Lost and Found
savine_snape17 Reviews | 7.12/10 (17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 21 Favorites )
Their romance had been brief and intense, frustratingly unconsummated, with moments snatched during her brief stay at Grimmauld Place. Hermione receives a parcel containing a strange gift. Who is it from? And what does it mean?
This is my response to the LJ community Romancing The Wizard - Bring out your Dead! challenge
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What can I say a 30 something mother of 1 who works as a clinical chemist in a path lab and has a 'thing', if its possible to have a 'thing' for a character, for a certain Potions Master.
RL has stalled the plot bunnies and I've no idea if/when I'll feel like writing again.
Reviews for Lost and Found
Oh that was beautiful. I love reading stories where Severus survives.
How perfect a story to finish my day before bed.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Awww thank you, I'm glad my little story provided the perfect end to your day. You've made me smile.Thanks for leavinf a review.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Awww thank you, I'm glad my little story provided the perfect end to your day. You've made me smile.Thanks for leavinf a review.
An interseting beginning. I like the plot devices -- the memberall and the portkey. I hope you do decide to complete the other two chapters you have "on the drawing board." I'm very interested to see where your story will go.Beth
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for reviewing. Erica, my muse, has decided that the story needs to be told completely, so I have ideas bubbling away, but will get a few chapters written and polished before posting.Thank you for taking time to leave a reveiw.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Tell Erica thank you for me!!! I agree, this story is too good for you not to tell it completely. I look forward to reading and reviewing as you work your literary magic.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for reviewing. Erica, my muse, has decided that the story needs to be told completely, so I have ideas bubbling away, but will get a few chapters written and polished before posting.Thank you for taking time to leave a reveiw.
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Tell Erica thank you for me!!! I agree, this story is too good for you not to tell it completely. I look forward to reading and reviewing as you work your literary magic.
An interseting beginning. I like the plot devices -- the memberall and the portkey. I hope you do decide to complete the other two chapters you have "on the drawing board." I'm very interested to see where your story will go.Beth
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thanks for the review Beth, I'm sorry its taken so long to respond. As you now know, this fic is being expanded as CBTM, I am currently working on the next chapter. :D
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thanks for the review Beth, I'm sorry its taken so long to respond. As you now know, this fic is being expanded as CBTM, I am currently working on the next chapter. :D
I'm looking forward to finding out what he's been doing for six years and why he's been unable to contact her in all that time. Given a reasonable explanation, I'd be able to fall in love with this story. I understand the constraints of the format, however, so I"ll say that what we do see in lovely and well-written.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you so much for leaving a review. My muse has decided that the whole backstory needs to be developed, I will get a few chapters written and polished up before postng them.
Hold it - six years after his alleged death, no signs in between, and she jumps in his bed about five minutes after she found out that he is still alive? No questions asked whatsoever? I know this is Fan FICTION, but it is too irrational for my taste. I like the love scene, but I would have preferred at least some "get acquainted again" phase beforehand.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Firstly, thank you for taking time to post a review.I know the story is brief, the challenge was to use exactly 750 words. As a result I think it deserves at least another two chapters to explain certain aspects of this piece. The initial piece I wrote was way over the word limit.
I hope you bare with me, and give this another chance.
Response from Muggline (Reviewer)
750 words? OMG! Okay, now I understand the problem.I must admit that I am a firm believer in "the design has to follow the function, not the other way around", so this may simply not have been my piece of cake. Nonetheless, the love scene IS very nice and I am looking forward to reading something less limited from you.
I loved it, I am adicted to stories where Hermione and Severus are reunited:-))
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it. The challenge was to use exactly 750 words. When I initially wrote the piece it was way over the limit and then I remebered a piece of advice Subversa gave me. That sometimes less is infact more.I'm glad it worked for you.
did he know she still held a candle for him 6 years later or was he just hoping?
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
First off thank you for reviewing, secondly I have plans for at least another two chapters that give background to this short piece, one from Snape's POV and one from Hermione's.Who knows the plot bunny might even provide the conversation they have the morning after. :)
This was amazing! Great job! I like the idea of the two of them just having stolen moments here and there.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
If you stick strictly to canon, that is all they would have been able to have, I am hoping to add more to the story maybe form each POV, we'll see where the plot bunny takes things.Thank you for taking time to review.
That was lovely. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. This could go one of two ways, but I do hope to add more. :)
this is wonderful,
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
*blushes*I'm glad you like it. I have more ideas running around my head for this piece. :)
Short and sweet! :)
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
I hope to continue this, I have outlines for two more chapters at least. :)
Well done, but what has he been doing for the past six years? Sev, you got some 'splain'n to do! *g*
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
What indeed has the Potions master been doing for the last six years. I have outlines for a further two chapters.Thank you for taking time to review. :)
Yes, this was definitively the missing epilogue in Book 7. 
Great writing!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for your review. It is indeed the epilogue I would have personally liked to see. I have outlines for a further two chapters so watch this space as they say. :)
They had much to discuss, but lying here, waking in his arms, was a perfect place to start a new life... for them both. Awwww! I do so love happy endings, or happy beginnings as the case may be. Now I wonder how he would explain what took him so long? She's so happy he's alive, I doubt she'll think to ask for a while! Lovely imagery in this.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for reviewing this Hun.I do adore happy endings for our favourite duo too. I have another two chapters in outline for this one from Snape's POV and one from Hermione's. :)
I want to be a fly on the wall when he explains what he has been up to for the last 6 years!! This was a lovely one shot
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you for reviewing. Yes I think Hermione may make Severus squirm as he explains his absence.I have a potential two further chapters outlined for this so long as Erica the plot bunny will co-operate.
*sigh* how lovely. thanks
Response from savine_snape (Author of Lost and Found)
Thank you, as you known I am expanding this fic at the minute.Thanks for the comment :D