What Women Want
luvsev105 Reviews | 7.74/10 (105 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Severus has a new ability.
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luvsev
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I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.
I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.
Reviews for What Women Want
WHOOHOO!!! FINALLY!!! I'm so glad they finally are together!! Severus so deserves to be happy!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yes, he does.
That was a tasty treat. Thanks for the yummy writing. Will he ever learn to tune out the thoughts of others? He's going to be nutters if he listens to all those comments.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks for the lovely review. Yes, he will learn to tune it out. You'll see that in the next chapter.
Mmm, sinfully delicious.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
*Grins evilly* Just wait until you see next chapter.
So, are they going for ... ice cream? LOL(Sorry, it's 9 a.m. I'm not awake yet, hehe)
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Ice cream would be good, but she's going to give him something better. You'll find that out in chapter 3, which is in the queue. :)
I loved the movie and I am really enjoying this story.Keep on posting
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Check back soon, the third chapter is in the queue.
Wait a tick... she likes me? When did I miss that memo? LOL :)
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Glad you liked that line.
hahahahahahaha...
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Glad I could make you laugh. Looks like my drabble accomplished its mission of making people laugh. :)
*giggles* I enjoy the original movie, and this one seems like it will be a lot of fun, too.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
I liked the original one, too. I only hope that this little story can be half as much fun.
Great arrangement and re-arrangement of classic movie scenes.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks!
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! LOVE IT!!! I'm glad Hermione was at his door, Maybe now he will see she isn't a child anylonger and she does really care about him..More soon Please!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Glad I could make you squee! It's certain Severus doesn't see her as a child any longer. More to come soon, I promise. I'll be sitting down to write the next chapter tonight.
Response from Becky (Reviewer)
Whoohoo!! THAT'S made my day! THANK YOU!!
lol... good thing Hermione is only having lustful thoughts about him!!! Glad you're continuing this!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yup. Actually, your comment about Hermione's thoughts on Severus's legs and arse inspired me to continue this. Next chapter will explore the smut in her thoughts. :)
I should say that I'm torn apart. For Severus' sake the voices should go away. But for my selfish pleasure, I'd prefer them to stay a bit more. *grin*
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Well, your selfish pleasure is going to win out this time because he has to endure for at least two more chapters.
Yay!!! You used the magic phrase!!! :)This is a nice follow-up to your first chapter. :)
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks. I just had to figure out a way to use that phrase. It was just priceless.
That was fun! It would have made a very interesting longer story too!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks! I'm thinking about adding another another drabble or two to flush the story out a bit.
Response from neelix (Reviewer)
Oh yes please!!! I think it has legs.... long, smooth pale ones, attached to Severus's arse, naturally!!I wonder what Hermione would think of THEM?? lol
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yeah, I was thinking about adding a sex scene in the next chappie. Her thoughts are already invading my mind.
*squeeee* Oh I love this. This is absolutely hilarious. It's a chance Hermione finds him a good kisser, else his ego might habe go down at least ten feet which would have resulted in a ruin evening and an even more crankier Snape. If you ever feel inclined to write more, please don't refrain yourself.
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Glad I could make you squee! Of course Sev is a good kisser. I mean, how could he not be? He's so delicious! It could have been very bad for our Potions master if she didn't like his kiss, but I could never do that to him. I probably will write more in this story. It begs to be continued.
Aww, this was so cute! Gloomy sevvie taking away all the points! Well, at least he found his love! Nicely done!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thanks!
Charming:) I enjoyed this very muvh, and I hope you will write more in this series. How long is Severus going to hear women's thoughts? How did he gain the ability, and if it goes away, can he gain the ability back? Warm regards ands thanks for a most enjoyable read.Fizzabella
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
I could write a few other drabbles to go along with this one because it almost didn't seem right to end it where I did. Thanks for the wonderful review and the beautiful stars!
Yay! I love it and all the little thoughts he heard. ahahahaha
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
I'm glad you loved it and that it made you laugh. It was a blast to write!
Anonymous
Oh, how funny.
When did I miss that memo? -- Oh, man, I do wish they sent out memos for things like this.
Author's Response: :) Hehe. We'd all be better off if memos were given out to let us know when someone likes us. I think it would be easier, and perhaps less awkward.
Severely Lupine's response: "Oh, hey, John. Yeah, I got the memo, and uh... no thanks. So, glad we sorted that out." Or, "Hey, Billy. Yeah. Yeah, I totally read it, and I'm right there with you. So, should we set the wedding for Saturday, then?" How much simpler life would be.
Author's Response: Yup. There wouldn't be any complications, so I think it seems like a good idea. Too bad that it probably wouldn't work because somewhere along the lines it would get cocked up.
Great job, luv! I can just picture him looking this way and that, as if there were a bunch of gnats swirling around his head! Very funny, with a little touch of heat at the end. Nice!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Thank you m'dear.
Oh, just sweet. Makes my toes curl and my stomach do flip-flops!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Aww, I'm glad my ficlet curled your toes. :)
Those poor girls. Is he going to give points back? And lucky Hermione... although I pity him if she ever finds out, LOL!
Response from luvsev (Author of What Women Want)
Yeah, a part of me feels bad for those girls, but no, I will not have him give those points back. He can't have everyone liking him, now can he? I don't plan on her finding out about his new gift. That would be messy.