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Potions Under Duress Congratulations
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1: one shot

Congratulations

kizzy7

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 1,293 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Viktor Krum

Severus visits Hermione to offer his congratulations on her upcoming marriage. AU.

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Chapter 1: one shot


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Member Since 2008  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 62  |  222 Reviews Written  |  855 Review Responses

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I'm a sucker for happy endings. 

Just started the livejournal thing... am technologically illiterate, but please feel free to friend me!

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8/10

kimbee73

I can't believe Hermione didn't seem as angry with Minerva than with Severus. Although I am glad she decided to start again with him. Very nicely done.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Thank you! :)

0/10

snapify52

Awwww....  Although I do have a soft spot for Victor stories, I liked the poignant backstory.  

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Thank you so much for the review!! Though I am a hardcore ss/hg shipper, Viktor is better than, oh lets say Ron. Quite a few reviewers expressed their concern for Viktor on Ash, so I'm thinking of writing oh I don't know perhaps an epilogue to this little one-shot.Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it!

10/10

blackaces924

lovely!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Thanks so much for the review! This was my first fic ever, so it holds a special place in my heart. Glad you liked it!

0/10

kittylefish

that was sweet. ah, the combination of people butting in and severus's damnable honor. it can only mean trouble when it comes to their relationship! but yay for a happy ending! (or maybe more like a happy new beginning pointing towards a happy ending, but that will do.)

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Thanks so much, kitty, for reviewing my little stories! As a newbie author, I love reviews!Yes, this one is much sweeter for sev than In the Dark, even if the ending is somewhat ambiguous. But I imagine that they will live happily ever after...Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it!

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

as a newbie myself, i understand and share your love of reviews! glad to feed my fellow authoress. (i can say that now.) ; )

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

ah, yes, us newbies do love our reviews, don't we? They make me want to write more, which I plan to do. Soon. Really. Whenever my Muse gets off her lazy arse!Again congrats on your first fic. Its fun posting, huh? And a little scary, sending your precious little stories out into the world all alone. Its great that we have such an awesome community here though.Lol, sorry about this long response... I really should be working... ah, well :)

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

very fun. very scary. i feel calmer since i've gotten a few lovely reviews. (people like my story! yay!) now, back to work with you! and me, too. *sighs*

10/10

Horserider

Very nice! Though I have to confess I would have preferred this as a longer, more fleshed-out story. I'd really like to see their relationship develop, and what exactly McGonagall could have said or done to drive the wedge between them.


~HR

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

good point HR! I considered doing this as a long fic, but I just sat down and wrote...and that is what came out! Thanks for the review!

10/10

Katie616

-sniff- Crying


Severus, poor Severus.


Hermione, poor Hermione.


But it ended up happy, and for that I am so thankful! When Severus was walking away, I felt like my heart was breaking. And that end line: 'For you, Hermione, I would wait forever.' Oh! I mean, that could be taken as sappy, but in that context, it was just perfect.


That was a wonderful, touching story. Thank you so much.


Love


~Katie

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Katie thank you so much for the wonderful review! I was a little worried that the story would turn out a bit sappy (especially the ending), so i'm really happy you liked it!!

0/10

queenp

Awwwwwwwwww...

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

thanks for the review, glad you liked it!!

9/10

CharmedForce

Oh, so beautiful! What a wonderful story.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

thank you so much!i'm very excited you liked it, gives me initiative to write more!!

0/10

DanaPAH

That was really sweet.  Thanks for sharing.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

thanks for the wonderful review dana! so glad you liked it, i certainly enjoyed writing it!

8/10

helshez

Aw, that was sweet. Nothing like a bit of fluff to go with your lunch!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

I'm so happy you liked it! This is my first fic ever, so thanks so much for the wonderful review!

Response from helshez (Reviewer)

Well, keep it up. You deserve a pat on the back for being brave enough to post. I'm way too much of a coward to show my writing to strangers. Maybe next time you could try some angst. SS/HG is just begging for angst.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

Thanks! It took me a while to work up the courage to post...

i too love a good ss/hg angstfest! I'm working on a longer fic now, much angst in store.

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Ah, Minerva is such a buttinski, huh?  I hope you let us know how this turns out ... and keep the happy ending junkies like me happy, OK?  Pretty please?  Thanks for your work!

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

thanks for the review cerydden! I'm not sure if i'm going to write anymore of this story...though I have a few ideas for it...reviews like yours give me the motivation though!

10/10

snitchette

I love it. I already knew that Severus can be an arse some times but this is his biggest mistake. Fortunately Griffindors are forgiving...

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

yes, he can definitely be an arse sometimes...but that is why we love him! Thanks so much for the review, glad you liked it!

10/10

Maddie

Awww. To think that a third party almost ruined everything they had together. It is so sad that his insecurities made him believe McGonagall's assertions without discussing the matter with Hermione.

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

yes, that severus can be pretty thick sometimes! Thanks so much for the review

10/10

amsev

Sigh! So much packed into one tight story!  Of course, if  you felt like expanding this, I, for one, wouldn't be upset...

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

thanks so much

Response from kizzy7 (Author of Congratulations)

for the wonderful review! I've thought about expanding it, but rl is kind of in the way right now, but i will have more free time on my hands in about a month, so maybe then... Thanks for reviewing!!

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