69- Next Step: Adulthood
Chapter 73 of 84
Good_WitchExams are over, and the future is in sight. Snape and Hermione both take steps in their journey toward independence--with each other.
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Author's Note: Dear readers, I hope you haven't fallen victim to a heart attack that I've managed to get this chapter up so quickly after the last one. My muse took me on a whirlwind romp, and this is the result. (Well, that and the fact that I even skipped my class to write instead of wasting time there--I won't do it again, I promise!) Muchos smooches to Ladyofthemasque for mad beta skillz and for being there for me and PoH even in the midst of her holiday and birthday party. *hugs Lotm* And thank you, as always, to you lovely folks who make my day by partaking of this labour of love. Cheers! :)
Chapter 69- Next Step: Adulthood
Hermione got her nap and enjoyed a raucous, late dinner with her mates, celebrating the end of exams. However, when she finally returned to her room after continued silliness and banter in the common room, she decided she deserved a long, hot bath to really relax.
No one should need to come get me for anything, but I better leave the door only Silenced one way. She waved her wand at the door, Silencing it from inside out, but allowing noise to come in, just in case anyone knocked. Heaving a deep sigh, she stripped out of her clothes and padded into the bathroom, turning on the taps full blast and adding her favourite scented bubble bath.
When she eased into the near-scalding water, her low hiss turned into a faint moan of satisfaction. Twisting her hair up and flinging it over the end of the tub, she submerged up to her chin and closed her eyes, letting the week's stress melt away, leaving her with a feeling of pleasant lassitude.
The silence pressed in on her, and her own breathing seemed to echo on the tiles. She could faintly hear Crookshanks washing in the other room. It was bliss. There were no demands on her time, no "very important things" to prepare for. With her body almost floating in the scented water, her mind began to relax as well, floating in a serene nothingness until she dozed.
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Snape was lounging in his armchair, continuing the internal debate he had been waging since the end of the last exam that afternoon. The same thoughts kept spinning in his head, over and over, on an endless loop.
Exams are over. There's nothing to keep you from going to her.
She just finished her N.E.W.T.s! Give her a moment to rest!
But you've been waiting so long now! And you've behaved as she requested. Surely you deserve a reward... You miss her!
You saw her at dinner. She and her friends were all cutting up. She might not even be in her room if they're all still celebrating.
You've been dithering about this for hours now. Surely they're done and ready for some rest by this time.
All right, say she is in her room. How do you know she doesn't have anyone else in there with her?
Even if she does, they needn't know you've arrived. You can hide, you know.
If you Apparate into her bathroom again, you could arrive right when she's in there! I doubt she'll be happy to see you if you appear while she's using the loo.
You've done it every weekend lately: Conceal yourself and then Apparate! You should be a dab hand at it by now.
But what if she gets angry? Last time you went, she didn't even want you there.
Exams. Are. Over! What could she possibly be doing that is so important that she wouldn't welcome a chance to see you? It's not like you've spent time together lately, what with no rehearsals to use as an excuse.
True... What time is it?
Later than the last time you checked. Funny how time does that whole moving on thing...
Ha ha. Well, it is after curfew now...
Indeed. Your chances of encountering problems continue to dwindle.
Snape shoved to his feet and strode to the bathroom, glaring at himself in the mirror. He was having enough trouble fighting his own mind; perhaps a stern glare might help. He stared into his eyes, seesawing between going and staying.
After several more minutes, he voiced an inarticulate growl and raked his hands through his hair, clasping his hands behind his neck. Taking a deep breath, he exhaled forcefully through his nose and cut a determined glance at himself, nodding. Whipping out his wand, he cast his well-practiced concealment charm on himself, watching his image fade in the mirror. Then, crouching and concentrating, he Apparated to the space behind Hermione's armchair.
Still invisible, he quickly peered around the room, noting that it was empty of any presence except her cat, which was sprawled on her bed, washing. Even though he couldn't be seen, Crookshanks paused and looked his way, clearly sensing that Snape had arrived. Twisting and rising, the animal jumped off the bed and trotted over to Snape, sniffing until he found Snape's dangling fingers and butting his head against them with a rusty yowl.
In the bathroom, Hermione woke with a start, sending the water sloshing as Crookshanks's meow jerked her out of her languorous doze. Blinking and yawning, she noticed that the water had cooled considerably. Still not wanting to leave her watery cocoon, she lifted a dripping hand from the bath and picked up her wand, casting a warming charm on the water.
Snape heard the splashing sounds and realized that Hermione must be in the tub. Grinning, he scrubbed the cat affectionately and ended his concealment charm. When he stood, Crookshanks immediately moved to wind around Snape's ankles, shedding ginger hairs on the black fabric. Rolling his eyes, Snape carefully stepped away from the cat and crossed to the bathroom, leaving the indignant beastie to yowl again.
"Crooks, what's wrong? I'm in here, boy." Hermione's voice came from the other side of the unshut door.
Snape slowly pushed the door open more, and Hermione turned her head toward the floor, expecting to see her familiar butting it open. When she saw a familiar black boot instead, she gasped, her eyes snapping up to see Snape gazing at her with a tentative smile and devouring eyes.
His voice was low and entreating as he said, "I do hope I'm not intruding."
Eyes wide with shock, Hermione struggled to sit up, sliding along the slick porcelain and splashing water onto the floor. Gripping the edge of the tub, she steadied herself, her hair dropping into the suds still capping the water and her breasts floating into view.
"Severus! What are you doing here?"
Snape ducked his head, his eyes darting side to side. "I miss you."
It was simple and honest, and Hermione's heart melted, slowing from its speeding pace of surprise. Her whisper tender, she said, "I miss you, too." They locked eyes again, and Snape's faint smile faded into a heated look as they both realized that she was naked.
Hermione's breath hitched, and her eyelids fluttered as Snape stepped closer, the fire in his eyes taking on a near-predatory look. Never breaking his gaze from hers, he flicked his wand at her bedroom door, casting an Imperturbable Charm. Then, his breathing quickening, he began shedding his clothes, leaving them to puddle at his feet while she watched in a sort of daze.
Heat crept up Hermione's chest and face, and it wasn't from the warmed bathwater. A drawing, clutching sensation in her core made her swallow hard, biting back a whimper as Snape undressed.
Toeing his boots and socks off and shrugging out of his shirt, Snape watched Hermione's pupils dilate, and a surge of power swept over him. Stepping out of his trousers, he paused, seeing her gaze orient on his tented boxers. Kicking the pile of clothes to one side, he lowered himself to his knees, leaning forward to slink across the floor to the tub.
Hermione's hands clenched at the lithe play of his muscles as he crawled, his hair swinging forward and shadowing his face. Putting her in mind of a panther, he reached her, slowly closing in and looming over her as his hands gripped the tub outside of hers.
Lips spread in a feral grin, Snape ghosted his nose along her cheek and ear, nudging her curls out of the way so he could breathe, "Is there room enough in there for me, too?"
Her low, shuddering moan was his answer. Pulling back with a triumphant grin, he felt a sizzle of excitement at the lust sparking in her eyes as she subjected him to a stern glare.
Hermione gripped his wrists and pushed, growling, "Up." Blinking in surprise, Snape struggled to his feet, staring down at Hermione. She peered up the length of his body, then focused on his boxers, which were now damp at the tip of his cock. Reaching up, she slid her fingers under the waistband and tugged, drawing them down his hips and freeing his bobbing erection. Snape groaned.
Shoving the pants down his legs, she tapped his knees, and he stepped out of them. Raking her gaze up and down his body, she reflected on how relieved she was that they were no longer shy about being naked with each other. Licking her lips, she twisted onto her knees, lifting her whole torso out of the water, her wet nipples tightening as they cooled in the air. Flicking a teasing glance at Snape, she leant forward and placed a soft kiss right beside the base of his cock, feeling it bounce in reaction, rubbing along her cheek.
Snape's head rocked back, and he sucked in a steadying breath, wanting to bury his fists in her hair and direct her mouth to envelop his cock. He did nothing of the sort, instead clenching his hands into fists at his sides. His breathing unsteady, he looked down again at her delighted expression and said, "Is that how you answer a simple question?"
Hermione wrinkled her nose at him and backed away, pulling the plug from the drain. "Fine. You can get in. Once the water has drained sufficiently."
Snape nodded, his lids heavy with contained desire. "And in the meantime?"
Hermione smirked again and slanted a wicked look up at him. "Perhaps something to keep you occupied?" Snape's lips twitched and she darted forward, wrapping her hand around the base of his cock and laving him from base to tip along the underside.
Snape swore. His legs began trembling, and his head swam. Gods, it had been too long. The sound of the water draining was punctuated by Snape's gasps and sighs as Hermione continued to lick his cock like a popsicle. After what seemed both far too long and not nearly long enough, she released him and sat back, plugging the drain again and gesturing for him to step in.
Snape concentrated on lowering himself into the bath, making sure not to collapse. The water rose around them, but not high enough to slop over the edge. Hermione turned on the taps and added more hot water and bubble bath, as most of her suds had dissolved.
They faced each other, knees drawn up and feet touching. Snape let his eyes close as he exhaled a long sigh of pleasure at the heat enveloping him. His eyes popped open and he choked on a hastily drawn breath when he felt Hermione's toes sliding along his erection. Her giggle earned her a scowl. Hastily plunging his hand into the water, he gripped her ankle, stopping her teasing actions.
Hermione grinned cheekily at him and pulled her foot from his grasp, squirming around to lean back against him. Snape gasped when she wriggled her backside against his cock and balls, deftly wedging herself between his spread knees. Reaching for his hands, she drew them around her and snuggled into his embrace, cooing in satisfaction.
Snape dipped his head and pressed a kiss against her curls, frizzier in the humidity of the bathroom; love and joy surged within him, tightening his chest and throat. Hermione's hands caressed his legs, smoothing through the dark hair. Snape responded by gently trailing his fingers over her belly and sides, every so often slipping around to cup her breasts. His erection was trapped between his belly and her back, pulsing with his heartbeat.
Ducking lower and nudging her head to the side, he kissed her ear, murmuring, "Gods, I've missed you so much. Soon. We can be like this whenever we want soon."
Hermione let out a breathy moan and squirmed against him, sliding her hand over his on her belly. "I've missed this. Being with you. Touching you. You touching me..." Her breath soughed out as she deliberately guided his hand lower, over her mound. At Snape's muffled groan, she said, "Touch me, Severus."
Snape needed no more urging. Wrapping one arm under her breasts and holding her close, he snaked his other hand down, through her slippery lips. Nibbling and biting at her neck, he stroked circles around her clit, making her grind her hips and gasp. Delving further, he dipped his finger into her cunt, marvelling that it was even hotter than the bath, and somehow wetter. His cock throbbed harder, and he wanted nothing more than to lift her up and set her down on it, enveloping himself in her tight heat.
Instead, he continued stroking, rubbing faster and harder as her whimpers and moans grew. Hermione's hand clamped down on his, and she rocked her hips furiously, sloshing the water around them. Her body going rigid with tension, she started babbling, "Severus, gods, yes, oh gods, yes, fuck, yes, please, fuck, oh yes, Severus, fuck, yes!" Head snapping back against his shoulder, she shuddered, holding his hand against her pussy in a death grip. Panting as she came, her keening continued until her body finished its spasms and every muscle relaxed at once, leaving her to wilt limply against Snape. Her hand released his as she breathed deeply in repletion.
Returning to normal pulse and respiration, Hermione gathered her scattered wits and said, "Fuck me, Severus, that felt good."
Snape snorted in amusement and said, "Would that I could, love."
Hermione realized what she had said and giggled. "Mmm, indeed. Soon. Just like you said..." She squirmed forward and turned around, propping herself up on hands and knees, leaning in to kiss him soundly. As Snape leant forward to meet her, she lifted one hand to wrap around his cock and he voiced a groan.
Hermione lilted, "Seems we have a little something that must needs be taken care of."
Snape drew back enough to raise an eyebrow haughtily and growl, "'Little'?"
Hermione laughed aloud and purred, "Hardly." Then, she smirked. "And hard, apparently." Snape snorted again. Hermione reached toward the drain and pulled the plug again. At Snape's quizzical look, she lightly squeezed his cock and murmured, "Trust me."
Snape sucked in a breath and held it for a moment, then released it with a breathy, "Always."
Hermione kissed him as the water drained, until it was low enough to just cover his balls. Replacing the plug, she stood and reached for her shower gel, a smouldering smirk quirking her lips. Snape watched her, his expression both wary and lustful. Dropping to her knees again in the shallow water, she squeezed a large dollop of gel into her palm and set the bottle to one side. Closing her fist and smearing it along her fingers, she leant forward onto the other hand and flashed a wanton grin at Snape before encasing his cock in her slippery, sudsy grip.
Snape's eyelids flew open wide as he cottoned onto her plan, but they fluttered again as his head fell back at the smooth strokes along his erection. His drawn out groan of pleasure echoed off the tiles, making Hermione grin even more.
Pumping her hand from base to tip, she watched his face intently as she jerked him off. His stomach muscles kept tensing and releasing, and his hips rocked of their own accord. Long hisses were interspersed with deep grunts and low groans. Eventually, Snape pried his eyes open to see Hermione's gaze locked on his face. The sizzling connection when their eyes met staggered him with its intimacy, and his balls contracted sharply, forcing a louder moan from his lips.
Hermione felt his cock swell and pulse in her grasp and purred, "Mmm, yes, that's it. I want it. Give it to me, Severus."
Snape gripped the edge of the tub in his fists, eyes rolling back as he came, the creamy liquid mixing with the frothy suds in her hand.
Remembering from previous experience that he would be overly sensitive at this point, Hermione carefully released him, dropping her hand into the water to rinse it.
Snape just lay there, breathing deeply. Swallowing hard, he moistened his dry mouth and rasped, "All yours."
Hermione once again burst out laughing, and Snape grinned, pleased to have made her happy. Lifting his head from the tub edge, he added, "Any time."
Still chuckling, Hermione crawled over him and growled, "I hope so!" Then, closing the distance, she kissed him. While they were snogging languidly, she reached down and began splashing water over his soapy groin. Tentatively touching him, in case he couldn't take it, she backed away and looked in his eyes. "Everything all right?"
Snape's satiated smile made her smirk as he said, "What was the phrase you used before? 'Fucking brilliant' I believe it was?"
Continuing to rinse him, she snorted, shaking her head. "My my, Professor, such language!"
His voice thoughtful, Snape said, "Hmm, I much prefer you washing that with soap than washing my mouth out for foul language."
Dissolving into giggles, Hermione finished rinsing him and pulled the plug again. Struggling to her feet, she reached for a towel and wrapped it around herself, then grabbed another one and offered it to Snape.
Gazing up at her, incredulous, he said, "You expect me to move after that?"
"If you'd rather get cold and pruney, stay there, but I'm already pruney and I think the bed might be more comfortable." Cocking one brow at him, she whirled and flounced out of the bathroom, leaving Snape to grumble as he heaved to his feet.
Hermione buffed herself dry and flung the covers back, dropping the towel and climbing into bed. Snape, his expression aggrieved, appeared in the doorway with the towel wrapped around his waist.
Patting the bed, Hermione said, "There's room enough in here for you, too."
With a snort, Snape crossed to her and lay down beside her, drawing the covers over them and wriggling into a comfortable position with her curled along his side, pillowing her head on his shoulder and draping her arm and leg over him. Wrapping his arm around her back, he idly traced circles on her smooth, scented skin, his unpinned leg bending to tent the covers.
Hermione's murmur was thick with satisfaction as she said, "As 'fucking brilliant' as all that was, this is just as nice."
Snape chuckled and kissed her forehead. "Quite right, my love." He sucked in a slow, deep breath. "So, what is there to catch up on since we last had any time together?" Hermione hummed in thought and he solicitously asked, "Oh, yes, how were your exams?
Hermione, being the swot that she was, actually answered him in detail, as opposed to retorting with a superficial, "Fine." Then again, Snape, swot that he was, was truly interested, and their discussion lasted for quite a while.
Eventually, Hermione wound down and said, "Oh... I've been prattling on about my worries and such, but haven't asked you a thing! I'm sorry, dear heart." She lifted up to press a penitent kiss on his lips before continuing, "How are things with Fern and the house?"
Anxious to fill her in on all the exciting progress made in both arenas, Snape launched into a virtual monologue, pausing only when Hermione saw fit to interject. Of course, he made no mention of his latest pursuit, as the ring was to be a surprise.
Somewhere along the way, Hermione doused the lights, leaving the moonlight streaming through the window the only illumination in the room. Crookshanks settled into a ball at their feet and dozed.
After a lengthy pause, Snape murmured, "Just two weeks until the Feast and the last performance." His heart thumped in excitement at his plan, and he realized he should do his best to solidify plans for after the Feast, particularly if his hopes panned out.
Taking a steadying breath, Snape said, "Hermione..."
When he trailed off, she tilted her head and said, "What is it, love?"
Carefully picking his words, he said, "What... are your plans... for after the Feast is over? I mean, what will you do when you're no longer a student here?"
Her gasp startled him, and when she pushed away from him to prop herself up on one elbow, eyes wide as she looked down at him in the dim light, his gut clenched in alarm.
"I can't believe I forgot to tell you!"
"Tell me what?" Dread coloured his words.
"Today, at lunch! McGonagall took me away for a meeting."
Wary, Snape's brow furrowed. "A meeting? For what? About what?"
Hermione struggled to sit up, the covers shoved down to Snape's waist as she sat cross-legged by his chest, apparently too worked up over the incident to simply lie there.
"I think I've been offered a job."
Blinking in confusion, Snape grimaced. "What?"
"One of the Examination Authority administrators apparently came to the show, and she said something about the Ministry needing to create a new department to deal with this whole new Fine Arts thing going into effect next school year...you know, the whole reason we had this competition to begin with. She said there's a lot of restructuring going on in the Ministry, and what with my contribution to the war, and my marks, and my performance, my name had come up as a suggestion for heading up the new department."
It all tumbled out in a rush, and Snape's expression went from bewildered to surprised to amazed to calculating to pleased. Sitting up as well, he said, "That's wonderful, Hermione!"
She flashed a worried smile at him. "Granted, I don't have all the details yet, but she gave me her contact information. I just couldn't believe she did that to me right before my last exam!" She scowled in remembered annoyance and Snape chuckled.
"Hermione, this is perfect. You can get into something you're uniquely suited for, without having to trudge through all the junior offices and such. Please, promise me you'll contact her right away." He clasped her hands in his and squeezed, his gaze entreating.
Biting her lip, she averted her eyes. "I don't know. I mean, I'm just finishing Hogwarts, and I have no experience with Ministry organizations..."
Snape smirked and drawled, "Dear heart, I've seen the timetables and study schedules you've foisted on your mates. If anyone has the talents needed to organize a department and determine what's necessary for a new curriculum based in Muggle Fine Arts, it's you."
Hermione cut an acid glance at him and he laughed as she said, "Gee, thanks."
Snape caressed her hair and smiled. "You're the one who said I'm arrogant and you're bossy. Use it to your advantage!"
Huffing, Hermione tossed her head. "Fine! I'll contact her. No harm in that, I suppose. It's not like I'll accept anything right away."
With that, Snape sobered. "No. Indeed you sha'n't. When you meet with her, don't let her...or anyone else from the Ministry...flatter or cajole or coerce you into signing a contract straight off. You'll not only do yourself a service but will prove to them that you're a person worth recruiting if you insist on taking their proposed contract with you to examine it and consider your options. Negotiating is a time-honoured business practice, and you should take the time to do it well."
Hermione gazed at him, nodding in all seriousness. "Fair enough."
Snape leant closer, his voice lowering in his urgency. "However, you don't want to dither too long. You'd likely be best off if you manage to arrange a contract before the end of term. That way, it's all set before you leave here." In his head, he added, And nothing that may happen can change it.
Nodding again, she murmured, "I'll owl her tomorrow and set up a meeting." Wrinkling her nose at him, she added, "It's a shame I can't have you there with me to help fend them off so I can work on negotiating. I daresay that of all people at a meeting like that, you'd be the last one to be intimidated."
Snape snorted. "Bring it home and we'll work out some way to go over it. I promise."
"Home? You mean here? Or Spinner's End?"
Snape's breath caught. Whispering, he said, "You thought of Spinner's End?"
Hermione ducked her head with a shy smile. "Well, at the idea of bringing something home to go over with you, I did picture us there." After a beat, she murmured, "I hope that's okay."
Snape's chest and throat tightened, and he lurched forward to wrap her in a fierce embrace, his kiss expressing just how okay it was. His hands sliding up to tangle in her hair, he pulled away, trailing kisses along her cheek to her ear, where he breathed, "I love you, Hermione. My home is yours. Ours."
Hermione hugged him hard and moaned, "I love you, Severus." Then she moved to kiss him again, tugging him down to lie back down on the bed.
Their impassioned kisses led to fevered groping, and Snape grew hard again. His cock pressed against her hip, thrusting every so often. His hand travelled over her body, teasingly making its way to her mound. When he lightly traced a finger along her cleft, she moaned into his mouth.
Dipping further down, he slipped that finger between her pussy lips and groaned at the slick heat he found. Growling with lust, he delved into her cunt, making her arch and cry out. Nuzzling back to her ear, he murmured, "I love your noises... I love how wet you get... I love how hard you make me..."
He reared back, sliding his finger out of her and lifting his hand to his face. Locking glazed eyes with hers, he sucked his glistening flesh deep into his mouth, swirling his tongue around it and gathering every drop of her juices coating him. A deep hum of pleasure rumbled in his chest, and Hermione gasped at the eroticism of it all.
His purr muffled by the finger still in his mouth, he said, "I love how you taste."
Somehow, that still had the power to make her blush. Gamely trying to own that wantonness, she retorted, "You taste pretty good yourself."
Snape's eyes burned with desire, and he exhaled slowly before saying, "You're welcome to a taste any time you like."
Hermione voiced a sultry giggle, casting him a wicked smirk as she reached to stroke his cock again. Snape gasped and moaned. Licking her lips, she said, "What about now?"
Closing his eyes in an attempt to maintain control of himself, he said, "Perhaps I wasn't done sampling yet."
With that, Hermione pushed him onto his back, releasing his cock in favour of straddling him and holding herself up to gaze down at him, her face shadowed by her hair. Thus it was that Snape couldn't see her expression, but could only hear the ragged note of need in her voice as she said, "I think we both deserve a treat."
An inquisitive noise in his throat was his response as she reared up, lifting one knee to move to one side of him. She inched higher, kneeling near his shoulders, and when she paused, Snape could see her biting her lip in uncertainty.
His cock jutted up obscenely, and he watched her gaze flick between his face and his groin. He, too, was distracted by the slick curls so near his face. He could even smell her scent.
That was when it hit him.
Eyes widening in comprehension and eager agreement, he reached over and gripped her hips, pulling her over.
She yelped and fell forward, half across him and angled down his body. Her eyes locked onto his erection bobbing right in front of her, and she froze, still unsure if her spontaneous idea were welcome.
All uncertainty fled when Snape wrapped his hand around her leg and guided her to move her knee. His urgent, "Yes, Hermione," sped her compliance, and she carefully straddled his shoulders, holding her breath as she realized that her legs were spread over him, baring her wet pussy to his face.
Snape sucked in a deep breath, glorying in her heady aroma, then wrapped his arms around her thighs and pulled her down, straining up to drag his tongue along her spread lips.
Her startled squeal quickly turned into a moan of delight as his tongue and lips worked their magic. Head dropping forward, her hair snagged on Snape's twitching cock. Lifting her head again, she felt a surge of lust and repositioned herself so she was supported on both knees and one arm. Gripping the base of his erection in her other hand, she slid her lips over the glistening head and down the shaft of his cock.
Snape's forceful groan of pleasure sent vibrations over her clit where it was covered by his suckling lips. She squealed in turn, making him buck at the sensation on his skin.
Hermione remembered the people in the erotic magazine she had been reading the night Snape had showed up after Dumbledore's betrayal. They had been lying on their sides, but this was what she had been watching while she had so brazenly fucked herself with her makeshift dildo. That was the first time she had experienced the wicked skill of Snape's tongue. Head swimming with delicious sensations, she thought, Fucking brilliant, indeed!
Snape couldn't get enough of her. Licking and sucking, his fingers holding her open for easier access, his groans of enjoyment were punctuated by surprised grunts as Hermione's mouth found wonderfully sensitive spots. Her bobbing head and stroking hand led him to a rhythm, and he found himself rocking his hips, thrusting into her grip as he circled her clit.
Panting, they began to move faster, their moans and gasps growing in intensity. Snape felt like he was about to shatter apart, delirious with pleasure, and his concentration kept fracturing. Head canting back, he voiced a raspy groan, unable to maintain his focus any longer, and came hard, grasping her thighs in a fierce grip as his body undulated beneath hers.
Hermione wanted to grin in triumph that she had broken him first. It was like a sensual battle of wills, each of them determined to get the other one off. Of course, with her lips stretched around his cock, she couldn't actually smile, but as she felt him spurting onto her tongue, she moaned in satisfaction. She continued to stroke him, drawing out his orgasm until his hands clenched and his body twitched in an effort to stop her ministrations.
Gently releasing him, she dragged her lips up to the tip, opening them and letting his come slide back down his length to pool in his coarse hair. Then...oh, yes, then...she grinned.
Snape's panting breaths tickled over her exposed flesh, cooling the wetness. Her throaty chuckle preceded her taunt. "Surely you're not done with your sampling?" She rocked her hips, drawing lewd attention to his unfinished business.
A ragged growl was her only warning before Snape tightened his grip on her thighs, pulling her down and spreading her legs further as he buried his face in her pussy, his nose teasing her cunt as he worked his lips and tongue on her clit.
Her cry of surprise turned into an ululating keen as he ground against her, his hands scrabbling up to squeeze her arse and guide her onto his mouth.
Hermione dropped to her elbows, her head sagging forward to rest her forehead on his tense abdominal muscles. Her hair cascaded around her, hiding her face and muffling her moans of delight.
Snape dragged his tongue back, angling her hips so he could fuck her with his tongue, making her give a hoarse yell. Desperately writhing and working one arm out from under her, he reached above him, her leg slotted against his armpit, and traced his fingers along her cunt. Hermione shuddered violently, and he held her in place with his other arm. Circling her opening, he angled her hips again to suckle her clit.
Hermione's gasps and cries took on a more fevered pitch as Snape's two fingers delved into her dripping cunt. Setting up a rhythm again, he circled her clit with his tongue, grinding against her and fucking her with his fingers. When she started rocking of her own accord, Snape knew he had won.
Thrusting back onto his fingers and nearly blinded by the searing pleasure of his lips locked around her swollen clit, Hermione's voice rose in a litany of, "Oh...oh...oh...oh...OH...OH...OH...OOOH...OOOOOHHH!" Her legs tightened around Snape's head and arm, and her cunt clamped down on his plunging fingers.
Snape revelled in the clutching of her pussy, reminding himself that soon he would feel that decadent squeeze on his cock. Her orgasm heralded a freshet of juices, spilling out to coat his hand and face. Groaning, he dragged his tongue over her dampened flesh, glorying in the taste of her ecstasy.
Hermione's cheek was lying on his belly and her legs were trembling in his grasp as she came down from her dizzying climax. Wearily pushing up onto her hands, she listed to one side, collapsing on her back in a sated sprawl.
Snape's hand lightly caressed her leg where it was bent near his shoulder. His face was still damp with her juices, and he lay there beaming at the ceiling in his success.
The silence stretched on, both of them basking in the afterglow, until Hermione heaved a deep sigh and squirmed, turning her body on the bed so she could lie beside Snape facing the same direction. Snape took her cue and inched back up the bed to her pillows, as they had migrated into the middle expanse of mattress in their enthusiastic endeavours. While she was getting situated, he Summoned his wand and cast a quick cleansing charm on the drying, sticky mess matting the hair of his groin.
Struggling to pull the covers back over them, Hermione curled against Snape's side again, like she had when they were talking earlier. Before she sank back onto his shoulder as her pillow, she stretched up to kiss him, tasting herself on his lips.
Snape's hands came up to caress her hair, tenderly cupping her head as they kissed. When they broke apart, he pressed his forehead to hers and whispered, "I've missed you so."
Hermione squeezed his ribs and murmured, "I've missed you. I'm so glad you surprised me tonight. I wish school were over already, so you wouldn't have to leave again."
His fervent, "Indeed," was muffled by her hair as she cuddled into his embrace. Once again thinking about his plan, he said, "You really like it when I surprise you?"
Hermione smiled. "Well, they've all been so lovely so far..."
Snape snorted softly. "Well, I doubt you'll be surprised now when I remind you that I should return to my quarters soon."
Hermione voiced a petulant whine and burrowed against him, scowling. "I know. But I don't want you to!"
His chuckle rueful, he said, "I don't want to either, my love. But we've already spent half the night together. The last thing I want to do is go back to my lonely bed. But it's risky enough taking this time as it is; we shouldn't fall asleep like this."
Huffing in resignation, Hermione said, "You're right. But you feel so good..."
Snape smiled and said, "So do you." Then, his voice dropped to a velvet purr as he added, "Trust me..."
Hermione chuckled and lifted her head to look at him, her smile turning wistful as she echoed his reply from earlier. "Always."
They exchanged a tender kiss before Hermione sat back, letting Snape sit up and perch on the edge of the bed. With a half-hearted wave of his wand, he Summoned his clothing, gathering it in a crumpled wad. Heaving to his feet with a sigh, he propped his bundle against his hip, looking at Hermione curled up on the bed.
His hair was dishevelled, his face still bore tell-tale traces of her juices, and he was blissfully naked, gazing at her with devotion in his eyes. A lump climbed in Hermione's throat at how much he loved her, and she drank in the sight of him, storing it up to sustain her until they could finally be together with no restrictions.
"Good night, Hermione. Remember what I said about meeting that Ministry woman."
Nodding, she said, "I will. Sweet dreams, dearest."
Snape's lips spread in a slow smile and he inclined his head in farewell before he Disapparated, leaving Hermione to burrow back under her covers, yawning as her exhaustion caught up with her.
***** *****
The next day, Hermione sent an owl to Audrey, requesting a meeting. She wasn't expecting to hear back from her until the following week, which was why she was surprised to get an owl at lunch with a reply. Brows rising, she opened the scroll and read the missive, flicking a glance up at Snape.
Closing the scroll again, Hermione stood and ascended the dais toward the High Table. Snape's brows lowered in wary curiosity, but she merely nodded acknowledgement at him and said, "Good afternoon, Professors," as she approached McGonagall.
McGonagall looked up at her Head Girl with a pleasant expression. "Good afternoon, Miss Granger. What can I do for you?"
Hermione brandished the scroll and said, "I was wondering if I could have permission to leave Hogwarts Monday for a meeting at the Ministry."
Frowning in confusion, McGonagall said, "A meeting? For what?"
Tilting her head meaningfully, Hermione said, "Remember the woman you took me to see? Well, she's asking if I could meet her and some other Ministry representatives Monday to talk about a possible job offer."
Eyes widening in shock, McGonagall said, "A job offer? What kind of job?"
Hermione shrugged, but said, "Something about a new department for the whole Fine Arts in schools thing starting next year. Apparently, since Hogwarts won the competition, and I'm a Muggle-born, I'm a good candidate for it."
McGonagall blinked a few times, processing the news, then she seemed to puff up with pride, beaming at Hermione. Casting a smug glance at Snape, who was pretending only mild interest, she said, "Of course you may go. Make whatever arrangements you need. You may Floo from my office if you like, unless you'd rather Apparate. Would you like an escort?"
Hermione almost didn't manage to stop herself from looking at Snape, and forced herself to close her eyes for a fleeting moment instead. Ducking her head, she searched for the right words. "I do appreciate the offer, Professor, but... don't you think that perhaps... it might come off the wrong way if I brought... well, you, I guess...another adult... I mean, I'm supposed to be an adult now, so I should probably go alone."
McGonagall pursed her lips in thought, then said, "You're right, Miss Granger. I didn't think of it quite that way. You are an adult, and I'm quite sure you can handle yourself." She nodded gravely at Hermione, who smiled back, then grimaced and added, "Just... don't sign anything! Be careful with those Ministry sorts, if you know what I mean."
Hermione grinned, ducking her head again so as not to look at Snape, even though she was sure he must be smirking. "I'll be careful. Thank you, Professor. So, I'll get back to you when I know what time I'll be gone."
McGonagall nodded and smiled. "Do that. And well done, Hermione." She leant forward and favoured Hermione with a proud smile and a broad wink. Hermione laughed and spun, descending the dais on light feet. McGonagall turned to Snape, leaning closer to him over Dumbledore's empty chair, and said, "I'm sure you heard all that, Severus." Snape turned a noncommittal expression on her. "I think Miss Granger is a wonderful choice! I'm sure she'll be hired; and I think she'll do quite well, don't you?"
Snape inclined his head politely and murmured, "No doubt she will; Miss Granger is a credit to Hogwarts and should therefore be a credit to wizarding Britain."
McGonagall blinked, still taken aback by Snape's lack of acid put-downs. Smiling at him, she said, "I don't know that I'll ever get used to you admitting such things."
Snape smirked and drawled, "Well, you won't have to worry about it much longer, Minerva. I plan on being out of here as soon as term is over."
McGonagall's smile faltered. "Oh. So you'll be leaving after the Feast is over? Or will you stay until the students leave the next day?"
Snape fixed his eyes on his plate as his gut clenched with anticipation. "I don't know just yet. I'm getting the house finished up this week, so I can move in right away. I may try and stay until the next day, but I may end up leaving right after the Feast. We'll see."
McGonagall flashed him a wistful smile. "I'm so pleased for you, Severus, but you will be missed."
Snape turned solemn eyes on her, his voice low as he said, "I hope you'll still feel that way when I leave." Rising, he said, "Speaking of... I have some more preparations to make at Spinner's End. Would you mind keeping an ear out for my House again?"
Nodding, she waved her hand. "Go on then. I daresay we can muddle on without you for the afternoon."
Inclining his head, he said, "Thank you, Minerva." With a parting nod, he Disapparated.
In his quarters, he changed into his Muggle clothes and Flooed to Spinner's End, where he concealed himself and Apparated to an alley near a shopping district. He was ready to finish furnishing the house, and he wanted to do a scouting mission for pieces he liked. Hopefully, he could make a list and then take Hermione back to see them and get her input before making the final selections.
***** *****
Hermione sent an owl back to Audrey that afternoon. Later that evening, an owl found her in the common room attempting a game of chess with Ron. He and Snape had continued their game in the library, and Hermione decided that she should learn to play better so she could play with Snape. Quite often, she had gone with Ron to his game with Snape, and he gave explicitly detailed answers on strategy and possible moves and courses of action in response to her queries.
Hermione paused to open the letter, and Ron sat back, lounging as he asked, "Anything interesting?"
Quickly skimming the words, she said, "Just telling me when to be at the Ministry. Looks like I'll be gone Monday."
Ron sat forward again in interest, his lopsided grin showing his pride in his friend's achievements. "Bully for you, 'Mione! That'll be something, eh? Running a whole brand spanking new department all your own?"
Hermione grimaced and demurred, "It's just a meeting, Ron. I don't know anything yet. We'll see what they offer me."
Ron smirked and said, "If they're smart, they'll offer you whatever you want to get you there."
Hermione laughed and rolled her eyes, shaking her head. "I appreciate the support."
He gave a mock bow and they returned to their game. When they were done...Hermione still lost, but Ron assured her that she was getting better...Hermione went to McGonagall's office, hoping to catch her before curfew.
McGonagall was there, grading end-of-term exams. "Miss Granger, what can I do for you?"
Waving the letter, Hermione said, "I just wanted to let you know that my meeting is scheduled for Monday morning. Ten o'clock."
McGonagall smiled and nodded. "Excellent. Shall I meet you here before ten?"
Flashing a grateful smile, Hermione nodded. "That would be lovely, thank you."
Her smile warming, McGonagall said, "Anything I can do to help, Hermione, just tell me, and I'll do it. Your future is important, and you deserve the best."
Hermione, feeling a pang of guilt at keeping her relationship with Snape a secret from her Head of House, ducked her head and said, "Thank you, Professor. I'll not keep you any longer. Good night."
"Good night, dear."
Hermione spun and hastened back to Gryffindor Tower to write a note to Snape to tell him the news. Using the disappearing ink again, she sealed the letter and set it on her desk, so she could send it by owl first thing in the morning.
***** *****
At breakfast, Snape was surprised to see an owl landing by his plate. He recognized the school owl, so the post wasn't from Fern. Hazarding a guess that it was from Hermione, he pocketed it without opening it. Finishing his breakfast quickly, he stepped away from the dais and paused at the staff exit, fishing the letter from his pocket and opening it. Smirking and casting Aperio on the blank page, he read Hermione's news, vanishing the ink as soon as he was done. Casting a glance at the Gryffindor table, he saw her with her mates.
Perfect.
He Disapparated, appearing in her empty room and making a beeline for her desk. Scrawling a note with his proposal in her disappearing ink, he cast Celo on it and sealed the scroll, propping it on her pillow, sure that she would find it when she came back. Crookshanks meowed at him, jumping onto the bed and rolling on his back, entreating a tummy-scrub. Grinning, Snape patted the animal for a moment, then Disapparated back to his quarters.
Later that day, Hermione returned to her room and saw the scroll. Frowning in confusion, she opened it, then smiled as she cast Aperio on it. He must have been up here.
Her eyes widened as she read, a delighted smile spreading her lips.
"Hermione,
I got your letter. Excellent news, my love. Now, I have a proposal for you: After your meeting, why don't you use the public Floo at the Ministry to come to Spinner's End? I've been shopping and setting up house, and I'd appreciate your input on some of the more major items. I've already narrowed down the options, but I'd like your opinion for the final choices. Surely McGonagall won't know how long the meeting should last, so we should be able to steal a little time, right? I'll be sure to be at the house from eleven on, as I expect the meeting to take at least an hour. If you're willing to take this chance, don't do anything. Only respond if you're to tell me no. I do hope to see you tomorrow.
Yours, Severus"
Secreting the letter in her drawer with the rest of her correspondence from Snape, Hermione laughed to herself. I'll just tell McGonagall that I'd like to visit my folks, as it's such an important occasion, and I want to talk things over with them, for guidance. Surely she'll buy it. Feeling a mixture of exhilaration and anxiety about the coming day, she peeked at the photo of her and Snape tucked in her drawer and thought, No letter from me tonight, Severus! Then, with another chuckle, she shoved her sunglasses into her curls...they were the whole reason she had come to her room in the first place...and headed back out to join her friends by the lake.
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It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)