Day 0/1
Chapter 2 of 5
bound_by_passionSeverus has just five days to make Hermione his. But he also has a murder to solve. Can he do it in time? Or will his partner, Draco Malfoy, get the girl?
Complete AU. Does exactly what it says on the tin (and no funny business).
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters. They belong to JK Rowling. I make no money from this piece of fiction.
A/N: A big thank you goes to x_weasley for helping me sort out all the ideas bouncing around in my head. I don't know what I'd do without you, my dear.
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Day 0 11:20pm Ministry Lab
By the time he got back to the lab, Severus was already dragging. The journey had taken twice as long as it should have the traffic jam adding at least twenty minutes onto his drive time.
Until Minister Scrimgeour's recent Evidence Collection Manifesto, the Unspeakables had been able to Apparate back to the lab with the evidence in tow. With only one fully equipped lab in the country, it was a practical solution to a very large problem. Time was the only difference between catching a cold case or a hot one, and the Unspeakables had precious little of that.
However, a ruling from the Ministry had brought that to an end, informing all employees that vehicles were to be used during the transportation of evidence. According to one of their many studies, Apparition affected the chemical structure of any evidence collected, hence making it subject to question in court. Although the new policy might ensure Scrimgeour's advancement in the public eye, Severus knew it was a load of bullshit. It was just another scheme that gave big-shot lawyers a chance to exonerate clearly guilty parties.
His feet clicked on the tile floor as he strode down the hall to the Morgue. When he arrived, he found Dr. Luna Lovegood bent over the slab that held their Jane Doe, magnifying glass in hand, hard at work on his case.
The blonde, pale-faced coroner was the nightshift's secret weapon. Her sharp eyes missed nothing, and despite being one of the odder employees at the Ministry, she was able to come to conclusions with a speed Severus could only envy. A lateral thinker to the highest degree.
"Got anything yet?" he asked softly.
She shrugged without looking up, focused upon the victim's neck. "Snape," she said by way of acknowledgement. She didn't answer his question, instead plumping for, "You're late."
"I am never late. I always arrive exactly when I intend to," he replied nonchalantly. Luna gave him a questioning glance, her icy blue eyes blinking owlishly.
Severus ignored her, moving closer to the corpse. For all the time he'd spent studying the dead woman under the beam of his torch, he was more than willing to take another look under the better light.
Her flesh grey with a slight bluish tinge, Jane Doe had long brown hair, close-set eyes and full lips that were dry and cracked. She was small, for a woman, with wide-set hips and full breasts. A nice figure for a corpse.
Wand behind her ear, in a fashion that reminded him a little of the cartoon painters found on the back of cereal packets, Luna leant so close to the body that her nose almost touched its cheek.
"Hello... what do we have here?" she said, more to herself than to Severus. A tiny pair of stainless steel tweezers gleamed in the fluorescent lighting, crackling distinctively as they closed around the object of her interest. Severus watched as she held it up to the light. "Well, that's interesting. What's a piece of glass doing in your hair, hmm? You don't look like a Glass-Eating Buckshine Elf to me." She placed the clear fragment in a brown envelope ready for lab testing and passed it to Severus.
Taking her wand from behind her ear, Luna grasped it gently between her index finger and thumb and made a small flicking motion over the torso of the corpse.
"Aperire," she said, the tip of her wand glowing blue. Severus watched as she passed it over the body, the colour changing from blue to pink as the wood touched her lower abdomen. "There are signs of sexual activity. Judging from the colour intensity, I'd say it was most likely an hour or two before death."
"Consensual?"
She flicked him a look. "I found no tears or abrasions on my initial examination. However, there was a slight bruising to the inner tissues. But that doesn't really tell us much; the skin there is especially sensitive, and the high number of blood vessels close to the surface means it takes very little trauma to cause bruising. I took a swab earlier. See if we can identify our lover boy. If we're lucky, he may not have been wearing a condom."
"Any internal trauma?"
"Not that I've found." She passed her wand over the woman's chest. The colour flickered slightly but remained blue. "There's no damage to the lungs or heart beyond generalised wear and tear. She's a smoker, hence the flickering, but lung degeneration is nowhere near a level that could be considered fatal." She thumbed back the lid of one eye. "And no petechial haemorrhaging in the conjunctivae either. So we can rule out both heart attack, induced or otherwise, and suffocation. The cause of death was probably due to exsanguination, though I'd need to open her up to make sure." She placed her wand on the slab and cracked her fingers.
"Was that really necessary?" he asked, grimacing slightly.
Luna merely smiled. "The killer sliced through the superior thyroid artery, external carotid artery, severed both laryngeal branches of the vagus nerve and her larynx."
"So her throat was paralysed?"
"Yes. Her voice box was immobilised. The damage to the nerve and the tissue around it would have paralysed her throat instantly, like you said." She ran a finger down the side of the woman's face. "Death would have been silent and relatively quick. Poor thing."
Severus leaned in for a closer look. "And the weapon?"
"The wound tract tells us the weapon was sharp with a serrated edge, which could match the knife you found." Luna drew in a deep breath before continuing. "I did find one odd thing though. Her blood isn't clotting, which indicates the victim was given some sort of anti-coagulant before her death. Most likely Warfarin or a Coumarin extract. I sent a sample off to Toxicology along with a greasy substance I found on her arm. It's been put on 'Rush', so the results should be back by the start of tomorrow night's shift."
Severus was about to reply when the door opened. Hermione came in, wearing a pale pink camisole, indigo jeans, and her usual white lab coat. They didn't wear robes at the lab; the long sleeves were a health hazard.
"Hey," she said, placing a hand on the edge of the door. "We've got a hit on our Jane Doe."
Severus' eyebrows rose. He followed Hermione out, barely hearing Luna's call of, "I'll keep you posted if I find anything new," as the doors to the Morgue clattered shut behind them.
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Seated on a stool in the DNA lab, Severus watched with rapt curiosity as Hermione moved the onscreen cursor over the minimised window, blowing it up to full-size. A head shot, complete with fingerprints and personal details, appeared on the small screen.
"Our Jane Doe is one Eleanor Bones. Twenty three. Address: 59 Embassy Way, Manchester. Works as a waitress at the Three Broomsticks, travelling daily from Permanent Portkey Position 5703," she said with a smug smile.
Severus squinted at the slightly blurry screen, reading the tiny writing that flashed across its surface. The Lab was a low budget affair, scrounging ex-display technical gear from stores like Currys and Comet and running it off the excess magical energies collected at the main Ministry building, which meant that most of the computerised equipment was either broken or on its way out.
"Sentenced to four weeks community service for shop lifting, which explains why we have her prints on the database."
"Exactly." Hermione swung round on her chair and picked up a printed sheet that lay on the desk. "Ministry sent through a log of her wand use over the last two days. No defensive or offensive hexes registered, so either she knew her killer or it was a surprise attack. Last known spell performed by her wand was a Prophylaxis Charm at 3:55pm."
"Ties in with Luna's findings." Hermione raised a quizzical eyebrow. "She found signs of sexual congress about an hour before death," he said by way of explanation.
"I think we need to find this mystery lover. He could have seen the killer."
"Or he could be the killer. Seduction gone wrong, perhaps," he said, flushing slightly under the intensity of her gaze.
Hermione smiled. "Lust and anger are such close relatives."
"Indeed."
Severus drummed his fingers against the desk, thinking. They had a location and a possible theory, but with the key elements missing, they could only guess at the motive. Though not a man inclined to gamble, Severus was hedging his bets on a revenge killing. Pretty young woman found dead and alone, plus an unaccounted for lover, gave him an answer he didn't much like the look of.
"What's that?" Hermione asked, startling him out of his reverie. She pointed to the envelope Luna had given him. Severus flashed her a rare grin, pleased to have the upper hand for once.
"This," he said, peeling open the top and walking over to a battered looking microscope, "is a glass fragment Luna found in our victim's hair." Carefully, he placed the tiny piece on a backing plate and fed it under the microscope lens. He looked into the eyepiece and fiddled about with the black knobs at either side until he got the focusing just right.
"Ah ha!" he exclaimed, motioning for Hermione to come and take a look. He moved out of her way, placing a hand on her shoulder as she leant in. He felt her shiver a little under his touch. "Cold?"
"No," she said without looking up. "Glass isn't polarised, so it's not from a pair of glasses or a car window. It also has a slight bluish tinge under white light observation." She drew back a little. "My best guess is an ordinary window pane or part of a glass tumbler. But there was no glass at the scene. She must have picked it up before the dump, though where is anyone's guess."
"Well, there's only one way to find out."
"House call?"
Severus smirked at her.
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Day 1 00:55am 59 Embassy Way
Before long, they were turning off the main road and into the maze of smaller streets that made up the outskirts of Manchester City. It was a quiet night, and the neighbourhood was asleep save for a few windows flickering with TV watching. The streetlamps gave off a sickly orange glow, and Severus had to blink to keep his eyes firmly fixed on the road ahead.
A rundown leftover from the 1920s, 59 was a narrow, two-up-two-down terrace with a slate roof that seemed more black than grey under the mercury-vapour streetlights. Large, double-glazed windows were at either side of the door with a small tinted window to the right that was, possibly, the bathroom. The garden was almost non-existent, the pitiful amount of grass peppered with splotches of yellow denoting the season.
The temperature hovered around the twenty-six degree mark, just hot enough to make Severus feel uncomfortable under his button-down jacket. Hermione had put on her robes, light blue ones this time, and he could make out a tiny bead of sweat rolling down the back of her neck.
"This weather's going to be the death of me," she groaned, fanning herself lightly with an empty hand. Her other carried their large, black kit bag.
The pair walked up the concrete driveway, Severus with his wand out. The house had been cleared moments before, but Severus had learnt the hard way that it paid to be vigilant. The front door, white and thick with city grime, was ajar. He walked through into the cool, dark hallway, sighing with relief.
"Are you the lot from the Ministry?"
Severus turned, spotting a bulky-looking Auror in green robes gesturing towards them with the tip of his wand. "Yes."
"Then I think you'd better start over here," he said, holding open the door to what appeared to be the bedroom.
Hermione and Severus pushed forward, walking past the Auror and into the room. She let out a low whistle as she surveyed the scene.
The murder had definitely taken place here. There was a pool of blood on the bed, originating from a point about a third of the way from the bottom. Arterial spray covered both the far wall and the headboard, stark against the light wood and cream wallpaper. The bed sheets were rumpled with signs of a struggle and had been pulled out from underneath the mattress. Half a broken wine glass, empty save for a few drops of ruby-coloured liquid, stood on the bedside table, the sharp edges glinting dangerously in the light.
Hermione set the kit down on the floor, opening it up and removing a UV torch from the very bottom. She tossed Severus a pair orange tinted goggles, then put a pair on herself, tucking her curls behind her ears to keep them out of the way. Severus flicked off the lights, plunging the room into semi-darkness, so it was lit only from the weak light of the streetlamp that shone through the flimsy net curtains. Hermione switched on the torch, running the beam up and down the bed spread. Moving from left to right, she paused occasionally to look at something a little closer, lifting hair, fibres and other objects of interest with a small section of plastic-backed tape.
"Signs of sexual activity," she said as she flicked the blue beam over the end of the sheet, marking where the fabric glowed. Severus stepped closer, stilling her hand with his own. He pointedly ignored the tingles of energy the contact brought.
"Stop right there," he commanded, pulling a pair of tweezers from his pocket. He reached down onto the bedspread, picking up a red fibre. "Dyed thread of some description. Most likely from a shirt or robes."
Hermione held out a brown paper bag. "Bag it and tag it. We'll take it back for processing."
He placed the thin thread into a brown collection envelope and sealed it closed, cataloguing it with the evidence Hermione had collected. Leaving her to continue processing the bedspread, he turned towards the western side of the room. The wineglass caught his attention first.
"Strange," he muttered, sliding his wand into the loop at his belt and digging into the kit bag.
Hermione looked up. "What's strange?"
"Broken wine glass, yet no wine bottle or glass on the floor." Severus opened a small jar of fingerprinting dust, loading up the large, fluffy brush he now wielded with the black powder. Using feather-light strokes, he began to brush over the glass, resisting the urge to sneeze as the powder cascaded into the surrounding air. "No fingerprints either. Killer cleaned up?"
"Well, we know the killer was wearing gloves, which could explain why you aren't finding anything. Perhaps the glass was broken elsewhere?"
"But why have a broken wineglass in your bedroom?"
Hermione shrugged, dropping to the floor to examine under the bed. Severus heard her rummage around for a while and then a loud crack.
"Shit," she hissed.
"Are you all right?" he said, watching with concerned eyes as she sat up rubbing her head.
"The bed may have been slightly lower than I expected." She gave him a lopsided smile, amused by his worried expression. "I'll be fine. Found something interesting though, so I suppose the bump on the head was worth it." She reached under the bed and pulled out a long strip of soft purple velvet. Sensuous to the touch, the fabric was attached to the underside of the bed, knotted around the bottom of the wooden frame. She gave it a sharp tug, pulling it out to its fullest extent. "Looks like we got ourselves a pair of deviants," she said with a cheeky grin.
"Check the fabric for epithelial cells. The victim was probably tied down, and someone had to fasten the bonds; she couldn't have done that alone, even magically aided." He gave her a puzzled look. "It still doesn't explain the blood pattern though." He strode up to the head of the bed, tracing the line of the spatter with his index finger. "It's too high. By all assumptions, the spatter should be lower. If she was tied down, then her body would have been closer to the bed. Plus the pooling is at an odd position. Neither at the head nor the foot."
"Killer could have repositioned the body after death. With her tied down, the killer would have had to do some smart manoeuvring to remove himself without getting blood everywhere. Apart from the bed and the wall, the scene is unusually clean. Murder is messy, and throat slashing doubly so. The killer had to have caught some of the spatter, yet I don't see any blood drops indicating movement."
"Hmm..." Severus moved round to the opposite side of the bed, careful not to disturb any potential evidence. "I've got a bloody footprint on this side. Looks to be a size twelve definitely not our victim's. The foot was bare, and there's only the one. Perhaps the killer missed it during clean up. Luckily for us, might I add."
There was a small flash of light as Hermione snapped off shots of the print. "Only a partial, but it's something, I suppose. It does narrow down the potential field of suspects."
Severus looked at his watch and groaned. Hermione shot him an odd look.
"It's going to take the rest of the shift to process: we've got the entire house to do," he explained, inwardly cursing any deity he could think of for having the audacity to place him in an enclosed space with her for the rest of their twelve hour shift. As if Malfoy's ultimatum wasn't playing heavily enough on his mind already, he would now be faced with tantalising glimpses of what he couldn't have. He was in two minds over whether to just kiss her and get the rejection over and done with. A planned seduction needed time. Time which he, incidentally, no longer had.
Sodding all to hell, Severus decided to follow his instincts. He licked his lips nervously, his eyes flicking over her face, looking for any sign of affection. Leaning forward slightly, he was about to take the plunge when she spoke again.
"Draco will be along later," she said. "He's just finishing up over at the lab."
He scowled at the mention of the other man's name, suddenly feeling incredibly foolish. "The sooner he gets here, the better," he said, not meaning a single word.
Hermione placed a hand on his shoulder, giving it a gentle squeeze. Her fingers were soft and warm, sending a thrill though him. For Severus, it wasn't quite the comforting gesture she'd intended.
"Hey, it's not all doom and gloom," she said, giving him a small smile. "You've got me."
'If only,' Severus thought. 'If only...'
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58 Reviews | 5.31/10 Average
Very good and quite enjoyable.
Curiouser and curiouser. I'm looking forward to more--both of the case and the (thus far) pathetic attempt at romance.
Oooh the evil cliffie, in both action and emotion!The scene where they reconstruct the crime is superb - the tension is palpable and complex, desire, fear, fascination, embarassment.I can't wait for the next chapter!I think you might have a couple of typos in the first paragraph ("mouse", "killers").
What is she sorry for? For embarrassing him?
I'm enjoying the story a lot so far. I have some thoughts but I don't want to say anything specific until later. Nice work. Cheers!
This is exciting, update soon!!!!
Hah! I was right about where you were going with the velvet ties, and OMG was the UST was fabulous! I'm so glad you didn't cut that scene! *swoons* But poor Severus! I feel so sorry for him, and what the heck was Hermione apologizing for? Embarassing him? I can see her thinking she humiliated him and feeling sorry about that. Hmmm...
The mystery is getting more and more suspenseful all the time! I am very intrigued!
Looking forward to more as always!
A twist... but poor Severus! He must be so humiliated to give up on Hermione that way.
I don't know what to think about Hermione in this story. Is she just accepting attention from whomever gives it to her--read here shallow, is she interested in Draco and Severus, or is she just confused about her feelings, or about the feelings of one or both of them? Or, is this a plot to drive Severus into Hermione's arms by properly motivating him? As for the murder mystery, it is very puzzling and I am lost, as I am sure you would hope at this point. Thanks for the new chapter.
urk... you've used an incorrect tense of the verb "sit (to)" in a number of instances in this chapter. "Sat" is a past tense.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
oh bollocks. Sorry, pardon my language. The erros will be fixed as soon as I get back from my holiday. Thank you for pointing them out to me. I appologise for the mistakes.
I love the detailed, frenetic pace of this -- there's so much going on, but it's laid out coherently. Your writing is also very economical -- I've yet to find superfluous detail or conversation, and you sprinkle enough important details throughout the narrative to keep the reader engaged. And of course, I have to gush about the plot: this gritty detective thriller, with it's hard-hitting, scientific approach, is a breath of fresh air within a fandom (and canon...) that is riddled with deus ex machina and loose continuity. Needless to say, I really, really like your story.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thanks. I'm glad you like it so far. I used to write for the CSI fandom, so it's more of a natural story for me. I'm glad you don't think I'm being too obvious with the mystery.Thank you for the lovely review. :)
Are you sure you aren't finished with this and ready to post the rest? I'm not ready for it to end...CSI/NCIS/Crossing Jordan/(pick a morgue-related drama show), one of my favorite genres, crossed with HG/SS=story lust!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Well, I have chapter four nearly read if that helps?Don't worry, I'm not planning on abandoning this one. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love CSI, it was my first fandom, and I wanted to combine the two. Thank you for the review. :)
Such a good chapter! You're really making me dislike Malfoy, and I am actually quite a fan of his, but he's being so sneaky, poor old Snape, I like it that he's quite rubbish with women!The mystery is great, though I really hope Ron's in the clear, I can't imagine him being a murderer. Great story though, I'm loving it!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Though I do love Malfoy, I can't (in all fairness) say he's one of my fave characters. Perhaps that's why I don't feel so mean doing this to him. Anyway, I like my Snape sneaky and 'sex-god' free. :DThanks for your lovely review. I hope the you will enjoy the mystery. :)
This just gets better and better! The mystery is fabulous and intriguing ... and I want more! When Draco invited himself to breakfast, I groaned out loud. Severus best get a move on, although knowing him, he'll wait until the last possible moment. :)
I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. More is to come. I've got the first draft almost done, I'm just searching for a new beta to ready it when I've revised it to the third draft. X_weasley, bless her soul, is badgering me to get on with it and give her the first draft, so I'd better get to it, haddn't I? lol. Hmm, as for dear old Sev, we'll just have to see...Thanks for the lovely review, my dear. :)
You are definatly doing yopur homework on this story. Would you happen to be related to Agatha Christie?
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Haha, I wish. She is one of the most amazing crime authors ever. I'd give anything to have even a shadow of her talent. Yes, I'm beavering away looking for un-medical related things to try and make my story more realistic. I'm just worried that someone wil turn round and go, "You are wrong! It doesn't happen like that..."Thanks for the review.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
You are doing an excellent job, if anyone says different take it with a pound of salt!
I thought Malfoy was going to give Severus a chance for a week before he moved in on Hermione. It certainly does not look that way. Ron did not seem too broken up over his fiance's death. I assume he had already been informed prior to the interview.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Things, my dear, are not always as they seem to appear...Yes, he would have been informed earlier on by a memeber of the Police (or in this case, Auror) department upon the descovery of his connection to the woman. Thanks for the review.
And thus the plot thickens! The case has gotten a whole lot more interesting (which is really saying something). Poor Severus; I like the idea that he's a little out of sorts when it comes to women. I like the fact that Draco isn't giving him an inch. Makes it all more Slytherin. Great chapter, I can't wait for more!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Yes. Like cold gravy that's been left out far too long, the plot does indeed thicken. I'm glad you're still interested. Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. :)
Now you've got me wanting to slap Malfoy.
Excellent build up in the crime mystery, and I love the way Snape is thinking/behaving.
Should I be thinking feline for the mystery blood?
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Doesn't everybody a want to at one time or another? Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Perhaps, though I wouldn't be too sure. Blood with a purpose other than cold murder, definatley... As for feline, that remains to be seen. Hehe, I like being relativley mysterious. Gives me chills. Thank you for the review. :)
The plot thickens! Is Ron a bad guy or not? Will HG be able to keep her professional distance if he is? (Can't wait to see!) And I like that you show SS as supremely confident in his work yet less so when relating to women.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
I'm not telling *zips lips* ;) But it won't be what you're expecting (unless you're expecting what I have in mind, then it... erm... is). Thanks for the lovely review. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D
Severus needs to bemore pro-active. At this rate, he'll never get Hermione, though I suspect she and Draco are in league for getting Severus to make a move.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Perhaps he is just a little shy? ;)Hmm, and who knows. Hermione and Draco might be in cahoots... or mabye not. Thanks for the review. :)
Excellent start! I love the set up.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the next part. Thank you for your lovely review.
What a great twist! I'm so excited about this story -- the plot and pacing are quite engaging thus far.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. THe next part should be up soon. Thank you for your lovely review. :)
Very Grissom/Sarah Sidle! i like it ;)
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Haha, well, I'm a GSR shipper at heart, and this acctually started out as a CSI piece. Glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for your review. :)
Ooh--very intriguing and extremely unique. I love how you've set things up. The fight for Hermione tied in to a murder mystery--perfect! Great job with this chapter, I can't wait for more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm also happy that you think it is unique; I'd hate to be accused of stealing someone else's idea. The next chapter is waiting to be validated. So you won't have to wait too long I think. Thank you for your lovely review. :)
Very interesting beginning: a chase for Hermione coupled with a mystery.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Waiting Game)
I hope you enjoy the next chapter; the mystery deepens...Thank you for the review. :)