With His Smile
Chapter 2 of 2
Ladymage SamikoHermione's life, as well, has been graced with moments of pure love.
AN: I just wanted to thank everyone who commented on With Her Tears. I was… amazed… by the sheer number and enthusiasm for a drabble I felt was 'not bad.' So, anyway, thank you all, and I hope you enjoy this companion piece.
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I fell in love with his smile.
When I tripped into his arms, his mouth twitched.
When Crookshanks leapt onto my stomach and purred, his lips thinned.
When he watched me work, the corners upturned.
When I proposed, they wobbled.
When we danced at our wedding, his smile was gentle.
When I told him I was expecting, it froze.
When he held our son, it was incredulous.
When they played together, it was carefree.
When he gave me lingerie for our fiftieth anniversary, he smirked.
And when we reunited after death, he was scowling in impatience, then laughing with joy.
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lovely. thank you
Both lovely and sad. :)
Loved it!!!
if it was your intent to put your readers to tears then you have suceeded. my tears of joy love and awe over the stroy have found me in such few words. you have my thanks for this. perhaps i needed to shed a few tears.
This was really lovely. Thanks for writing.
The many reasons for tears. Some good, some bad, and some make you look ugly. lol ~wipes nose~ beautiful
Powerful. Well done.
this is lovely. very tender and moving. it's amazing how you tell their entire love story in so few words.
This is too beautiful. I love your writing and I sorry !i don't review each time. I'll try to correct that bad habbit in the future.
Oh, you are soooo good at these. Very emotional, and perfect!
Only one word: Beautiful!
This is very poignant. So few words, but they say so much. Well done.
OH MY!!! I feel utterly swept away by the beauty that you portray in so few words. Just magnificent!
That's beautiful! Thanks!!!
You say more in these drabble than many authors say on novel-length pieces. And what you say is beautiful. Simply beautiful. It's going on my favorites... :: add to list ::
Together, these two pieces are perfect, laughter and tears.
So beautiful, a whole lifetime, in so few words.
These two little pieces are very beautiful. I wish I had your talent at writing.
What a lovely companion to "With Her Tears". Just smashing!!!
The two sentiments fit so perfectly together. They definitely lived happily ever after. Very good job.
This is so charming and lovely! Thank you for sharing it!
~bows down to the master~you so rulebrilliant