Stalking
chivalric22 Reviews | 6.73/10 (22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
Sequel to "Summoning." Snape takes his revenge on Ron as the dunderhead had painted a moustache on the Potions master's face whilst said Potions master was lying nearly dead on the floor of the Shrieking Shack.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
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Reviews for Stalking
I loved this little follow-up story. His revenge was quite brilliant!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you, dear!
Now, this is seriously in need of a sequel! Pretty please???!!!??? Great revenge!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Oof, I guess I don't have a good idea right now. If something comes up I'll let you know!
Priceless! I haven't sniggered so much in ages.A brilliant idea, well written and very funny.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you! And actually, I have to thank each and everyone who demanded this sequel - I wouldn't have written it otherwise.
I like it very much. And you had me laughing very hard with Ron's waled "I want my mum". Still haven't recovered yet.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Brilliant, absolutely bloody brilliant!!! I don't know what thrilled med most; Severus excellent play with Ron (and that was priceless) or the wonderful ending:-)) I loved it, absolutely loved it!!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
:-) Good to hear that you are still not tired of my stuff!
I loved it~!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
brilliant, I love what he did to Ron, a friendly Snape is indeed a scary Snape LOL
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Oh, I hope the world stays outside a good long time for them! I enjoyed your story -- thanks for your work! BTW -- serves Ron right. What a prat!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
I think, with the summer break and an empty house they won't open the door for a very long time *smirk*
How amazingly lovely. And I really did like his revenge, that was great.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
This had to have been the funniest fic I've read in a long time. I was literally howling with laughter as I read what Ron was going through. I figured that Severus was having a go at him and of course Ron would have sounded like a raving loon if he went to McGonagall and complained that Snape was being friendly towards him and had carried him to the infirmary when he was injured. I also loved the ending, I wouldn't mind having Severus Snape at my door at 5 am. Great fic, I loved it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Believe me - nor would I :-)))Thank you so much for reading, liking, laughing, and reviewing. You made my day!
Lovely. Just wonderful:) Your work was good to start with, and it just keeps getting better and better:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so very much! It seems I can't stop writing, and step by step I even learn not to misplace each and every comma *g* But just as a warning - the next story that will go online - Obliviate - is very dark and bitter. Just in case you are not into Darkfics. Don't want to offend my readers ;-)
i liked it. i sincerely enjoyed watching severus mess with ron - we knew he would have to pay, not only for what he did, but for not even apologizing afterward for his ill-considered actions! grrrr. and i liked the way you handled the happy ending with hermione. : )
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Very enjoyable! The first half of this - Ron's punishment - was laugh-out-loud funny, and I kept picturing the way things were happening. And I did like the ending, with everything Hermione offered Severus - hey, if she gave the man his life back once already, why not make it a good life!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Precisely my reasoning. And as she knows what she wants, she just goes and gets it. Even if it's the snarky bat *g*
Ron's punishment was perfectly Slytherin and hilarious. For just a terrible second, though, I was afraid that Hermione was going to do the same thing to Severus. Instead, you gave us a sweet and touching happy ending. Hopefully Severus will no longer have such low expectations concerning his own happiness.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
We are talking about a Gryffindor here - she wouldn't do something that nasty. As far as I know, only Peter Petigrew turned out to be evil, although being in Harry's house. Plus, he would have possibly killed her, had she laughed at him there on the doorsteps. Couldn't let that happen, could I :-)Grumble. I have a soft spot when it comes to sweet endings!
Cute!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Snape killing Ron with kindness--just too hilarious! Loved it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Thanks - after all we know about Snape, wouldn't you be freaked out if he acted kindly all of a sudden?
This positively feels like two separate fics. Why did you not leave it at goatee? Maybe even Hermione's admission that Ron would like the punishments Snape assigned? Is the stalking supposed to be two ways? Or did you just wish to have it in Potions Under Duress? What did I not understand in this story?
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Umm... You mean, why did I not end the story after Ron collapsed? Because I would have been forced to write another sequel to tie up each loose end. And I didn't want to do that. The stalking is only one way - Snape stalks Ron to pay him back. Snape is not stalking Hermione, as she invites him to her house. Nor is she stalking him; she just observes his actions. In most of my stories, Hermione and Snape end up together, and as there was a certain tenderness in Summoning, where she saves his life, I wanted to write out how it ends for them. Apart from that, even without Hermione, this belongs in Potions under Duress. Where else, as it features Snape?
Response from nata (Reviewer)
True. And thank you for your considerate reply.
ROFL!!!*is dying laughing*I just love, love, LOVE that he got Ron that good! Hahaha!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
No! Don't die! I'm addicted to your reviews and I hereby promise not to write something funny ever again *g*
Really loved this. The sweet delicious revenge - They say revenge is best served cold. And to use Ron's biggest fears - brilliant!
I also love the second half. It was so warm and tender.
He He! Just imagine how stupid Ron will feel when he finds that Hermione is with Snape which indicates that he is not gay. 
So if he wanted to be an auror he would have to be at Hogwarts for another year...In potions for another year...knowing that Snape is making love/screwing his ex-girlfriend...and Snape could use the excuse that Hermione is Ron's friend so he could be nice to him (AGAIN!)... To borrow a well used word...MWAHAHA!
Cheers
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Hi, reets,thanks for your lovely review - I simply love smileys :-)Yes, Ron will definitely feel a bit dumbstruck when he learns the truth. I would like to see his face when he finds out...
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Hi, reets,thanks for your lovely review - I simply love smileys :-)Yes, Ron will definitely feel a bit dumbstruck when he learns the truth. I would like to see his face when he finds out...
OMG this had me laughing soooooo much! of all the incideous plots...so truly slytherin. the end was just lovely. thanks so much for this deliciousness.
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Oh, always my pleasure - and I didn't even want to write this in the beginning. The prequel seemed fine for me and then people wanted to know about the revenge ;-) Well, I'm always trying to keep my readers happy.Thanks so much for reviewing - and I love the smilies!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Oh, always my pleasure - and I didn't even want to write this in the beginning. The prequel seemed fine for me and then people wanted to know about the revenge ;-) Well, I'm always trying to keep my readers happy.Thanks so much for reviewing - and I love the smilies!
I was giggling all through the first part of your story - Snape's revenge is hilarious and very clever. The ending with Severus and Hermione is lovely, he deserves good things. And I certainly wouldn't turn him away at 5 am...
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
Somehow I don't think many of us would *g*Thanks for reviewing, dear!
"Grmpf?" Oh, excellent. Ron's thought process was hysterical! And the ending was so sweet... sequel! Sequel!
Response from chivalric (Author of Stalking)
:-) Well, all I could write here would be a bit of smut, and I am affraid that is not enough reason for a sequel. If you come up with an idea what else could happen, let me know!