Leaf in a Book
belle4life17 Reviews | 17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
I start to walk back to the castle, lost in my thoughts and ignorant to a shadow hiding behind a tree
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belle4life
Member Since 2007 | 25 Stories | Favorited by 53 | 22 Reviews Written | 203 Review Responses
Ummmmm. I don't really know what to say. I'm a Junior in college and an English major because I am a total bookworm.
I have been a fan of HP since I was around 11. I started reading fanfiction about a year and a half ago, and writing it a little later.
Reviews for Leaf in a Book
yes! i vote for plan b! thanks
The first fic was good, but I prefer the happy ending.
Now there is my happy ending!! Yippeeee!
Oh the angst! If only they were both Telepaths then they could read each other’s mind. Would have made for a very short one shot!
Much better ending...thx
they are both very good!
AAAAAAaaah. Thanks for that. It feels my romantic heart with hope and joy. *deep sigh of contentment*.
I hope the alternate ending has a more happy ending. I hate it when Snape does the "Heroic Prat - sorry Knight" while thinking "I'm too old for her, she better find someone her age". Really that is stupid thinking. And I'm also angry with her: where is her Gryffindor courage?Sorry for that, don't take it personnaly but I don't like stupid people and sometimes these two... (plus I had my lot of stupid people since the morining).
Oh, I like that last one...
Oh, I had to go to check and make sure this story wasn't a one-shot. Though it could very easily end there in such a sad ending, I really love Happily-Ever-After with Severus and Hermione and hope there is one here too.
So sad.... I hope he goes after her, or she tells him how she feels.
That's so sad, but a beautiful piece.
Very intriguing beginning! I like how you alternated POVs.
*sniffle* Get back here and fix this!(Please.)
Response from belle4life (Author of Leaf in a Book)
alternate ending on its way. do not fear.
ACK! No, you simply *cannot* allow it to end like this -- it is not to be borne! There are so few happy endings in real life -- can't we at least have them in fiction?!?
Response from belle4life (Author of Leaf in a Book)
i felt the same way so im posting an alternate ending. this ending was just the first one that I wrote because I was listening to someday by Nickelback when I wrote it, and so I was in a semi-depressed mood. lol
Anonymous
This was sad... nice job. :-)
Author's Response: aww, thanks. I wrote an alternate ending that I'm gonna post too just because I can't handle not having a happily ever after. lol. i'm a sucker for happiness. haha
Angel Mischa's response: Haha! I've done the same thing with some of my fics! It's good to have the happy out there!
Such beautiful writing - and of course I prefer ending #2!