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Saturday Night Drabbles What Women Want
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What Women Want

luvsev

105 Reviews   |   105 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 5,773 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Minerva McGonagall Filius Flitwick

Severus has a new ability.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: 1

Chapter 2: 2

Chapter 3: 3

Chapter 4: 4

Chapter 5: 5

Chapter 6: 6

Chapter 7: 7

Chapter 8: 8


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luvsev

Member Since 2008  |  71 Stories  |  Favorited by 76  |  664 Reviews Written  |  948 Review Responses

I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

 


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Reviews for What Women Want

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10/10

blackaces924

hahaha awesome! what an useful skill!

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I think it would have its uses, but it may grow old after a while. Thanks for reviewing and the lovely stars!

10/10

Stefdarlin

No, nooooooo, not Filius!  How could you have him be the culprit???????  Don't make me break out Pomona in angry mob form,, LOL.You know I love you, right?  Poor Fil, I sincerely hope Severus doesn't kill him.  I am kinda fond of the diminuitive wizard. =o) (Though, at the beginning, it seemed Severus had had this particular gift before, hmmm.)

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

*runs from angry mob* Filius meant well, but it just didn't turn out all that well. I know you love me, darlin'. And I promise, Sev will not kill Filius. I love Flitwick, too, so I can't have too much harm befall him.

Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)

Oh, that is good.  Hmmm, I was looking at the response to the reviewer before me.  I agree, Filius has been bad.  Perhaps Pomona needs to put him in his place, snerk.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Hmm... that has potential, dear. I may have look into writing a scene for them where she does just that. Possibly after I finish this story.

10/10

Stefdarlin

Wow, she wasn't mad.  I'm impressed.  =o)  Well done!Poor Sev, he is suffering from superhero dillema, lol.  I am very much enjoying this, my dear.  On to the next chapter. *wink*

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I couldn't have her be too mad at hi. Besides, it's not like he has any control over his <i>gift</i> I really am happy you're enjoying my little tale. :)

10/10

Stefdarlin

Oh, I love the first line, lol.  But oh, no, oh, no!!  He isn't actually going to tell her?  Anything but that!!  Sevvie, babe, don't do it!!  Ack!!   What a place to leave it?

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I know. I'm evil, aren't I?

10/10

Stefdarlin

‘Oh, I’m hungry all right, just not for food.’  *Squeeeeeeeeee*  ::raises hand--ooh, pick me! Pick me!:: lol.That was very HOT!  I think Severus should teach sex ed, what do you think?

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

That would be a brilliant idea, though I think those of us who would take his class would never learn anything. We'd be too busy trying to get into his pants. Whoops, or maybe that'd just be me.

10/10

Stefdarlin

Tee hee.  With your pants off?  Ahh, that is an awesome thought.  *evil grin*

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

That line came from chat one night; I just had to use it. Severus without his pants is definately drool-worthy, if you ask me.

10/10

Stefdarlin

Yay, I do believe it is high time I caught up on my reading.  This fic is definitely a spectacular place to start. =o)  Lol, I am wondering how he is going to use his new-found talent.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

*blushes* Just wait, there is a lot of drama to come in this story.

0/10

sunny33

Naughty Flitwick! :)

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Even if he meant well, he has been very bad.

10/10

snitchette

Someone is in trouble if dark someone ever finds out. Unless sweet someone snogg him senseless to distract him...

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I'm sure Hermione can distract Severus from most things, but if he finds out what Flitwick has done, maybe not. The man has unwittingly caused him a lot of problems.

0/10

pookah

what a cute story!  And what a nice twist with this chapter!  Thank you for such a delightful tale!

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

*Blushes* Thank you for such a glowing review! And you know, no one ever suspects Flitwick to meddle in other's lives.

10/10

rosered

Oh, brother!  This is a surprising development.  Filius heart was in the right place - too bad his Charm missed its mark.  Poor Severus.  Great chapter!!!  :D

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Thank you so much! Filius did mean well, and now he has to clean up his mess.

10/10

braye27

Well, that certainly explains how Severus gained this new talent, but not how Filius is going to undo the Charm he enacted to "bestow the gift."It will be interesting to see how Filius solves this problem.  I wonder if Severus and Hermione will ever figure out that Filius is the "culprit?"I'm having fun, but I'm not sure Severus is!Beth

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Filius will make another cameo appearance in the next couple of chapters, and we'll see whether or not he'll fix Sev's problem. Since you've helped me with one plot point, I wonder if I may ask your opinion once more. Do you think I should have Severus/Hermione discover that Filius is behind this? I've been toying with the idea for a couple days now, but I've not quite decided.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

Yes!  It could be a point in their favor, actually, to realize that everybody else knew how attracted to each other they were... and that Filius just couldn't stand seeing them mooning over each other without their realizing it themselves.

10/10

Becky

Whoohoo, Go Filus....I'm glad he did that, because Severus and Hermione are meant to be together! LOL!!  Good for him!!! Looking forward to more!

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I agree; they are meant to be together. I'll be writing another chapter soon.

10/10

debjunk

Oh, the plot thickens.  Well, if Flitwick is the cause, surely he can come up with a cure! 

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

We can only hope he'll decide to cure Severus.

0/10

Clairvoyant

Filius is a little trouble-maker, but he had good intentions.  I never suspected Severus' ability was someone else's handiwork.  Good job.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Thanks! Filius stuck his nose into someone else's business for their own good. Too bad it came with an unfortunate side effect.

0/10

gifarlme

oh Filius! 

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Surprising, yes? No one expects Filius to intervene.

10/10

Maggie

And we thought Albus was the only meddling old man!

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Albus is sometimes overused to get Severus and Hermione together; I wanted someone who no one would suspect.

10/10

MuseAmusant

Sneaky little Filius! Seems the Ravenclaw Head of House has a bit of a Slytherin streak. Severus would be shocked, I think.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

*chuckles* Yeah, I'd like to think he's just a little bit Slytherin. After all, what's all that intelligence without a bit of cunning, too? If Severus finds out what Filius has done, I'm sure he'll have something to say.

10/10

makaem

Oh, Flitwick! But he had the best of intentions.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Yup, nobody ever suspects Good ol' Flitwick.

0/10

Clairvoyant

Confession is good for the soul, eh?  Nice catch of the cheater! 

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

It certainly can be, especially in Sev's case. This time it will serve him -- he told one person who would try to help him.

10/10

Sampdoria

I am so happy with Hermiones reaction, it was perferct!

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I'm glad you're happy she didn't overreact. Thanks for the stars, too. *pats the shinies*

10/10

braye27

Severus' confession went very well, and I think Hermione is bright enough not to automatically take offense when it's obvious that Severus hardly views this "gift" as a completely wonderful thing.It helped them come together, but it is also driving him crazy... hearing all those disparate female thoughts coming into his head would cause a headache of major proportions!I'm looking forward to seeing how Hermione helps him tame (or rid himself of) this dubious gift.  Beth

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

I seriously think she would have flipped if Severus viewed it as anything other than something that drives him nuts. To be able to hear someone else's thoughts is highly intrusive, and she knows that.

10/10

rosered

I give Hermione a lot of credit.  She could have hexed him into next week, but she took the higher road and decided to help him instead.  Severus should feel very fortunate to have such an understanding partner.  :D

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

He knows he is, too. I figured Hermione would be the type to help someone out of a bad situation, which is what he's in.

10/10

snitchette

He is very lucky to have such a forgiving girl friend. Honestly I don't know what my reaction would be were I in her position but I don't think I would just accept things the way she did.

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Yes, he is. She knows that his gift is not his fault though.

0/10

sunny33

She took that well! :)

Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)

Yes, she did. I couldn't have her running away from him over something she doesn't know a lot about. It's not her style.

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