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It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes Chapter 13: A Golden Thread
Chapters Menu
It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes

1: Our Choices Show What We Truly Are

2: Proper Nomenclature

3: Signals?

4: The Gloves are Off

5: It’s a Gift

6: Pet Names

7: Draco Runs an Errand

8: Hello, Insanity

9: Fruitful Expedition

10: Queen of the Lists

11: Tis the Season

12: Thank You, George Bailey

13: A Golden Thread

14: Blue Yule

15: Snow Day

A Golden Thread

It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes

Chapter 13 of 15

pokeystar

His daughter's birth makes a few things very clear.

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Draco Malfoy discovered the truest meaning of love the day his first daughter was born.

He adored his erudite wife with the same fierce devotion. His heart had expanded to include his two sons in its protective, watchful glow. Yet it had taken Zuzu’s birth to strip him bare of his defenses and his artifice, to reveal to him that the changes in his character and conduct were more than strategy or survival. That they had penetrated deeper than skin or brains, down to the soul and marrow of who he was.

As he held his tiny progeny in his arms and stroked the delicate velvety fuzz of her cheek with one gentle finger, Zuzu opened her eyes and her innocent gaze burned away the last stubborn remnants of Draco’s anger and resentment. He would sacrifice anything for her, for her brothers, for her mother. For his family. He could not condone his father’s actions, but he could no longer condemn him for them, either.

The image of George Bailey frantically checking his pockets for the leavings of a wilted flower floated through his mind. He knew now that as much as the thousands of deeds George performed had impact on the world around him, what was truly important, what made life worth living, was his family. Transfixed, Draco peered into his daughter’s sweet blue eyes and murmured so softly only she could hear,

“My Petals.”

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A/N:

There's something like a line of gold thread running through a man's words when he talks to his daughter, and gradually over the years it gets to be long enough for you to pick up in your hands and weave into a cloth that feels like love itself. ~John Gregory Brown

George Bailey is the protagonist in “It’s a Wonderful Life.”

written for greenschist as a contribution to the luvlikerocketz community on live journal.

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Latest 25 Reviews for It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes

65 Reviews  |  6.48/10 Average

10/10

mick42

Thank you so very much, for this wonderful series, it has brought me much joy this Christmas season.

 

10/10

mick42

Empty nest syndrome is a real bitch, but Draco seems to have the cure.

10/10

mick42

What a lovely picture you paint, of the family life Hermione and Draco share.

I hope the snowman will be ok, ZuZu will be very upset if he isn't.

10/10

mick42

Very clever, he knows the list must always be obeyed to the letter.

10/10

mick42

It is a very special relationship , the one between father and daugther. My grandson and his wife just had their first child, a girl, and she had him in the palm of her tiny hand, from the moment he laid eyes on her.

This chapter is a beautiful tableau of a fathers love.

10/10

mick42

Mmmm, I wonder what was in those diarys. on to the next chapter and see

10/10

mick42

Wonderful, I love little Severus, with his chubbie little fingers and lisp, doing his first magic for Chirstmas.

10/10

mick42

Wonderful, I live little Severus, with his chubbie little fingers and lisp, doing his first magic for Chirstmas.

10/10

mick42

So funny hormones and magic running wild, and Harry and Draco not telling poor Neville, just mean. 

10/10

mick42

Would be waterproof tinsel?

10/10

mick42

Trust Draco to focus on the smallest of details , so he can avoid looking at the big picture.

A very beautiful dress.

10/10

mick42

Getting the in-laws together, always a dicey thim. Emoations will run high, but compromise can be foung.

A lovely gift, only Draco could build bridges with a pair of gloves.

10/10

mick42

A true dentist's daughter would be able to use her teeth, Draco { a true Slytherin Prince } knows how to get what he wants.

10/10

mick42

Ahhh, these are the things that will keep us warm, when the world grows cold.

10/10

mick42

Severus is dead! never a good start for me, but the story is intreguing so I will read on.

10/10

mick42

Ron, Ron, Ron I just want to give him a good clip 'round the ear, and then a hug for having his heart in the right place.

I'm shocked, shocked I tell you, Has Hermione NO Shame? Griffendor ties , poor Draco, allthough come to think of it I don't think he will mind. 

10/10

Bambu

I think, perhaps, my favorite aspect of this scene vignette isn't the happy family indulging in a family tradition, instead , it's the fact that their lives aren't perfect, but they find comfort, solace, and a strengthening of their love in spite of the negative things.Just lovely, as always.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

It's mine too.You can't appreciate the good without experiencing a little bad.

10/10

Bambu

Now that's love!How wonderful that Draco was able to notice and understand her ennui, and find a solution!DaM is a quite remarkable husband.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

True romance, right?A man helping.:-)

Response from Bambu (Reviewer)

True love, indeed.

10/10

Bambu

LOL!  I love how cleverly he inserts himself into her hectic days, and subtly (laughs ... not) he makes sure she pays attention to him.He's really rather adorable.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

Isn't he?I always assume his first attempts were subtle.  But you know how clueless Gryffindors can be.

10/10

Bambu

So I've zipped through the middle bits and pieces to catch up and haven't left a single intermediary review ... but can I tell you how much I'm enjoying this serial?You've so beautifully captured this moment and what having a small child depend on you can do (especially little girls and their fathers.)

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

I'm pouting a little, but only because you give such thoughtful reviews.Mr. P and mini-P were definitely the inspiration behind this addition.We recently found the quote in the author's note for her yearbook tribute.:-)

0/10

MollysSister

A wonderful ending! YOu wrapped it up so nicely. Makes me feel all Christmas-y.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

Thank you!*hugs*Especially for sticking around & reviewing, since I know you're Sevvy's girl.(I won't tell him you strayed).

0/10

MollysSister

The kids ditched their folks at Christmas? Lumps of coal for them.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

Ever notice that Ron stayed at Hogwarts with Harry a lot during the hols?I can't remember whether Draco or Hermione did.At this point in the timeline, if I remember correctly, most of them are out of the house, either married or working at their first jobs and weren't able to get away.

0/10

MollysSister

Awwwwwww that is so damn sweet! Your Draco is a honey pie.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

He has his moments.Both kinds, unfortunately.

0/10

MollysSister

Oh they named their first born Severus! How sweet is that? Very. I may consider forgiving you for killing off the original. Maybe.

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

Severus was at least partly responsible for them getting together... so, he lives on, in a way.

0/10

MollysSister

I am with Mr. Pokey more magic makes a good story! Loved how you worked in into the pregnancy! Fun!

Response from pokeystar (Author of It’s a Wonderful Life, He Hopes)

This was definitely my favorite chapter to write.  I'm glad he said something.

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