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Dreamy_DragonAfter the war, not all is well as people are trying to get on with their lives. When two former enemies meet again, things start to take unexpected twists and turns…
The HP universe belongs to JKR, I only borrow. Can I keep Lucius?
Acknowledgements held until after the reveal, but you know who you are. My heartfelt thanks, Ladies. What would I do without you.
Standing before the mirror, Hermione tried to turn to get a better look at her long-sleeved, bright turquoise dress. The small, cramped room made it impossible for her to see more than a part of it.
'Does nothing for your complexion ... that,' the mirror's ancient voice quipped.
Hermione sighed. As if she didn't know already. It wasn't her colour, and the high, modest neckline didn't help either. The pink dress with the tight-laced bodice she had tried on at Madam Malkin's on the other hand...
She had liked what she had seen in the shop's mirror and the way the dress had hugged her body, but as both Molly and Ginny had been quick to point out, she couldn't wear pink as it would clash with Ron's hair, and besides, she wouldn't want to create the wrong impression by showing off her cleavage like this, would she? Especially not on an occasion like this. Hermione sighed again. Of course not. Besides, Ron already knew what was under her dress.
She shook her head and then quickly fastened on the gold necklace, a present from her parents. Everything was fine. She was really lucky. She had survived the war. She had a great job, she was about to become one of the youngest ever members of the Wizengamot, and she would marry her best friend, who loved her dearly. That was what mattered. She swallowed to get rid of the lump in her throat.
The door flew open, and Ginny came rushing in, wearing a dark purple dress. Its thin sequined straps nicely accentuated the pale skin of her shoulders. She beamed at Hermione. 'Ready?'
Without waiting for an answer, she turned and rushed out again. Unused to her heels, Hermione followed her a bit more slowly down the rickety stairs of The Burrow to where Harry and Ron were already waiting for them. Harry picked up Ginny and swirled her around once before he gave her long kiss. Ron grinned and quickly hugged Hermione. When Ginny decidedly nudged him in the ribs with her elbow, he said, 'You look very nice.'
As usual, Hermione pretended not to notice Ginny's non-too-subtle hint and smiled at Ron. 'Thank you; you look nice, too.'
Harry held out the empty cereal box that had been turned into a Portkey. 'Right, let's go then or we'll miss the speeches.'
*****
The Ministry had decided to host the annual ceremony and ball in honour of the victory over Voldemort at Hogwarts. The Great Hall was crowded with people, and everybody wanted to exchange a few words or at least a greeting with Harry. As she followed the other three to an empty table, Hermione quickly grabbed a glass of champagne from one of the trays that were floating through the room. She downed it in one gulp, set it down and took another full flute with her to the table.
They had just sat down and were waiting for Kingsley to begin the ceremony when Ginny suddenly made a face as if she had found something unpleasant stuck on the sole of her shoe and said, 'Ugh, look who's here.'
Hermione followed her line of vision and saw Draco Malfoy standing at the back of the hall, an extremely pretty blonde woman at his side. Before she could say anything, a bell began to toll five times and a hushed silence descended over the room.
*****
Lucius Malfoy was casually leaning against a table in the background, surveying the people seated throughout the Great Hall. He mentally ticked off the guest list. Everyone who had been in some way involved with the victory over Voldemort was here. Most importantly, he was here, too. If people doubted his integrity they knew better than to say so. A cold, satisfied smile briefly flitted across his face. His eyes swept lazily through the room to fall upon Potter, his young wife and their friends. It looked like yet more Weasleys would be populating the world soon. His nose, which had started to wrinkle in distaste, positively scrunched up when he saw Miss Granger. That dress she was wearing was an abomination. Someone should have told her that turquoise made her look like Ophelia after several days in the water. On the other hand, the dress tied right in with the company she kept, but why would she hide her rather nice figure in that way?
She was also downing two glasses of champagne in rapid succession. How very interesting. Lucius took a sip from his own glass and once again wrinkled his nose in distaste. Whoever had been in charge of the evening's drinks deserved to be rewarded with a round of Crucio for their lack of taste.
*****
Hermione shifted in her seat and looked through the Great Hall. A number of couples were dancing to the slow waltz currently playing. She could discern Harry and Ginny among them. Both of them were so obviously radiating with happiness that Hermione couldn't help but smile despite the tiny pang she felt at seeing them. Letting her eyes wander further, she saw Ron standing in a corner, talking to George and a couple of his friends. They all had bottles of beer in their hands and were roaring with laughter. She shifted in her seat again. George caught her eye and whispered something into Ron's ear, causing Ron to reluctantly turn and walk over to their table. He plunked down in the chair next to Hermione and took a long draught from his bottle before he said, 'It's great, isn't it? Everybody is here; it's almost like being back at school, but nobody can tell us off now.'
Ignoring the lump that had decided to reassert itself in her throat, Hermione quickly grabbed another glass of champagne from a tray floating nearby. 'Yes, it's lovely.'
Ron grinned at her. 'See that's what I like so much about you. You're not like other girls; you are almost like a bloke; you never make a fuss.'
Hermione quickly downed her glass of champagne, enjoying the feeling of the bubbly liquid running down her throat.
'Miss Granger, would you grant me the honour of a dance?' a somewhat familiar voice drawled.
Hermione let her eyes slowly travel up the impeccable, first-quality charcoal grey dress robes and the strands of perfectly groomed white blond hair until she looked into the silver eyes of Lucius Malfoy.
'Of course she won't, now sod off,' Ron cut in.
Hermione glared at Ron before turning back to Lucius, who hadn't so much as raised an eyebrow at Ron's behaviour. 'With pleasure,' Hermione said, standing up and allowing Lucius to guide her onto the dance floor while Ron stared after them, open-mouthed.
When the music started again, she felt the lightest of touches at her back. Hermione smiled at Lucius and let him lead her into the dance. The touch of his hands was barely noticeable as he stirred them through the crowded dance floor, yet for some reason it made her skin tingle underneath her robes. Hermione relaxed into the music and their movement, feeling that her partner knew what he was doing and that it was unlikely that they would either bump into another couple or that he would step onto her feet.
'You are a good dancer,' she said.
'Thank you, Miss Granger. One needs an adequate partner to shine, though.' He smiled at her.
Of course the legendary Malfoy charm was on full-force. To be on the receiving end of it didn't feel at all bad ... on the contrary. Hermione smiled back and relaxed further into the dance.
'So, how come you are here? I didn't think...' Hermione's question trailed out. I didn't think an ex-Death Eater like you would be invited or even care to be here.
That smile again. 'Ah, I have to thank your friend Mr Potter for that. He made it very clear that the assistance of my late wife was of considerable help to him in the final stages of the war. So, it is really on her behalf and in her honour that I am attending this function today.'
And of course attending a Ministry function and being seen dancing with one of Potter's best friends will significantly add to your recently restored reputation. She didn't mind. He really was a good dancer, and a part of her shocked herself by being quite pleased for having got one over Ron. 'I am sure she would appreciate your gesture very much. By the way, I was very sorry to hear about your wife's death. My condolences.'
'Thank you.' They continued to dance in silence for a while before Lucius asked the next question. 'So, I take it from the notice in the Daily Prophet that congratulations will soon be in order?'
What was he on about now? 'Congratulations?'
Was that amusement in his grey eyes? 'Congratulations on your betrothal and impending marriage to Mr Weasley.'
Bugger, that had just slipped her mind. 'Oh, yes. Thank you. Molly ... that is, Ron's mum ... has suggested that we get married in July. She says summer weddings are just so beautiful.'
Lucius's eyes narrowed a bit. 'And you don't agree?'
'I haven't really thought that much about it. What with my new job at the Ministry and everything.' Again she felt something constricting in her chest, trying to block her breathing.
'Which department are you working for?'
'I used to work in Care and Regulation of Magical Creatures, but I have just started at Magical Law Enforcement; it's fascinating, I really love it.'
Lucius smiled. 'Yes, the intricacies of Law and its uses are fascinating indeed.'
As they continued to dance, Hermione's mind wandered off. It was remarkable how comfortable it felt dancing with Lucius, considering who he was.
She didn't notice that the music had stopped until Lucius's hands dropped away from her. She suddenly felt bereft, as if she had lost something precious, and for some reason the ground felt a bit wobbly.
They stood, facing each other when the music started again in a slow, sensual tune. Hermione looked at Lucius, a question in her eyes.
'May I?' he asked, and when she nodded, placed his hands again on her back and her arm, drawing her a bit closer than strictly necessary and led her into the next dance.
His eyes held hers as they began to move slowly in tune with the music. Caught in his gaze, Hermione was acutely aware of his hands, the closeness of his body and his scent. He smelled of an expensive, slightly spicy aftershave and something that was uniquely him. The tingling sensation she had felt from the touch of his hands earlier now started to spread through her body, bringing with it a little tugging in her lower belly.
They didn't speak as they danced; instead, Lucius drew her a little closer still and inclined his head towards her. She tilted her head a bit upward. They were so close now; she could feel his breath on her skin. His lips were nearly touching hers, only a fraction of an inch... only...
And then the music stopped. Coming abruptly back to reality, Hermione quickly stepped away from Lucius, nearly tripping over the hem of her robes in her haste. 'Thank you for the dance, Mr Malfoy.'
'You are welcome,' Lucius said and took her arm to steady her before he accompanied her back to the table. Ron was nowhere to be seen.
'It seems I might enjoy the pleasure of your company for a bit longer, Miss Granger.'
A/N: This story was begun as challenge response. It has veered far away from the original prompt, but I'd still like to acknowledge the part of the prompt that asked for Hermione receiving an anonymous letter together with a Portkey and thus provided the inspiration for this fic.
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Oh well, not the house-elves. Draco does make more sense, if you're going to be all logical about it...
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
And Draco wants his dad to be happy... <br> Thank you for reading and commenting
My main suspect? The elves! It's got to be the elves, the meddling little buggers. Only they would be able to replicate his favourite recipes, would know his wines, and would have the connections with the exclusive elfy restaurant. Well, maybe not. But that's the theory and I'm sticking to it!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Very interesting guess. ~looks shifty~ Thanks for commenting :)
Calling the love to learn and the hope for a carreer "eccentricities" is truly a remarkable stupid thing of Ginny. Good Hermione dumped her brother!And like others, I just love the cat ;-)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you, dear! Ginny needs to grow up, and Hermione is a lot better off without Ron. I'm very glad you like the cat :D
This is really neat.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you. I'm very glad you like this!
I am absolutely trilled to see this upsdat to this wonderful story, thank you so much!I love this Hermione who have ditched Ron, and her little black kitten, it reminds me of a certain someone:-)) I hope to see more of your story soon, but I will wait for however long it takes:-))
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you very much for your lovely review. I'm thrilled that you're still reading, and I'm very glad that you like Hermione and her little kitten.
Nice! Very glad that you updated this story. The list of things that Ron was willing to overlook in Hermione made me want to kick him (and Ginny). What Hermione needs, is a man who is interested in her because of those things, not in spite of them. Such men do exist, though they're rare (I had to wait until I was 30 before I found mine). Let's hope Lucius will turn out to be one of them...
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you! I'm very glad you're still reading.
Ron was very lucky, Hermione didn't hex him with something really nasty. And yes, I totally agree, she'd be a lot happier with someone else. :)
I love Lucius and so far i am enjoying this very much.I can see Draco's little hand in this and i suspect Lucius does too!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying this.
As to who's behind it *looks shifty*
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying this.
As to who's behind it *looks shifty*
Oooh!I'm intrigued (sp?)Really enjoying it so far, there are so few HG/LMships about. Without SS added into the mix anyway. Well I really liked reading it and hope for more soon.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you so much!
I'm so happy that you're enjoying this!
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Any idea when there'll be more??
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you so much!
I'm so happy that you're enjoying this!
Response from vdemon_96 (Reviewer)
Any idea when there'll be more??
Hmmmm- interesting. I am dying to know who set them up - great evening. I wonder what will happen next.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your lovely review!
More soon.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your lovely review!
More soon.
yum, I want dinner with Lucius too, pretty please? I wonder too who is behind it all, maybe one of his house elves ?
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Oh, plotting elves - now, there's an idea...
Who wouldn't want dinner with Lucius *wistful sigh* Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Oh, plotting elves - now, there's an idea...
Who wouldn't want dinner with Lucius *wistful sigh* Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Intriguing. Like Lucius and Hermione, I wonder who set this up. Looking forward to more. I do like how the unexpected dinner did allow them to get to know one another a bot more.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your lovely review :)))
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your lovely review :)))
That would be a bit surprising, and who would set it up. Now I have to go back and re-read to get my suspicions in line.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Suspicions are good ;) Thank you for your review!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Suspicions are good ;) Thank you for your review!
So happy to see the update, and soooooo curious to who have arranged for their dinner:-) Update again soon!!!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
I'm glad I could make you happy. More soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
I'm glad I could make you happy. More soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Ooooh now who is behind all of this one wonders.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
So do Lucius and Hermione ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
So do Lucius and Hermione ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Somehow the 2 first chapters escaped me! I love this! Pls update soon!!Sorry, but I cannot let you keep Lucius just like that ... Shall we draw lots? Or take turns??
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your review. I'm very glad you like the story! *pets the shiny stars*
Taking turns is good... or sharing ;)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your review. I'm very glad you like the story! *pets the shiny stars*
Taking turns is good... or sharing ;)
Well this certainly is interesting. I love stories about Lucius, i find them so rare.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you :)
Oooh, intriguing. You had me fooled with the flower to Hermione. Now I'm wondering who the mysterious matchmaker is and how each party is going to react when they realize they were tricked. I love the mystery in this one and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
I'm very glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'm working on the next chapter, so there'll be more soon. Thank you for your lovely review.
Lovely start. :D Of course, I love a good LM/HG fic and this looks like it will be one. For the life of me, I still cannot understand why JKR thinks Ron and Hermione belong together. Their personalities are worse than oil and water. Now on to the next chapter.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you :)
I totally agree on the Hermione/Ron pairing, they've just nothing in common. Lucius and Hermione on the other hand... (at least in fanon).
somebody is playing matchmaker...
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Somebody is...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Mmmm.. charming Lucius, dancing, who wouldn't consider it?
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Yes, he can be quite irresistible ;)
OOoo the dream! nice. And those letters. Who sent them? And why? They were beautifully written and really seductive... Intriguing chapter.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you for your lovely review.
OMG who sent the letters???
It's either someone who actually thinks they would be good together, but that would be too easy.
Obviously Rita Skeeter is still writing gossip for the paper (the beetle) so it could be her in hopes of creating a scoop for herself.
Or it could be someone trying to trick them or set them up as revenge. I'd say Ron, but he wouldn't be that sophisticated. But perhaps another Weasley? It feels like a woman's doing, so perhaps Molly and Ginny together?
And that same daydream they're having? There's something about the paper the letters are written on. Perhaps they're treated with some sort of potion or charmed somehow.
Also the cat sort of reminds me of Severus. :)
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Yery interesting speculations, but my lips are sealed ;)
Thank you for your lovely review!
oo now things are starting to get intruiging.. I wonder who is setting them up?
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
*grins and says nothing*
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
*grins and says nothing*
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Oh! Oh I like this!
It sounds like Ron and Hermione getting engaged was primarily something they did because it was expected of them. Like they hadn't even considered that nobody was forcing them to. Of course Hermione says that Ron loves her, but then his almost reluctance to go and talk to her when George tells him and the comment that 'she's almost a bloke, never making a fuss' makes me think that maybe he does love her, but not really in the right way. You know?
Also his answering Lucius' asking her to dance for her. At first I thought he just didn't expect her to want to dance with him or all people, but then I started thinking about the above and realised that maybe he didn't expect her to want to dance with him because 'she's almost like a bloke' and therefore in his eyes not the slightest bit interested in dancing with anyone because he isn't. Did all this even make sense or am I over-interpreting the text? (I am, aren't I? A lot or just a little bit?)
Lucius. I can't figure out if it's just the Lucius-y polite distanceness or if I suspect he's up to something. For some reason I started wondering exactly what Narcissa died of...
I'm looking forward to the next bit.
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave me such a detailed review.
Yes, Ron and Hermione did get engaged because that is what people do at least in the world of Ron's parents so he never really thought about it. Neither did Hermione, but for entirely different reasons. And he has yet to realise the difference between loving someone as a friend (albeit with benefits ;) ) and being a lover/partner. And because of that he doesn't realise that what he meant as compliment namely Hermione being almost like a bloke is hurting her. Which is his problem in general, he is immature, insensitive and too often just says what pops into his head without thinking about it.
His answer to Lucius is mostly a gut reaction, but if asked about it he probably would think it unlikely that Hermione would want to dance with him, not because of the dancing, but because he can't imagine she would want to dance with, of all people, Malfoy.
And Lucius is almost always up to something... ;)
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
I love this beginning, and look forward to reading more!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Author of Of Surprises and Detours)
Thank you :)))
The next chapter is with the betas, so there'll be more shortly.