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Potions Under Duress What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.
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What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.

snitchette

29 Reviews   |   29 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

My response to the "Why Snape laughs" challenge.

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snitchette

Member Since 2006  |  4 Stories  |  Favorited by 4  |  4,714 Reviews Written  |  448 Review Responses

Hello I'm a french girl who absolutely loves HP and his world, especially one Potions Master and his beloved unsufferable know-it-all.

I'm an avid reader and a faithful reviewer. My friends even dare say I read too much, and sometimes they miss me.

If you need help with French information (language or anything else), please feel free to ask. I'd be glad to help.

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0/10

sara lady dalian

That was very sweet.  As a mother myself, I've always loved baby-fics.  Chocolates to you - Sara

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you so much for your kind words. I love baby fics too, and one day, I'll probably write a real one.  Stay tuned, one never know when the muse can struck.

7/10

Kore

Bwahaha. That sounds like a certainly Snape-ish act to me!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Absolutely right. Thank you for leaving a review

9/10

CharmedForce

I love fluff, and I love that Hermione tricked him with something she had already done!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you so much. You can't imagine how much your review means to me.

0/10

Keppiehed

Aw That was so cute! You definitely melted me and gave me a serious case of the warm fuzzies. Very well done!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you so much for being so kind.

10/10

Anonymous

"she transfigured him into a rabbit because he was acting like one in certain circumstances."

Love that line! And I love that Snape would make a fool of himself out of sheer boredom. And his reaction to her being pregnant made me squee (of course! Snape+baby=uber squee)

Author's Response: To be honest, it makes me squee too. Thank you so much for taking the time to R&R my modest work. You don't know how much I appreciate it.

alliean's response: Not modest at all - it's really lovely.

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kimjo2

just lovely.  thanks

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Glad you like it enough to make a review.

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Glad you like it enough to make a review.

0/10

sunny33

haha very good!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you for leaving a review.

10/10

sinbad

What a nice story!  I loved how Hermione was already pregnant (quite slytherin of her I do believe).

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

I love that part too (HeeHee). Thanks for the review.

8/10

baseballbabe122

Lol, that was a cute short fic.  Made me laugh, and form a silent "O" with my lips when she told him she was already pregnant.  That was cute to throw in.  :)

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the lovely review.

9/10

sc010f

This reminds me of what I say to my students. "I never smile before Christmas"  This was lovely!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you for taking the time to review but might I ask why you never smile before Christmas?

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Moyra

Good one, this answer to the this very special challenge here!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you. As soon as I saw the picture I get inspired (which is not that often) so I jumped on the occasion.

10/10

Katie616

Hee hee! I love the thought that all it would take Severus to laugh would be because he wanted to shock everyone! That is a hugely funny idea. *sniggers*I like the little bit of fluff where he says he'll enjoy watching her grow with their child. I am such a sucker for that sort of thing.And heh heh! She was already pregnant when she said she would stop taking the contraceptive potion. Brilliant, Hermione. . . Thank you for the wonderfully fluffy story!~Katie

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thanks to YOU for reading AND for that wonderful review. It's one of the nicest I've received since my first posting.

9/10

Merlinsbeard

Fluffy and lovely.

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you

10/10

Sampdoria

I loved it!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you

10/10

chivalric

Lovely little piece of fluff. Thanks for sharing!

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

And thanks to you for reviewing.

9/10

pookah

Thanks for this amusing tale.  I enjoyed it a lot and was glad that Hermione was already preggers whens he made the deal.  Clever girl! 

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

I know it sounds cliché but your review really make my day. *happy sigh of contentment*

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mock_turtle

you made me smile.  thank you.

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

I'm very glad you enjoy it.

8/10

zyra

How sweet!! She's already pregnant!Oh ho, you know what? I think Hermione could very well suited for him. She just went to promise him a child so that he'd tell her why he laughed, when she was already pregnant anyway!She should be a Slytherin, that one.. tut, tut.Lovely! :)

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Slytherin... Mmmm. She has a good Master and dealing with Severus everyday must teach you one thing or two in the sneaking area. But enough to make her a Slytherin? I need to think about it.

Response from zyra (Reviewer)

You didn't believe all that 'Slytherin power-hungry, Death Eaters and Voldemort's followers' statement now, do you?From the Sorting Hat's song, it only said that Slytherin are "cunning folks that use any means to achieve their ends". If you put that in Hermione's context, she could very well suit in Slytherin. ;)

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

You're right but I think her courage fiber is very strong. Plus, if it weren't for Severus I doubt she would be that way.

0/10

remy

Haha, that was great! 

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you for taking the time to review.

10/10

kittylefish

nice and sweet bit of fluff, with a little bit of substance there at the end.  i particularly like that he laughed so hard he clutched his belly - at nothing!  *smiles again at mental image*

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Actually not just for nothing. Seeing the shoked, even scared faces on the students made laugh harder to the point where he clutched his belly. Thanks for reviewig.

0/10

mewtynt

Very cute. Very well done. =) hehehe

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Thank you so much for the review. *happy smile on my face for the day, maube more*

10/10

Anonymous

You silly thing. Here I am reading a bit of fluff, a favorite pastime, and now I have tears in my eyes! Awwww.... *sniff*

Author's Response: Really? Wow you can't imagine how proud that make me. Thank you so much.

0/10

MollysSister

YIppeee Hermione she got him in the end!! Wives are sneaky.

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

I agree and especially when it somes to babies. Thanks for the review.

0/10

rlc

What a nice pice of fluff!  She's pretty good at manipulation herself.

Response from snitchette (Author of What Makes Severus Snape Laugh or How to Manipulate Your Wife.)

Absolutely. But she has no merit as she learned from the best. Glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

fizzabella

Ok this is the kind of story at pushes all my buttons and makes me get mushy:)I love it,I love it. And you can't leave it hanging out in the wind here. You need to continue this one:){{hugs}} and thank you,Fizzabella

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