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Stillness

1: Prologue

Stillness

klschmidt

34 Reviews   |   34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 929 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Colin Creevey Hermione Granger Justin Finch-Fletchley Moaning Myrtle Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Sir Nick (Nearly Headless Nick)

Years after his death, some sufferers of Tom Riddle's antics are struck by an unexpected after-effect. Can Severus and Hermione find a way to reverse the outcome? (This will be compliant at least to COS, most canon deaths will be disregarded but maybe not all.)

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klschmidt

Member Since 2007  |  3 Stories  |  Favorited by 0  |  112 Reviews Written  |  77 Review Responses

Addicted to SS/HG fan fic.  Adore Alan Rickman (looks and talent), as well as Sean Bean and Kevin Spacey.  Also addicted to Netflix.  Between challenges, I read history and sci-fi/fantasy.  Currently reading the Twilight series - pretty good so far.  Hope she doesn't poop out by the series' end as OTHERS (who shall remain nameless - ha) have. 

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0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Oh no!  From Mrs. Norris' symptoms, I think it is safe to assume that Hermione and the rest of the paralyzed people will experience longer periods of paralysis!  How awful!  Looking forward to seeing where you take this!

9/10

FlittterKat

I like the beginning of your story. Also, I'm glad to see that dreadful EWE will be ignored, lol. Looking forward to seeing the fated twosome reunited. So what has my favorite potions master been up to?

Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)

After looking at the rest of the reviews, please say your muses haven't left the country! Please continue what promises to be a great story.

Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)

After looking at the rest of the reviews, please say your muses haven't left the country! Please continue what promises to be a great story.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

OMG I hope he can come up with something to help them. This is a brilliant take on this prompt.  I hope you write more.

9/10

phoenix

Ooh, I love the start. I really do hope that you will update it soon. I so very much want to see how this all ties together. I love a good mystery and this is starting out as a wonderful one.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

this has been a very fascinating story  i truly hope there is to be more

7/10

JoKK2

Encouraging -- I can see so many possibilities for both fun and disaster with this set-up.  I hope you plan to continue.  Good luck, JoAnne

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

The Muse is unpacking as we speak.  Thanks for the review.  :-)

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

The Muse is unpacking as we speak.  Thanks for the review.  :-)

9/10

Shadow

Very interesting beginning. I cant wait to see what is causing this to happen to all the people, and why it seems to have varying degrees in each one.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Glad you liked it.  Thanks!!!  :-D

0/10

kimbee73

Very nice start...what is causing the side effects?Look forward to more.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Hee hee - that's for my muse and me to know and for you to wait for.  (I'm so evil!)  ;-D

10/10

beaweasley2

Ooh how erie! Interesting how you are handling the prompt. 

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

I hope I can work it out well.  Glad you like it.  :-D

10/10

bellarossi

Ooh, intriguing. I wonder what's going to happen next? Will the side effects worsen over time, too?

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Glad you like it - all things come to those who wait!  But I'll try not to make you wait too long.  :-D

9/10

StormySkize

Oh, this is a very promising start. I'll be following this story quite closely!

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

So glad you're enjoying it. Skipping off to continue writing... :-D

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sunny33

Brings a whole new meaning to the expression, "stoned!"

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Hahaha!  how true!  ;-D

10/10

blue artemis

Ooh, this is interesting. 

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Hope so.  Thanks for reviewing!  :-D

10/10

snitchette

Mmmm ... A very promising begining. Want some more please.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

All things come to those who wait!  :-D

8/10

Muggline

This is a very promising start. I have bookmarked the story and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thank you.  :-D

0/10

tinytexans

Ooooooh. Good start. Will be looking forward to more...

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks!  :-D

10/10

sregner

Good Start!

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks! 

8/10

reets67

Great start. I will be bookmarking to folllow...

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks for reviewing - I hope not to disappoint!

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septentrion

Interesting beginning.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

I'm hoping for an interesting ending too.  :-D

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klschmidt

Oh wow - I felt so sorry for Mr. Filch in the movie when Mrs. Norris was originally petrified!  Write more soon!

Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)

Me too!  And I will.  :-D

10/10

Wahoo and Wesleyanne

I'm so pleased that you're accepting this challenge,  I thought it sounded so neat.  Thanks for a good start.  Interesting that Justin and Colin were struck at the same time.  Oh!  Please don't let Mrs. Norris die!-Wahoo

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

I make no promises, but I'm usually kind to animals, so ...  :-D

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elsolel

This is very interesting (not quite the word I wanted, but my spelling is bad today!)  I can't wait for the next part. 

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks, I'll try to keep it that way.  :-D

9/10

azulkan2

Sounds exciting...looking forward to the next part.

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks.  :-D

10/10

murgy31

This was great!

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thank you!  Now can I keep it up?  :-D

10/10

murgy31

I loved it!

Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)

Thanks!  :-D

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