I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! Great work!

Oh my, you truly have a comedic flair! My husband threw a pillow at me in an effort to quiet my giggles. He just groaned at my outright laughter. You are so talented!!

I love it!!

Oh, this is shaping up to be a very interesting story! I've already laughed (and subsequently snorted – but not the Severus-Snape-kind-of-snort, more like the I'm-laughing-so-hard-and-hope-no-one-heard-that-embarrassing-sound-I-just-made kind of snort... just to clarify) out loud several times. I, too, am not a *real* author – but you have nothing to worry about, your first chapter beats the pants off of many "real" authors' stories I've read.

*pant* Okay, off to the next chapter! 

Please update this soon!  It's highly entertaining and greatly amusing! :D

Hey, I read this ages ago and love it!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, I love this story! So glad to see you updated.  Hope we see some more soon!  Keep up with the good job!

I actually remembered that whole discussion on Potter_Place about the britpicking, etc....and now I read the fic that inspired all of this kitty-bag discussing.Chinese cresteds are scary. =]

I have to admit that this chapter made me laugh quite a few times.his long black coat… not really doing anything special....*giggle*

Team Sugar-Has-Rotted-Albus’-Brain....that must be the best team name ever. =]Just started reading your story, so the following speculations might have already happened in the upcoming chapters:Wondering if the pic's taken in Paris will come back to haunt them...Wait, that's the only speculation I have right now...hehe. I like this story....(moving on to the next chapter)

I've been following your story right along and wanted to tell you how much fun it is. I can believe the two of thrm pairing up and their reaaction to different circumstances and eachother. NICE WORK!!!!!     love barb

I had been following this elsewhere and was so happy to see it here!  Loved this last chapter....very cute:)  And my husband is British and he DOES drink milk and I know he and his family do take their food home if not finished.  LOL.  No worries about Brit picking here.  Thanks for the update.  Look forward to more.  Susan

Great story... It's hilarous

I can't tell you how much i like your story! I just can't think of a word that can discribe how much I like the idea of these "games" that the headmaster thinks up! I think that it would be cool if you or someone you gave your permission to (because they are your ideas) would write a story about one of the other games or even just another one of the teams during this game. I would like to read those too I just LOVE your idea!!!!!

I nearly peed my pants from laughing over the street magician scene.  That was too funny for words!  Bravo, dear! Well done.  But, what's up with Hermione?  Live long and prosper, Titania

this story is great! please keep up the good work! you're doing awesome! ^^

The picture of Snape in the apron is priceless!! *giggle* I would love to see a talented artist draw that up!
I really enjoy this fic, and I can't wait for the next installment!
GG

Aw, that's cute. But, the last sentence "It would be 11 days..." doesn't seem to flow with the style of this story. It's good, nontheless, and I really, really want to know what is in that next letter. Also, what about the office?

But did he ever finish making the omelet? Ah well, the mess/clean-up was funny enough.

Please tell me that those three chapters that you have ideas for are on the way to being written!  It has been so long since you updated that I am affraid that RL has taken a bad turn for you.

Hahaha. Wow, it's only the first chapter, and I already love it. I very nearly fell over when I read about the pairings, that was purely hilarious plotting on your part. Speaking of plot, only a very original, funny, and talented writer would come up with something like the Order Games. I also completely love Albus; twinkling, lemon-dropping, Albus, though I must say, I find the lack of twinkling  highly disturbing in this chapter. In fact, if I have one suggestion to improve this, it would be the absence of Dumbledore's twinkle. It is an absolute neccesary in HP fanfics. That, and lemon drops. You've done well with the lemon drops though.Loved this. Truly, madly deeply,Sue :o)

Oi, I just love this story and particularly the setting. I hope there is an update soon!

hey I'm really loving this story's humour and I think the pace is great too. I look forward to more Letty x

this story cracked me up :) i hope you update you left us at the most inopportune moment

"With that smirk, he turned from her and began walking down the pavement, his long black coat? not really doing anything special."
That was my favorite line. I am liking this story more and more with each chapter!