As He Lay In The Dark
zyra62 Reviews | 5.71/10 (62 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )
Severus and darkness are inseparable. But the scenario began to change when another person walked into his life. Ten series of drabbles in GS100.
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Almost unbearably poignant:)Beautifully done:)Fizzabella
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you for your kind words! =) The next part is in queue, don't forget to come back and read the rest! :)Thanks!
Wow, this is getting really interesting! Good job!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! The next part is in queue, don't forget to come back and check it out. :)
I'm a bit confused. I've already read this but that was the first chapter? *scratch head* Am I really that tired?
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
No, you're not. That was me. I was the one who was not supposed to submit a story when I'm too tired ... :P What I did was I submitted #3 and #4 as a new story instead of a continuation to this one. So yeah, the one you read was the wrongly submitted one! But I'm contacted the admin and thanks to them, they helped me merge the two story. So everything is fixed now!So for the confusion! >_<
You conveyed the urgency of the situation so well in just a few words. Very nice.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! In the beginning, I thought 100-words drabbles are easy-weesy. But now, I think it's harder than writing a long story!Thank you for reviewing! =)
Holy summary bat girl! I want to know more about the binding ritual, and the naked parts!!! Sometimes the drabble format is no fun. ((pouts))
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*pats
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*Aw, I'm sorry that the smutty part had to be cut off. I'm not good at writing smut anyway, so let's just leave that to the expert, eh? ;)Thank you for your review! =D
Well I like your version much better than DH! My fingers and toes are crossed that his antivenom does the trick. No make Hermione a single Mom.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
That is the most honourable review I could ever have received! Wow, thanks! I was just playing with theories and this is what I could come up with... thanks!
Wait, hu? He consummated when she was still sleeping! Gah!!I'm on pins and needles here. Update soon!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Half-sleeping. Oh, I know! That's what the warning is for! >_<But thanks for review! The next part is in queue ...
Nice start ... looking forward to more.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Thank you! More is coming soon ... hold on tight, it gets worse before it gets better!
great start , interesting concept, making out he is afraid of Nagini.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
I just find it too hard to ignore. Voldy only ever use one curse -- AK. I find that there is more than meets the eye when it was Nagini to Severus. Potions master, antivenin, spy for two decades... I mean, c'mon... ;)Thank you for review! :)
Go ahead and sing from the top of your lungs! Eagerly waiting to see the next chapter, great start!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
I am singing now! Lol! Thank you so much!The next part is in queue, so don't forget to come back and read them... :)
Oh! How heart-wrenching! I love the emotion that you've written into this -- it's amazing!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
It'll get worse before it gets better, I'm afraid ... The next part is in queue. Don't forget to come back and read! And review of course ... :) Thanks for your review! =)
All I can hope is that the mother of the unborn child is Miss-I-could-raise-a bird's-familly-in-my-hair. Hope for more.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Not telling anything, nope. *zips mouth* The next part is in queue, I hope you'll enjoy them as well. Thanks for review! =D
Hihi, I am so glad that I don't have to endure the evil cliffhanger. This is just such a lovely piece, I had to review again.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Lol, cliffhanger is a very cruel thing an author could do, isn't it? Thank you, selina. I really appreciate your effort in reviewing (again)! Thankies, matey! =D
Lovely as usual! Sing away . . .
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
"I got a pocket, got a pocket full of sunshine, I got a love, and I know that it's all mine, ooh..." Opps, got carry away there, sorry.Love you, scoffy! Thanks for review! (again) =D
Interesting beginning. How much does "she" know? Does everything go as planned? What is the plan? I look forward to the answers for these and other questions. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
All I can say is, the plan was to make sure he was bitten by Nagini instead of other ways Voldemort could think of him to die. Other than that... *zips mouth* #3 and #4 are in queue. Don't forget to come back and read the continuation!Thanks for review, you make me sing... =D
Oh what a bitchy cliff!I'll bookmark so I don't miss the next chapter.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Heh heh heh... ;) The next part is in queue, I hope you'll enjoy them as well. See, I'm not that heartless, I update real quick! Thanks for review! =)
Wonderful, thank you!
Wonderful! I thought he wouldn't make it, because in the first drabbles he is slowly losing consciousness... But I am very, very thankful you decided for a happy ending!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
There you are! I thought you've read it and thought it sucks, and thus don't leave a review. ^_^But I'm so glad I'm wrong! Hehe. Thank you so much! =)
Response from tialangela (Reviewer)
I read it last night because RL was chaotic down here. I really liked the end, it was not too sweet, or it would have spoiled the whole tone of the series, but it was happy enough to make me squee! I'm sorry my previous review was short... I was really sleepy, lol! I was reading it at 2 a.m., my daughter keep waking up crying (there were some awful car noises here last night), and so the review came a bit "tired", hehehe.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Oh no, it's not because of the length of the review. I like them all - regardless of the sizes! :) It's just that there are a few people who told me that they like this series - so, naturally I'm anxious to know what they think of the last part. Alas, some of them didn't say anything, so I immediately thought of the worst - my story sucks. :PI'm glad to see you leave a review here. Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :)
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
There you are! I thought you've read it and thought it sucks, and thus don't leave a review. ^_^But I'm so glad I'm wrong! Hehe. Thank you so much! =)
Response from tialangela (Reviewer)
I read it last night because RL was chaotic down here. I really liked the end, it was not too sweet, or it would have spoiled the whole tone of the series, but it was happy enough to make me squee! I'm sorry my previous review was short... I was really sleepy, lol! I was reading it at 2 a.m., my daughter keep waking up crying (there were some awful car noises here last night), and so the review came a bit "tired", hehehe.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Oh no, it's not because of the length of the review. I like them all - regardless of the sizes! :) It's just that there are a few people who told me that they like this series - so, naturally I'm anxious to know what they think of the last part. Alas, some of them didn't say anything, so I immediately thought of the worst - my story sucks. :PI'm glad to see you leave a review here. Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :)
*deep sigh of satisfaction*. This is a perfect ending. I love it very much.
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*bows down* Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! =)
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*bows down* Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! =)
YES! *does insane little happy dance* THANK YOU! Great!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
Haha! *joins you in the happy dance* :)Thank you! I was a bit nervous actually on reader's response to this last bit. I'm so glad you find them enjoying! Thanks, kyria! =)
Oh Yyyyyeeeeess!Yes, yes, yes, Yes, YES!!!!!
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
LOL, thanks! :)I'm glad you find them to your liking! =)
Now LOOK!I'm having an EXPERIENCE here and I don't want to stop long enough to have REALITY get in the way!*Sigh* (for the story)*giggle-snort* Bravo! (^_^)
Now LOOK!I'm having an EXPERIENCE here and I don't want to stop long enough to have REALITY get in the way!*Sigh* (for the story)*giggle-snort* Bravo! (^_^)
Response from zyra (Author of As He Lay In The Dark)
*hugs you for whatever it was that reality brings*Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)