This is quite fascinating.  I can't wait to see where you take it. 

Very nice chapter!I enjoyed your use of imagery and I particularly enjoyed this analogy:The past follows us like a starving dog trails a child with a tipping bag of sweets. We don’t have to love the dog to accept its presence, nor do we need to reach down and encourage it with pats on the head. I choose to block out my past. There is little good to be found there. Yet sometimes it’s impossible to ignore that dog any longer. Sometimes that dog sinks its teeth into your leg and forces you to pay attention.Well done!

Woooo this is intriguing.  More please!

Very good start !

This line made me laugh:

Albus has always pestered me about paying more attention to the comings and goings of the thrice-damned Golden Trio. Somehow I doubt this is what he had in mind.

Oh wow. This is amazing. I love how you write for Severus. The vocab and tone are spot on. I can't wait to read more!!!! Thank you so much for this tasty treat! Cheers! ~ Brena Marie