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Before and After
kittylefish34 Reviews | 6.65/10 (34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
Hermione finds something Severus wishes she hadn't, with unexpected consequences.
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kittylefish
Member Since 2007 | 73 Stories | Favorited by 89 | 1,068 Reviews Written | 870 Review Responses
my catalyst into the world of hp fanfic was the ignominious death of severus snape by snakebite in dh. grrrrr. he deserved better, and i set off on a mission to find it! i appreciate and admire the vast and limitless creativity of all of the wonderful writers on this site and in this fandom.
accordingly, for me it's mostly about snape: ss/le, ss/hg, ss/rl are my favorite ships. i especially like happy endings for those who did not get them at the hands of jkr.
Reviews for Before and After
Very sweet and well written! Nice work! :)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thank you! it's nice to get a review on that story after such a long time - it's one of the first things i ever wrote. so glad you enjoyed it. thanks for telling me so. :D
I liked your poetry! Nice oneshot.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks! so nice to get a review on this one - it's been a while. i like to write poetry - the first stuff i posted to this site was actually poetry - so it was fun to write it for this story. :D
If that it Snape's way of explaining ... I'd love to get something explained as well :-)Liked the two poems - and the last line of the seond poem.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks, apisa! glad you liked the story and the poetry. :)
That's lovely! Sweet and hot at the same time.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
that's what i like to hear. you have made me very happy this afternoon. thanks for reading and reviewing! : D
Yowza! That was a wild ride!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm so glad you enjoyed it! thanks so much for reading and reviewing. : )
Loved the last line of that poem :D
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
glad you liked it! thanks for telling me so. : D
That was a simultaneously touching and incredibly hot picture of married life. Excellent!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks, lady rhian! your review just put a great, big grin on my face. : D
Very hot but beautiful all at the same time - that's great!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it. thanks for taking the time to review. : )
This was wonderful! Yes, I finally got around to doing some reading. I really loved the poem too. Brava!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i appreciate your taking the time to read this story, and thanks so much for the lovely review! it means a lot coming from you. i especially appreciate your kind words about the poem. : D
Wow, hot!! Very nice!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing.
Very good work. Thanks for sharing.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm glad you liked it. thank you for reading and reviewing! i really appreciate it. : )
Ahh what a hot little number. Well done. Irish
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks, Irish. i'm glad you enjoyed it. : D
Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)
BTW were the poems yours...very good Irish
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
yes, the poems were mine! i really appreciate your commenting about them. this story actually started with that first poem, but it was so sad. so then the question became, how do we get him from despair to redemption? and that's where the rest of it came from.
INcredilbly hot, my dear. thanks
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
glad you liked it. thanks for telling me so!
"He would have to explain himself.." Yay! Really liked this one!And especially your author's note concerning the commas :-)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks,
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
! i'm so glad you liked it. it's nice to hear that from someone whose stories have given me loads of reading pleasure. you know, as far as commas go, i used to think i was pretty good with them, but it seems like no matter how hard i try, i still manage to misplace a few!
Response from chivalric (Reviewer)
Don't worry. I misplace them all.
Somehow I think I could accept being called a "pushy, bushy-headed menace" if Severus were the one growling it in my ear. You've created a lovely swing from despair to ecstasy in this piece. A truly fabulous job with the ecstasy.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks so much for your lovely review! that was the challenge, to get from despair to the happy ending. i'm glad you liked how we got there. : )
Bravo! Sweet and hot at the same time. And through all that he never really had to explain himself. *snickers* That Slytherin.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
sweet and hot! i think that will be my new storywriting mantra. i'm glad you appreciated how he kind of got around the whole explaining part of things. thanks for the review, and the stars! : )
severus is a closet poet. cute.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
shh. don't let him hear you say it's cute! thanks so much for the review.
...hawtness and lovely poetry, too!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thank you so much for the kind words and the stars! i would say you don't know how much your review means to me, but i suspect you do. i doubt i would be spending so much time in this world, and i certainly would not be sailing the good ship SS/HG, if i had not been thoroughly enticed by your mesmerizing story-telling skills. so, thanks! and i'm happy i was able to give you a little something in return. : D
Pushy Bushy little Menace! LoL. Severus is quite the poet.
Thanks for a funny little read.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm glad you appreciated the humor. that particular line was inspired by a lyric from the musical "kiss me, kate," where one of the locales is referred to as things like, "that stingy, dingy menace." who knew severus was a fan of muggle musical theater!
I am glad Severus was able to show her how much his life has changed since she came into it. really lovely.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm glad you appreciated what i was trying to do. thanks for your kind review. : )
before and after poetry, anger and hot sex, has it all really!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm glad you think so! thanks for your kind review.
Great story!!!
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it.
Ooh, I love the before and after concept! Very creative! And yes, smut definitely made me like this more ... ;)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm really glad you liked the concept. and i'm glad you liked the naughty bits. i wasn't sure about it at first, but that's where it wanted to go, so there it is.
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Yes, plot bunnies can be persistant sometimes. They often take us where we didn't plan originally. But I think you delivered it well. It flowed nicely with the story. Besides, you have to show how pushy Hermione can be, *g* ;)
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
exactly so. i'm so glad you got that! that means i must have done something right. i think my favorite part about writing is how you start with an idea, and then sometimes it runs off in a completely unexpected direction. this one started with the first poem, and then i asked, 'well, how do i get from despair to redemption?' and this is what happened. thanks for your kind words. : D
Oh wow! quite nice - and really really hot! Just what a girl needs to read before turning in for bed! Thank you.
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
i'm glad you liked it, beaweasley! and sometimes, what a girl wants to read before turning in is a nice review like this one. so thanks! : D
popped in when i saw this recc'd.WHOA....nice hot little ficlet here,
Response from kittylefish (Author of Before and After)
thanks! glad it's having the desired effect. : )