Loved your first chapter lol

This has been a fantastically fun premise to read! That being said, have you ever considered posting your author's notes in a blog related to your writings? I feel that might be a better venue for lengthy explanations, and your faithful readers could carry on conversations with you there concerning storylines and such, instead of the (limited) review space. I have seen it work well for other fanfic authors, anyway. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I love this story and I can't wait to read more!

LOVED Severus talking for a half hour on the phone with a telemarketer. I can picture this scene very clearly.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor Hermione!!! Well, am looking forward to Severus having idnner iwth the Grangers!!"

Ah, I knew one of the teams would drop soon! I am quite surprised it wasnt Ron and Molly, but I guess I shall see what happens!!

Loved it. I think you are doing just fine in developing Severus. The shooping trip had me nearly in tears from luaghter at his reactions. Sounds like you chose great outifts for him. Very sexy!

Seems like a good start, and I will have a lot fo fun seeing Hermione introduce Severus to muggle things, and watch as she herself struggles, she may have been born int he muggle world but after life as a witch, some things will seem entirely unnecessary to her, I;m sure!

I love this idea! It is new and refreshing and I can't wait to see the outcomes of the teams, as I can laugh at what will happen to them, which I do hope you talk about, though of course we know which team we all care abut most!!

Great story!! We love it! Can't wait for more!

I LOVE THIS STORY!! I'm so glad you are updating! Please update soon. :)

I'm so happy the fun is continuing! The orphan twist was really brilliant. LOL!

Yes! About time for a proper kiss. I'm loving every chapter.

When is the next chapter going to be up? I really enjoyed this story. Especially the team names, lol.

I just had this weird moment of Dumbledore deciding that Dungeons and Dragons was cool and calling himself the Dungeon Master.  of course no one else would stand for it.  but it made me giggle.

I really like this story.  it's such a fresh perspective. I'm so glad you have ideas for the next 3 chapters!  I can't wait to hear about what happens next.  I especially love the letters from dumbledore about what magical thing the other groups supposedly did.  very funny.  and I'm really glad you kept the tension between severus and hermione normal-ish, not overblown like some people do.

I'm rooting for you!  you're a fine author, don't talk yourself down.  congratulations on your gpa and your degree and your friends.  being happy is good  :)

I gather you have dealt with children or other culinary newbies in the kitchen before. Very funny stuff.

god this is funny.

You must write MORE!!! I can't wait to find out how Severus will react. He's been such a snot to her at times, but I know he likes her.
Livvy

I'm so glad that there is a new chapter to read.  I love this story and was so upset to see it left alone for so long.  Can't wait for another Chapter.

so glad you are continuing this story!  You have a superbly creative premise and you have put in a great deal of work on good pacing for your development.  Love the humor of "every day" situations that you place them in - also really enjoying the slow reveal of the SS HG relationship.  Thank you so much for your hard work - started this story ages ago on a site that would never take my posts, so I am so glad to be able to review here.  You are doing some really solid work here - KEEP IT UP!!!

this is a fascinating situation you've set up.  I'm really excited.

Good on you for getting back on the job.  Now hop to it! :P

BARF LOL :)

So glad to see this story being updated again.  Its great.  Looking forward to the next chapter...hopefully soon.

Make a move... someone! :)