I love them just leaving like that.  It was cool. 

Okay, wait a minute I thought chocolate fed the muse. Now I am confused.  What am I going to do with my stores of dark chocolate if it won't fee my muse?  Well done as always, my friend.

Nice ending to a really nice story. I've enjoyed this very much.

lovely ending :)

awesome! awesome :)

I love the idea of a doberman sized bat. 

Doberman sized bat r o t f l!!At least he finally admitted his feelings - and she hers!Loved the escape and thankfully neither girl lost thier heads. I love how you are writing Luna and Hermione. Thumbs up!

You know if you keep mentioning chocolate I am going to have to send you some.  Well done again my friend.  Even though I did not get an update email.

Hmm a Bat does that mean his will look like a giant birds nest?  Irish

I haven't been reviewing every chapter, but I will tell you that I have thoroughly enjoyed this story thus far.  While most seem OOC - I love it!  The friendship between Lucius and Severus and the burgeoning relationships with each of them and their respective witches...it's wonderful!  I love stories where these "dark wizards" aren't so dark after all. :)  Can't wait for your next update! :)

Very enjoyable story.  a bat patronus?  how funny.  Especially when it is 'the size of a doberman.'  I agree with Nightshift's previous review, it's great to see the ladies getting themselves out of a jam. 

Luna's alternate form is of limited use for the most part, but could be very useful in a few situations. I like the change in Patronus, and the fact that both girls used their intelligence and their initiative and thought their way out of the trap. Herr Rowle is doomed to be disappointed trying to trap them. However, Hermione is going to run out of money if she keeps having to replace wands.

So cute - he went searching for her... then told her to strip and go take a bath! Then offers to set a Tracking Charm on her... loved that. sneeky..

I can't imagine what Luna's Animagi form is - a whale? Wouldn't fit in the bathroom - destroy the tube yes, but would also knock down the walls too. A dolphin! That would be cool!

. . . Cliffies are evil, you know.  I'm new to the story, but I've been reading as much as possible to catch up.  I love your characterizations.  Lucius is a little unbelievable, right now, but I hope you'll explain that eventually.  You have wonderful alpha and beta readers, and the story is very interesting.  I hope to see more soon!

I can't wait to read more! I'm sorry that I do not review as often as I would like to. More often than not I end up having to copy/paste fics into an e-mail and read them while I'm at work. I will say that I am very much enjoying this fic. I just have one question though. What is supposedly in the Ark that makes it so important to occultism? I have always been under the impression that its contents were limited to religious artifacts such as Moses's staff and the tablets the Commandments were written on. I know the plotline is based in history as I have read some about the Nazi's obsession with it so I am not questioning that. I just do not know the details on why they are wanting it so badly.

oooo another evil cliffy.  Didn't I talk to you about these?What an intimate way for Severus to illude to Hermione that he is interested in her.  For Severus Snape to allow one entry into his mind is indeed a high compliment.  What must Hermion be feeling?Well DoneIrish

Now I am not sure about reiviews being better than Dark Chocolate.  Where are your priorities woman!  It is a refreshing change to find a story that allows for relaxed interaction between Hermione and Severus so often they spend all the time at each others throats or working up to the next conflict.Well DoneIrish

Oh, my.  Well, at least there was a bit of a plan. 

Oooo so Luna was right! Nazis are alive in Germany.I am really having a hard time picturing Ron with Milicent.  Wasn't she a bit of a cow (literally).Well done my friend! Irish

Severus knows her birthday?  I find this very telling indeed.  Oh and the poor girls what a shock they have had Professor Snape alive and well and as Snarky as ever.  I am so glad that he has not lost his Snark! Well Done Irish

Okay, what is it with Herr what's his name? Is he a throw back to WWII? Why is it that the Ministry has chosen Malfoy of all people to keep tabs on the girls and why, for that matter, do they need to be looked after?  You have given me more questions than answers, but I like it I like it!  Well done again.  Irish

Who's that knocking at the door?  Also, just why is the Minister so interested in Hermione's path of study? I figured that she would be more suited to Advance Mathematics or History.  Well done again! Irish

Argh! I was right not a single update Notification and now I am many chapters behind.  Can I trade places with Hermione, please? I want to go stufy in Germany.  I still wonder what could the Minister be up to?  A job that pays you to party?  Well done my friend.  Irish

Sorry, but I had to rush straight on to this chapter without reviewing the previous one. It's your own fault when you leave cliffhangers like that one. Now, are they going to get away with taking a night off for frivolity and alcohol, or is Rowle going to make them wish they'd stayed in the palace?

Whale? Walrus? I don't think either a dolphin or a porpoise would break the bath... I guess I'll have to wait and see when I come back from giving my eyes a rest.

Now, we know Hermione Transforms into a bird, but just what kind of bird is it, not a pigeon, I don't think or she'd have had no trouble being inconspicuous.