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Chapter 3 of 8
luvsevHermione eases Severus's mind.
ReviewedHmm... She wants me to remove my pants? I can arrange that, but it will be more fun if I can get her to do it for me—preferably with her teeth.
‘What are you thinking about, Severus?’ She wiggled her arse in his lap, eliciting a deep groan from him.
Breathing deeply, he said, ‘I’m not thinking about much because you’re intent on getting a rise out of me.’
‘Oh, I’ll get much more than that out of you, if you’ll let me.’
‘Let, my dear? I don’t think it has anything to do with let.’ He grinned wickedly and gripped her hips, shoving her firmly down onto him.
He certainly has risen to the occasion—amazingly so. If this is any indication, I’m in for one hell of a ride, she thought as she once more ground against his rapidly rising erection.
Her thoughts are such a turn on; gods, does she realise what she’s doing to me?
‘How about we adjourn to the bedroom, Severus? I want to take your mind off your bad day, and I think a romp will do nicely, don’t you?’
‘Then you’re going to have to get off of my lap so that I may stand. And believe me, my mind is anywhere but on the day I’ve had. It’s right here.’ He nipped her neck and unzipped her skirt, causing it to slide ever so slightly down her hips. ‘Well, are you going to move, or do I have to carry you to my bed?’
Severus, you have no idea how much I want you to take me right here on your couch, she mused and removed herself from his lap.
As she stood, her skirt fell to the floor, revealing a thin scrap of black lace that looked entirely too skimpy to be knickers. Severus let his gaze drop to the material and the patch of skin barely visible beneath it.
‘Are you coming?’ She traced her tongue along her bottom lip before slowly drawing it between her teeth.
‘No, but we both will be shortly.’ He rose from the couch and followed her into his bedroom.
I hope so.
There is no need to hope, love. I’ll deliver on that promise and you’ll not be disappointed, I assure you.
Hermione sat on the bed and gazed at him beneath her eyelashes. The image she drank in was appealing: his shiny, black hair barely grazed his strong shoulders, which were covered by a crisp, white shirt. His wool trousers were hanging loosely about his hips and appeared to be held up only by his erection.
Gods, look at him! He looks edible just standing there and looking at me intensely. I’d like nothing more than to rip his clothes off of him, lick him until he begs for me to stop, and then ride him until he comes.
Severus moved forward until his waist was at her eye-level. ‘I want you to undress me, Hermione. Will you?’
Licking her lips, she stood and began to unfasten each of the tiny buttons on his shirt, pausing occasionally to kiss his chest. Once his shirt was open, she pushed it past his shoulders and down his arms. She gasped when she saw the faded Dark Mark on his forearm and then kissed it lightly before moving on to his trousers. She kneeled in front of him and kissed his erection through the woollen material.
Hissing, he said, ‘You tease. If you want it so badly, why don’t you finish undressing me?’
She unfastened the buttons along the front of his trousers with her teeth, taking extra care as not to bite him.
Sliding his trousers down, his cock sprang free and bobbed in her face. ‘What, no pants?’
‘I didn’t feel like wearing any today.’
No wonder he keeps so buttoned up. I can see why...
Severus flew into panic mode. Good lord, what if she doesn’t like it?
If he dressed in more revealing clothes, women would be all over him. I mean, damn. He’s fit and has one hell of a tight arse, not to mention he’s better hung than most men. Focus, girl. You can think later, for now he’s right in front of you and ready for you to explore.
She dragged her tongue along his shaft and then took his head into her mouth, suckling it.
He lightly pushed her away. ‘There will be time for that later, minx. Right now, I want you on your back with your legs spread for me.’
He’s every bit as commanding and sexy as I thought he would be in bed.
Complying, she quickly lifted her shirt, which caused her breasts to bounce free. Once she was on the bed, she spread her legs and waited for him.
‘Very good.’ He kneeled and pushed the fabric of her knickers aside, revealing her closely-trimmed chestnut curls. He then licked her until she was moaning and begging him to enter her.
Sliding into her wet heat, he moaned loudly. ‘Damn, you feel good.’
Oh, shite. Where did he learn to move and swivel his hips like that? Maybe I don’t want to know, but damn, whoever taught him to do this deserves a prize. He’s got me coming already.
Just as Hermione was about to come, he nipped at her breasts, which sent her over the edge.
‘Yes, Severus. Come for me.’
Face contorting, he let out a long, low growl as he came deep within her. He cuddled her sweat-dampened body to him, and they soon dozed off into a peaceful, sated slumber.
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When they awoke sometime later, Hermione tried to get out of bed, but Severus wouldn’t let her.
‘Where do you think you’re going?’
‘I was going to order some breakfast for us. I thought we could use the nourishment after the night we had.’
‘Oh, I’m hungry all right, just not for food.’
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Doesn't bode well for the Charms master! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
She didn't do anything too bad to him. It's just something to remind Filius that he shouldn't meddle.
I don't know what Hermione did to Filius, but I know the punishment will fit the "crime." I can't wait to find out just what she's done to the well-meaning but meddling Charms Professor. Hummm... will it wear off in about three months? Thanks for this funny update!Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
What Hermione did to Filius will be something he will never forget... and will teach him to stop meddling. Severus's curse and what was done to Flitwick will, indeed, wear off in the three month period.
So happy to see an update on this! Thanks. I think Flitwick ought to be grateful that it was Hermione, and not Severus, who cast a spell in retaliation.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
You're welcome! Severus would be so much worse to deal with.
Oh, I wonder if it's a good thing she did? She really does need to thank him, despite his meddling. He should get the Dumbledore award for biggest meddler.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Hee. Perhaps she should, but she's still peeved at him for putting Severus through all that.
Oh, that was great. I can't wait till Filius finds out what she did.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks! Next chapter will show what she did. :)
Hee. I can't wait to see what she did to him.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
It'll be quite a funny thing indeed.
LOL I sure hope that Hermione gave Filius a taste of his own spell!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
She really did a number on him, just wait until the next chapter (which I promise will be up a lot sooner than this update).
And now Severu sknows. Poor, Filius, he's gonna face an angry Snape!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yup. Severus is livid. Hermione will be tagging along, so maybe she'll be able to keep them from dueling.
I can't believe that Hermione went behind Severus' back and spoke to Flitwick. Flitwick on the other had only has to reverse the spell, no harm done. Simple.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
To be fair, he did hear her think she was going to try to find help for him. Now if only Flitwick will do what he needs to, Sev will be fine.
LOL Mel and Helen déjà vu - it was so funny, Severus confessinghis 'gift' to Hermione.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
I wanted it to be as close as possible to the movie. Kinda changed things a little to suit my needs, though. Glad you got a kick out it. :)
Silly girl shoul dhave known better than cheat in his class.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yeah, she should have. I bet she learned her lesson now.
I want to kiss and hug Hermione. I don't know what sh'e done to Filius but I'm sure he will regret playing with Severus that way. Even if it was to help them. I'm so glad you updated this, so much i like it.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Rest assured, Hermione did something quite great to Filius for daring to interfere in Sev's life.
Maybe Snape doesn't really want to lose his newly acquired ability, does he? Just tune it up a bit. If he could turn it on and switch it off at his convenience, that would be wicked...in every sense of the word. So I don't think Flitwick is really in danger. He may just have to work a bit harder to get Snape what he wants.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
I think after all Severus has been through, he does not want such a "gift". I'm sure Hermione will be able to keep Severus's anger in check so Flitwick won't be in real danger.
Uh oh, now Filius is in BIG trouble! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Severus might just get him for this.
Naughty Filius! :0
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yeah, he's been pretty bad, but he did have the best of intentions.
Oh, Brother! The sparks are gonna fly! Great update. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks! Yeah, the confrontation between Severus and Filius has potential to be quite tense.
Good idea to go with him. This is a lovely story.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Aw, thanks! She knows it's worthwhile to go with him; not only to help keep his temper in check but to also sate her curiosity.
What in the world has Filius done! And why is he so afraid of Severus finding out it was he who gave this little "gift" to the Potions master. LOL! Poor Filius, let's hope Hermione can calm the raging beast and try to buy the Charms professor enough time for Severus to calm done.Hee hee,Betn
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
He didn't think the gift would be as much hassle as it has been, and he's worried about what Severus's actions will be -- and rightly so.
Knowing Filius, I'm sure he only had Severus' best interests at heart. Perhaps he saw what Sev' didn't and tried to give fates a bit of help (actually a lot).
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Of course Filius had no malintent--he only wanted Severus to be happy; however, he had no idea that Severus would end up suffering so much.
Apparently, Flitwick is a bad liar.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Or, maybe he just didn't expect Hermione would share the memory of their meeting with Severus.
Thanks for the update! This is such a cute story, so glad you wrote it! No one expects the Spanish In... uh, I mean Professor Flitwick!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
And thank you for such a wonderful review!
She's smart to tag along. He's a tad bit annoyed and who knows what will happen. More soon, please.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
She knows how Severus's temper is, and she's going along to try to help keep him calm. That and she's quite curious as to what's going on with Filius.
Uh oh, Miss Stevens is in deep trouble. Severus will watch her like a hawk if she is allowed to remain in his class.Is Severus about to tell Hermione that he can hear women's thought? I imagine this revelation could also be a blessing or a curse. She may be a little miffed that he hadn't told her earlier... but it's not like he brewed a potion or invented a spell or charm to give himself the ability. Hummmmm... I wonder if Flitwick could have anything to do with Severus' gift. Maybe a little Charm to help the professor along in realizing that Hermione had feelings for him? You know, to mitigate is bad moods and all that. Give the man a little joy in his life.I can't wait to see where you take them. Happy ending? Please?Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yes, if Minerva allows her to stay, that student will be watched in his class. Maybe he would have her sit at the front next to him as a punishment and to demonstrate a little of what would be in store for the others if they decide to repeat her actions. In the next chapter he does indeed come clean to Hermione, but I won't say much about it here - don't want to ruin the surprise! I was puzzling out earlier as I was writing the next installment of this story, what on earth happened for Severus to have this sudden ability. Flitwick could easily be the man responsible. In fact, you just gave me an idea for the 6th chapter (fith is already completed). Thanks for giving me a bit of inspiration! Oh, and no worries as to whether or not there will be a happy ending. Of course there will be. I save the unhappy endings for real life.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
I've been an inspiration? Who knew? Glad I could be of help!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yeah, you helped me figure out what I am going to do next. Earlier today when I posted an entry on LJ, I was wondering what I was going to do, but now I don't have to worry about it. Again, thanks so much!
Hot, hot, hot! ‘Where do you think you’re going?’ That's our commanding Severus! *claps hands*Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
He wouldn't be Severus if he wasn't commanding; We love him just as he is: snarky, commanding, and oh-so-very-sexy. Thanks for the applause and the stars!