkled her nose in distaste.
Looking back at Snape, still rather sceptically, she narrowed her eyes and muttered, "Yes, sir."
He smiled faintly and turned his attention to the music box, adjusting dials and toggles. When he opened it, it began at "Why So Silent." He leant back in his chair and looked intently at Hermione as he sang. She jumped when he barked out, "Your chains are still mine. You will sing for me!" Once the swirl of music ended after that part, he reached out and forwarded to his next part.
They listened to Giry reading the beginning of the "note" until the Phantom cut in to continue. Hermione suppressed a shiver at the echoing sound of Snape's voice in the empty dungeon as he sang the rest of the "note."
Snape felt as if he were aiming his voice at her, especially during the line, "She knows, though, should she wish to excel she has much still to learn, if pride will let her return to me, her teacher, her teacher..." His finely honed powers of observation detected the minute ripple that Hermione fought to conceal. He was enjoying the power rush of affecting her so much.
He moved to forward the music to his next part, but paused. He looked speculatively at Hermione, who was suddenly even more nervous under his gaze. Nodding to himself, he adjusted the dials and turned purposefully to Hermione.
"I was going to skip to the duet in the graveyard, but I have reconsidered. Miss Granger, if you would begin where Christine leaves the rehearsal and goes to the graveyard, it would provide the proper lead-up to the scene." He paused a moment, then inquired, "Ready?"
Hermione nodded mutely, swallowing and clearing her throat. Snape inclined his head and opened the box. Hermione softly sang, "In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came... That voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." She eyed her professor warily as he settled back to listen to her. His elbows rested on the arms of his chair and he steepled his fingers in front of him, leaning back but levelling his gaze at Hermione.
The music changed and Hermione murmured the introduction to "Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again." She sat up straight in her chair for better breath control and perched on the edge of her seat. She gave herself over to the pathos of the song, feeling the melancholy of the words. As the song progressed, her voice swelled along with the music. Finally, as she neared the end, her voice waned again, becoming even softer and sadder.
Snape watched her sing, transfixed by the beauty of her voice and the effortless command she had over it. His eyes darkened with feeling in response to the amount of poignancy she poured into the song. By the time she reached the end, he felt as if he were being buoyed along in a rush of emotion, and he sat forward in his chair to respond. His voice was a gentle caress as he sang, "Wandering child, so lost, so helpless, yearning for my guidance..."
Hermione focused on him raptly, singing, "Angel or father, friend or Phantom, who is it there staring?" in a bewildered tone.
Snape intensified his tone to a hypnotic murmur, "Have you forgotten your Angel?"
Breathlessly, Hermione pleaded, "Angel, oh speak! What endless longings echo in this whisper?"
Neither blinked as they continued, hearing the recording of Raoul joining in the song. Snape felt the electric connection between them again and focused on reaching Hermione with his voice.
Hermione felt the tingles fluttering in her stomach and wanted nothing more than to cross the short distance between them and deposit herself in his arms. When Snape began the mesmeric lure, "I am your Angel of Music. Come to me, Angel of Music," Hermione felt her breath catch and struggled to compose herself.
When the recorded Raoul confronted the Phantom, Hermione saw Snape's face darken and grow cold. He glared at her through narrowed eyes as he recited the taunts and jeers. Hermione managed to choke out the appropriate protests when needed, but her heart beat wildly and she felt tense with apprehension at the closed, hateful expression on Snape's face. She cringed at his fury when he roared, "So be it! Now let it be war upon you both!"
Mechanically, Snape reached for the box, forwarding it just a bit. He paused the music and glanced at Hermione. "The next part is not on the recording." He handed Hermione the script and pointed to the appropriate part. She nodded hastily and looked down at the page as he sang, "I'm here, the Phantom of the Opera" several times. After a few times, Hermione glanced up at Snape and he nodded. She looked down and read the lines. Then, Snape finished that scene with his short verse. Extending his hand toward Hermione, he nodded to her. She gave him the script back and exhaled gustily.
Adjusting the music box yet again, Snape turned a smouldering look on Hermione. She made a rapid calculation in her head and realized that they were to "Point of No Return."
Snape saw her face go pale and her eyes widen before she flushed anew. He felt the simmering desire within him and hoped he could keep it under control. He slowly sat back in his chair as the recorded Piangi sang her cue line.
She closed her eyes a moment as she sang, "No thoughts within her head but thoughts of joy." But she opened them and looked shyly at Snape as she sang the following line, "No dreams within her heart but dreams of love."
Snape's chest tightened at her look. The recording Passarino spoke and Snape rasped back. Then, he sat straight in his chair, like Hermione was doing, and belted out his opening lines.
"You have come here in pursuit of your deepest urge, in pursuit of that wish, which till now has been silent, silent... I have brought you, that our passions may fuse and merge - in your mind you've already succumbed to me, dropped all defences, completely succumbed to me - now you are here with me: no second thoughts, you've decided, decided... Past the point of no return - no backward glances: the games we've played till now are at an end... Past all thought of 'if' or 'when' - no use resisting: abandon thought, and let the dream descend...
What raging fire shall Flood the soul? What rich desire unlocks its door? What sweet seduction lies before us? Past the point of no return, the final threshold - what warm, unspoken secrets will we learn? Beyond the point of no return..."
Snape's velvet voice wrapped around the words and Hermione felt drugged by their sultry promise. The crisp way he had enunciated "sweet seduction" had made a rush of heat flash over her. She felt a warm wetness pooling between her thighs. Her eyes closed halfway as she sang her response.
"You have brought me to that moment where words run dry, to that moment where speech disappears into silence, silence... I have come here, hardly knowing the reason why... In my mind, I've already imagined our bodies entwining defenceless and silent - and now I am here with you: no second thoughts, I've decided, decided... Past the point of no return - no going back now: our passion-play has now, at last, begun... Past all thought of right or wrong - one final question: how long should we two wait, before we're one?
When will the blood begin to race, the sleeping bud burst into bloom? When will the flames, at last, consume us?"
Hermione's body had shifted involuntarily and leant toward Snape as she had drawled, "bodies entwining, defenceless and silent." Snape's breath caught as he felt the drawing in his loins in response. His voice was thick with suppressed desire as he joined her to sing together.
"Past the point of no return, the final threshold - the bridge is crossed, so stand and watch it burn... We've passed the point of no return..."
The music slowed and changed, and they sat, immobile, staring into each other's eyes, reading the passion in them. As the music continued, it was the point at which the Phantom sings "All I Ask of You," but Snape didn't come in on time. Hermione was jarred from her reverie by the lack of what she was expecting.
She jumped, blinking rapidly. Abashed, she looked down, straightening back away from Snape. As soon as she reacted, Snape was jolted back to reality as well. He scowled and shut the music box, resting his hand on it as he tilted his head forward, looking to the side, hiding his face behind his hair. He felt the heat rising in his face and knew he was flushed. Discomfited by the throbbing erection in his lap and the blood pounding in his face, he busied himself with the script, making a show of thumbing through it to the correct page. He then reset the music box before clearing his throat and choking out, "That's as far as I've got. I need to learn the rest from here."
Hermione, grasping at normality, retorted briskly, "Certainly, sir. You've done amazingly well so far. You didn't make a single mistake." She paused before adding, "But that's to be expected from someone as talented as you."
Snape glanced at her sharply, once again disconcerted by her compliment. He really didn't know how to respond to one reasonably. Biting back a sarcastic, defensive comment, he cleared his throat again and managed a stiff, "Thank you, Miss Granger. I do try." He flashed her a dignified, yet embarrassed look as he nodded acknowledgement.
Hermione felt her heart throb at the endearing combination of sophisticated man and shy boy she saw in her Professor. She smiled warmly at him, grateful that he had managed to actually take a compliment this time, rather than denying it as usual.
Snape started the music again, and this time, with the script in front of him, he chimed in to sing, "Say you'll share with me one love, one lifetime.. Lead me, save me from my solitude..." He looked up through his lashes at Hermione, his head still bowed to the page. Her expression was tender and a faint smile hovered on her lips. Snape was entranced as he continued, "Say you want me with you, here beside you... Anywhere you go, let me go too Christine that's all I ask of..." He trailed off as the recording took over. Again they locked gazes, souls bared, until the recording came to "Down Once More."
Snape dragged his eyes from Hermione's and read through his song, glancing back up at her every few words. He struggled to address her harshly as his role demanded. By the time the music came to "Beyond the Lake," he had distanced himself enough from his burning desire to focus on the script.
Hermione saw him retreating into himself and wanted to cry out to stop him. But, she reasoned with herself that it was for the best, and did her best to tamp down the ardour she felt. Her struggle to do so helped her effectively sing her disgust to the Phantom. Still, she was reluctant to meet Snape's gaze as she said the hateful lines.
Snape doggedly persisted in his performance of the song with a harsh, cold attitude. After the warmth and passion of their previous song, he hated to lose the sensations it evoked, but knew it was necessary, for far more reasons than just that the play required it.
Hermione steeled herself to sing, "This haunted face holds no horror for me now. It's in your soul that the true distortion lies." She cringed inwardly at the venom in the words. It tore her soul to see Snape's jaw clench and his eyes become hard and flinty in response. She could feel him closing off again, like he had when he had returned with his Death Eater garb. He took a deep breath and sat back in his seat. His voice was poisonous as he sang his lines to Raoul.
The tension in the dungeon skyrocketed, but this time it wasn't alluring and seductive. This tension spoke of a barely concealed rage against the character of Raoul. Hermione felt cold sweat trickling down her neck at the white-hot fury underneath Snape's performance. His voice was a hoarse rasp by the time he ground out, "You try my patience. Make your choice!"
Hermione's heart was in her mouth and her stomach was in knots as she answered, "Pitiful creature of darkness... What kind of life have you known? God give me courage to show you: you are not alone." Her skin tingled with the knowledge that in the play, she would be kissing Snape at that moment. Her eyes were wide when Snape bored his gaze into her. She quailed under the black fury pouring off him. Finally, as the music swelled and changed, he tore his gaze away and stared sullenly at the script as he muttered his lines.
Then, he bellowed, "Go now! Go now and leave me!" His voice cracked under the strain and he slumped in his chair, looking defeated. Hermione wanted to rush to him and comfort him, but forced herself to stay in her chair, rigid. His voice was a fragile likeness of its previous robust self as he lilted his lines. Then, he choked out, "Christine, I love you." Hermione's hands clenched in empathy.
Finally, he gathered himself, and his voice once again resounded through the dungeon, vibrant but destroyed. Once the music faded away, Snape reached out and gently shut the box. Hermione watched his chest rising and falling as he breathed deeply.
In the heavy silence that followed, Hermione struggled to find something appropriate to say. Seeing Snape slumped back in his chair, eyes closed, she was hit with an inspiration. Tentatively, she whispered, "Professor?"
Snape opened his eyes, but they didn't snap with their usual annoyance. Wearily, he asked, "What is it, Miss Granger?"
"Well, sir, it just seemed as if your throat might be dry and giving you trouble, so I wanted to suggest a short break to have some tea." She paused, seeing that he was not going to respond yet, and hurried on. "Actually, that reminds me of that tonic I mentioned at the first read-through. I know you said you'd prefer your potions, but if you haven't brewed anything suitable just yet, my tonic may help in the meantime."
A faint spark of interest glowed in his eyes as he inquired, "Just what is in this tonic of yours?" His voice held a modicum of sneering suspicion, and Hermione was thankful that he seemed to be recovering and returning to normal.
Briskly, she replied, "Nothing unusual. Simply tea, lemon, and honey. Shall I summon a house-elf, sir?" She regarded him with a carefully schooled expression of polite detachment.
Snape raised an eyebrow and snorted. He waved his wand languidly and a tea service appeared on his desk, complete with lemon and honey. Smirking pointedly at Hermione, he waved his hand over it and drawled, "I don't believe that's necessary, Miss Granger. I am a Potions Master. As you can see, I am quite capable of acquiring your ingredients."
He poured two cups of steaming tea and gestured for her to join him at his desk. Trembling at the idea of being closer to him, she moved her chair beside his desk on the dais and sat. Politely, Snape handed her a cup and saucer. She took it with a murmured thanks.
She was flustered by his proximity and didn't know what to do. Nervously sitting, still as a rock, she was chagrined to see Snape roll his eyes and stare at her, aggrieved. Exasperated, he spoke. "Well, Miss Granger, are you ever going to relate your precious recipe? Is there a particular proportion to be had amongst the ingredients? Or is this just your excuse to have tea with your professor?" His lip curled as he favoured her with a sardonic look. Hermione flushed at his sarcasm and hastily set down her tea to hide the shaking of her hands.
"No, sir! I mean, yes, I'll share the recipe. There really isn't much of one. The tea needs to be hot, and you add a couple of spoonfuls of honey to coat your throat and soothe it, and you add a slice of lemon for taste and reviving energy." Nervously lecturing, she suited actions to words and prepared Snape's cup of tea for him. When she was done, she looked up to see him staring at her with a mixture of consternation and smug amusement. Pretending suspicion, he lifted the teacup to his nose and inhaled the aroma, swirling the tea. Narrowing his eyes at her and hiding a smile behind his cup, he pinned her with an intense gaze as he carefully sipped.
Hermione sat, quivering with apprehension, unsure of how to take his almost teasing behaviour. Owl-eyed, she watched him sample the tea. She let out a breath she didn't know she had been holding when he lowered his cup and gestured toward her in a silent toast.
"Well done, Miss Granger. A successful brew to rival your potions. Cheers."
Hermione nearly gaped in surprise at his compliment. Fazed by the unexpected raillery, she studiously focused on preparing her tea, avoiding his gaze. Once it was done, she glanced at Snape over the rim of her teacup as she sipped its soothing contents.
An unexpectedly comfortable silence fell. They sat and drank their tea almost companionably. Snape felt himself relaxing and thought ruefully how domestic it all seemed when Hermione had prepared his tea for him. It was the first time in a very long time that someone else had seen to his needs and comfort. A yearning he didn't know existed made itself known. He finished his tea and sat back, musing. Hermione reached for his cup and prepared a second helping. Snape stared at her, taken aback by her initiative.
Bemused, he rumbled, "You don't even know if I want another cup. What possessed you to do that?"
Hermione blushed and stammered, in a low voice, "I-I don't know if you want another cup. But... I thought it would be nice, just in case." She sipped again from her cup, hiding her reddened face.
Snape felt a warmth expanding in his chest. He smiled that rusty, genuine smile at her and said softly, "Thank you, Hermione."
Hermione felt like she was about to explode with excitement. He just called me Hermione! Gods, my name never sounded so good... She lowered her teacup and beamed at him. There was an awkward moment, and then Snape tore his gaze from hers and drank a bit more.
The silence was now charged with emotion. Unsure of how to deal with it, Snape reverted to familiar duty and opened the script to the parts he needed to learn. Lightly, he said, "In an effort to keep from negating the benefits of your tonic, I believe I'll just recite the lines now, and you can follow along to make sure I'm getting them right." He slid the tea service out of the way and pushed the script in front of Hermione.
Hermione quickly reached for the script and moved her teacup to the side. Politely, she said, "Ready, sir."
Snape rested his forehead against his hand and closed his eyes as he recited the lines from memory. Every so often, he would ask for a hint, and Hermione would provide the first few words. In between his lines, she recited the others. Without the rich music and the emotion imbued in their singing, even "All I Ask of You" was bearable.
Periodically, Snape would repeat what the stage directions said as well, listing the events or actions to happen in the play. Thus, it was that Snape worked his way through the script to the climax, where he glibly recited the fact that Hermione would kiss him after her lines. It wasn't until the words were out of his mouth that he realized what he had done. It had finally been spoken aloud.
He froze and glanced up at Hermione, who was struggling to keep a professional expression and wishing she didn't blush so much. She noticed Snape looking at her and met his gaze with a defiant toss of her hair, her chin tilted up more than usual.
Snape blinked. He wanted so much to kiss her, but he dreaded the revulsion she was sure to show at the thought. He looked down, bitterly resenting the position he was in. He noticed Hermione wringing her hands agitatedly and miserably bit out, "I'm sorry you have to suffer through this, Miss Granger. Rest assured, I shall strive to make things as comfortable for you as possible. I'm sure Dumbledore will allow us to skip that until it is absolutely necessary for performance." His cheeks were hot and he shook his hair forward to cloak his face.
Hermione was stunned at his speech. Panicking slightly at the thought of not being allowed to kiss him for months, she desperately cast about for a solution to her problem. Struck, she determinedly said, "Professor?"
Snape flicked a glance at her and retorted acidly, "What now, Miss Granger?"
Hermione gathered her courage and gazed at Snape loftily. "Really, Professor, I thought we were going to approach this as adults." Snape blinked at her, stunned at her tone and words.
Icily, he spat, "Explain yourself."
Hermione took a deep breath and squared her shoulders. "We are both adults here, and we can behave professionally. If you insist on treating a simple kiss as if it were a torture not to be endured, you'll just be perpetuating a ridiculous stereotype along with the rest of the cast. Isn't it a valid technique to take ownership of something used to insult and hurt and turn it around to make it something innocuous? I can see how well it worked with transfiguring your Death Eater garments."
Snape squinted at her, clearly puzzled, but intrigued. He flicked his fingers at her and said, "Go on."
Hermione drew courage from her success so far and continued, blithely. "Well, sir, wouldn't it take the wind out of everyone's sails if we were already comfortable with the necessary interactions before they had the chance to try to taunt us about it?" She took a deep breath and took the plunge. "We could practice the kiss, so it becomes second nature to perform it as easily as we would perform anything else. Then it would be no big deal..." She trailed off, hoping against hope that he wouldn't blow up at her and kick her out. It took every ounce of discipline she had to hold his questioning gaze.
Snape couldn't believe his ears. She wants to practice kissing? Did she put a hallucinogen in my tea? Can she possibly be serious? He saw the nervous tension in her frame and stared at her, dumbfounded. She brashly gazed back at him, no trace of backing down in her eyes. He began to wonder if he could really have such good fortune.
Cautiously, he nodded, seeing her exhale slowly in relief. He was surprised again to see the hungry sparkle in her eyes. Hoping his voice wouldn't betray his nervousness, he stood and remarked, "Very well. In that case, I believe we should stand." He held his hand out to her and felt his chest tighten as she slipped her smooth hand into his.
She locked her gaze with his as she stood, stepping away from the desk and standing in front of him. Her voice was husky as she breathed, "So... I finish my lines and I reach up and... and kiss you. The script says it's supposed to last a long time..."
Snape's eyes were hooded, and he purred, "Yes, it does, doesn't it?"
She stepped close to him, feeling the heat radiating from his body, and stretched her hand up to rest on his shoulder. She licked her lips and swallowed. Standing on her tiptoes, she reached up toward him. He was still too tall, so she slid her hand up into his hair behind his ear and pulled him down to meet her.
Snape's breath caught as he felt her fingers winding through his hair. He was humming with sensation, and felt her gentle tug to pull him toward her. He lowered his head and heard a roaring in his ears as her lips touched his.
Her lips were as soft and pliant under his as they had been under his finger weeks ago. He could feel them trembling against his. He realized he had closed his eyes and snapped them open to see her reaction. Her eyes were closed. He suppressed a groan as her body melted against him. Her hand tightened spasmodically in his hair and she tilted her head to the side, pressing her lips harder against his. He nearly jumped out of his skin as he felt her tongue flicking against his shut lips. He knew he should be pulling away, reprimanding her for such behaviour, but his body had a mind of its own and it wasn't obeying his voice of reason.
Hermione marvelled at her audacity. Almost cringing at her own brashness, she expected to be shoved away and raged at, but that didn't happen. Emboldened by the positive reception so far, she parted her lips and lightly touched his with her tongue. He stiffened, but didn't draw back. Exulting in her success, she slid her other hand up his hard chest and around his shoulder, adding it to her grip in his hair. Moulding her body to his, she pulled his head tighter to hers and prodded his lips with her tongue, begging entrance.
Snape felt her hands on him, her soft, warm figure fitted against his body, and felt his mind spinning out of control. When her tongue slipped along the seam of his lips, he relaxed, letting her gain entrance. His tongue tentatively met hers and gently tasted her. Unbidden, his hands lifted to wrap around her. His hands splayed against her back, holding her close, he responded to her kiss with his own.
Hermione was almost faint with delight. That warm puddle between her thighs expanded as sizzling tingles shot through her. His hands were on her body, and he was kissing her back, exploring her as she was him. She nestled closer to him, her belly melting against his hips. That was when she felt the searing heat of the hard lump trapped between them. She gasped.
Snape came to his senses when he heard and felt Hermione's gasp. Panicking, he wrenched himself away from her, grabbing her hands and removing them from his head. Panting with shock and lust, he pushed her away from him. He realized he was hard for her, and wildly spun away from her, leaning forward onto his desk. Terrified that she knew, he gasped out, "Go. Return to your Tower. Detention is over."
Hermione was aghast. How could things crumble so quickly? Shaking with desire, she grasped the chair back for support. She didn't want to leave. She wanted to stay with him and kiss him again. When she didn't move, Snape whipped his head around and pinned her with a manic glare. "I said go! Now!"
Frightened by the look in his eyes, she whirled and ran from the dungeon and up the stairs to her room. Her body was singing with the electricity between her and Snape. She was virtually vibrating with need and desire.
Panting with exertion and passion, she cried out, startled, when she hit something and tumbled to the floor outside her door.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)