Oh he is such a charming devil. XD

So glad you put this little piece on paper!! Nicely done!! Short, deep, and make one weak in the knees!

Wicked!  I enjoyed this very much.

I'm glad you change your mind and very this. Very entertaining before going to bed.

I didnt even realize it was a filk! I was think Snape was going to turn out to be a vampire! Hahahaha

Nice little ficlet to start my day. And I'm with Sampdoria -- any story in which Ron is portrayed as the prat he is scores high in my book! Thanks for sharing.

Oeh! Putting a nice twist on(?to?damn those prepositions) the "I want you, body and soul"-speech. I like how you hinted at Snape's darkness. In many faust-like stories the Devil (who often corrupts young women through sex) is only recognized bij assorted dimwits (ie. Ron) with an innate capacity to judge character correctly. Or maybe I'm just reading too much in to it :) But I loved it!

I liked this story very much. I wish it wasn't a one shot.

She does so much more than shake hands, doesn't she?  Isn't it fun when something takes hold of you like that?  So maybe he is the devil....

I loved it! Brilliantly written (as usual), magnificient plot (most plots where Severus and Hermione ends up together and Ron the prat is left sulking behind is magnificient to me:-)The lyric in the song was so perfect for our favourite couple and you worked the words amazingly beautifully into the story! Yup, really, really, loved this:-))

Nice one shot with wholly believable (ie. fantastic)characterisations esp. Ron/Hermione argument. But you had me for a moment there - “Severusss.” His name was a sibilant hiss - I thought Voldemort was back! EEEK! To my relief it was only a rather 'excited' Hermione. He he!Cheers.

Very seductive and sensual. Ron is of course a spot on prat, and Severus steamy hot! No wonder she chose to leave with him.

Oh, Severus can be my Devil anytime...A great song choice!

Short but romantic as all get out - loved the one-shot - I want to go - what a man.

very nice, short and sweet

I liked that quite a bit, and I usually don't like songfics. 

Good story.  I enjoyed the happy ending.