yes!  i vote for plan b!  thanks

The first fic was good, but I prefer the happy ending.

Now there is my happy ending!! Yippeeee!

Oh the angst! If only they were both Telepaths then they could read each other’s mind. Would have made for a very short one shot!

Much better ending...thx

they are both very good!

AAAAAAaaah. Thanks for that. It feels my romantic heart with hope and joy. *deep sigh of contentment*.

I hope the alternate ending has a more happy ending. I hate it when Snape does the "Heroic Prat - sorry Knight" while thinking "I'm too old for her, she better find someone her age". Really that is stupid thinking. And I'm also angry with her: where is her Gryffindor courage?Sorry for that, don't take it personnaly but I don't like stupid people and sometimes these two... (plus I had my lot of stupid people since the morining).

Oh, I like that last one...

Oh, I had to go to check and make sure this story wasn't a one-shot. Though it could very easily end there in such a sad ending, I really love Happily-Ever-After with Severus and Hermione and hope there is one here too.

So sad....  I hope he goes after her, or she tells him how she feels.

That's so sad, but a beautiful piece.

Very intriguing beginning! I like how you alternated POVs.

*sniffle*  Get back here and fix this!(Please.)

ACK!  No, you simply *cannot* allow it to end like this -- it is not to be borne!  There are so few happy endings in real life -- can't we at least have them in fiction?!?

This was sad... nice job. :-)

Author's Response: aww, thanks. I wrote an alternate ending that I'm gonna post too just because I can't handle not having a happily ever after. lol. i'm a sucker for happiness. haha

Angel Mischa's response: Haha! I've done the same thing with some of my fics! It's good to have the happy out there!

Such beautiful writing - and of course I prefer ending #2!