Hopefully Hermione can remind Severus of the good he had done, too. Hopefully she'll recind her lie and tell him how she admired him *at some point*

more!  I need much, much more!

Hee hee, I've followed you to TPP because the story only goes to this chapter on Ashwinder.  I'm very excited to read on!

I'm wondering about the significance of Hermione's nightmares.  Every time she sleeps she seems to have one.

The Ministry has an evil feel to it, quite different from the incompetent quality it usually has.  Let's hope Hermione survives this. 

I'm loving this story, on to the next chapter...

ONLY THREE YEARS???!!!  Well, at least you brought him back.  Hopefully Severus will find a way to extend his life especially since he is 'serving a master' again.  Wicked, wicked author, lol.

Personaly, I think women should be ready and able to defend themselves should the need arises.  Now that I made a public saftey announcement, I do have to admit you got me hooked on the first chapter!

I can't wait for the update.  This story is so interesting!

Interesting beginning -- I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

Lovely! You write tension very well. Can't wait to see where this goes!

An interesting story line. Perhaps Hermione would have been safer if Voldemort had won. This Minister and the policies regarding job failure and human rights is terrifying. Maybe Hermione should just tell Severus what the Ministry is up to and together they could figure out a solution and he would know just how dire their circumstances are.

Very good. Hoping to read more soon. Thanks

This is getting a bit Hitchcockian in the Ministry controls. Creepy. But still very interesting. Thanks.

Introspection is a very good plot builder. You have used it quite well. Thank you.

Very good. The personality is wavering between Snape and Rickman. Good combo job on that. Enjoying it very much.

Good beginning. Looks very promising.

Y'know, somehow I'm getting the feeling that this new ministry is quite on the evil side. Just an observation, lol... You have a very unique writing style that is somewhat refreshing, actually. I enjoyed this chapter very much and I'm looking forward to seeing how Severus and Hermione progress. Will he get his memories back? This is listed as horror, but I'm still hoping for a bit of romance thrown in. Anywho, please do update soon!

I am eager to see where else the whole Ministry as 'Big Brother' can go.  In fact - I am intrigued to see where the entire story goes.  But, I guess I will have to just wait and see!

Interesting so far. The concept is really different, and I'd like to see what you do with it.

You have created an almost tangible sense of danger.  Well done!

Great first chapter! The tension is palpable. Off to read more!

Bad Ministry, bad, bad Ministry. Just what are they thinking, that she would shag his memories back into him?

How horribly awkward for the two of them. And what an evil Ministry!

Oh wonderfull! This sounds a bit like 'Cold Lazarus' (a television play/series by Dennis Potter; absolutely brilliant)I'm tagging this because I'm curious as to where you're taking this...