Dear God, that was so creepy.

More like an oddly calm pleasure at how many of his fellow Death Eaters were buried next to him.

You know, I love Lucius to death. I know he's a "bad boy" and all that, and I never try to redeem him in any fics he's in. Yes, I humbly admit, I always have found the bad boys alluring.  At least I've never dated one that was bad to me.

Anyway ...

I thought this little ficlet was a nice little foray into the (possible challenge) question of: What would happen to the Death Eaters once Voldemort died.  The only concrit I have is that you used 'coffin' too soon.  I would have perhaps made the realization come a tad slower or not quite yet called it a 'coffin'.  Other than that, you made my mind gears work and now a little possibility of a story based on good/evil is blossoming instead of a story fraught with sex.  Amazing, I know.

Oh wow.  How wonderfully dark.  Very nice work :)

oh dear poor Lucius

A very compelling piece that delves into the pysche of Lucius while making no attempt to gloss over the unpleasant aspects of what he is suffering. The style is deceptively simple as it draws readers into it with its easy flowing prose. In all, a very good attempt at depicting an uneasy topic.

Eww that's grim. Not that I can say I wasn't warned, horror was marked.

Oh, God. That is seriously one of my worst nightmares. I wouldn't even wish that on Lucius Malfoy. *shudders* Truly horrific and dark.

Very depressing, but nicely done. Gives me the chills

Interesting. But wasn't Lucius on the Hogwarts grounds during the Final battle and wasn't he in the Great Hall afterward, consoling his wife and son? Still, this is a potenet story and interesting, very emotional and well thought out piece.

That is my worst nightmare!!  It reminds me of an old Hitchcock story from years ago, that I won't go into right now.  This is the kind of fic that one can't forget about right away.  Very scary!  I think it taps into most people's fear of the worst way to die.~*

Gah!!  That was actually frightening and quite disturbing.  I can't say I enjoyed the thought of it, but it was well written.  JW

Totally gruesome - gave me the shivers.Good one-shot for the subject matter that was written about

Uh, chilly! What a terrible end, even for a man like Lucius.And his thoughts about Draco suing the Ministry! So Lucius, up until the very end.Very well done!/M

oh my goodness!  what a creepy tale!  that is horrible, but well written.  congrats on having it recommended on Lumos!  I think Lucius's thinking about Draco's suing was a very natural touch.

Very disturbing.  You have just touched on my worst fear.  It's a compliment to your writing that I have chills running down my spine.