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GeeLicious

1: One-shot Story

GeeLicious

Mazzy

65 Reviews   |   65 Ratings, 0 Likes, 84 Favorites )

Romance Smut compliant post-DH/DH Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 7,565 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus spies a disguised Hermione in an "adult" shop and decides to have a little fun with his former know-it-all student. (PP Post DH challenge prompt #33)

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Chapter 1: One-shot Story


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Mazzy

Member Since 2007  |  7 Stories  |  Favorited by 24  |  673 Reviews Written  |  190 Review Responses

I'm relatively new to fan fiction, only discovering it after reading DH - around August '07. The first fic I read was a DM/HG fic on Pureblood, and second was an SS/HG on Ashwinder. I've been hooked ever since. :)

I still really like both of those pairings, though I tend to read more SS/HG than DM/HG - who can resist the sexy Potions master? :)

I am also attempting to write my own fic - DM/HG - so if you're into that ship, feel free to tell me what you think. And I'm always interested in reading a good fic so if you have any "must read" recs, feel free to drop me a line. I'm always looking for new stories to get hooked on. lol

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http://mazzy2121.livejournal.com/
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Pureblood (now Lumos), and Ashwinder

Reviews for GeeLicious

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0/10

snapemylove

Wonderful job!  I especially liked the banter in the Three Broomsticks.  "Geelicious"!  That was awesome.  Thanks for sharing.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee... of all people in the HPverse, I think Sev is the most deserving of a little fun in his life. I'd imagine him thoroughly enjoying himself with that little exchange. :)Thanks for reviewing and your wonderful compliments!! *blush*

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee... of all people in the HPverse, I think Sev is the most deserving of a little fun in his life. I'd imagine him thoroughly enjoying himself with that little exchange. :)Thanks for reviewing and your wonderful compliments!! *blush*

10/10

Katie616

That last part was perfect. How 'he survived Voldemort and the war, Albus Dumbledore and even the dunderheads the man forced him to teach. Well, he thought, if this was his fate - death by Hermione - he would leave this world a happy and contented man, wrapped in the arms of the beautiful witch now lying at his side.'

Sheer geenius. (lol) Thanks for a great story.

~Katie 

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

I think of Sev as someone who 'planned on not making it' during the war so I kinda pulled from that idea, like he's always wondering when he'll finally meet his fate or that he believes he's living on borrowed time. But I also thought, 'what would be Sev's happiest ending' if indeed there had to be one... and viola - death by Hermione LOLThanks so much for the read and review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

I think of Sev as someone who 'planned on not making it' during the war so I kinda pulled from that idea, like he's always wondering when he'll finally meet his fate or that he believes he's living on borrowed time. But I also thought, 'what would be Sev's happiest ending' if indeed there had to be one... and viola - death by Hermione LOLThanks so much for the read and review!!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

ok hold on let me catch my breathe. lol forget it I need a cold shower.  hot damn that was smokin

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee! Glad you liked it!! Sev  + lemons  = *snort*

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

OH that is too funny  and fits so well PMSL

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee! Glad you liked it!! Sev  + lemons  = *snort*

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

OH that is too funny  and fits so well PMSL

10/10

snapesslavegirl

Very well written. I really enjoyed how you put Hermione on the spot.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks!! I think the idea of a slightly panicked Hermione is pretty amusing considering she is always so together in canon. :)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks!! I think the idea of a slightly panicked Hermione is pretty amusing considering she is always so together in canon. :)

10/10

CharmedForce

I love the titles you have given the different toys. And I would love my own Daydream potion... and my own Severus!

Great job!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

You may have to wait in line for your own Severus. I think he's like Super Bowl tickets - the waiting list is years long. :)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Or better yet... you distract Hermione and I'll grab Sev... and I promise I'll bring him to you just as soon as the coast is clear.  *snickers*Thanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

You may have to wait in line for your own Severus. I think he's like Super Bowl tickets - the waiting list is years long. :)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Or better yet... you distract Hermione and I'll grab Sev... and I promise I'll bring him to you just as soon as the coast is clear.  *snickers*Thanks for the review!!

0/10

Brisinggammen

I loved it! A wonderfully smutty one-shot. And a great answer to the prompt. I wonder what she will say, when her mum asks her where they met...

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

:) Severus, sex toys, and smut... oh my! It was a wonderful prompt!! :) Hope I did it justice and I'm really glad you liked it!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

:) Severus, sex toys, and smut... oh my! It was a wonderful prompt!! :) Hope I did it justice and I'm really glad you liked it!!

10/10

Sampdoria

I loooooved it!!! Absolutely brilliant! I do so look forward to see who wrote this magnificient story:-))

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

ladyluv

Severus is such a hottie in this one - loved the smut - it was great.  A great little sex fic for Hermione and Severus. A definite winner.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!!

10/10

Maddie

Excellent. I loved Severus toying with her.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

:) Thanks!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

:) Thanks!!

10/10

beaweasley2

I think that this can top the 'Severus is a sex-god' list! Wowzers! Way too hot – and loved every minute of it! Good job!   cold shower…. need cold water… or a fan…

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee! Glad you liked it!! Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee! Glad you liked it!! Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

mikimoto

I like the fact that he seems convinced that she will kill him through accidental body-part-induced asphyxiation ... and that he is ok with that.  You make it so, so clear just which brain is doing his thinking for him. 

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

He does seem to give in to the prospect of death rather readily doesn't he. *snickers* Thanks for the read and review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

He does seem to give in to the prospect of death rather readily doesn't he. *snickers* Thanks for the read and review!!

0/10

austoz

That was great! really enjoyable and well writen. I like your humor.        

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hmmm... that may mean we're both a little twisted. LOLThanks so much for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hmmm... that may mean we're both a little twisted. LOLThanks so much for the review!!

10/10

barbied011

Great lemon!  Now I just need a daydream potion...Does Sev ship to the US or better yet, do you think Hemione will let me borrow him? 

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Personnally, if I were Hermione, I don't know if I'd let him alone long enough to be lent out. lolThanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Personnally, if I were Hermione, I don't know if I'd let him alone long enough to be lent out. lolThanks for the review!!

10/10

Robby

I enjoyed the story very much, especially Hermione's reaction in the store when she realized it was Snape--what a hilarious image!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!!

10/10

kittylefish

great story!  i loved the set up, and enjoyed watching severus play cat-and-mouse with her for a bit.  and then - wow!  very hot.  perfectly paced for ultimate pleasure.  (does that sound like a tagline from one of the boxes in that shop?)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee - maybe you should apply for a job at Eros' as one of their advertisers :) Who knows you might even get free merchandise - that'd be a nice perk. lolThanks for the read and review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee - maybe you should apply for a job at Eros' as one of their advertisers :) Who knows you might even get free merchandise - that'd be a nice perk. lolThanks for the read and review!!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I loved this. Whoot. Thanks for posting a response to this prompt, and I loved the items in the shop.~wonders where I can buy one of these in RL~:)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

~wonders where I can buy one of these in RL~ <-- don't we all girl, don't we all. LOL Thanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

~wonders where I can buy one of these in RL~ <-- don't we all girl, don't we all. LOL Thanks for the review!!

10/10

mia madwyn

Divine.

Absolutely divine!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks! *hugs*

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks! *hugs*

10/10

savine_snape

Merlins beard this story is HOT.......I needed to switch the fan on half way through now Im off to have a cold shower.Fantastic weaving of a story well doneSavine x

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

hee hee. glad you liked it. I think pretty much anything with Severus and lemons = HOT!! :)Thanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

hee hee. glad you liked it. I think pretty much anything with Severus and lemons = HOT!! :)Thanks for the review!!

0/10

septentrion

Thanks for the ride (pun intended).

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee. :)

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee. :)

10/10

FlittterKat

Wow, you took the prompts and definitely made them your own. Your story made me laugh about Hermione's reactions. Enjoyed it and hope to read more of your work.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thanks! I'm glad you decided to check it out and that you enjoyed it.Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

10/10

Faris_Eirin

Oh! Loved it! ... Now I need a cold shower ;)Well done, it's the kind of story I like.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hee! Well then it did it's job if you need cooling off. LOL Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!!

0/10

a_bees_buzz

Death by Hermione, a fitting end indeed.  As delicious as the smut was, what I really liked about this story was the depiction of the insecurities and hesitance of the characters.  By the time you got them into bed, it was so much more than a mere PWP.

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for the 'death by Hermione', I figured since it was for the "Post DH Prompt Challenge" and I had probably the only prompt that had nothing of Snape's death or DH compliance in it, that I should at least mention a possible way that he could meet his end - and one that might not be so bad for him. LOL

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for the 'death by Hermione', I figured since it was for the "Post DH Prompt Challenge" and I had probably the only prompt that had nothing of Snape's death or DH compliance in it, that I should at least mention a possible way that he could meet his end - and one that might not be so bad for him. LOL

10/10

sherrithewriter

Lovely story. Sexy, sweer, funny and dare I say it, gee-licious!

10/10

sherrithewriter

Lovely story. Sexy, sweet, funny and dare I say it, gee-licious!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hahaha thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)And thanks for the review!!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

Hahaha thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)And thanks for the review!!

10/10

sregner

That was FABULOUS!  *fanning self*.  I always love a sexy Severus (I just imagine Alan Rickman)!

Response from Mazzy (Author of GeeLicious)

:) Thanks! That is a very nice compliment. and I too enjoy a sexy Sev - or AR for that matter LOL

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