First of...I love this story! Second...god this sucks when are you going to update! When you said not make you wait to long I was expecting a day or two but gah! Your killing me! Please update soon:)

Congratulations on winning! I really found it interesting how Herminoe's imagined fantsay matched Severus, right down to her knickers. It's also intriguing that they both almost, nearly, not quite got a glimpse of each other. Makes me think there is some magic that occured between them. Nice chapter.

I find myself wishing Healer Levy would tell even though that would be a huge breach of trust. I am longing for the happily ever after!

Oh I just love the artwork of Hermione's advert!

Wow, hot! I hope the next time is together... I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope that they meet soon!By the way, congratulations on winning the challenge!

Methinks that this much visualisation is perhaps a bit — ahem — unwise when a known Legilimens wishes to remain anonymous!

Fabulous that both of them were so close to having a face for the other. Great touch!

There are no such things as coincidences, especially in the magical world, I'm sure.  Great job!

Ooohhh... I wonder if each of them will think on the split-second image of each other - and more importantly, if they will truly recognize each other. Somehow it seems that Hermione, though probably shocked, would be more accepting of this reality than Severus would when he found that the woman in quesiton was 'Miss Granger', a Potter side-kick and all that. I'm sure he'd come around though eventually. lolGlad the next chapter is written and on it's way. :)

I haven't reviewed everfy chapter thus far as I'm outside (smoking on break) and my wireless keeps cutting in and out but I had to stop and say again, I am loving this story. With Healer Levy stating that Severus will be a good parent it's as if she knows some great secret that neither Hermione nor Severus knows - and maybe she does. :) But I'm sure the statement really threw Severus for a loop. lol

Wonderful chapter! I really, really love this story!!!

Fabulous!

The plot thickens but in such a pleasant way. It's curious how they climaxed together at the exact same time (Or I guess so). I wonder who created the fantasy, or maybe it was both. I'm glad you don't plan too make us wait too long for next chapter.PS : Congratulations for wining this challenge.

Okay, I must review.  I admit, I don't review stories often enough, but this one definitely warrants it.  It's my favorite.  I actually found it on Ashwinder, but you mentioned this site and I thought you must have more chapters here, so I raced over!  Thank goodness!  Your writing style is very enjoyable, as is the content.  Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this!  I eagerly await the next chapter.

I love this story, but okay already, let them find each other!!!!!  Really looking forward to what happens next :-)

as fun as that was, i hope the next bout of smut is tandem rather than solo!  terrific update.  thanks so much

Oh dear merlin!!! That's was freaking awesome! Wow! It was almost like reading a good pwp, but so so so much better. I really like the way your portrayed both hermione and severus. You make them seem incredibly human in their needs and especially above. Can't wait for the next chappie!! ~Lio~

Woo-Hoo!  This rocks so much!  I loved this chapter because I can just tell that the wait won't be for too much longer for them to finally get together!  I just hope they make their baby the "old fashion way"!  Totally Awesome story hon.  I totally can't wait for more!  Much Love ~Brena

YAY!!! Great chapter, great smut! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter already!Oh and BTW, I'm so glad you won, you deserved it!!gab

Congrats on the challenge win - very well deserved! :-DI do wonder when they'll figure out who the other is. Seems like Hermione in particular was so close already!

Hmm, fantasy sharing... wonder how that works?

great chapter!  the plot thickens indeed. just by the way, I love healer Levy.  i can hear her voice in my head very clearly.and you totally deserved that first place.

i liked this chapter very much.  aside from the fact that it's super hot, i liked the whole, mysterious magical connection between them, that their spirits seemed to meet on a different plane for this little episode.  :)  i look forward to MORE MORE MORE! 

Why, oh why do they misinterpret each other's intentions and believe the other wants to end the friendship.  I can't believe that they are both so hesitant to just tell each other that they want to stay pen pals  (and maybe more?).I eagerly await the next chapter.

Oh dear, this makes me so sad... two people, clearly in love with each other, but so alone. Please let Hermione find the courage to reveal herself.