Potions Under Duress The Second Time Around

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The Second Time Around

21 Reviews | 7.9/10 (21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 34 Favorites )

Angst Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 12,306 Words 2 Chapters Complete

Severus overhears something that causes him to push Hermione away. Can he reel her back in when he realizes he's made an error?

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Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

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kimjo2

gosh, i just love happy endings!! lovely bit of fluffy goodness. thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!

10/10

snitchette

*snif, brushing a tear at the corner of my eye* I love happy ending.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks me too! I have to have em!

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad you're back. And with this brilliant story it's even better.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! It's good to be back! Lightening struck my computer and it took awhile, but thank God I am back on! ;-)

9/10

CharmedForce

That was lovely! Stupid Severus, trying to be good to Hermione.

Great job!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

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sareliz

::breathy sigh:: Oh! The Angst! Thank you, thank you, thank you for resolving it! ::happy sigh:: And thank you for writing.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! I LOVE angst--but I have to have happy! ;-) so happy you enjoyed!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! I LOVE angst--but I have to have happy! ;-) so happy you enjoyed!

9/10

pookah

I enjoyed this, thank you! I wondered why Ginny considered it odd or quite unusual that the Charms Professor inheirited a fortune. It does happen sometimes, so why was the point made that it was odd? I thought you'd come back to it later, and we would find out that Severus bribed the Charms Professor to quit (using some of the fortune he made from his Dragon Pox cure.)Anyway, nice job.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! I think Ginny meant the traveling around the world being odd. ;-)Glad you enjoyed!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! I think Ginny meant the traveling around the world being odd. ;-)Glad you enjoyed!

10/10

Bentwaters

Absolutely fabulous!!!! As yours always are ^.~ Loved it all (if I go into detail I'll just repeat the whole thing hehe) I love seeing a new story from you. Makes my whole day.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! Your reviews make my day! It's very nice to know that people enjoy what you do!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! Your reviews make my day! It's very nice to know that people enjoy what you do!

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Alexa Potion

A lovely scene with the trio and Ginny. It's nice that they stick together.

It was very enjoyable to read Severus' and Hermione's discussion concerning a relationship.

Ah, a crisis got a couple together. I wouldn't liked a groveling scene from either Severus or Hermione. And you tied the antidote back in the picture. I would have wondered that if you didn't wrote about it.

A very nice story!

Oh, and Welcome back! I was worried that you left the fandom but thankfully you're back. You're one of the my favourite authors and I was desperate when I thought that you have left for good and I coudn't get to read no more your stories. So I'm so happy that you're back!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! Yes, I can see them doing that, especially with all that they've been through together!No, I can't picture either of those two groveling! Yep, didn't want to leave that hanging! ;-)Glad you enjoyed.Thanks so much! Lightening struck my computer and I was off for a long time--God how I missed everything and eveyone! I don't think I could ever leave fandom! It's good to be back.

Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

I wouldn't imagine more horrible than no Internet contact at all! Let's hope that it never happen again! And welcome back once more!!

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Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

I wouldn't imagine more horrible than no Internet contact at all! Let's hope that it never happen again! And welcome back once more!!

10/10

Alexa Potion

You made me smile when I read about how happy Severus is with Hermione.

You made a very realistic Severus' actions toward Hermione when he heard what two old biddies were cackling. It so in Severus' character to do something like that extreme without discussing about it with Hermione.

Thankfully you didn't made Hermione's outburst like a waterwall scene. Her reaction was very mature.

And I liked very much scene between Severus and Hermione when they heard what was for them in Minerva's will.

And your sentence in the end of chapter? A masterpiece!

What will be up to next?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much!Yes, considering how he's lived his life so far, giving up hiw own happiness for others seems the norm for him to me.Glad you enjoyed my Hermione!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much!Yes, considering how he's lived his life so far, giving up hiw own happiness for others seems the norm for him to me.Glad you enjoyed my Hermione!

9/10

kittylefish

what a charming story. i do love snape when he's being all self-sacrificing, pushing hermione away for her own good. well, at least i love it when there's a happy ending afterwards, like there is here! of course the whole thing could have been avoided if he'd only TALKED to her, but then there'd be no story, so where's the fun in that?!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

LOL! Thanks! You're right! Glad you enjoyed!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

LOL! Thanks! You're right! Glad you enjoyed!

10/10

barbied011

How cute! I just added it to my favorites. I love a happy ending.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! You're very sweet!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! You're very sweet!

10/10

blue artemis

That was sweet, I liked it, even the angsty bits.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed.

10/10

ladyluv

I loved this story - it was tragic and sweet all at the same time - great story

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! I am so happy you enjoyed it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! I am so happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

just harry

Even thou this story was way to short, I still really enjoyed reading it. You sure know how to make every one seem so real and draw you in to want more. Am looking forward to your next story. Please dont make us wait long

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! You really know how to make a person feel good! I appreciate you!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! You really know how to make a person feel good! I appreciate you!

9/10

LillaQ

That´s such a lovely story. I even got a bit misty eyed in the end...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

AHHH! Thanks! That's lovely!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

AHHH! Thanks! That's lovely!

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irishredlass

Hee Hee Hee I would have loved to have been a portrait on that wall. Imagine the view! Well done. I am glad that Carmella did not cause them any further problems. It was cruel of you though to almost kill another Lily.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! No, I never could have done it! You know me--angst queen with a happy ending!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks! No, I never could have done it! You know me--angst queen with a happy ending!

10/10

irishredlass

Yeah, I has been so long since I have seen anything new from you. Than alone makes this a pleasure to read, but the plot, story and premis making it even more of a treat. Well done, on to the next.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks so much! My computer was struck by lightening, and I was off months. I really went crazy! I am doing something for the anonymous challenge right now though ;-) and I already have another plot bunny running around!

Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)

I am so glad to see you back. I have immensely enjoyed this sight and missed reading your work. Many of the authors here have inspired me and I too have posted a few though mainly original poetry

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Response from irishredlass (Reviewer)

I am so glad to see you back. I have immensely enjoyed this sight and missed reading your work. Many of the authors here have inspired me and I too have posted a few though mainly original poetry

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just harry

WELCOME BACK!!!!! i was so happy to see that you have started a new story. I was not disapointed with the first chapter, as always you make me want more, and Oh what a three months I am sure it's going to be.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks Just Harry! I am so glad you've missed me! Lightening struck my computer, and I am just now getting back into it! I do have something going for the anonymous challenge going on!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks Just Harry! I am so glad you've missed me! Lightening struck my computer, and I am just now getting back into it! I do have something going for the anonymous challenge going on!

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livvy6

Loved it! Wanted to cry for Hermione. I was dumped cold like that too when I was 20 and stupid. Unlike Severus, he was a git! At least Severus did it out of love, although what a waste of time! But all's well that end's well! I do love a happy ending!

Livvy

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks Livvy! I have to have my happy ending! LOL Glad you enjoyed.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks Livvy! I have to have my happy ending! LOL Glad you enjoyed.

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i_read

What a shock it must've been for him, to realize she was teaching elsewhere. To know that he'd thrown away their relationship for nothing. It was nice to see her friends supporting her, and for him to finally confess, even knowing she was angry.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thank you! I know... could you imagine! Exactly, by not talking to her first, they wasted three years. Glad you enjoyed!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thank you! I know... could you imagine! Exactly, by not talking to her first, they wasted three years. Glad you enjoyed!

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i_read

Such pain, for both of them! You really make their emotions real. It's so sad when people try to do "the right thing" for others without confirming that it is the right thing.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks,

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

. Yes, it is. But neglecting to do so, he needlessly hurt them both.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

Thanks,

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Second Time Around)

. Yes, it is. But neglecting to do so, he needlessly hurt them both.

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