Sorry if there's mistakes but my vision is completely blurred by the tears flowing from my eyes. This is so beautiful.Have you posted this elsewhere? I am under the impression that I've already read it but I rarely read on others archives. Still I really think I have read it not so long ago. 

Very touching.

You have a very passionate style of writing.  I hope you will do more.

Really loved this. Very moving, and the poem is a nice touch. It’s interesting that his Patronus was able to come to her if Severus was dead. Did he send it from the afterlife?

That was wonderful!

Great effort for your first story - very descriptive and therefore evocative writing. Thank you for a beautiful and touching tale. I particularly love the poem - while I assume the intended subject is Severus, I think it tends to work in a figurative sense for Hermione too, as she has been emotionally dead for these last few years.Look forward to reading more of your works when you post them.

Sad. But well done.