New Chapter for The Time-Turner
The Time-Turner
shellsnapeluver119 Reviews | 6.66/10 (119 Ratings, 0 Likes, 217 Favorites )
Hermione accidentally, on purpose, uses a Time-Turner. What happens when she travels back to the Marauder era? What will become of her future? Travel with her as she embarks on a journey that no one, especially Severus Snape, will forget.
Start ReadingChapters (9)
About shellsnapeluver
Author
shellsnapeluver
Member Since 2007 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 154 | 182 Reviews Written | 1,336 Review Responses
Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
Reviews for The Time-Turner
I like how you brought the present... er future... Harry and Ron into it. I wonder if they will figure out what happened?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
We shall soon find out! :)
I can just imagine Hermione having a major argument with herself! I love how you introduced all the characters and how precariously balenced the situation is between Severus and the Marauders.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yes, she tends to argue with herself often! lol!! Thank you for reading.
Great chapter, I really like the time-turner theory you have presented. Excellent chapter with lots of action.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you! I really loved writing about her going back in time.
great correlation between what is happening in the past explaining what happened in her flashbacks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you. :)
I LOVE the flashback scenes. It gives the story a richer feel to it.Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Hi Livvy, I'm glad you like the flashback scenes. There will be more!
I'm interested to see what Dumbledore is doing, and what Voldemort is up to with Snape.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Must keep you waiting though.
Good one, thanks for taking the time to write for us
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Wow. Thank you for such kind words *blinks* Thank YOU for taking the time to read and review. *hugs*
Loved the pewter sticks scene. This is a great fic!Livvy
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you Livvy!
I love their holiday together and I love Sev having her in his youth...someone who loves him truly loves him -- great story!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Yes, that is VERY important to this story--someone who really loves him. He won't be able to let that go. Thank you for reading and reviewing! *hugs*
Great chapter - I loved the throw in from older Severus about the pewter stirring rod and the past - good job.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you. He keeps living those clues during that one summer... she just has to pick up on them.
ooooh nice chapter, the pewter stirrer was a great idea!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Oh thank you!!! The pewter stirrer has been a hit!
Great re-interpretation of the relationships, Sev and Madam Pomphrey , Sev and the Marauders etc
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you very much. They are always fun to write.
Very good, nice "date" and the "going steady" bit is just right for the era.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Ahh, I'm glad you think so. It's so sweet.
Hmm I wonder if Snape expected her back earlier ?? Assuming that he now remembers she went back to the past .
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Guess you will have to read more! lol Thanks for reviewing
interesting start, I liked the way she was having an argument with herself at the beginning LOL!@
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
It happens to the best of us... lol
Another fantastic chapter. Hermione is so cute!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
heheheh... thank you :)
I loved the pewter stirring rod side story, it really made the chapter for me.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thanks
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
!
Yay! She realized it! *squee* I'm so excited for them! I can't wait until she gets back. I want to see how it goes when she comes back and they both see each other when she realizes she loves him, because she didn't before. . . rather, when she was his student, even though he already knew, because she was going to go back. . . time travel stories are so fun! I like how in this story, you had it so that she was meant to go back, instead of going back and changing everything. I think I like this kind of story more, instead of people going back and having to worry about how they might be changing their own future. It's more complicated. I mean, I still like those stories plenty fine, I just prefer this type.And now I'm just blabbering.Thanks for the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!~Katie
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Hi Katie,I really like how you put this, "She was meant to go back, instead of going back and changing everything" because that is soooo true. And I am glad at least one of my readers gets that because sometimes I have a hard time getting what I want said... well... said. And you can blabber on and on anytime! I love it! lolThank you for reading and reviewing, it means so much!
The way you are building this story is very creative and inventive. Nice work!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thank you so much for all your reviews!
I never considered that Snape might have had a friendship of sorts with Madam Pomfrey. What a nice touch!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Oh, I'm glad you think so! I just figured... well, he's always in the hospital wing because of crap James and Sirius does to him, so they found a wonderful freindship.
What a dreamy first date! You made me wish I was there!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Ahh... *blush* thanks.
Your young Snape is just as suspicious as I would imagine him to be! Liking the story a lot!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
I'm so glad you like the young Snape--he's so much fun to play with!
You've certainly raised my curiosity! I like the way you are telling this story, and I'm looking forward to more.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Oh Thank you!!!
Now I wonder is present day snape remembers her? That could be why he asked for her help!oooohhhh!!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
It could be! lol
Great chapter - loved how Severus defended her and then told everyone that she was his. Good story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Time-Turner)
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far!