This just might qualify as the biggest cliffie of them all, oh cruel person...  More, please???

This was my favorite line and had me laughing out loud!!“I refuse to become one of your damn projects, woman!”“Too late.”

Awww. But what happens next?  I hope you decide to write more.

Ahh hurt - comfort!

Very touching. It's good to know he's in safe hands.

i like this, even though it's kind of sad,  but you do leave room for hope.  hmm.  four months to rub his back - i wonder what she might be rubbing in another four months?  *winks*

I would gladly read a sequel to that. It could be a fantastic begining.

You are not going to let us know how it turns out????  Please do not do this.  At least one more chapter!!!!  Please!!!!!!!

I often dislike stories told in such tiny snippets, but you have done a good job here choosing what to tell.

Very nice. I have faith. :)

Very nice approach.  I admit to being a bit disappointed that you will not be continuing on with this as I think it would be interesting.  However, I also understand that it can stand nicely just as it is.  Thanks for sharing, JoAnne

Oh, I loved this, even tho it made me sad. I hate to say it, but I don't have much hope for poor Severus. And it would take four months to work up to being able to rub his back, eh? Good work.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. I have hope for the two of them. I'm sure it will be a long, uphill journey but perhaps they'll make it together. After all, Severus is pretty young for a wizard.