As He Lay In The Dark
zyra62 Reviews | 5.71/10 (62 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )
Severus and darkness are inseparable. But the scenario began to change when another person walked into his life. Ten series of drabbles in GS100.
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I enjoyed your series of drabbles and the happy ending.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying them! =) Thanks for review, I really appreciate it. :)
That was very sweet! Thanks for a great read.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
You're welcome. Thanks for reviewing! =) I really appreciate it. :)
yay! that was a sweetly satisfying ending.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Hehe! *g* Thank you! I'm so glad you find them satisfying. =D
Oh, yes! I'm so glad that they got their happy ending! Good job!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! =) Thanks again!
yay for happy endings
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thanks! I can't very well let Severus *not* have happy endings ... I love the man too much! :)
"Weekly ritual turned daily. With the impending doom, how could he keep his hands off her?""It's my plot to ensure your return. If I'm not reason enough, surely your child would."My two favorite paragraphs. 
Sing away!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*singing "I got a pocket, got a pocket full of sunshine, I got a love and I know that it's all mine ..."*Thank you,
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
! =D Your review sooth my Monday blues ... *g* The last part is in queue, I hope you won't be disappointed.
it's lovely what you manage to do in so few words. i do hope you will give us a happy ending!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
You'll just have to wait and see ... *winks* Thank you for reviewing! =)
Oh! Such a sweet ending. This tale does a brilliant job of succinctly telling a compelling story...a masterful work of brevity. Bravo!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Arigatou gozaimasu, thank you so much! I really appreciate the reviews and am so glad you enjoyed the series. Thanks! :)
Oh! She spit out the potion....oh, the dear, lovely, determined girl! Genius as a plot too.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Determination is the way to get through a Slytherin. Severus was beating himself too much for what he did to her, it's the only way.Thank you for review! :)
Her primary reaction is understandable. Her change of heart makes sense. As does his bonding with her. Ooh, good chapter!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! :)
When during the camping saga did you have her disappear? I don't remember her getting separated from the boys at any point...and what the HELL is he planning???
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
She was not separated with the boys in DH. That part in my story was a non-canon compliance. Futhermore, those boys would do nothing to the couple but interfering... ;)
Thank you for your review! :)
Oh! His brilliant acting... then his last thought...so genius! Onward to chapter 2!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.