Day 1/2 -- Part I
Chapter 3 of 5
bound_by_passionSeverus has just five days to make Hermione his. But he also has a murder to solve. Can he do it in time? Or will his partner, Draco Malfoy, get the girl?
Complete AU. Does exactly what it says on the tin (and no funny business).
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters. They belong to JK Rowling. I make no money from this piece of fiction.
A/N: Once again, a big thank you goes to x_weasley for all over help. Thank you to everyone who reviewed, too.
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Day 1 10:01pm Ministry Lab.
It had been exactly one minute into the shift when the call came through. Severus had just arrived, striding through the dark door of his office with blue murder shining in his eyes, when the tinny ring of the phone cut through the air, demanding his attention.
Dumping his bag down on top of his desk, he yanked the phone from its resting hook, glaring at it as though the person on the other end could see. His fingers tightened in a death grip around the black plastic.
"What?" he snapped, foregoing the usual pleasantries. He'd had an exceptionally bad morning. Sleep had eluded him, once again, and for the majority of the day, he'd found himself sat on the floor brooding and drinking seemingly endless cups of coffee black, of course; he found that milk didn't entirely agree with him.
Severus' scowl deepened as he listened to the faint tones of the Ministry Operator on the other end, most of the talk unheard due to the crackling interference on the line.
"What do you mean, 'bad news'?" he said icily.
There was more talking, half of which seemed unintelligible.
"Fine. I'll inform them now," he virtually shouted into the mouthpiece. And with that, he slammed the phone down, taking delight in the sickening crunch the plastic made as it came into contact with the holder.
Frustrated, Severus slammed the door to his office shut, not even bothering to unpack his bag, and marched off to find the others. Malfoy would probably be on his way in now, if he wasn't here already. As for Hermione, she usually arrived about a half-hour before shift change. With any luck they'd both be in, and he wouldn't have to repeat himself.
He checked the Computer Room and the Bullet Lab no sign of them. Wandering the light-grey halls of the facility, a glass-and-metal world of cold institutional sterility, he passed a couple of labs and the door that led off to the Morgue before he finally tracked them down.
They were in the break room, sat on the navy-blue sofa, entirely too close together for Severus' comfort. Malfoy had his arm around Hermione, his hand resting gently upon her shoulder. They were talking in hushed voices, smiling secretively at each other. Hermione was laughing gently, blissfully unaware they had company. Malfoy, however, was well aware of Severus' presence.
With a sly glance in Severus' direction, Malfoy slipped his free hand over Hermione's knee, drawing lazy circles over her skin with the side of his thumb. Jealousy flared inside Severus, making him angry. The man was doing it on purpose simply to irk him. And the worst part of it was that Hermione simply smiled.
Feeling the sudden urge to make his presence known, Severus coughed loudly. Hermione jumped, backing away from Malfoy and flushing guiltily when she caught sight of the 'intruder'. Malfoy simply smirked.
"If you two have quite finished, then I believe we have some work to do," he snapped, glaring at Malfoy, not quite trusting himself to look Hermione in the face. Out of the corner of his eye, he could see her blushing furiously, her red cheeks burning under the flickering fluorescent lighting.
"Someone got out on the wrong side of the bed, didn't they?" drawled Malfoy, throwing Hermione a look of amusement. Severus ignored the jibe, far more interested in the information Malfoy had obtained.
Malfoy reached for the clipboard that lay, hitherto unnoticed, on the coffee table, flicking through the cream-coloured parchment until he found what he was looking for. "I got the results back on that red fibre you found. It's from a pair of spell-tailored robes the residual magic erosion count was sixty, so the robes were made back in 2003. We also managed to obtain the point of origin. The fibre's spell signature was specific to Quigley's Quidditch Supplies in Reading. And there are only two teams that wear the specific shade we found and buy from that supplier: the Winchester Arrows and the Leigh Leopards."
"We only need to search the one team. I just got a call. The Ministry has managed to track down Ms. Bones' next of kin." Severus took a deep breath, gauging their reactions. "One Ronald Bilius Weasley, current Keeper for the Leigh Leopards."
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Day 1 11:32pm Leigh Athletics Stadium, Home of the Leigh Leopards.
"Finally. It's taken you lot bloody well long enough to get here. I called station earlier this morning, and some bloke on t'other end told me you'd be along shortly. Shortly? Bunch o' liars. Thirteen hours I've been waiting. You're damn well lucky there's a practice tonight, or I would 'av been long gone, mate."
Severus stared in distaste at the man in front of him.
Balding and slightly larger round the middle than he ought to be, Tom Middleton was the kind of man you'd expect to find sat behind a desk somewhere, pushing paper, not in the middle of a Quidditch Pitch wearing coach colours. Muscle, obviously gone to pot, stretched his slightly too small robes, and his heavily set features creased as he regarded the Unspeakable. With a large hand, he rubbed the underside of his square set jaw.
"Mind you, you don't much look like one o' Pigs. But they take all sorts these days, don't they?" he said with a thick northern accent. "I'm just glad someone finally took time to come and help us find Milly."
"Pardon?"
"That's why you're here, innit? To investigate Milly's disappearance." At Severus' bewildered look, the coach elaborated. "Milly's our mascot. You know, Milly the Leigh Leopard. The lads are so disheartened without her."
"We're investigating a murder, Mr. Middleton. A lost cat is not our priority. A dispatch team will be sent when one is available," said Hermione, watching as Severus picked an invisible piece of lint from the front of his robes.
"A murder? Well, I can't say I know anything 'bout that, love." The coach removed his wand from his pocket. " How's 'bout we go inside an' discuss this over a brew like civilised people?" he said, motioning to one of the many doors in the stadium wall.
"I think not, Mr. Middleton," said Severus. "We don't have time for tea. We would like to talk to the team."
"You think one o' them's involved?" The coach bristled slightly. "They're good lads, them. True, some o' them ain't sharpest tool in box, but none of 'em are murderers."
"Good or not, we'd still like to talk to them. All information is useful information," said Hermione, giving the coach a forced smile.
"Fine. Though I don't want you harassing any o' my players. There's a big match on Friday. They need t' be at their best."
Severus watched with a detached sort of interest as Middleton blew on his whistle, calling the flyers down to ground level. Whilst none of the players possessed any particular finesse for the sport, they weren't half bad for an amateur team.
There was a flurry of red and black as they descended, coming to rest gently on the ground. He watched for one player in particular, his expression grim. He really hated this part of his job.
"I'm Severus Snape." He gestured briefly in Hermione's direction. "And this is Hermione Granger. We're from the Ministry Crime Lab. We're investigating the murder of a young woman, and I'd be grateful for your assistance. If you could please make a line over by the black van at the entrance, my partner, Mr. Malfoy, will take both fingerprints and a DNA swab. We also require you to make a footprint.
"This is a warrant from the Ministry for both DNA and generalised documentation." Severus held up a piece of purple card, Ministry issue, with small black words scrolling across its surface. It fluttered slightly in the night wind. "Any failure to comply with the wishes of Mr. Malfoy will result in disciplinary action."
Several of the players winced. Most of them were old enough to remember when Severus taught at Hogwarts, long before his undue sacking, and thus remembered his wrath. They obediently filed off, making an orderly queue at the back of the van.
Severus held out a slim hand, grabbing Weasley by the shoulder as he passed.
"This way please, Mr. Weasley. We'd like you to come with us."
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Day 2 12:05pm The Locker Room, Leigh Athletics Stadium.
"Where were you between the hours of four pm and five pm on Friday the 28th June?" Severus' business-like tone cut through the silence of the locker room.
Weasley frowned, glancing at Hermione for reassurance. Hermione kept her expression dutifully blank, looking only at Severus.
"I was at home. Asleep."
"Can anyone confirm that?"
"No. I sleep alone." He crossed his arms, left hand still griping his broom. "What's this all about?"
"Last night we found Ms. Eleanor Bones' body on the driveway of number 48, Moor Road. We know you're heavily involved with the woman," said Hermione, her tone carefully indifferent.
"Are you accusing me of murdering my own fiancée?" he asked, staring at Hermione with wide eyes.
"We are accusing you of nothing, Mr. Weasley," said Severus. "We are only trying to establish facts. And, at the moment, these facts point to your involvement in the crime."
"Why would I murder the woman I love? She was everything to me."
"Revenge, Mr. Weasley. The consequence of a lover's tiff? Records," he lowered his voice a little, "and personal experience show you have a temper. Perhaps you came home to find her with another man and got angry?"
Weasley flushed, his face becoming almost as red as his hair. "She was not that kind of woman," he hissed. "Are you implying that Eleanor was a whore?"
Severus' nostrils flared. "I am doing nothing of the sort. I am merely giving thought to the evidence we collected. And since you don't have an alibi..."
"Evidence?" He sat back on the bench, leaning on the locker, gazing at the pair of investigators with incredulity. "And what so-called evidence would this be?"
Severus flipped open the notebook he held, thumbing through the pages until he found the one he required.
"Your father owns a Muggle Land Rover, does he not?"
"Yes, but I don't see what this has to do with..."
"Tyre tracks, recently discovered to be from a Muggle four by four, were found at the scene of the dump. Did you take your father's car to dispose of the body?"
"No. My father is away on business in America, as the Ministry will confirm, and has taken the car with him. It's impossible to steal a car from the other side of the world. I hope the rest of your evidence is better than this."
"We found a red fibre on the bed at the scene of the crime."
"So?"
"Spell diagnostics and microscopic processing show the fibre to be a positive match to your Quidditch Team's robes."
"I visit her place all the time... doesn't prove anything 'cept me being at her house some time over the last week or so and the fact that perhaps she didn't vacuum as often as she should."
"We also found a bloody footprint, size twelve. We pulled up your medical records. You are a size twelve, are you not?"
"Yes," he said, tight lipped, "but so are about half of the team. Face it, Snape. You have nothing to tie the crime to me. You're just after an easy scapegoat to hide your inadequacies. Can't let go of old rivalries?"
"I simply follow evidence. And the evidence points to you. My own feelings do not factor into the equation." He closed his notebook with a snap and placed it back into the inner pocket of his robes. "It is only a matter of time before the sperm sample recovered can be identified. And with your DNA now on record." He held up the cheek swab Hermione had taken earlier. "Your subsequent elimination or incrimination will be swift. Better to confess now than later, Mr. Weasley. That is, if you have anything to hide."
"Look, if you had anything at all on me other than some poxy fibre and a vague match with tyre treads, we wouldn't be here. I didn't kill her. And, if you're not going to charge me, then I'd like to get back to practice." He turned to Hermione, his eyes pleading. "You believe me, Hermione. You know I didn't do it."
Hermione shrugged. "The evidence never lies," she said, watching with thinly veiled despair as her one-time best friend rose from the bench, spun on his heel and marched off.
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Day 2 2:16am Conference Room, Ministry Lab.
The news had spread like wildfire: the Leigh Leopards were under suspicion of murder, the main suspect being their keeper. It seemed even minor celebrities could generate a large enough crowd where their misfortune was concerned. There wasn't a man, woman or child at the lab unaware of the case now, and the media had to be put on lock-down to prevent vital details of the case becoming public knowledge.
The conference room in the Main Lab was packed. About fifty Aurors in civilian robes had come to reinforce the ranks of the Unspeakables, making a grand total of one hundred people of varying positions and job descriptions crammed into a room no bigger than Severus' office. And that was before you even began to include the lab's own technicians and investigators. They'd all been called in and received a verbal thrashing from Head Command. The case, apparently, hadn't been handled with enough care, and as if the lab hadn't got enough problems, three of the players were suing for harassment. The blame, as per usual, was placed entirely on the shoulders of the lab. The Ministry couldn't afford a new cock-up.
Severus was trying to spot Hermione in the throng of reservists that were beginning to file out. She'd seemed a little out of it on the ride back to the lab and had subsequently disappeared before Severus could have a word about it. He tried to tell himself he wanted to see her for the good of the lab a lab is only as good as its investigators, after all, and it wouldn't do for one of them to go AWOL but it was a losing battle, even in his own head. He wanted to see her for the sake of it. He cared about her.
He spotted the curl-covered head he was looking for about five minutes later over by the water dispenser. Making a beeline for her, he strode through the crowd, his head held high.
Still in her dark green robes from earlier, she leant gently against the wall, her eyes firmly fixed on the plastic cup in her hand. Her face was a little red and puffy, haphazardly covered with makeup to disguise the fact she'd been crying. Severus felt a little tug deep in his chest as he watched her stare dejectedly into nothing. He placed a hand on his breastbone, rubbing it gently to ease the slight discomfort.
"How'd you get on with the evidence cataloguing?" he said, shifting nervously from foot to foot. It wasn't what he wanted to say, but it'd do. For now.
"Erm, fine," said Hermione, taking a long draught from her cup before speaking again. "I found four others that could fit the killer's profile. The stuff is over in the Evidence Lab, if you'd like to take a look."
"Perhaps later." He dismissed her suggestion with a wave of his hand. "I... er... Are you alright?" He coughed a little, feeling constricted by the collar of his robes as he managed to force out the words.
Hermione looked up, giving him a piercing stare. "I'm fine," she stated coldly. Severus cursed internally. He seemed to have a knack for saying exactly the wrong thing at the wrong time.
Perhaps it was luck, or (more likely) a coincidence, but just as he was about to press the issue a little further, his mobile rang. With a grimace, he removed it from its place on his belt and flipped the tiny, vibrating machine open.
"Snape," he stated, identifying himself to the caller. There was a slight whirring noise as the Ministry connected his phone to the ancient copper wires of their own landlines. The voice on the other end was as muffled as ever, and he had to strain to catch the words. He didn't reply to whatever was said, simply flipping the phone shut and placing it back on his belt.
"I don't believe this," he muttered, fisting his hands in his hair in a display of frustration. Hermione looked at him quizzically, balancing her empty cup on top of the dispenser. Severus wasn't prone to displays of emotion. This had to be bad. "The knife's been sent back from DNA."
"And?" prompted Hermione, when she realised further explanation was not forthcoming.
"DNA isn't a match to Eleanor. We've just lost our murder weapon."
Hermione's eyes went wide. "Christ," she exclaimed. "You mean we've got a serial killer."
"Of a sort."
"What do you mean, 'of a sort'?"
"Blood isn't even human," he said with a sigh. The case was rapidly turning into a dead one, the trail becoming colder every second. With one piece of evidence out of the equation, and minimal evidence to start with, they were out on limb.
"Do they know what animal it's from yet?"
"No. They had to send it to an outside specialist. We're just not well enough equipped here to deal with it. Bloody ill-equipped Ministry. Reducing expenditure, my arse."
Hermione groaned, shoving her hands deep into her pockets. "It just gets worse and worse, doesn't it?" She flicked him a look. "Well, what do we do now?"
"Not much we can do until those other samples get back from processing. It'll mean overtime; they'll only get back at four, and I want as much done as possible before we leave."
"Overtime? I'm still maxed out from the Wilson Case."
"I'll pull a few strings up at the High Office. Auror Shacklebolt owes me a few favours." Hermione gave him a sceptical look, folding her arms in a gesture reminiscent of Molly Weasley. Severus smirked and, in a flash of inspiration, said, "I'll even throw in breakfast. On me."
Ever the schemer, he'd just managed to ask her out on a date. Well, sort of. In a roundabout kind of way. Besides, doing it this way meant he didn't have to gather the courage to ask her straight out. Slytherin he may be, but seduction was not his forte. That particular house trait seemed to have passed him by, leaving him more of a stuttering wreck around women than a suave sex god.
"You don't have to do that. I'll work anyway, you know. Breakfast or not," she said, letting her hands fall to her sides.
"Think of it as an extra from your kind and generous boss."
Hermione couldn't quite suppress the snort of laughter at his last statement. Severus scowled at her, but his heart wasn't in it. He knew she could see the amusement lurking in his eyes.
"Go on then," she said, giving him his first proper smile of the evening.
Severus felt his heart leap in his chest. He released a breath he hadn't even realised he was holding, trying his best not to grin like a madman. The case may be taking a dive, but the competition seemed to be looking up.
"Did someone mention breakfast and the possibility of paying for it?"
Severus' heart sank. He'd forgotten about Malfoy.
He watched as Malfoy swanned into the conference room, clipboard in hand. He smiled tightly at the blond-haired menace, his mind running though every hex he could think of and some of the nasty ones twice. But the man just grinned, inordinately pleased with himself.
"Severus' invited us all out for breakfast," said Hermione.
Malfoy's grin grew even wider at the thought of breaking up what had clearly been meant as a date.
"That's very generous, Snape. And you know I'm never one to turn down free food. I trust it'll be somewhere nice."
Severus inclined his head, glaring. "Naturally."
"Excellent." Malfoy held his clipboard up. "I've got the victim's blood work back from Tox. There was a large amount of Hirduin in her system, and her blood-alcohol level was high."
"Hirduin?" asked Hermione, curious.
"Hirduin is the main ingredient in most anti-coagulant potions, so we know the killer is definitely from the magical community or has access to it. Muggles can't get hold of Hirduin potions; they typically prefer Warfarin," said Severus. "Hirduin is extracted from the saliva of the blood-sucking leech Hirudo Medicinalis, unlike Warfarin, which is synthetic. It inhibits thrombin, the central enzyme responsible for controlling the coagulation process. Very potent and fast acting." He turned to Malfoy. "I take it you found traces of Varinan Root in the screen as well."
Malfoy nodded. "How'd you know that?"
"It must be added to the potion and mixed counter-clockwise with a birch rod, among other things, to make it suitable for oral ingestion. Pure Hirduin has to be injected straight into the bloodstream since it's a peptide it'd be broken down by the stomach acid before it'd even reach the blood system. And we found no needle marks on the body."
"We got the remnants of the wine at the bottom of the broken glass tested too. Also positive for Hirduin." He looked at his notes. "Her heart and blood was healthy, so the ingestion of Hirduin was not for medical use. I don't think she knew she was taking it. The wine would mask the taste."
"Shows premeditation," said Hermione, taking the clipboard from Draco's hands and flicking through the parchment attached. "The anti-coagulant would cause her to bleed-out more effectively. Though why anyone would need a death that messy, I have no idea."
"Well, we can be certain of one thing." Everyone looked at Severus. "We know the potion was store-bought. Hirduin is only released to St Mungo's and generalised apothecaries. And can only be bought on prescription." He turned to Malfoy. "Go and check the local apothecaries. Get me a list of all anti-coagulant potions sold within the last four months."
"Got it." Malfoy shoved his hands in his pockets and walked to the door. "Meeting at seven for breakfast?"
Severus nodded, watching as he disappeared down the corridor. He turned to Hermione.
"I want to go back to the body. See if we can learn anything new since the knife's gone."
With a swish of his robes, he strode out of the conference room and down towards the stainless-steel doors of the Morgue. He was about halfway there when he realised Hermione wasn't behind him. Under the flickering fluorescent lights, he stopped, spinning on his heel until he faced the way he came. He saw her lurking over by the lab door.
"Aren't you coming?"
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*Pigs British slang for Policemen.
*Brew Slang (commonly northern) for a cup of tea.
* Swanned swaggered. I'm not sure if this is a common term or not. All I know is that my mother used to use it all the time when I was growing up.
*Hirduin an anti-coagulant found in leech saliva. The leeches are commonly used in reconstructive microsurgery. Commonly harvested from yeast, as it is far too expensive to harvest from leeches. It is one of the most potent natural anti-coagulants, but it less effective and more toxic than Heparin when used to treat coronary heart problems. It must given parenterally (injected).
*Warfarin an anti-coagulant that is synthetically derived from Coumarin. Originally developed for rat poison, but is now used to treat people with blood clots (thrombosis). It is taken orally. It is found in very small amounts in both liquorice and lavender.
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58 Reviews | 5.31/10 Average
Very good and quite enjoyable.
Curiouser and curiouser. I'm looking forward to more--both of the case and the (thus far) pathetic attempt at romance.
Oooh the evil cliffie, in both action and emotion!The scene where they reconstruct the crime is superb - the tension is palpable and complex, desire, fear, fascination, embarassment.I can't wait for the next chapter!I think you might have a couple of typos in the first paragraph ("mouse", "killers").
What is she sorry for? For embarrassing him?
I'm enjoying the story a lot so far. I have some thoughts but I don't want to say anything specific until later. Nice work. Cheers!
This is exciting, update soon!!!!
Hah! I was right about where you were going with the velvet ties, and OMG was the UST was fabulous! I'm so glad you didn't cut that scene! *swoons* But poor Severus! I feel so sorry for him, and what the heck was Hermione apologizing for? Embarassing him? I can see her thinking she humiliated him and feeling sorry about that. Hmmm...
The mystery is getting more and more suspenseful all the time! I am very intrigued!
Looking forward to more as always!
A twist... but poor Severus! He must be so humiliated to give up on Hermione that way.
I don't know what to think about Hermione in this story. Is she just accepting attention from whomever gives it to her--read here shallow, is she interested in Draco and Severus, or is she just confused about her feelings, or about the feelings of one or both of them? Or, is this a plot to drive Severus into Hermione's arms by properly motivating him? As for the murder mystery, it is very puzzling and I am lost, as I am sure you would hope at this point. Thanks for the new chapter.
urk... you've used an incorrect tense of the verb "sit (to)" in a number of instances in this chapter. "Sat" is a past tense.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
oh bollocks. Sorry, pardon my language. The erros will be fixed as soon as I get back from my holiday. Thank you for pointing them out to me. I appologise for the mistakes.
I love the detailed, frenetic pace of this -- there's so much going on, but it's laid out coherently. Your writing is also very economical -- I've yet to find superfluous detail or conversation, and you sprinkle enough important details throughout the narrative to keep the reader engaged. And of course, I have to gush about the plot: this gritty detective thriller, with it's hard-hitting, scientific approach, is a breath of fresh air within a fandom (and canon...) that is riddled with deus ex machina and loose continuity. Needless to say, I really, really like your story.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thanks. I'm glad you like it so far. I used to write for the CSI fandom, so it's more of a natural story for me. I'm glad you don't think I'm being too obvious with the mystery.Thank you for the lovely review. :)
Are you sure you aren't finished with this and ready to post the rest? I'm not ready for it to end...CSI/NCIS/Crossing Jordan/(pick a morgue-related drama show), one of my favorite genres, crossed with HG/SS=story lust!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Well, I have chapter four nearly read if that helps?Don't worry, I'm not planning on abandoning this one. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love CSI, it was my first fandom, and I wanted to combine the two. Thank you for the review. :)
Such a good chapter! You're really making me dislike Malfoy, and I am actually quite a fan of his, but he's being so sneaky, poor old Snape, I like it that he's quite rubbish with women!The mystery is great, though I really hope Ron's in the clear, I can't imagine him being a murderer. Great story though, I'm loving it!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Though I do love Malfoy, I can't (in all fairness) say he's one of my fave characters. Perhaps that's why I don't feel so mean doing this to him. Anyway, I like my Snape sneaky and 'sex-god' free. :DThanks for your lovely review. I hope the you will enjoy the mystery. :)
This just gets better and better! The mystery is fabulous and intriguing ... and I want more! When Draco invited himself to breakfast, I groaned out loud. Severus best get a move on, although knowing him, he'll wait until the last possible moment. :)
I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. More is to come. I've got the first draft almost done, I'm just searching for a new beta to ready it when I've revised it to the third draft. X_weasley, bless her soul, is badgering me to get on with it and give her the first draft, so I'd better get to it, haddn't I? lol. Hmm, as for dear old Sev, we'll just have to see...Thanks for the lovely review, my dear. :)
You are definatly doing yopur homework on this story. Would you happen to be related to Agatha Christie?
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Haha, I wish. She is one of the most amazing crime authors ever. I'd give anything to have even a shadow of her talent. Yes, I'm beavering away looking for un-medical related things to try and make my story more realistic. I'm just worried that someone wil turn round and go, "You are wrong! It doesn't happen like that..."Thanks for the review.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
You are doing an excellent job, if anyone says different take it with a pound of salt!
I thought Malfoy was going to give Severus a chance for a week before he moved in on Hermione. It certainly does not look that way. Ron did not seem too broken up over his fiance's death. I assume he had already been informed prior to the interview.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Things, my dear, are not always as they seem to appear...Yes, he would have been informed earlier on by a memeber of the Police (or in this case, Auror) department upon the descovery of his connection to the woman. Thanks for the review.
And thus the plot thickens! The case has gotten a whole lot more interesting (which is really saying something). Poor Severus; I like the idea that he's a little out of sorts when it comes to women. I like the fact that Draco isn't giving him an inch. Makes it all more Slytherin. Great chapter, I can't wait for more!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Yes. Like cold gravy that's been left out far too long, the plot does indeed thicken. I'm glad you're still interested. Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. :)
Now you've got me wanting to slap Malfoy.
Excellent build up in the crime mystery, and I love the way Snape is thinking/behaving.
Should I be thinking feline for the mystery blood?
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Doesn't everybody a want to at one time or another? Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Perhaps, though I wouldn't be too sure. Blood with a purpose other than cold murder, definatley... As for feline, that remains to be seen. Hehe, I like being relativley mysterious. Gives me chills. Thank you for the review. :)
The plot thickens! Is Ron a bad guy or not? Will HG be able to keep her professional distance if he is? (Can't wait to see!) And I like that you show SS as supremely confident in his work yet less so when relating to women.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
I'm not telling *zips lips* ;) But it won't be what you're expecting (unless you're expecting what I have in mind, then it... erm... is). Thanks for the lovely review. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D
Severus needs to bemore pro-active. At this rate, he'll never get Hermione, though I suspect she and Draco are in league for getting Severus to make a move.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Perhaps he is just a little shy? ;)Hmm, and who knows. Hermione and Draco might be in cahoots... or mabye not. Thanks for the review. :)
Excellent start! I love the set up.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the next part. Thank you for your lovely review.
What a great twist! I'm so excited about this story -- the plot and pacing are quite engaging thus far.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. THe next part should be up soon. Thank you for your lovely review. :)
Very Grissom/Sarah Sidle! i like it ;)
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Haha, well, I'm a GSR shipper at heart, and this acctually started out as a CSI piece. Glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for your review. :)
Ooh--very intriguing and extremely unique. I love how you've set things up. The fight for Hermione tied in to a murder mystery--perfect! Great job with this chapter, I can't wait for more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm also happy that you think it is unique; I'd hate to be accused of stealing someone else's idea. The next chapter is waiting to be validated. So you won't have to wait too long I think. Thank you for your lovely review. :)
Very interesting beginning: a chase for Hermione coupled with a mystery.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
I hope you enjoy the next chapter; the mystery deepens...Thank you for the review. :)