New Chapter for Something Afoot

*gasp**swoon**gasp, again!*Wow. Exhilarating.Such strong emotions in this chapter. What a match they make!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

I never felt that lovey-dovey would work for this man.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

I never felt that lovey-dovey would work for this man.

10/10

Oh my, with each chapter, this story gets progressively hotter!!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Thank you for such lovely reviews so far! It's my first smut, and I never knew it could be so fun.

10/10

Wonderful! I love the bit with the ravenclaws!!

10/10

*fans self*Wonderful!

10/10

Holy hotness! Well done :)

10/10

Oh the torture! Sweet, sweet torture! Wow, you really nailed *wink wink nudge nude NAILED, got it?* the world of erotica.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Haha! Did you mean to type 'nude' instead of 'nudge'? Very Freudian!

Response from tialangela (Reviewer)

Oh, no! I really meant 'nudge' (I am a Monty Python fan). hehehe!

10/10

"Show me."*thump!**

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

dies with a happy smile on her lips*Spec-ta-cu-lar!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Lol! That line got a few people!

10/10

To have the Room as Narrator - brilliant! The footsie-induced-orgasm - hmmmmmmmmmm *sighs and pulls herself from floor*Oh, I simply LOVED the bite! Vampire!Severus attacks, hehehe.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Glad you enjoyed it!It's strange, there are some characteristics not present in canon that I find just seem to fit him. Biting and foot fetishism seemed a natural part of his character.

10/10

Oh, that last part is so sweet. I mean, the entire pleading and coaxing is deliriously sweet and sexy. *must refrain from melting onto chair* Oustanding!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Holy Goddess. I'm so happy that I found your story here. It just gets hotter and hotter. I love the way you write. You have a way with words that is almost as seductive as Snape's voice. Thanks for sharing.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Thanks! I've learned that smutting is fun!

10/10

As I've said. Each one just gets hotter and hotter. Oh he is cruel in this. The Bastard! I love him. I read this sitting straight up in my chair, my whole body tensed up, just WAITING for it all to happen.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

And you must wait longer, bwa-ha-ha-haaah!

0/10

MollysSister

The room's POV is really cool. I like the idea of its self awareness!!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Thanks! It was one of those things that I had never intended to include, but it sprang up while writing, so I just followed along with it.

10/10

casey

lol... thanks for broadening my education! I've known little and understood less before now. You've just changed that.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Heh. They say knowledge is power, so use your new knowledge wisely. Or just use it!

10/10

pinna47

YAY! my wish last chapter came true. "Show me." Thud.

10/10

This is my favorite one yet!! (And probably if you do #4, that one will be too!). I just love the whole idea that she gets to hear these silly girls discuss and day dream about what only she knows for herself! It is so incredibly intoxicating. The spot about her pushing him away with her foot and saying "show me," just makes me into a puddle!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

I'd best get a mop and dab you up so you're in one piece for Chapter 4.

9/10

pinna47

Gahhhhhh! I love talking. That voice winding a vocal halter. Oh, Oh, oh boy. I better stop or I'll embarass myself. Please let him take his clothes off sometime soon.Your fan P.

0/10

pinna47

Hello, hello, do you know anyone that would be able to illustrate this story? What a delicious opportunity.Pinna/Portia

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Hmm, I have NO idea who could do so.

0/10

oh so sexy

10/10

wow. you really make to people grinding against each other, fully clothed in a dirty room sound romantic. beautiful.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Haha! Thanks. I didn't feel comfortable writing full-on smut, so went about it this way instead.

And thanks for the 5 stars.

0/10

i never saw feet as sexy.. until now

0/10

is this nameless girl a death eater?

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

No. Sorry!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

No. Sorry!

10/10

First Chapter Five Review!!! (do I get a button????)That was brutally hot and very dangerous. I love how she over powered him and he had to suffer just a bit. I like how tough she is and yet such a good match for him.Snape and a BJ at knife-point.... that's hot.

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Button fetishist!

Response from il_topo_piccolo_bianco (Author of Something Afoot)

Button fetishist!

10/10