72- Condemnation
Chapter 76 of 84
Good_WitchAfter Snape's shocking proposal in front of everyone and his abrupt departure with Hermione, we see just what sorts of reactions follow such an unexpected occurrence.
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Chapter 72- Condemnation
Dumbledore stopped short as he crested the steps onto the stage, hands clenching as Snape and Hermione disappeared. His stentorian roar of “Severus Snape!” joined the startled cacophony echoing in the transfigured Hall.
McGonagall hovered at the edge of the proscenium, having emerged from the wing, her face white with shock, eyes bulging behind her square spectacles. Her brogue was so pronounced that her babble was even less coherent than it would have been otherwise. She looked as if she were trying to reach Dumbledore, but had rooted to the spot when the pair had vanished.
Ginny stood frozen in the wing, not far behind her Head of House, her wide eyes full of tears and her hands clasped and pressed against her mouth. Beside her, Harry was pacing in bewildered patterns, his hands alternately flailing and shoving through his now wildly untidy hair. His voice was much higher than normal as he repeated the same things again and again.
“What just happened? Where did he take her? What’s going on? What are we supposed to do?”
In the hubbub of people milling about in shock and confusion, Ron came pelting up to them from across the stage, Susan trailing after him. When he skidded to a stop in front of Harry and Ginny, he, too, ran a hand through his hair and gripped the back of his neck, ears bright red.
Harry’s hands flew outward dramatically as he rounded on his best mate and demanded, “What the bloody hell just happened?”
Ron shook his head, shoulders rising in an exaggerated shrug. “How should I know?” He looked at his sister, who was still staring blankly ahead with her fingers crammed against her lips. Frowning, he stepped into her line of sight and bent closer, muttering, “Gin? You all right?”
Ginny came back to herself with a gasp, blinking and jerking away. Gazing about frantically, she grimaced and breathed, “I don’t believe it! What was he thinking?”
Harry paused in his frenetic movements, exchanging a perplexed look with Ron before turning to his girlfriend. “What?”
Ginny’s eyes closed and she buried her face in her hands for a moment with a muffled wail. Then, pushing her hair out of her face, she lifted her head and took a deep breath. “I can’t believe he proposed to her here, in front of everyone! I would have expected him to be more private about it!”
Ron blinked, staring fixedly at her, his face screwed up in an expression of intense concentration. Harry, on the other hand, gazed at her in utter befuddlement, rather as if he had been hit with a Confundus Charm.
His voice low and accusing, Ron said, “You’re not surprised like we are.” The two redheads locked gazes for a beat, until Ginny heaved a sigh and shook her head. Ron sucked in a stunned breath, eyes widening. “You knew? That’s who she’s been mooning over?”
Ginny nodded, eyes pleading with Ron to understand. They were startled from their connection by Harry’s sharp, “What? What are you two on about? Knew what?”
Ron straightened, taking a deep breath and grinding his teeth. “Hermione and Snape. He just sodding proposed to her! They must have been together for a while, then.” He cut a glance at Ginny and barked, “How long?”
Ginny’s clasped hands were creeping back up to her mouth again. Her voice was barely audible to the two of them through the ongoing noise when she whispered, “Since November.”
Ron’s eyes flew open wide again and he reared back. His voice cracked with astonishment. “That long?” Both hands rose to rub his eyes, then slid up onto the crown of his head. His eyes darted back and forth, focusing on nothing but his own thoughts as he frowned in concentration again. Clearly he was talking to himself as he muttered, “So that’s what she was talking about after bolloxing things up with Harry. And why she was so mental about Colin!”
Harry stared at his friend, a grimace of disbelief stretching his lips. “You’re saying that Hermione is… is—well—is with Snape? As in a couple? Are you daft? That’s absurd!”
Ginny turned imploring eyes to Harry and bit her lip before saying quietly, “It’s not. I’ve known since Christmas.”
Harry froze, the grimace distorting his features as he blinked rapidly. “You can’t be serious…”
Ginny glanced about, seeing the chaos around them, and grabbed both Harry and Ron, dragging them into the shadows of the wing. Susan followed, looking lost. When they were in a corner, away from the rest of the baffled throng, Ginny hissed, “Listen. I know it’s a shock, but you’ve got to understand!”
Harry eyed her warily, but Ron crossed his arms and nodded stiffly, surprising her as he growled, “So tell us. What do we need to understand?”
Ginny’s hands worried in front of her as she said, “Hermione loves him. And he loves her! I’ve seen them together, and it’s true. Hand on wand!” She nodded earnestly. “Why do you think they have such an intense connection when they perform? And how else would Snape have come to change as much as he has? You’ve both admitted that he’s got so much better over the past few months—that’s because of Hermione! I knew they were in love, but I never imagined that he would go public like this!”
Ron tossed his head and snorted faintly. His voice was still a low growl as he said, “How can you be sure? What if he’s just toying with her?”
Ginny, encouraged by Ron’s lack of histrionics, gripped his arm firmly and gazed up into his measuring blue eyes. “She showed me the letters he sent her. That choker she wore at Christmas? He made that for her, based on the one she wore when they went to the play. Carved it himself! And he’s talked to me about her. Believe it or not, Ron, I’ve been his friend as well since January. He’s really not bad when you get to know him. He’s extremely protective of her—as you saw for yourself when you made that comment about her kissing him! She’s been so worried about telling everyone. She doesn’t want to lose her friends.”
At that, she turned to Harry, who was staring at her like he had never seen her before. But before she could start trying to sway him, Ron spoke up again.
“She has seemed really happy for a while now. I thought she had a secret, what with the way she behaved after the whole Colin thing…” He trailed off, then dropped his hands to his sides and clenched his fists, taking a deep breath. Releasing it in a long sigh and relaxing his hands again, he pinned Ginny with a grave look. “Is she happy? I mean, really? Does he treat her right?”
Ginny’s eyes widened with awe as she nodded, exuding reassurance. Her voice was soft but rang with sincerity as she said, “I’ve never seen her happier, and I doubt I’ll ever see anyone more in love than they are. It’s… beautiful.”
They gazed at each other solemnly for a beat, then Ron nodded decisively. “Good. Then I won’t have to hex his bollocks off.”
Ginny voiced a hysterical squeak, clapping her hands over her mouth to stifle it, but her eyes spoke volumes of gratitude.
Ron rubbed the back of his neck and shuddered. “Gah, this is going to take some getting used to.” He grimaced and shook his head.
Harry goggled at them. “Have you all gone mad? This is Snape you’re talking about here! Him and Hermione? That’s fucking insane!” He was gesturing wildly again, and his voice still had an edge of hysteria.
Ginny grabbed at his hands, trying to calm him. “Harry, please, just listen!”
Harry wrenched his hands from her grasp, eyeing her warily. “Listen to what? Snape’s gone and stolen our best mate and you’re all talking like that’s okay! If Dumbledore doesn’t hex him, I will!”
Ron rolled his eyes and said, “Harry, just shut up! If you go after Snape, you’ll just set Hermione off, and even though he’s changed, I reckon he’s not so changed that he wouldn’t jinx you into bits if you tried to attack him!”
Harry whipped his incredulous gaze to Ron. “I can’t believe you. Why aren’t you in a right state, too? I thought you cared about Hermione! How can you just stand there when that git’s kidnapped our friend?”
Ron scowled fiercely at Harry and bellowed, “He didn’t kidnap her, you buggering prat! He proposed to her! And if what Ginny’s said is true, Hermione’s gonna’ say ‘yes’!”
A beat of electric silence sizzled between them, as blue eyes stared down green. Harry’s voice was hoarse and faint when he finally said, “I’m the buggering prat? She’s with that bastard—“
He was cut off by Ginny’s furious, “He’s not a bastard! Stop calling him names, Harry James Potter!”
Harry rounded on Ginny. “How can you say that?”
Ginny’s eyes were still bright with tears as she spat, “Because he’s my friend, you wanker!”
Harry jerked back as if slapped. Before he could retort, he was assailed by Ron’s voice to one side. “He saved your life, mate. Give the man some credit.”
Harry’s eyes went even wider, and he blinked rapidly, his mouth working soundlessly.
Ron looked almost weary as he continued, “I thought you two had made peace anyway. Why are you in such a lather?”
Harry’s eyes narrowed and he sucked in a breath to growl, “Let me get this straight. You’re saying Hermione is in love with Snape, and has been since last year. They’ve apparently been carrying on a relationship under our very noses for months, and you’re not even bothered?”
Ron tossed his head, blue eyes flashing. “Look, it’s not like I’m planning to invite the man to join me for tea and crumpets or anything! I’d rather not think about what those two may have got up to all this time—what with the way they were snogging onstage anyway—but this isn’t about me! It’s about Hermione, and I want her to be happy! I promised her I’d support her no matter what after you two broke up, and I plan to stand by her! Snape’s not the only one who loves her, you know.”
Ginny flung herself at Ron, enveloping him in a grateful hug. “Thank you.” Her fervent murmur was muffled against his shoulder, but Harry heard it all the same.
Harry’s face twisted as he snapped, “I love Hermione, too! How could she choose him?”
Ginny twisted away from her brother to see Harry’s resentful expression, and her brown eyes kindled with hurt and anger. “Is that what this is about? You’re pissed off because she didn’t choose you, is that it?”
Harry wasn’t so far gone in his fit of temper that he didn’t realize his mistake, particularly at the sight of both Weasleys glaring at him. The brotherly protective light was rising in Ron’s eyes as he scowled at Harry in warning, and more tears were welling up to cloud Ginny’s eyes even as they flashed in anger. His hands rose, palms out in a calming gesture.
“Wait—that’s not what I meant!” He back-pedalled hastily as Ginny’s hands balled into fists at her sides. “Ginny, I love you. You know that! I love Hermione too, but not like that!”
Ginny’s chin was trembling, but she managed to speak. “Well, Snape does! So get over yourself, Mr. Chosen One, and fast, or the Boy-Who-Lived will end up the Boy-Who-Lived-Without-His-Best-Friend!”
With that last threat, she spun and darted away, leaving Harry to face Ron. Ron gazed frostily at Harry, not even breaking his gaze when Susan crept up to insinuate herself under his arm, pressing against his left side.
Harry was stunned speechless, and all he could do was blink at them.
Susan burrowed into Ron’s chest and he looked down at her pale face. Squeezing her shoulders in reassurance, he murmured, “You all right there, Suz?”
Susan tilted her head and gave a weak shrug. “I don’t know what to think. I mean, it’s all so bizarre!”
Ron heaved a sigh and said, “Too right.” Then, he lifted his right hand and chucked her under the chin, raising her face to his. Brow furrowed in concern, he said, “Do me a favour, would you? Don’t go adding to the stress Hermione’ll have to deal with. Just… just try and reserve judgment, okay? She’s gonna’ have enough to worry about; she could use some friends to back her.”
Susan’s worried expression gave way to a look of adoration and she smiled faintly, nodding. Her voice was tinged with admiration as she said, “It’s a shame you weren’t sorted into Hufflepuff—you’re so loyal to your friends.” She stretched up and kissed him gently. Ron’s ears went pink as he tried to suppress a flattered smile. Hugging him again, she said, “Do you think she’s okay?”
Ron frowned and said, “Who, Hermione? I reckon she’s as fine as one could be when ambushed by something like that.”
Susan flicked a glance at Harry and said, “Actually, I was worried about Ginny.” With that, she turned a scathing look at Harry and glared.
Ron grunted as he, too, cut an acid glance at his friend. “That was a pretty rotten thing to say, mate.”
Harry—who was still reeling under the shock of Snape and Hermione’s relationship and the knowledge that he had hurt his girlfriend and offended his best mate—gazed at Ron helplessly, looking completely overwhelmed. He looked around and saw the stage filled with milling clumps of audience mixing with the cast, and noticed that Ginny was across the stage, talking earnestly to McGonagall, with Neville and Parvati watching avidly.
His voice was almost a wail as he said, “I didn’t mean it like that! Ron, you know I love Ginny. I just can’t believe that she knew about Hermione and Snape and didn’t say anything about it before!”
Ron snorted and rolled his eyes. “Right, ‘cause she surely would have wanted to incite a riot like this in the middle of term!” He waved his hand at the hubbub. “Besides, I doubt anyone would have been willing to look past the Snape we used to know to the bloke he is now. He’s nowhere near the nasty git he used to be. He’s been nice to all of us the past few months, and I reckon Hermione had a lot to do with that!”
Harry pushed his glasses onto his head and rubbed his eyes wearily. When he put them back on, he gazed mournfully over the crowd and croaked, “What am I supposed to do?”
Ron quirked a resigned half-smile at him and said, “Apologize to Ginny, for one. Then shut up and be a good friend to Hermione. Isn’t it about time she was happy? It’s her life, Harry, not yours.” He paused, watching Harry struggle with his turbulent feelings. “The girls asked us to give Snape a chance ages ago, and we did. And he’s actually been decent and human since then. Besides, after all he did to help you, I think you owe him one.”
Harry scowled uncomfortably and muttered, “He said we’re even.”
Ron grinned and retorted, “See? What self-respecting Slytherin would say that if he could’ve kept something hanging over your head, eh? I’d say that’s proof right there that he deserves a chance. Besides, if they’re really in love, that’s another good reason to step back.” He cast a furtive glance at Susan still wrapped around him and said, “Dumbledore always said love was mysterious and powerful. Who are we to judge?” He squeezed Susan tighter and kissed her temple as she beamed up at him.
Harry shoved his hands in his pockets and shifted his weight, grimacing as he watched the excited people swarming all over the stage. Shooting a sulky look at Ron and Susan, he huffed and muttered, “I better go find Ginny.” He slunk away, edging between clumps of students.
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While Ginny had been apprising Ron and Harry of the situation, Dumbledore, after his initial roar of frustration, had stomped off to the staff room to try to Floo to Snape’s quarters. The flames turned green, but he couldn’t get through no matter how many times he tried. Snape had apparently cast a barrier on his hearth, preventing anyone from using the Floo to travel or call. He debated whether to go down to Snape’s rooms and try to get through the door, but that would give Snape warning and he could disappear before Dumbledore could get in. Of course, that was supposing they had Apparated into his quarters to begin with. There was no telling where they were.
Thoroughly incensed, the headmaster had stalked back into the Hall, the astonished crowd parting before him like the Red Sea before Moses. For the first time, many students saw why Dumbledore had been reported to be the only wizard the Dark Lord had ever feared. The dangerously livid expression and the magic crackling around him made them quail before him.
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McGonagall had been rooted to the spot where she had halted upon Snape’s disappearance with Hermione. People surged onto the stage, into the space previously occupied by the pair, and McGonagall saw Dumbledore whirling to exit through the staff door. She stared, bereft, her stunned babble still rolling off her tongue.
She was alone in a sea of confusion until Ron raced past her, Susan at his heels, and a bug-eyed Trelawney floated up to her in their wake.
Trelawney gripped McGonagall’s arm and breathed, “Can you believe it? What in the name of all the celestial bodies is going on?”
McGonagall, whose patience with the Divination teacher was notoriously short on a good day, felt as if she just couldn’t be expected to deal with her in the midst of such chaos!
Lips thin and nostrils flaring in annoyance, McGonagall turned to Trelawney and nearly shouted, “Unhand me this instant!” She shook loose of Trelawney, who was clearly taken aback by her behaviour. Her voice oozed icy disdain as she said, “What do you mean, asking me such a question? I thought you, of all people, should have been unsurprised—surely you should have seen this coming?” Her eyes narrowed in a withering look and she tossed her head. “I’m onto you: you merely want an inside scoop on gossip, and you know Severus trusts me—“ She faltered, realizing that Snape clearly hadn’t trusted her as much as she had thought, and she felt foolish for trusting him as much as she had, also. Regaining her composure, she regally said, “I’m sure Albus will get to the bottom of this. In the meantime, I’ll not be giving you any gossip fodder.”
She lifted her chin loftily and stormed away, leaving Trelawney to gape after her. When she reached the other side of the stage, where Dumbledore had stood and shouted, she stopped, hoping that he would come back soon. She gazed out over the tumultuous crowd, watching people dart from group to group, fervent conversations buzzing like a swarm of locusts. As the throng onstage shifted, she saw Harry, Ron, Ginny, and Susan in the shadows of the opposite wing.
Are her friends as baffled as the rest of us? Could they have had any inkling?
While she watched, Ginny threw herself at her brother and enveloped him in a hug. A moment later, she had spun to face Harry, who then raised his hands in a conciliatory gesture. The redheaded girl appeared to be shouting at Harry, and then she whirled and sped away, heading straight for McGonagall, buffeting off people like a pinball as she bulled her way through the masses.
She was crying, and she was oblivious to everyone around her, which explained her gasp of shock and startled expression as McGonagall clamped down on her arm to stop her progress.
“Miss Weasley! Are you all right?”
Ginny looked up at her Head of House, noting her white, anxious face. Swallowing hard, she rasped, “I’m fine, Professor.”
McGonagall nodded sharply, then her gaze sharpened like a predator’s as she leant closer and hissed, “Good, then what can you tell me about what just happened?”
Ginny blinked, caught completely off guard, and she knew her guilt had flashed across her face when McGonagall’s eyes narrowed and she tightened her grip, saying, “Out with it, Miss Weasley!”
Ginny realized that they were beyond the point of dissembling, as the truth would out them in any case. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath before locking gazes with McGonagall and saying, “Professor Snape just proposed to Hermione.”
McGonagall’s hand squeezed again, then abruptly released Ginny’s arm. Straightening haughtily, she said, “I am well aware of that fact, Miss Weasley. I was referring to what you know about the situation. It is obvious that you are not as shocked as the rest of us.”
As she was speaking, Neville and Parvati arrived, Neville’s face anxious and Parvati’s clearly flummoxed. Ginny cut a quick glance at them and instantly decided to answer anyway, in the hopes that she could influence her friends to support Snape and Hermione as well.
Settling her shoulders and steeling herself, she said, “I daresay it was a logical next step in their relationship, Professor.”
McGonagall’s eyes bugged out again and she hissed, “What relationship?”
Ginny pursed her lips for a beat before saying, “They’re in love. And have been for months.” She flicked another glance at her friends before peering back up at her Head of House.
Neville had jerked back as if slapped, and Parvati’s mouth had fallen open. McGonagall was staring at her, shaking her head faintly.
“No. That’s not possible. She’s his student—“ McGonagall blinked as she was cut off by Neville’s “—Not anymore.”
Neville jerked again, having surprised even himself with his interjection. His cheeks coloured as he gave a sheepish grimace. “Sorry…”
McGonagall looked dazedly back at Ginny and said, “Severus wouldn’t… he’d never…”
As she trailed off, Ginny supplied, “Fall in love? Why not? He’s just a man, isn’t he?” She brought all her persuasive powers to bear as she continued, “Professor, you’ve been helping him build a new life, too. Hermione’s just the reason for wanting that life.” She laid a hand on her professor’s arm. “Clearly he’s serious about it if he’s asking her to marry him. You’ve seen how much he’s changed over the past several months. That’s because of Hermione. They’re happy. Surely that’s a good thing?”
McGonagall blinked and said, her voice weak, “But he’s a teacher. He wouldn’t dare fraternize with a student.”
Ginny grimaced and rolled her shoulders as if shrugging out from under a heavy burden. “She’s of age! And besides, it’s not like he went after her; they were thrown together by this whole play thing! Can you really blame them if they succumbed to the feelings their roles invoked?”
Neville breathed, “Is that why they were always so amazing? They weren’t acting?” He exchanged a stunned look with Parvati, who nodded slowly back at him in wonder.
Ginny said, “Exactly! You see how great they are together? Yes, all that was real. All their acting was reserved for pretending that there wasn’t such a strong bond between them!”
McGonagall shook her head again, and her voice trembled as she said, “I can’t believe it. He lied to me all this time. I thought we were friends, finally, after so many years.”
Ginny turned to the older woman and gripped her hands desperately. “Professor! Did you ever ask him if he was in love with Hermione? Of course not! He didn’t lie. Not really. He simply kept a secret. That’s not the same thing at all! You know perfectly well that he didn’t dare confide in you! The only reason I knew anything was that I figured it out and confronted Hermione, and when I realized how sincere and beautiful their feelings were, I agreed to keep their secret. Never in a million years would I have imagined that he would have outed them in such a public fashion.”
They gazed silently at each other, Ginny’s eyes begging acceptance, and McGonagall’s full of hurt and outrage. Then their connection was broken by Harry sidling up and mumbling, “Um, Ginny? Could I talk to you for a moment?”
Ginny stepped back from her impassioned posture, releasing McGonagall’s hands and turning narrowed eyes on Harry. McGonagall looked up again and gasped, making everyone whirl to look where she was gazing.
Dumbledore was storming back onto the stage, everyone scattering before him. He strode directly up to McGonagall, who was staring at him, face white. Ginny, Harry, Neville, and Parvati shrank away, disappearing behind their Head of House and out of Dumbledore’s line of sight.
Dumbledore’s voice shook with suppressed anger as he said, “He’s blocked the Floo! Of course, I don’t even know if he’s in his quarters, since he can bloody well Apparate anywhere he wants in this sodding castle!”
Behind McGonagall, the Gryffindors exchanged shocked looks at Dumbledore’s speech.
Sucking in a breath through his nose, the headmaster said, “If I go down there and try to get in, no doubt they’ll just disappear again, and I’ll never be able to find them!” He clenched his fists again and growled, “And he doesn’t have any portraits down there either, so I can’t even send a spy in to see if they’re there!”
His words triggered something in Harry, who crept forward and said, “Uh, sir?”
McGonagall spun, and she and Dumbledore glared down at Harry where he nearly cowered before them. The other Gryffindors hastily backed up, leaving him alone to suffer their wrath.
Clearly struggling to control himself, Dumbledore spat, “What, Potter?”
Harry cringed even more, but said, “There’s another way to send a spy into his quarters, sir.” He paused, then said, “Dobby.”
Both professors blinked at him, taken aback by the suggestion. Dumbledore’s scowl gave way to a smile, but the smile was somehow even more terrible than the scowl had been. His voice was a low drawl as he said, “Excellent idea, Mr. Potter. But I’ll do you one better.” His eyes twinkling again, but with malice instead of mirth, he summoned Dobby.
The house-elf appeared amidst the crowd and immediately winced, overwhelmed by the hubbub and the ambient magical energy surrounding him. Bulging eyes finding Dumbledore, Dobby squeaked, “The headmaster called, sir? What can Dobby do to be of service, Headmaster, sir?”
Dumbledore hunkered down to be on Dobby’s level and gripped the elf’s arm. “Dobby, I wish you to take me with you for Side-Along Apparition. Can you do that?”
Dobby’s thin chest puffed forward in pride at the importance of the task. “Certainly, Headmaster! Dobby will take you wherever you like, sir.”
Dumbledore shifted his weight to be more comfortable in his crouch and deftly slid his wand from his pocket, holding it ready. Firming his grip on the elf’s arm, he murmured, “Dobby, take me to Professor Snape’s quarters.”
A startled gasp rose from the many throats around them as Dobby nodded sharply and snapped his fingers, both he and Dumbledore disappearing a heartbeat later, leaving the stunned crowd to gape at the empty spot where they had been.
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Snape and Hermione appeared in his quarters in front of the hearth. Snape released Hermione from his embrace, turning toward the fireplace and immediately casting several complex spells. Hermione stood frozen between the two armchairs, watching him silently and trying to regain control of her senses.
As soon as he was satisfied that the Floo was blocked, Snape turned back to Hermione, eyeing her with his heart in his mouth. The ring had shrunk to fit her finger, so she clearly had accepted his proposal, but she hadn’t spoken yet, and she still looked shell-shocked.
Gently, he took her hands and said, “Hermione? Are you all right?” Worry tensed his muscles, and his heart beat erratically as he waited for her answer.
Hermione sniffed, blinking. Swallowing hard, she took a shaky breath and lifted tear-filled eyes to Snape’s. “Severus?” Her voice was a croak.
Snape urged her to sit in his armchair, and he sank onto the ottoman in front of her, still holding her hands. His right thumb slid up to caress the ring on her finger, and they both looked down at it. Hermione voiced a funny noise that was half-gulp and half-bark of laughter. Snape’s head snapped up to look at her again.
Shaking her head and blinking rapidly, Hermione cleared her throat and murmured, “Is this a dream?”
“No. It’s as real as we are. Hermione, please, answer me.”
Releasing another shaky breath, she said, “I’ll be fine, I guess. It’s all so… overwhelming.” She lifted her left hand from his grasp and gazed at the ring, turning it in the light, watching the gleams and sparks within. Her voice was thick with emotion again as she said, “It’s beautiful.”
Snape leant forward and said, “It had to be perfect. For you. For us. The band within is separate. It’s gold—for you. And the silver around it—well, it’s white gold, but it looks silver—that’s for me. It protects the inner band. Just like I’ll always protect you.” He paused to watch her lips spread in an awed smile before continuing, his words spilling out, tumbling over themselves in his haste to get them out. “And the stone… it’s a garnet. It’s a symbol for love. Passionate love. Unconditional, deep love and devotion.
“It represents loyalty and fidelity. And protection. Crusaders wore them. And they’re lucky. Lucky for love, success, and goals. For our future. Garnets used to be the stone of choice for engagements, before diamonds came into fashion. I didn’t want a diamond. They’re so cold and impersonal. The red suits you, and its fire inside is like the love in my heart, burning for you.” He paused again, grimacing sheepishly at the melodramatic nature of what he had just said, even if it was all true. Trying a different tack, one that wasn’t quite so dramatic, he went on.
“I even looked up Muggle references, and, although it’s ridiculous to pay any attention to astrology, it’s funny that the garnet is associated with not only January and Capricorn, but with Virgo as well.” He trailed off again, locking eyes with Hermione, who was smiling tenderly at him.
“I couldn’t possibly imagine a ring that more completely embodies us.” She reached forward and cupped his cheek, caressing his lips with her thumb. Snape kissed her thumb and lifted his hand to press her palm to his lips as well.
“There’s more.” He brought her hand between them and attempted to tug the ring down her finger. It wouldn’t budge. He could spin it around, but it would not slide down the length of her finger. “The spells are working as well.”
Hermione tilted her head curiously. “What spells?”
“I had standard sizing spells applied, so it will always adjust comfortably to your finger. But I also had a betrothal charm and an anti-theft charm done.”
Hermione frowned in perplexity. “What is a betrothal charm? I’ve never heard of that.”
Snape snorted softly. “The betrothal charm and the anti-theft charm work together. I know I said there was a sizing charm on the rings, but the betrothal charm won’t let it work unless the recipient—you—accepts the proposal. And the anti-theft charm keeps anyone from being able to take the ring from you against your will.” He paused, a shy smile creeping over his face. “I knew your answer as soon as I saw the ring shrink to fit. It wouldn’t have adjusted had you not understood my intent and agreed to it.”
Snape once again lifted her hand and reverently kissed the ring, eyeing her with devotion. Hermione beamed.
“Why did you insist on the betrothal charm? Surely you’d believe me when I accepted?”
Snape grinned mischievously at her and said, “You do realize that you still haven’t said anything? If it weren’t for the ring, I’d still not have your answer.”
Hermione’s eyes widened and her lips parted with a startled gasp. Her hands convulsively gripping his, she leant forward earnestly and said, “Oh, Severus, I’m so sorry! Of course! Nothing could please me more than to share one life with you.”
Just as he had used the song to propose, she used its words to accept, and they exchanged a look of recognition for how important the play would always be to them, having led them to each other. On the heels of her answer, they closed the distance between them and sealed their pledge with a kiss.
When they finally broke away, their foreheads pressed against each other, Hermione gazed at the ring again and said, “You have my answer now, but why did you feel the need to use the betrothal charm in the first place?”
Snape’s voice was low as he said, “It’s proof, Hermione. Proof that we may need in the face of all the naysayers.”
With that, Hermione jerked back, eyes wide as she gasped. “The school! The Ministry! Oh gods…”
Snape nodded grimly even as he rubbed her hands to soothe her. “You needn’t worry about the Ministry, love. Your contract is sound and nothing we’ve done can break it.”
Eyeing him with trepidation, she squeaked, “Are you sure?”
One corner of his mouth quirked in a semblance of a smile and he said, “Yes. I had good reason to hope you would arrange your contract and sign the papers before end of term. You’re of age, and technically done with Hogwarts when your last grade came in. By the time we performed, you were no longer a student at this school, merely a guest until tomorrow, provided you chose to wait for the Hogwarts Express to leave in the morning. You could have left as soon as the Feast was over, but of course, we had to perform. One last obligation to this place, as it were.”
Hermione gazed at him, eagerly accepting his words. “But what about you? And your job?”
Snape snorted. “Hermione, my job is with Fern now. My tenure here ended with the term. Clearly—” and he gestured around at the bare shelves and remaining boxes “—I’m not worried about this position. I’m already done with it.”
“How will we explain to everyone? I can’t believe you did that in front of the entire school and Ministry officials!” She blinked bewilderedly at him and shook her head.
Snape leant forward again and caught her chin between his thumb and forefinger, directing her to look at him. His expression was fierce as he murmured, “I told you long ago that I would rival the bravest Gryffindor around when I staked my claim to the world. I have nothing to hide any longer. I am proud to love you, and even prouder that you somehow love me. The world had better get used to the new Severus Snape, because he’s not going anywhere.”
In the silence after his words, Hermione voiced a muffled hiccupping sob, throwing herself at Snape and enveloping him in a tight embrace, straddling his legs and nearly bowling him over the edge of the ottoman.
That was the sight that greeted them as Dumbledore and Dobby popped into the room by the door.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)