66- Bravi, Bravi, Bravissimi...
Chapter 70 of 84
Good_WitchHermione returns from Spinner's End and preparations for the Ministry performance continue. Finally, the day of reckoning arrives, and the Hogwarts cast pulls out all the stops to give the best performance they can. Will it be good enough? And what unexpected results will such cast unity bring?
ReviewedStandard Disclaimer goes here. I'm just playing with toys that aren't mine, but I'll treat them well, I promise!
Author's Note: Well, if you've peeked at my LJ at all in the past few months, you saw the posts involving my continued preparation for Snapefest and Portus 2008, in DFW. Well... It. Was. EPIC! LOL I had the best vacation ever, and I'm so happy to have met so many lovely people in the fandom and renewed/strengthened ties with those I already had met. My LJ has links to pics from the con and all that fabulousness. And, it also details my wonky work scheduling and plans for fall term. So, you can see just how Real Life has been treating me as I strive to finish this behemoth. Profound gratitude to Ladyofthemasque and Horserider for their help, as always. And thank you to all you lovely folk who are still sticking around and supporting me writing this fic! *ginormous glomping hugs for everyone* Here we are coming to the goal set up back in chapter one: the Ministry performance. Celebrate with me, won't you? :)
Chapter 66- Bravi, Bravi, Bravissimi...
Hermione Apparated into a side alley near the Three Broomsticks. Peering out into the thoroughfare, she heaved a wistful sigh that her idyll with Snape was over again. There were no Hogwarts students visible on the street, so she ducked into the pub, glancing about. Upon her first cursory examination, she didn’t see any of her classmates. Just as she was about to turn around and head back out, she saw movement in a dim corner and she paused, noticing a flash of Gryffindor scarlet. A smile spread her lips as she realized it was Neville and Parvati, seated close together, their heads bent as they paused between lingering kisses to gaze into each other’s eyes.
I see that’s progressing rather nicely! She grinned as she exited the pub, glad that she wasn’t the only one enjoying the bliss of romance.
Heading to Hogwarts, she passed a few students meandering back, taking their time. Waving back at them, brandishing the programme and beaming in response to their greetings, she quickened her pace, then, realizing she needn’t make the trek back, stopped and Disapparated back to the clearing just outside the school gates.
It was there that she startled Ron and Susan where they were leaning against one stone pillar, looking nearly as inseparable as he and Lavender had the year before, although he had clearly improved in technique and skill by now. Blushing hotly at her sheepish apology, they mumbled greetings as she sidled past them and hurried up the slope.
Hermione couldn’t help sniggering at the evidence that spring was definitely in the air!
Once inside, Hermione went straight to Dumbledore’s office, relieved that the gargoyle’s password hadn’t been changed without her knowledge since the last time she had gone up.
Dumbledore stood to greet her as she entered. “Miss Granger, how lovely to see you. And you have something for me, yes?”
Hermione grinned and proffered the programme. “Here you are, sir. I’m sure it’s all fairly self-explanatory once you read it. I’m very much looking forward to seeing the Ministry representative’s faces when they see everything we have that the other schools didn’t.”
Dumbledore chuckled. “Indeed, Miss Granger. I daresay it’s all but a foregone conclusion that we will win the competition—the posters and bio board and programmes are just icing on the cake.” Hermione nodded, beaming. “Thank you for your repeated help in this matter, my dear. Now, run along and get some rest before tomorrow’s big performance.”
Nodding in acquiescence, Hermione retorted, “You too, sir,” before ducking back out onto the spiral staircase leading down to the gargoyle.
**** ****
That evening, the cast members were waffling back and forth between contented relaxation in the wake of their Hogsmeade holiday and excited anticipation over the next day’s performance. It was later that night that a house-elf appeared in each House to distribute the newly-printed programmes to each cast member. Gryffindor’s common room was suddenly alive with a hubbub of pleased reactions.
The poster photo was on the cover, and inside, after the listing of the scenes and songs, the cast list began, complete with the photos from the bio board alongside each short blurb about the actors. Following that, there was a declaration of thanks to all who had helped in the venture, including Flitwick and, to Hermione’s surprise, the Grangers.
Hermione gazed at Snape’s photo, missing him again. Considering that Dumbledore was the one who must have written the blurbs about everyone, she wondered at the information included in his description.
“The Phantom, played by Severus Snape. Professor Snape, long time Potions Master par excellence at Hogwarts, gives his debut performance onstage, making good use of the acting skills honed while working for the Order of the Phoenix inside enemy lines during the war with the Dark Lord. His dedication to the cast and its success has led them to this outstanding performance. Hogwarts will be sad to see him end his tenure at the end of term, and wishes him the best in his future endeavours.”
Staring at the words in consternation, Hermione thought, Is that some sort of subtle way of apologizing for what he did to Severus? Praise him in print and out his resignation with purported wishes of goodwill? Why can’t the old man just admit he was wrong and say he’s sorry?
Glancing up at the others admiring the programmes, Hermione quietly sidled away to her room without them noticing. As she prepared for bed, she thought, Oh, how I wish I could just sit those two down and make them work this out! Stubborn men…
**** ****
Friday seemed to alternately zoom past and creep by, depending on how each cast member was feeling at the moment about the impending performance. Unlike the parents’ night dress rehearsal, those coming to the performance were not joining the cast for dinner beforehand, so the Hall was rather empty of people, yet filled with the palpable charge of anticipation from the cast members sitting at the long tables pretending to eat.
Nerves made everyone’s stomachs fluttery, and while a few managed to eat a little bit, very little food was actually ingested at the early dinner. Perhaps that was all to the good, as it meant there would be less for anyone to possibly take sick from if they got too nervous.
When Dumbledore stood to shoo them out and transform the Hall, they all but bolted, racing past the bio board and into the room set aside for them, which was separate from the lounge the Ministry and other audience members would be using. Judicious peeks into the corridor showed McGonagall escorting Ministry officials to the lounge, and family members who had come to the dress rehearsal making their way to the room again on their own.
At one point, they were startled by Dobby suddenly appearing in the room, his proud smile so wide that it looked as if his head were about to split in half horizontally. Harry strode over to him and said, “Hey, Dobby, what’s got you so excited?”
Dobby thrust out his thin chest and said, “Headmaster has given Dobby a very important job! Dobby is to hand out the programmes to everyone as they enter the Great Hall. Dobby gets to help!”
Harry grinned and clapped the elf on the shoulder. “That’s great, Dobby. It’s very important that all of the Ministry folk see those programmes. Good for you.”
Dobby heaved a rapturous sigh and bobbed his head. “Dobby must go make sure everything is ready, Harry Potter, sir.” With another jerky bow, he disappeared.
It was when Neville started running through his costume charms again that Snape Apparated into the room, making those nearest him jump in surprise. Nodding at them in acknowledgement, he immediately crossed to Hermione and said, “Miss Granger, it’s time to get ready.”
Hermione jumped to her feet and briskly retorted, “Yes, sir.” Gripping Snape’s proffered arm, she flicked a glance of farewell toward her friends as Snape Disapparated.
In Snape’s quarters, once she had retrieved the hair products and taken her place behind Snape, Hermione began brushing his hair and said, “So, have you read the programme yet?”
He shook his head. “Why?”
Hermione bit her lip and said, “I thought it was interesting. Perhaps you should read it now, rather than waiting till closer to show time.”
Eyes narrowed, Snape turned to look at her, then summoned a house-elf. When the elf appeared, he said, “Bring me a copy of the programme for tonight’s performance.” The elf bowed and quickly disappeared, only to reappear almost immediately, brandishing the programme. Snape inclined his head graciously. “Thank you.” With a nod, the elf disappeared again, leaving Snape to scowl at the item in question.
His tone suspicious, he said, “Just what am I looking for?”
Hermione continued smoothing the pomade. “Read the bios.”
Opening to the cast list and the accompanying paragraphs and photos, he read the blurb by his picture. Hermione felt his sharp intake of breath and the sudden tension in his shoulders as he held it for a long moment before letting it burst from him.
Whirling to glare accusingly at Hermione, Snape snarled, “Who wrote this?”
Hermione gazed at him coolly and said, “I’m not certain, but I think it must have been Dumbledore.” After a beat, she added, “Perhaps you should ask him.”
Snape glared at her balefully. “How dare he write about my private life?”
Hermione sighed and said, “The only thing in there that isn’t public knowledge yet is that you’re leaving, although some people, my parents and House-mates included, already know that. Look at what he did say—all very salutary, and he’s even expressing regret that you’re leaving. Don’t you think this might be his way of apologizing for what he did?”
Snape spun away from her, slamming back into the chair as he stared heatedly at the paragraph. “If we have to ask, it’s not good enough.” At the sound of Hermione’s aggrieved sigh, he added, “After what he did, I deserve a real apology. Not some subtle-possibly-maybe-that’s-what-it’s-meant-to-be-attempt. He would have to do something monumental and beyond question to even try to regain my trust.”
Hermione heard the implacable bite in his voice and gave up. Having come to know him so well by now, she realized that there was no swaying him from his position. I guess I should just be glad that he and Harry managed a truce, and quit while I’m ahead.
Not bothering to reply again, she returned to her task of doing his hair. He stewed, and the rest of their time in his quarters was quite silent. Finally, as she finished, she patted his shoulders and said, “Ready.”
He shoved to his feet, still scowling. When he turned to look at Hermione, she said, “Severus, you shouldn’t be brooding like this. The final performance is upon us, and you need to concentrate on it alone. Worry about Dumbledore later, all right?”
Snape snorted, but inclined his head in a sharp acknowledgement. Proffering his arm, he muttered, “Shall we?” Hermione slipped her hand through the crook of his arm and they Disapparated.
Arriving in the room where the rest of the cast was, they both couldn’t help but smirk at the tangible excitement around them. Only a moment after they appeared, Dumbledore poked his head in the door and announced, “Come along, everyone! The guests have arrived, and we must get ready in the theatre.” Beaming at them, he retreated, throwing the door open wide for them to pour out after him.
As they passed the guest lounge, they heard the murmur of conversation, which made them exchange nervous glances and quicken their pace. The Hall was already transformed, and they hurried into the wings, rubbing sweaty palms on their robes.
“I shall retrieve our guests momentarily, so keep quiet. It’s not long till curtain...” With an encouraging grin, Dumbledore disappeared, leaving the cast to quietly cast their first costume spells, preparing for the opening scene.
Hermione was still standing near Snape when Luna meandered up to him, holding the programme. Thus it was that she heard the girl’s dreamy voice murmuring, “Professor Snape, it says here that you’ll be leaving us. Is that true?”
Snape, blinking at her, taken aback, cleared his throat before whispering, “Well, yes, it is. Why?”
She made a moue of disappointment and said, “That’s just a shame. I was hoping to have you for Advanced Potions next year. I thought that must be the year we would finally address the uses of nargles for ingredients. I was rather let down that it wasn’t already in our textbook. Ah well, I do hope the headmaster will find another teacher of your calibre, sir.” With that, she flashed him a lopsided smile before wandering away. Snape stared after her, completely gobsmacked.
Hermione fought to suppress a giggle at his blank look of surprise, but she was pleased that dear old Luna had served a dual purpose: dredging him from his sulk over the headmaster’s revelation and reminding him that he was appreciated and would be missed.
Out in the house, the sound of the audience entering drew everyone’s attention. The cast froze, then, after a beat, seemed to take a deep breath as one. After a few moments, Ginny turned to Snape and nodded toward the house, tilting her head and casting a meaningful look at him.
Snape, snorting and nodding, Apparated to Box Five to peek out at the crowd. Ministry officials filled the best seats in the front centre rows, just behind the row of mirrors. Snape could tell that the mirrors weren’t activated yet. Gazing out over the audience, he saw the Grangers. Instantly, he drew back, even though he was hidden in the shadows of the Box and there was no way they could see him. An uncomfortable clench in his gut reminded him of the debacle with Mrs. Granger, but then he comforted himself that the issue was resolved, according to Hermione. Taking one last look around, he noticed that Dumbledore was activating the mirror connection, and he could see both Madame Maxime and Headmaster Bosek with their students within the mirrors. He Apparated back into the wing and beckoned for everyone to come closer.
Ginny and Hermione had been waiting for his return, and they led the rush toward him. Waving his wand at the curtain, he cast Silencio on it before murmuring, “The mirrors are connected, and the Ministry is there. I saw your parents as well, Miss Granger.” He nodded to her, and she nodded back. “It’s almost time. The headmaster will be dousing the lights and opening the curtain soon, so get ready.”
Every face showed complete attention, and the determined nods and flashed smiles in response to his statement gave him a fleeting tingle of warmth that these people, who had avoided, reviled, and feared him so recently and for so long, were united with him in purpose and spirit. A faint smile quirked his lips as he retreated to Box Five to await his cue.
Dumbledore appeared backstage, gesturing broadly that he was about to begin, beaming at them before disappearing under a concealment charm. A beat later, the curtain opened, and with the crack of the gavel echoing through the theatre, the performance began.
If the excitement about performing had been high the previous week, it was still no match for the fierce exhilaration evidenced in the faces of the cast. The first time they had performed for an audience, they were nervous and unsure of the effectiveness of their acting. But after the resounding success of that show, and knowing what they were up against with the other schools, they knew they had done well, and they were prepared to show it to the Ministry.
From his vantage point in Box Five, Snape could see the attentive faces of the Ministry officials, gazing in wonder at the chandelier as it floated from the stage to hover far above them. Some women were clearly enraptured, their hands clasped at their chins in a beatific attitude. That boded all to the good, as far as he was concerned.
After the scenery dropped and Pansy flounced offstage in a snit, Draco trailed after her, and his contemptuous comment over his shoulder of “Amateurs” set the audience laughing. Snape smirked in satisfaction and Apparated to the wing where Pansy was hanging on Draco’s arm, beaming at him as he grinned at the audience’s reaction. They caught sight of Snape and froze for a moment, their expressions faltering until they saw Snape’s answering grin and nod of approval. Then they beamed at him, and when Snape ducked down to Draco’s ear and whispered, “Three points each to Slytherin. Well done,” they exchanged a triumphant glance and nodded back, mouthing their thanks.
By then, Hermione was about to sing, and he quickly Apparated back to Box Five to watch her. She was radiant, and his chest tightened with pride and love for the young woman who had crept into his heart. At the end of her song, the audience erupted into stormy applause, and he made note of the Ministry officials’ amazed expressions. There was one who stopped clapping long enough to scribble notes on a small scroll, eyes darting between the parchment and the stage, clearly more interested in the performance than in writing. Again, Snape took that as a good sign.
It was almost time for the mirror scene, and he wished he didn’t have to leave to perform, so he could stay and watch the audience for the entirety of the play, but he knew he had to go. He Apparated behind the mirror on the stage just as Harry bounded off, listening to the music changing and swelling with his impending arrival. Just like before, what felt like molten fire raced over him, singing through his veins, bolstering the vibrant tones that surfaced and burst forth as he began his song.
Energy flowed through him; when the mirror vanished, so he could reach out and take Hermione’s hand through the smoke and light, the charge jolted between them, making their connection sizzle. Their eyes met, and in the darkness of the wing as the set changed, they exchanged smiles of joy and love. By the time they reached the lair, their personal connection had amped up their onstage connection, and they were absolutely riveting. Even the cast members in the wings were once again watching in awe.
Ginny, gazing at the pair and feeling a touch of envy at the intensity of their relationship, wondered if she and Harry, as much as she loved him, would ever have the same kind of fiery, passionate, soul-deep link she could see in Snape and Hermione that was so beautifully expressed during “Music of the Night.”
Onstage, the mannequin lunged through the mirror, and Hermione collapsed, falling into Snape’s cradling embrace. The solicitous tenderness as he carried her to the boat and gently released her made lumps climb in the throats of several of the watching women.
As the scene changed, the audience burst into applause, sending a triumphant smile to spread every cast member’s lips. Then, when Hermione crept over to Snape at the organ and snatched the mask away, those smiles vanished at Snape’s roar of fury as he spun around and launched himself after Hermione’s retreating form.
The startled tension almost hummed in the house as his rage turned to despair in “Stranger Than You Dreamt It.” Real tears sparkled on Hermione’s cheeks, making the fear even more immediate to those watching. When Snape and Hermione exited into the wing, they Apparated into the space under the trap door, ready to emerge among Buquet and the dancers. In the dim light, Snape searched her face as he gently wiped the tears away, his touch apologetic. The twinge of remorse eased when he felt her smile and heard her faint whisper, “I’m fine, dearest. You’re amazing.”
She gazed up at him with a tender smile and nodded encouragingly. He inclined his head in return before opening the trap door and leading her up and offstage, keeping her firmly wrapped in his caped embrace. In the wing, he bent his head to murmur in her ear.
“Would you like to watch the next scene? We could go up to Box Five.”
Hermione’s eyes widened and lit up like a child’s on Christmas morning. Then, she bit her lip, clearly denying herself the treat. Brow furrowing, her eyes darted between his and the stage, dithering.
Snape leant close again and said, “It’s a long enough scene that you can watch and I’ll have you back in plenty of time for the next one.”
Hermione sucked in a breath and held it for a moment in indecision. Then, letting it explode from her, she swallowed and set her lips, whispering, “Yes, let’s.”
Snape suppressed a grin and firmed his grip, Disapparating. He made sure they were well back from the seats, securely draped in shadows. Onstage, Neville was finishing his first part in “Notes” and Ron burst into the scene. Glancing at Hermione, Snape saw her beaming, her hands clasped in delight as she watched her friends’ engaging performance.
Pleased to have been able to offer her this little treat, Snape merely sat back and watched, his eyes travelling between the show and her rapt face. Then, as the scene was about to reach its culmination, he squeezed her arm, getting her attention. She blinked at him, nodding as she prepared herself for the Apparition.
Tucked into a corner of the wing, Snape released Hermione and cast Sonorus, saying, “So, it is to be war between us! If these demands are not met, a disaster beyond your imagination will occur!”
The final note in response held perfectly onstage, and Snape ended the spell, smirking in pride when the audience burst into applause once again as the sets shifted for the next scene.
The audience murmured with amusement as the Il Muto scene began, but later, when Pansy croaked and Snape let loose with diabolical laughter, the chandelier rocked and jingled, causing a wave of audible unease in the audience members seated under it. The resulting tension remained even after Pansy left the stage in tears and the ballet began. Snape meticulously flitted about to cast menacing shadows, speeding up with the music. When Terry had secured himself to the cable and dropped from the catwalk like a stone, Snape held his breath for a beat, listening to the shrieks from the house as well as the screams from the ballet girls onstage. Chaos ensued, and Snape Apparated again to Box Five to watch the pandemonium until the scene shifted to the roof for Harry and Hermione to do “All I Ask of You.”
Remembering how immersed he had felt in rehearsals when he had actually remained hidden behind the statue during the scene, he crouched down and Apparated to his hiding spot, allowing himself to be drawn into the Phantom’s betrayed anguish.
It worked.
By the time Harry and Hermione departed, and Snape emerged from behind the statue, the contrast between the sweetness and light of “All I Ask of You” and Snape’s destroyed incredulity sent the audience into a spate of shocked gasps.
Hermione, watching from the wing, had to consciously keep control of herself and the gut-wrenching fear that swept over her as she saw Snape collapsing to the stage like he had in her room after Dumbledore had betrayed him. To see him, limbs loose and voice weak, sagging like a marionette whose strings had been snapped, cut through her like a knife.
Then, when she and Harry sang their portion from the wing, and she watched Snape writhing in despair, wracked with pain and growing rage, she braced herself for the blazing fury that was surfacing as he climbed the statue and rode it to the proscenium while the set changed. Taking her place onstage to the accompaniment of his maniacal laughter, she furtively sucked in a deep breath as the chandelier plummeted toward her in response to Snape’s echoing bellow.
More shrieks sounded in the house as the chandelier crashed, plunging the theatre into darkness. A deafening beat of silence ended the tumult of music and shattering crystal, followed by enthusiastic applause as the lights in the house began to rise.
In the wings, the cast exchanged excited glances, grins of triumph on their faces. Snape once again Apparated to Box Five to watch the Ministry officials. The one scribbling notes was writing feverishly, while a few others hovered over him and seemed to be making points to record. Their stunned expressions made Snape smirk in satisfaction, as did the grim expressions on the faces of both Headmaster Bosek and Madame Maxime within the mirrors. The officials clustered about the scribe were flipping through the programmes and gesturing toward the corridor, where the bio board stood by the doors. Emphatic nods and animated gestures gave Snape a thrill that Hogwarts had managed to impress the Ministry already, and they still had the rest of the show to go. Gripping his hands into tight fists to stay outwardly calm, be Apparated back to the wing, where he quickly beckoned to the cast members who were visible nearby.
Hermione, Ginny, Harry, Neville, Parvati, Terry, Luna, and Seamus hurried over to him. Snape’s eyes were glowing with exultation as he said, “The Ministry looks overwhelmed indeed, and they’re quite excited about the board outside and the programmes.” He paused to nod to Hermione, one corner of his lips quirking up smugly as he added, “Oh, and Bosek and Maxime seem rather sullen as well.” A faint snort surfaced, and his eyes gleamed now with mischief, making the students goggle at him. “No doubt they’ve realized they don’t stand a chance against what we’ve brought to the table. Hogwarts will win this competition… provided no one messes up in the second act.” One eyebrow cocked up in challenge, and the cast blinked at each other, stiffening their resolve.
Harry locked a determined gaze with Snape and nodded slowly. “We’ll not let you down, Professor.”
Snape twitched, not expecting such a personal response from Harry, even though they had laid down arms. Eyes widening in bewilderment, Snape murmured, “Me? This isn’t about me…”
At that, the assembled students voiced snorts of disdain and exchanged wry looks. Ginny favoured Snape with a gaze of mixed exasperation and amusement. Harry crossed his arms and tilted his head to eye Snape with a lopsided smirk. Neville and Parvati chuckled to each other, Parvati hanging on Neville’s arm, then Neville cleared his throat.
Affecting nonchalance, Neville peered around and said, “All due respect, Professor, but who else brought us up to this level? We’ve already told you, sir, we wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for you. Even the programme says so.”
Luna nodded vaguely. “Yes, I read that.”
Snape drew back, taken aback by the murmurs of agreement rippling through the group. Catching Hermione’s gaze, he saw her eyes dancing with suppressed joy at how the others were giving him so much credit. He stared at them mutely, unable to formulate a response, and they flashed more amused grins at him before they dispersed to spread the news he had brought.
Hermione lingered long enough to flash an impish grin at him, winking at his befuddlement. She followed the others to share the good news, and Snape simply stood there, contrasting cascades of hot and cold washing over him as he tried to come to terms with the growing acceptance he was experiencing. Soon, Dumbledore appeared, gesturing for the cast to get ready, as the music was about to begin for the second act.
Everyone hastened to cast their spells for the Masquerade, and Snape came back to himself with a jolt, following suit and focusing on the performance again.
When the curtain opened, revealing the opulent masquerade set, pleased cries rose from the audience, ushering in the cast’s song. Riding on the high of confidence, everyone danced and sang flawlessly, building to Snape’s appearance, vivid in crimson, dominating the spectacle as the smoke from his Apparition cleared.
Gasps from the audience whooshed up when Snape yanked the chain from Hermione’s neck and disappeared again in a burst of smoke. He resumed his place in Box Five to watch again until his next part. Secreting himself more securely in the shadows, he cast Sonorus to recite his portion of the second “Notes” scene.
His throat tightened at the misery in Hermione’s voice when she began begging not to be the Phantom’s bait. Ye gods, she’s talented. He marvelled anew, even after she ran offstage and the scene progressed to the Don Juan rehearsal. Watching the rehearsal morph into the set for “Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again,” he felt a surge of anticipation, knowing just how magnificent she was in that song.
Her voice blended perfectly with the sorrowful music, and he had to tear his eyes away from her to see the rapt faces in the audience. Pride swelled within him again, and he decided to Apparate to his spot behind the tomb now and just listen, rather than be mesmerized by listening and watching and have to drag himself away for his cue.
Hiding behind the tomb, he closed his eyes and let her voice envelop him, creating the need to lure her nearer. Buoyed by that sensation, he climbed atop the tomb to the sound of applause at the end of her song and sang his coaxing lines as gently and winningly as possible. Peering down at Hermione, he locked gazes with her, her eyes wide and enraptured, sending a jolt of power through him as he continued to coax her closer.
Thus it was that when Harry appeared and broke their entranced connection, Snape’s flare of irritation lent even more realism to his taunts as he shot fireballs at Harry from the pike. Faintly, he heard more gasps and startled cries in the house, but they were nothing like the shocked oaths and screams that burst forth in reaction to his final outraged roar, complete with the blanket of fire and the blaze of light as he Disapparated.
He peeked out from Box Five as the next scene progressed, seeing the audience shaking off the thrall of the previous scene. Popping about to different spots, he taunted the actors onstage, grinning smugly when the audience jumped in shock at Seamus firing the gun. Then, he refocused, knowing that they were almost to “The Point of No Return.”
Apparating within the curtained bed, he spared a nod for Draco before concentrating on Dean’s voice giving him his cue. Then, joining Hermione onstage, he let himself go, drowning in the seductive call of “The Point of No Return.”
The sensual charge arcing between Snape and Hermione quickened pulses and made mouths go dry throughout the theatre. Breathing became more erratic and shallow as the power of their sexual energy sucked everyone else into its web. The arousal and passion built until everyone seemed to freeze at the end of their song, as the realization that the Phantom had Christine in his clutches filtered over the rest of those watching.
The contrast was therefore even more striking when Snape launched into his wistful rendition of “All I Ask of You,” pressing the ring onto Hermione’s finger before she pushed his mask over his head, sending the theatre into a rash of stunned and horrified shrieks at his deformed face. Gripping Hermione in a fierce embrace, he Disapparated, leaving the rest of the cast to erupt in chaos.
Under the stage, he couldn’t help himself, and he backed Hermione against the wall, kissing her savagely, pressing his growing erection against her belly. She gasped, a faint moan bubbling up with her exhalation. Above them, the scene was ending, and Snape backed away, keeping a tight hold on her arm to Apparate them to the boat for the transition scene.
As he poled the boat across the stage, he noticed Hermione’s eyes were glassier than usual as she wrestled with her instant, visceral reaction to his physical domination moments before. It was fortunate that they had time hidden in the wing during the scene with Raoul and Mme. Giry to get a grip on their arousal before emerging onstage again for their tense exchange in the Phantom’s lair.
The crackling silence between them when Hermione pushed Snape away singing, “It’s in your soul that the true distortion lies,” weighed heavily on everyone in the house, seeming to loom over them until Harry climbed up from within the trap door and broke their tableau.
Even as Snape pretended accommodation, inviting Harry into the lair, the edge in his voice boded no good for the Phantom’s rival. Thus it was that, while the audience was surprised by the Punjab lasso capturing Harry, it somehow managed to help them relax from their anticipatory tension, wondering what horrifying thing the Phantom would do next.
That momentary relaxation didn’t last long, as the blending voices of the love triangle built to a fever pitch, culminating in Hermione’s pleading voice saying, “I gave my mind blindly.”
Another beat of electric silence followed, drawing out the anticipation, in which Snape’s harsh growl of, “You try my patience—make your choice!” grated on frayed nerves.
Tears once again shining on her cheeks, Hermione took measured steps across the stage toward Snape, her voice soft with pity as she locked eyes with him, singing, “Pitiful creature of darkness… What kind of life have you known…? God give me courage to show you you are not alone…”
Snape’s heart was thundering in his chest as she drew closer. His breathing went shallow and heat washed over him, including suspicious moisture prickling at his eyelids. But before he could do anything about it, Hermione was there, reaching up to guide his lips to hers as she pressed her body along his and kissed him deeply.
The roaring in his ears was made up of his own blood pounding through his veins, astonished gasps in the audience, and the rising swell of music around them. For a fleeting moment, he froze in uncertainty, then all but collapsed into embracing her… only to realize he couldn’t take what she was offering. His hands snapped away from her, shaking with effort and devastation as he pulled away from her lingering kiss.
Turning dazed eyes on Harry suspended in the noose, Snape staggered over and snapped his fingers to release it from its mooring. Hermione rushed to Harry’s side as he dropped to his knees, and Snape lurched back to the throne, dropping into it in an ungainly sprawl as the rest of the cast sang their parts offstage in pursuit of the Phantom.
Snape’s voice was ragged as he shooed Harry and Hermione away, throwing himself against the portcullis as he cried, “Go now and leave me!” Hands gripping the bars, shoulders heaving as he hung his head in an agony of despair, his breathing echoed in the theatre like painful, wracking sobs.
Wrenching himself away from the portcullis, he flung himself downstage again, collapsing with his hands tearing at his hair, cradling his head as he tried to deny what had just happened. When the music box began to play, he whipped around, crawling to it by the throne and picking up the mask lying beside it. Voice brittle and mocking, he rocked back and forth on his knees, in a parody of comfort as he sang.
Hermione crept back onstage, and Snape’s head snapped toward her, his hideous face lighting up with hope as he croaked, “Christine, I love you…”
Grimacing, Hermione shook her head and gently put the ring in Snape’s hand, curling his fingers around it before whirling and hurrying offstage again, leaving Snape to wilt in rejection. As Harry and Hermione appeared behind the portcullis, poling the boat away, reprising “All I Ask of You,” Snape heaved to his feet and stumbled to the bars, plastering himself against them in a perfect image of a broken heart.
His voice filled the theatre with its final, defiant attempt at its former vibrancy, even as his utter devastation tugged every heartstring as he sang, “You alone can make my song take flight—it’s over now, the music of the night…”
Glancing up at the descending mob, he threw himself back to the throne, covering himself with the cloak. Ginny crawled under the portcullis and darted to the throne, yanking the cloak away, only to see the seat empty but for the mask. She picked it up, gazing at it in wonder as she reflected the last beam of light around the theatre before all went dark and the music ended.
What sounded like one huge sigh from hundreds of throats swept through the house, ushering in a rising tide of applause.
The lights came back up and the curtain opened for the curtain call. In the house, scores of people were already on their feet, clapping wildly. As the cast streamed out to take their bows, more people stood, cheering. The cast beamed in supreme satisfaction, confident that they had delivered a performance to rival any other.
The applause crescendoed as Harry emerged onstage, only to surge again when Hermione followed. But, the stunned faltering when Snape Apparated to centre stage, immediately followed by a veritable roar of renewed enthusiasm, made every cast member grin even more. Dumbledore had ended his concealment charm and was off to one side in the house, gazing over his charges with pride.
After taking a full-cast bow, Snape and Hermione exchanged a glance and stepped forward to gesture to Dumbledore. The headmaster humbly inclined his head, pressing a hand to his chest in gratitude before gesturing back to the cast.
Before the cast could complete their curtain call, a Ministry official was scurrying up to the stage. The applause abated when he strode to the centre downstage, in front of the cast, to make his announcement.
“Once again, on behalf of the Ministry of Magic’s Department of International Magical Relations, I would like to offer my most sincere congratulations to Hogwarts for giving such a spectacular performance. We knew, when Beauxbatons opened the competition with their lovely performance, that we were in for a treat. Durmstrang certainly kept the ball rolling. Now that the final performance is complete, we would like to thank all of you, from each competing school, for exceeding all expectations and proving that wizardkind can indeed compete with Muggles in the field of fine arts. Now that all of our judges have experienced such amazing responses to the challenge set forth in the competition, we shall convene to decide the winner. However, let me reiterate that everyone who participated in these ventures is a winner in our eyes, and you should all be proud of yourselves, as we are all quite proud of you. Now, we shall be announcing the winner—“
He was cut off by a loud cough from another official who was jogging up to join him onstage. The other man nodded apologetically at the curious audience and cast, then leant forward and cupped his hand around his mouth as he whispered urgently in the surprised man’s ear. Blinking rapidly, his brows rising, the first official drew back and glanced out at the rest of the judges before nodding slowly at the man who had rushed up to him.
“Very well then… It seems that we shall be announcing the winner much sooner than originally thought. Expect to hear from the Ministry some time tomorrow.” His voice betrayed his wonder at such a quick turnaround, but he shook it off and forged ahead in his task. The other man furtively scampered back to his seat as the audience murmured in surprise at the announcement.
Onstage, the cast exchanged excited looks of anticipation. All along the line, they squeezed each other’s hands in congratulations as they waited for the Ministry man to finish so they could take their final bow and disperse.
Clearing his throat, the official went on, “As I was saying, this Tri-wizard competition has turned out better than we could have imagined, and we would like to thank you for your dedication and hard work. Well done, all of you.” He spun to bow to the cast, leading the renewed applause as he descended the stage.
With that, the cast bowed once more and then split to file into the wings. Snape stepped closer to Hermione, wrapped one arm around her from behind, and Disapparated. The audience uttered startled cries, turning to gaze about the theatre in search of them.
In Box Five, Snape and Hermione peered out at the Ministry officials, who finally stopped clapping and gathered about the note-taker, talking over each other in excitement, all trying to get him to write their impressions down first. While he waved his hand at them and scribbled feverishly, Snape directed Hermione’s gaze to the mirrors, where the other schools were still visible.
Dumbledore approached the mirrors, addressing Bosek and Maxime before making ready to end the connection. Madame Maxime’s expression was one of frosty hauteur, and Headmaster Bosek was noticeably scowling. Behind them, their students could be seen either glaring glumly at the now empty stage in a clear sulk or babbling animatedly with their mates, apparently as impressed with the performance as the rest of the audience.
Hermione bit her lips to suppress the euphoric giggle that wanted to escape, seeing the disgruntled looks on several faces. Spinning to beam giddily at Snape, she let loose her delighted chuckle.
Snape locked eyes with her, overcome with love at her infectious smile and candid joy. Rashly, he darted forward and pinned her with a kiss.
Taken aback, Hermione fell backwards, even deeper into the shadows, her hands lifting to cup his face as she responded eagerly after a fleeting moment’s hesitation.
Their kiss was long and deep, and they had to consciously drag themselves back to reality when they heard the buzz of conversations fading as the audience left the house. Breaking apart and blinking dazedly at each other, they realized their mistake. Quickly smoothing hair and wiping faces, they straightened their clothes and then Snape Apparated them to the wing.
As soon as they appeared, McGonagall crowed, “There you are! Where have you been? We’ve been waiting for you.”
Snape manufactured a smirk and said, “We popped up to Box Five. From there we could see the Ministry’s reactions and the mirrors…”
By now, the rest of the cast had surged over, curious. Hermione picked up the end of his statement and continued before he could. “Madame Maxime and Headmaster Bosek both looked rather upset. Some of the students did too, but not all of them.” Her grin widened and she shrugged.
Their news seemed to set off a storm of speculation in the group. At least it served to take the focus off why they had been gone so long. Dumbledore finally joined the throng, grinning at everyone as he clapped shoulders or shook hands in warm approval.
“I daresay it’s a good sign that they’ll be announcing their decision earlier than they had planned. Don’t you think?” His eyes twinkled merrily as he surveyed the cast. Laughter rippled through the group. He clasped his hands and squared his shoulders, clearly gearing up for an announcement. All eyes turned to him as he let the suspense draw out.
Finally, taking a deep breath, he chuckled and said, “As a matter of fact, I am so pleased with the outcome already that I think you all deserve a celebration. Therefore, tomorrow evening, I would like to provide you with a cast party, where we shall no doubt be celebrating our win as well as our success.”
A rash of surprised exclamations was followed quickly by cheers. Dumbledore chuckled again as the cast jumped up and down and hugged each other in exuberance.
“We shall have a cast party, just like at Christmas, only this time much more informal and relaxed. It will be in the room you occupied tonight before the show. You have all worked so hard and for so long together toward this monumental success, and you deserve one last chance to appreciate each other and celebrate before we all go back to the daily grind of final term.”
Colin spoke up. “Thank you, sir. I know I’ll be looking forward to it.”
Murmurs of agreement followed his statement. “You’re quite welcome, indeed. Now, why don’t those of you who have guests again run along and see to them. Gather their accolades as well, for you so richly deserve them. And good night!” He inclined his head and beamed at them, hands spreading in a gesture of dismissal.
They began to break into clumps, and Harry, Ginny, Ron, Susan, Neville, and Parvati all turned to Hermione where she was still standing near Snape. The three couples were all joined, either holding hands, or with arms around shoulders or waists, giving Hermione a pang of envy that they could be so careless with their affection.
Ginny tilted her head, peering up at Snape and said, “So, Professor, you’ll be joining us tomorrow night, won’t you?”
Hermione blinked in surprise at Ginny’s query, then turned to look at Snape as well, hoping he’d say yes.
Snape was unprepared for such a question, and his startlement showed in the way his smug smirk melted away and his eyes went round. Brow furrowing as he formulated a response, he was further taken aback when the rest of the Gryffindors facing him all seemed to speak up at once.
Parvati’s “Yes, do,” blended with Neville’s “Can’t do without our lead,” which overlapped Ron’s “’S’only fair,” and Harry’s “Come on then, Professor.”
Heat surged up to tighten his throat and stain his cheeks with a faint flush. Swallowing furtively, he murmured, glancing at Hermione’s sparkling eyes, “Wouldn’t miss it…”
The smiles of approval and retorts of “Excellent” and “Brilliant” made his lips quirk in a genuine smile, and he nodded as they turned to leave, bidding him good night as they went.
Hermione flashed him a look of adoration before saying, “I’m sure my parents are waiting outside. I know they’d like to see you again, Professor. Would you care to join me?”
Snape blinked, tamping down the flare of unease that he’d be subject to a fawning Mrs. Granger again, then inclined his head courteously and said, “It would be polite to greet them, after all they have done to assist our production. Very well then, Miss Granger, lead the way.”
They trekked through the house into the corridor, suppressing smug grins as they passed several Ministry officials still exclaiming over the bio board. Near the doorway to the guest lounge, the Grangers were waiting, leaning casually against the wall as they watched the excited gaggle of witches and wizards.
Their smiles of greeting bathed Hermione and Snape in warmth, and they both stepped forward to envelop their daughter in a congratulatory embrace, nearly eclipsing her from view. Snape paused, afraid he, too, would be accosted.
“You were so lovely, dear,” averred Mrs. Granger, hugging Hermione tightly.
Mr. Granger added, “It was even better than last time, which is a difficult feat indeed!” beaming down at his blushing daughter.
Hermione grinned at them as she backed away from their hug, murmuring, “Good enough to win?” Mischief danced in her eyes as they all turned to look at the buzzing Ministry group. All three of them dissolved into laughter, confident in the success of the performance.
As their gazes slid from the officials, they noticed Snape standing quietly to one side. Mr. Granger broke away from his familial embrace and stepped forward, hand outstretched as he said, “Well done again, Severus. You lot quite surpassed yourselves. Congratulations.”
Snape nodded modestly as he gripped the shorter man’s hand. “Thank you. We’re all fairly pleased with the performance, and I daresay we’ve given the Ministry something to remember.” A smirk quirked Snape’s lips and Mr. Granger chuckled as they dropped hands.
Turning to gaze at his wife and daughter, Mr. Granger was taken aback at the way mother clung to daughter, pink-cheeked and timid. Snape, however, rather thought he understood Mrs. Granger’s discomfort, and gamely went out on the proverbial limb.
Attempting a pleasant smile, he inclined his head toward her and said, “So good of you to come support Hogwarts again. I’m pleased you enjoyed it… Dione.”
Mrs. Granger flushed even more, but rose to the occasion, even though she remained where she was, practically attached to Hermione like a lamprey. “You were all wonderful, like Geoff said, even better than last time. I’m sure you’ll win.” Nodding graciously at Snape, she then ducked her head and flicked an apprehensive glance at Hermione.
Hermione, feeling guilty about how awkward her mother felt, squeezed her waist in approval and beamed at her, gratitude glowing in her eyes.
Mrs. Granger relaxed, her smile becoming more natural as she returned her daughter’s squeeze. Mr. Granger rubbed the back of his neck and glanced between his family and Snape, exhaling a long breath and hoping the uncomfortable moment was over. Clapping his hands together, he brightly said, “Well then, I daresay we should head home, don’t you think, dear?”
Mrs. Granger looked up, clearly much more composed, and said, “Of course.” Then, grimacing at Hermione, she said, “I don’t think we’ll have you Apparate us home this time. It’s much too hard on us poor Muggle folk.”
The Grangers all laughed, and even Snape allowed a small smile to surface, mainly in relief at the impossibility of a repeat performance on Mrs. Granger’s part. “In that case, I shall bid you good evening.” Offering a short bow, he murmured, “Geoff. Dione. Miss Granger,” nodding at them in turn.
Hermione smiled back, her relief evident to his knowing eyes; she took her parents’ hands to lead them up to McGonagall’s office to Floo home. “Good night, Professor. See you at the party tomorrow.”
Snape blinked again at the notion of him socializing at the cast party, then simply voiced a faint snort as he Disapparated to his quarters.
Hermione’s keen ears caught that snort, and she smirked as she strode down the corridor, parents in tow. As they climbed the several flights of stairs, she digested how much her mother had taken her complaint to heart. She obviously didn’t want to embarrass Hermione or upset her, and she was clearly not a threat to her relationship with Snape—at least, not as a rival.
When they arrived at McGonagall’s office, Hermione stopped outside the door and tugged on her mother’s hand, gaining her attention. Mrs. Granger eyed her quizzically. “Is something wrong, dear?”
Hermione hoped that her mother’s love and regard for her feelings would extend to accepting the news of Snape and her only daughter as a couple. Grateful for what her mother had already displayed tonight, Hermione hugged her and murmured, “Thanks, Mum. About Professor Snape.”
Mrs. Granger squirmed awkwardly, still embarrassed by what Hermione had told her, but patted her shoulder and said, “I love you, Hermione.” It was all that needed to be said.
Smiling gently at each other as they separated, both women put the incident behind them. Mr. Granger beamed at his womenfolk, arms around their shoulders as he guided them to enter the office.
Mr. and Mrs. Granger exchanged pleasantries with McGonagall while they waited for their turn to use the Floo. Tossing the powder in, Hermione’s father stated, “The Granger home.” Then, as they stepped into the green flames, both parents called to Hermione, “Good night, dear. Love you!”
Hermione retorted, “Love you too!” before nodding to McGonagall and retreating to Gryffindor Tower, feeling quite peaceful with the world.
Story Actions
To follow, favorite, like, and more either log in or create an account.
Leave a Review
Log in to leave a review.
Latest 25 Reviews for Phantom of Hogwarts
1533 Reviews | 7.33/10 Average
It's been so long since last I read Phantom of Hogwarts, and it was just as wonderful as I remembered! Thank you for writing this fic...however many years ago. :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, wow! No matter how long ago it is that I finished PoH, It will always be in my top 5 achievements. LOL I'm so glad you feel that it has held up on re-reads. Thank you so much for making my night brighter! :)
Haa! Haaa! Haaa! Had to keep reading so I couldn't review since the proposal. Harry is a turd for telling Dumbledore to use Dobby to go after Hermione and Severus. I didn't expect Dumbledore or her parents to react with such intense nagativity. I expected some nay saying but not the heap of anger that was piled on top of them. Well, lets see if Minerva is here to hug him or hang him.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* Glad to make you laugh! Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
O I just love the ring!!!!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I covet that ring SO much. I'm glad you like it too. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
What did Albus do while the rest of the cast enjoyed the party? I suppose he was entertaining the Ministry official? I felt a little bit bad for him. He did have fun directing the play. I wonder if he plans to teach next year's Art's class. Maybe he was having a long distant conversation with the other Headmasters. I doubt it, though. Things are going too well for Severus in a way. I'm waiting for the other shoe to fall when he and Hermione come out of the closet. I don't know why Hermione can't be bothered to see him once a week for a few minutes somehow. I couldn't stay away from my lover for two months while we lived in the same castle. I'd at least write him a little love note as often as I could. The girl is made of steel or ice. You would think she would realize they need to have some plan for what they are to do at the end of term. Will they be a couple at the graduation ceremony? Will they be one the next day? Will they both go to the house on Spinner's End or will she go home to her parents first? I don't think she realizes that he wanted her input so that she would love the house as their home. He's giving her a house. He's preparing her a home, them a home. She could at least tell him that she is happy to think he is working on their home and tell him if she plans to move in straight away or not. This hiatus in their relationship puzzles me. I suppose they can only have it all or nothing. Hermione isn't able to compartmentalize apparently.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
You're not the only one wondering when the other shoe will drop, especially after the close calls they've had already. *snerk* Your questions will be answered (some to a greater degree than others) all in due time, my dear. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I have no worries over the employment with Fern issue. I like her though. My kind of woman. Born and raised only slightly less hippyish. We moved to Hawaii, but didn't live in a commune. I'm very glad Hermione likes the idea of the house being "theirs". I am surprised her dad didn't notice her mum gushing over Severus. But, I don't think my husband would notice now that I think about it. I could go out with my pants inside out and he wouldn't notice unless someone else said something about it. It's odd. He complements me when he thinks I looks pretty but wouldn't be able to save me from lipstick on my teeth or some other embarrassing thing. He reminds me a lot of Ron, come to think about it.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL at your description of your husband. I hope reminding you of Ron is a good thing. ;P Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I'm surprised at Hermione's behavior and her giving up the opportunity to spend time with Severus. I suppose that the fact that neither seems to be obsessing about two missed opportunities to spend time together shows they are more confident in their relationship. I'm surprised that Severus would leave Hermione crying with her feelings hurt after the play. He was able to suppress his revolt of Voldemort. He needed to compartmentalize his being creeped out by Hermione's mother. I'm also surprised that so much time has gone by since they have communicated last. Hermione didn't even look at him during the performance. I realize he was sitting next the Minerva, but there must have been some opportunity to make eye contact if they had been looking for one. I'm happy Severus is so distracted by planing his new life. Other wise, I think his feelings would be hurt that she seemed to ignore him. It is the holidays and I would have thought that Hermione would be looking to spend time together even if it was just studying in her rooms while he read. I'm also glad that his neighborhood isn't the run down and empty sort of place it is usually described as. I have never thought of myself as super jealous but I guess I am. I don't know about having Severus in business with another witch. I know he wouldn't love anyone besides Hermione, but I wouldn't expect the other witch not to be attracted to him. Who wouldn't be. Well, his plans of leaving at then end of the year are out of the bag; it's kind of too bad. People are bound to connect his leaving with he and Hermione starting a relationship while he was still a Professor after such chemistry between them in the play. I expect some idiots to be that way even if they wait a little while to come out together. But there is no need to wait. They need to get married asap! I know I've already said this 3 other times. They have already promised to be together forever. At least half the people on the planet have their marriages arranged by their parents and they learn to live together without long periods of courting even if they are engaged as children. Not that I approve of child engagement, but I'm not against other cultures with arranged marriages. My life would have been happier if my parents and my husband's parents had been from the same social class. My parents tried to be friends with his but his were intimidated. His mother and sister also didn't like me. Severus and Hermione are going to have to deal with Hermione's mother though. It will become a problem between Hermione and her parents because her mom likes him too much! If they can get that under control, I don't think Hermione's parents will be unhappy about them becoming a couple.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
They have indeed become more confident as a couple, after the things they've already gone through. And they are now able to focus on other things besides the all-encompassing obsession with each other, such as setting up their future. :) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
OK. I would never perve and gush like that as a married woman. Thank gods, I am not Hermione's mum. I was getting worried. She is so embarrassing. Poor Severus! Hermione's dad must be very secure. He wasn't jealous at all even though Dion was making a spectacle of herself. Poor Hermione too! It's creepy and gross to have your mom perving about your lover let alone being so obvious about it in front of all of your peers. Did she really think he would give her a kiss? Yuck! I had a friend when I was a teen who's mom slept with her boyfriend and she caught them! I'm trying not to gag right now. I was already not feeling well, so that might be adding to it. Let's move on, shall we? Wonderful chapter BTW!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
ROFL!!! Sorry to make you all oogy. ;) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
I do hope I wasn't that embarrassing as a mom! But then again...I did so enjoy embarrassing my teenagers. Maybe I'm getting payback but I do believe I am being over paid enormously. I count it as a down payment on all of the money, time and emotional energy they are still costing me as adults. They are higher maintenance now than they were as children! But how can you blame me? Who else's mother carried a knitted uterus, a muppet breast and a life size fake pelvis in her trunk? Did you know that if you take the pelvis, turn it over, turn it backwards and put it on your head you can say, "Look! I'm a Klingon!" I only resorted to such things when provoked, I swear! If they were rude to me and embarrassed me in front of their friends, well, what was I supposed to do? And I'm sure anyone's mum would give STD lectures to any teenagers that she could get into the back seat of her taxi. I did have some mercy. I declined the request to a teach sex ed module at their private school. Instead the teacher would send home questions and I would write her a note to be taken back the next day. One of my favorites was, "What is the vas deferens?" I also spent literally thousands of dollars on therapy for both of them. I even took out a mortgage on my house to afford it. It was a total waste of money and the bank ended up with the house. ! I wonder if Dion will be just as enamored with Severus after she finds out he is her daughter's soul mate and she is the love of his life? I would be so jealous! I seriously can't even imagine what is going to happen when those two come out. The only one I can count on is Ginny. Everyone else is a wild card as far as I can see at this point. I have no guesses about who will say what. Will Minerva still support Severus? I do hope so. I hope I am pleasantly surprised by everyone else as well. Maybe Albus will stun me and back them up after he comes to terms with the new Severus Snape. On with the show!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*cackling* I love it! Too funny, darlin. :D I have to say, I am so enjoying that you really can't tell what will happen, particularly with people's reactions. I would hate to be too transparent and predictable. ;P Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
Bless Minerva! I dare say she will be angry at first, but I do believe that when she realizes how much Hermione loves him she will come around. I'm so glad she came down to tell Severus she supports him in his quest for freedom and happiness. Severus is experiencing a whole new world in spite of megalomaniacs like Dumbledore and Voldemort. He is a very useful and powerful tool. It's no wonder they both wanted to control him. He is probably the most powerful wizard next to Dumbledore in Britain, maybe even the world. I do hope that Albus reconsiders his motives. If he persists in believing he owns Severus Snape, I would have to say he is a bad person for all of his twinkling on the outside. I know you said he was like a father that didn't want to let go of a son, but he needs to get over himself or he will lose said son. He probably isn't evil but he is controling, manipulative and has power issues. I know I already said this, but I think they really need to get married before they come out of the closet to shut down any scandle mongering. They aren't just every day people. They are war heros and have reputations to worry about that everyday people don't have to be concerned with. If they are married then no matter what people may accuse them of, they can't say that Severus didn't do the honorable thing by quiting his job and marrying the young woman. Some people like to believe the worst in others as a hobby. They are stupid and stupid people don't matter. I have an idea of where Severus could work! They could start a second line of products that are serious.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Yeah, you summed Albus up quite nicely, indeed! Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
Tastefully kinky and erotic solutions to several itches, not the least, Severus' newly declared freedom from Albus Dumbledore. I am surprise on one hand that Albus could be so selfish and forcefully maintain his mastery over his ex spy. He seemed to truly be interested in Severus' happiness, but like some parents he can't cut the apron string. He also seems to forget that he wouldnt have needed to work so hard to keep Severus alive if he hadn't been constantly sending him into lif threating circumstances. Albus misstepped himself when he made Severus a possession. I can imagine Hermione having something to say to Dumbledore before they leave the castle for good. Albus is a bully even though he works on the side of the light. Power corrupts as they say. I can imagine Hermione telling Albus Dumbledore "exactly where the bear slept," explaining exactly how things are going to be from now on and letting him know what she is willing to do if he decides not to respect their relationship and autonomy or tries to stand in their way. I think the best thing to do is get married the night of the leaving feast in a small wedding that maybe her parents will be at and Ginny, Neville, Harry and Ron. Severus, with his wife, can turn in his resignation the next day. I know there are more opportunities out there for them and him in particular than the apothecary shop. In his new state of the art lab, he can mix specially requested potions for individuals and corporations. Hermione can help him with the research and inventing new potions. They could do some coloboration with the Twins and be a private contractor for the Ministry and St. Mungos. They can travel and do research while things calm down back at the school. I'm all for their kinky fun and planing for the future. Does Albus Dumbledore forget who Severus Snape is?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Oh, I am looking forward to you reading further... ;D Albus may not have ever really understood who Severus is, but he'll learn, and fairly quickly too. Thank you so much for such a lovely review! :)
I started to write about this before, but didn't get to finish the review. I think. If this is a repeat just ignore me. I think that Hermione should let Severus know about her plans to stretch her hymen before they consummate their relationship. He is insecure and jealous by nature even if he is doing a spiffing job of changing. I can see a slow train wreck on the horizon that could ruin the most important night in their lives. If Hermione feels different to Severus he may wonder. And if he asks in a way that makes her offended that he would even think she would be with another person that would be a total boner breaker, if you'll forgive the use of the term. I hope she decides to write him a steamy letter telling him about her explorations with the candle. I could see 4 months either making the heart grow fonder, or just as easily the space between them making them more open to misunderstanding. They may become out of practice at communicating. I am surprised that Severus didn't let the apothecary owners know that he has not yet informed his current employer of his plans and that jealous would appreciate it if they would be discreet and not discuss this with anyone else. I wonder why he doesn't apply with St. Mungo's. Maybe he will.I wonder how Minerva is faring.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I think I can safely say, without being too spoilery, that Hermione's explorations don't end in tragedy and interminable angst. *shifty eyes* Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
My Word!!! That Colin did get what he deserved. But my, the drama! It was extremely... wonderful! The entire chapter was extremely wonderful!!! I love, love, loved it! I'm sorry for not reviewing lately but I felt it was building to something and wanted to keep going without stopping when I could. Also, I've been so tired because I've been getting home from work quite late this week, and I know that if I start a review I'll want it worth something and that takes time that would prevent me from being able to read. All day and evening at work I can't wait to get home and read a chapter or two before going to bed.Now, I am wondering about Albus. He isn't daft. He's at least as intelligent as Ginny Weasley. And while Ginny knows Hermione, Albus knows Severus. I do believe he isn't fooled but trusts Severus to be honorable until Hermione graduates. His trust isn't misplaced. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if this entire contest was all just a ruse for Severus' benefit. Although Severus is older than Hermione,his emotional growth has been stunted and I think Albus knows that.Hermione is exceptional and more mature than the boys her age. Someone as intelligent as Dumbledore must have seen that they would make the perfect couple. And he loves Severus like a son in this story, I think. Also he can't stop from meddling. It must be a little boring and anticlimactic for a strategist like Dumbledore without Voldemort around. This would be a big huge plan that would last the entire school year, take a lot of planning and time for Dumbledore to work on, he is obviously having fun and it gives these two time to fall in love! That is my theory at this point. I seldom read a long story that I become emotionally invested in without checking the ending to make sure it isn't sad. Actually, I don't think I can read a story without becoming emotionally invested so I can't bare sad endings. But you've said this has a happy ending so I'm glad to tell you that you have the honor of being the only author in forever that I haven't read the ending first. At least I don't think I have. ...If I have I don't remember it. I am getting so forgetful. It scares me. Seriously. I hope it's only stress. I have that in spades with adult children and their children living with me, sucking the life out of me and all my money too. None of them work. Well, enough of that. I read you to forget that crap! On with the story!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Whoops! I can't believe I missed this review earlier. Sorry! :( I can guarantee that this fic has a happy ending, so I am glad you are sticking around. :) Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
"All right Hermione, spill it! Just what's going on between you and Snape?" a stanza of intense and slightly alarming music is inserted here. What the Hell, Hermione. Just tell her. You have enough dirt on her to get her expelled if she says anything. She is usually a very reliable secret keeper. And as your friend she will he happy if you are. She may even be able to do you the occasional turn of favor and cover for you.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
LOL!!! I can hear exactly what you're describing. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love the letter!!! It's wonderful that Severus and Hermione are equally inexperienced in the matters of the heart. The letter is sweetly mushy, blooming with youthful enthusiasm and titillating; and it was received with simple joy, surprise, and equally exuberant arousal. His first love letter was a doozy! Wait until they have some experience writing naughty letters! I'm very happy for Harry and Ginny. I hope Harry loves Ginny as much as she deserves. I suppose it goes without saying that she is a much better match than Hermione.It was pretty amazing the effect Snape's fear had on him in preventing him from punishing Harry and Ginny on that table. I wouldn't have expected such a reaction once he'd registered it wasn't Hermione. I would have thought that he would have been delighted in the opportunity to embarrass and punish Harry Potter. He's fallen hard. Poor man. I hope having what he's been longing for can live up to his expectations and hopes fueled by all this anticipation. I guess letting the kids go shows that he isn't motivated by meanness really. He just didn't have anything better to think about before. Everyone hated him and he hated them before they could hate him so there! But now he can move on past puberty and past his hatred of his childhood enemies, James and Sirius. He's the only one of them still alive for, goodness sake! Put those childish things behind you, Severus, and live! Maybe you have already paid for this good karma and they have paid for their cruelty. Stop disliking Harry just because he's a Potter. It eats away at you like a cancer. Be free of it. Forgive like you have been forgiven and be healed. It will help your relationship with Hermione too. What could be better than helping your relationship with Hermione, hmmmm? I also want to say that I have always loved the twins. The return letter was excellent. Fred and George should have never been separated any more than the paramount potion's master in the world would be caught without antivenin with a known deadly snake.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*pleased grin* Y'know, I really hope you continue to enjoy some of the stuff coming up, because it SO addresses things you've brought up here. *rubs hands together in anticipation* And I love that you enjoyed the twins' letter. I wanted to capture their voice, even if only for a short blurb. I lovelovelove your deliciously thoughtful reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I truly enjoy the way Severus has taken the plunge and isn't reluctant to tell Hermione that he loves her at least 3 times, I think, in the last few hours. I am extremely happy that they were able to retrieve their memories of each other so quickly. I have no doubt that Ginny will figure out there is something going on between these two. The only question is how soon? Well, and will she be supportive? I think she will. I think she will see that they match eachother. Twice in my life another person told me there was something between myself and male of the species while I was in denial about it, I guess. And didn't see it until a 3rd party told me straight up. Both said it was the way we looked at each other when we interacted and they were dubious about the fact that I was not aware of it because to them it was so obvious. I admit there was what I had considered some harmless flirting going on, but I told myself that is was all a lark. The first time, I had really pushed those feelings deep inside and I was truly flabbergasted when I was told that the young man was in love with me by a mutual friend. Once I had possession of that knowledge however, my own feelings came rushing up at me out of nowhere and floored me. It was kind of awful because I was in a long engagement to someone else that lived far away whom I only saw about once a month and had to share him with his family when he would come to see me. I was still in school and he was 7 years older than I was.Once the cat was out of the bag, I dreamed of that young man at least once a week then once a month for the next 13 years because we had unfinished business when we parted. All of my dreams were trying to resolve the issue and get closure. Finally I got fat enough that I would be too embarrassed if he ever saw me again and the dreams mostly stopped. But...I still think of him from time to time 35 years later. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Once again, you have done such a wonderful job of making the reader feel what our Hermione and Severus are experiencing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*wriggles in happiness* I love that you are pleased about feeling what the characters are experiencing. I strive so much for plausibility and believability that it warms the cockles of my heart to get such lovely feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
I certainly can't blame Dione for having a fan girl crush on Severus. What red blooded woman in her right mind wouldn't? Dude is totally hot! Hermione should be glad it gave her the opportunity to come to an understanding with her man that Severus belongs to her ...and he likes it! And don't we all wish we had a dad like Mr. Granger? It must be very difficult for some parents to send their children away to boarding school. However, it probably makes some other parents and young people appreciate one another in a way that would never happen if they had been in eachother's space all the time, struggling for who's in control and experiencing full blown teenage angst. Over all it has been an extremely satisfiying trip. And now they don't have to worry about Severus having to meet Hermione's parents in the circumstance of, "Mom. Dad. This is my former Potion's Professor Severus Snape. I have some very exciting news for you. Severus and I are in love and plan to spend the rest of our lives together. We fell in love while playing oposite each other in the school play."
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Your reviews bring joy to my day. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
This was a sweet and fun chapter. I love that Severus has a sense of humor. When are they going to "do" it?! Or at least go to second base! This is going to be a long school year!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
Oh, darlin, this is definitely gonna be a long school year... LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I can't imagine what mischief I would have gotten into if I had the ability to silence my parents door. For some strange reason, ever since I was in 10 th grade, I would be out in the front whatever car with my boyfriend and I just knew my parents would never come out side to check on us or wonder what we could possibly be doing in the driveway for 5 hours with the windows fogged up. They locked the front door and went to bed. Only once did I forget my house key and had to wake my parents at 1 AM to get in. They really trusted me. Why? We never had intercourse but we did just about every thing else. I was the mother who came looking for you if you were a half hour late. I didn't trust my daughters because I knew I wasn't exactly Polly Anna when I was their age. I mostly just ended up knowing more than I wanted to about my kids personal lives. If your progeny don't stop themselves by choice, there isn't a lot you can do unless you keep them tied to you 24/7 with a rope around your waist. Only one daughter was boy crazy. Things had changed. I don't know what the definition of slut changed to but it didn't include girls that slept with their boyfriend from 8th grade up. I never needed to be on birth control until a month before my wedding. I made sure my little minx was on the pill because I didn't believe I could trust her and I was right. At least Hermione is an adult and Hermione or Severus must certainly know contraception spells. I'm feeling as frustrated as Hermione here. But he's right. And it won't hurt them to wait. I did and I'm still glad. But they've made a lot of head way in their relationship. Wouldn't it be better to just come clean to Dumbledore that they are in love with each other through no fault of their own, but that they promise to follow the school charter and will be very discrete and won't tell anyone else but him. Rather than finding ways to keep them apart, I inclined to think that Dumbledore would find ways to give them time together and would cover for them so that Minerva doesn't find out until after the school year is over.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces in glee* Oh, I love how invested you are, and how awesome your reviews are. Thank you so much, as always! :)
Absolutely lovely! The play was wonderful. All the flirting is building massive quantities of tension! I can imagine how they are feeling during desert. It's like being there. You expressed every movement, thought and feeling so exquisitely. In my springtime I remember a young man. We wanted each other but we couldn't go there. I was spoken for and had made my choice. I made the practical choice, but not my heart's choice. I was mature enough to know that the butterflies in your tummy don't last forever. We did things together pretending to be just friends The tension was painful and delightful at the same time. I'm still pretty sure I made the right decision.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*beams* Why, thank you! I'm so glad it came across so well (I try to describe exactly how I see things playing out in my head, so it's as detailed as I can make it, LOL). As for the tension, I was called the Queen of UST back in the day when I was writing this. *snerk* But, it'll all be resolved, I promise! ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Poor Hermione. Her parents were very ebarrassing. But isn't that what parents are for? At least we know that when Hermone and Severus can finally come out of the closet, Dione will be on Hermione's side. She would totally understand what Hermione sees in Severus Snape. And Geoff is a nice man so I think he'll be OK. I couldn't write all the reviews I wanted because it wakes up dad. I wanted to ask you a question on a previous chapter. If Severus takes dreamless sleep and there is an emergency in Slytherin house, can he wake up to tend to the problem? I just want to say that the 4.5 stars on some of the chapters baffel me. I think they are all 5's. I have 20 more minutes before I have to go to bed so I must return to reading. Happy Sunday night.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*blush* Aww, you're so kind! Re: Dreamless Sleep, I have always thought of it like an over the counter sleep aid, which in my experience just keeps you groggier if you're woken up, but you can be, with proper interference. LOL I had SO MUCH FUN writing this chapter. :D As for writing reviews--I appreciate any and all, whether they're on all the chapters you wanted to review or not! Thank you as always for reviewing! :)
I've been excitedly reading the last 4 chapters and you have met and exceeded my hopes and expetations. I can't type more because the sound bothers my husband's sleep. Hugs and kisses. I Love It!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bounces* Yay! I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Thanks as always for reviewing! :)
Do witches and wizards listen to the same holiday music as muggles? I hope Hermione doesn't regret forgetting to take the smut reading material that she had borrowed from Ginny out of her bra before the party.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
I daresay there may be some old standards that may crossover. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
You have taken my breath away. How exciting and horrible to want someone one shouldn't and can't have. The play...such a brave young woman to make him kiss her. What will Severus do to punish himself and Hermione for this secret that has been exposed. Desire. Humiliation. Hurry. Send him an owl, Hermione or a house elf with a note to let him know you reciprocate his feelings. Thank him for being such a gentleman and not pressing his advantage. Are you wise enough and mature enough to be proactive once again? You aren't afraid of him. Can you imagine how he must be feeling and prevent the damage? It would be very hard not to be carried away with her own emotions and physical sensation and not to tarry hashing it out over and over in her mind before she finally realizes the danger. Will she see it immediately or think of it too late?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
And you've just taken my breath away! *bounces* Oh, I love that you're enjoying this and are so invested in it so far. It brings me such joy. Thank you for such a lovely review! :)
I really enjoyed the interaction between Severus and Hermione when they got their costumes and Hermione did his hair. I am really glad he got to see her telling Harry off. I don't know how much longer they will be able to keep their hands off eachother. There is so much suppressed sexual tension that if when they actually kissed kiss they might combust. I'm actually looking forward to her detention. This was important bridge chapter. I wonder what else is going on in Dumbledore's head. He is no fool. I can't believe he doesn't see the sexual tension between these two, or at least the potential for it eventually. He does have a great deal of confidence in Severus. I believe he is sure Severus would never be inappropriate with a student,...but she's an adult. Is he tryig to fix them up or is he really just a mean manipulating old puffter that truly gets enjoyment out of making other people uncomfortable and embarrassed because he's Albus Dumbledore and he can? How do the "good guys" find an outlet for their control and power issues? They pick on others and prentend it's a joke. If Voldemort worked this hard at embarrassing Severus would we think he was just being evil or that it was just all in good fun and that he only teases people he cares for as a show of affection? I think not.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*huge grin* I daresay your questions about "good guy" Albus will be answered in due time. *snerk* Thank you again for such a lovely review! :)
Again, Wow! The scene with Severus' jealous rage was incredible. I'm happy that Hermione perceives all things in Severus Snape she told Harry. I really hope he thinks about what she said and heeds her warning, if not garner some sense of respect for the man. I felt a sense of satisfaction when she admitted that if Harry had been that angry his lack of control would have brought down half the castle. Harry won't be able to let this go as well as Hermione. He isn't as mature and...he isn't falling for someone else. This whole thing will prove very unpleasant for a while I suspect. I'm kind of sorry for Harry. How can he not help but be attracted to Hermione, but he hasn't got a tinker's chance in hell against Severus Snape? How long before Severus realizes Hermione broke it off with Harry? Will he at all admit to himself that it was because of him? No. I think not. How long before Harry realizes that next to Severus Snape's power, discipline, knowledge, experience, awesomeness and mojo, he's got a long way to go and he may as well move on? Well, I doubt he'll ever see Snape as sexually appealing, so no mojo epiphany expected. I wonder, how long it will take Hermione to get Severus to trust her? Which will take longer; Harry to realize he can't compete with Severus Snape for the girl or for Severus Snape to trust Hermione? I don't envy Hermione right now. But Severus Snape is worth it. Amazing chapter!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Phantom of Hogwarts)
*bursts out laughing* Mojo epiphany? LOVE IT! So glad you're enjoying; thanks so much for reviewing! :)