Part 5
The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger
Chapter 5 of 6
bound_by_passionHermione's body has been found, alone, in the snow. But who killed her? And why? Severus must follow the clues to find the deeply twisted truth.
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A/N: The penultimate part of the tale.
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I remember running from the building, out into the biting wind, without even bothering to don my cloak. My feet slipped upon the black ice on the pavement, skidding from underneath me as though they had a life of their own.
I drew my wand, pointing it forward.
After that, I remember little else. How I got to number 49 Highfield remains somewhat of a mystery. I assume I Apparated, but I cannot be sure. I was in such a state that it is surprising I did not splinch myself. You see, nothing else mattered then but finding Hermione alive.
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I rushed up the steps, taking two at a time until I reached the door. It was green with a lion’s head knocker. A very Gryffindor house, even if the owner was a Slytherin through and through.
“Alohamora,” I whispered, watching with amazement as the door opened. My hands shook as I pushed against the wood, my head filled with thoughts of Hermione.
I hadn’t expected it to open. I was expecting far more complex locking and warding charms, but from the looks of things, whoever had locked the door was in a hurry. Or wasn’t expecting to be found.
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The hallway was dark, heavy with the scent of must and decay. Great curtains rose like mountains from either side, blocking out the moonlight that lit the world beyond the glass. I walked forward, the tops of my fingers brushing against the dusty velvet. Beneath me the floorboards creaked, the noise amplified to an almost unimaginable volume by my mind.
It was foolish of me to come alone. Of course, I knew who waited for me at the other end of the corridor, but not what. The mind is fragile, and I didn’t know just how damaged hers had become.
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I found the door with relative ease. A light shone from beneath it, acting like a beacon in the darkness. I walked towards it, no longer caring how loud or hurried my footsteps had become. I was almost there. So close that I believed I could feel her presence. It was an encouraging point. There was no way to escape now.
My hand fumbled for the knob, but after what seemed a lifetime of trying, I managed to grasp it. I twisted it sharply to the right.
The door swung open, revealing a pair of very familiar dark brown eyes.
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“Severus?”
I watched as Hermione, or who I assumed to be Hermione stumbled backwards, slamming her elbow hard into the desk behind her. The crack resonated through the room with a sickening echo.
Blonde hair, curled slightly at the ends, fell across her face, hiding her eyes from view – the only part that I still recognised, the only part of her countenance that still said ‘Hemione’. She looked like the secretary. A glamour, I thought. And a very complex one, at that.
“Dr. Granger, I presume,” I said, my words cold, bitter.
I watched as her face began to dissolve.
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Slowly but surely, the Hermione I remembered began to appear in front of my eyes, her image fuzzy as the molecules that made up her skin, muscle and bone began to realign themselves. Lips, red and seemingly disconnected from the rest of her face, began to form words.
“Why are you here?”
I stuffed my hands into my pockets, the tips of my fingers brushing against my wand. She seemed calm, but I wanted to take no chances. Hermione was as devious as she was back in school, if not more so.
“Because you have been a very naughty girl.”
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Her face reappeared with the muscles pulled back in shock. Her eyes wide, she looked back at me, not quite believing I was real. It would have been amusing to watch such a self-confident woman lost for answers had the situation been any different. Had we not been stood in a dark, dank backroom somewhere in the middle of Birmingham, facing one another as enemies rather than friends.
In the blink of an eye, her hand shot into her top pocket and removed a wand. It was hers. The one she’d said she’d lost.
“Not nearly naughty enough,” she whispered.
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Caught unawares and not nearly quick enough to the draw, I became pinned with my back to the door, her wand at my throat. She was faster than I had expected.
“I’ll ask again,” she said, her voice low and dangerous. “Why are you here?”
She was less than a hands breadth away, and I could feel her breath, hot and damp against my cheek. She smelt of roses, the tiny ones with sweet scents. There was something else there too, but I couldn’t identify it. Something unwholesome though not unappetising. Deadly but desirable.
“Why did you murder Rebecca Dawes?”
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71 Reviews | 7.14/10 Average
Different. I really enjoyed this. Kudos!
EXCELLENT!!!!!
...what on earth? I have no idea what happened. I get the gist, but... what?
morbidly fascinating!
very interesting and intense! i know you said murder but i still hoped it would end happy. As much as i wanted a happy ending i applaud your ability to keep us guessing to the end. I would never have guessed. excellent job! Thanks for writing.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it.
I was in the mood for something creepy today, and this story promised to be perfect for that; I wasn't disappointed. Well done.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad I managed to satisfy your mood. :)
Whoa! That was a very unexpected ending. Good suspenseful writing.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Okay, not at all what I was expecting, but cool anyway. Very downbeat ending, I like it. No fluff, no happily ever after, just cruel, harsh reality where shit happens. Excellent. many thanks!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, even though there was no happy ending.
What about their motivation? It evades me. Ron - he was an alcoholic, and she suffered it for too long. Understood. Rebecca - hated secretary that she just could not live with, especially since she was getting mad with remorse (short relationships as a sign for this?). But the patient? Did she kill her patient too? Because you mention that she has been sued for a mishap in surgery, yet Severus says that she has killed with poison twice. Ron was poison, but Rebecca was Unforgivable, right? And Severus? Why did he kill her instead of taking her to custody? Was it because he had grieved for her already and was now upset that the real she destroyed his illusion of Hermione so completely? It does make sense in a way, but if I can, I would like your explanation too. This was moving and intriguing, passionate and chilling.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
She killed a patient in surgery. Overdose. Accidental (presumably). I was going to include it int he fic, but I couldn't make it work in the drabble format without sacrficing points. And as for Severus, I think it was more to do woth saving her than anything else. Hermione had become so broken that she would only ever hurt others. Helping by hurting. But, then again, I think Severus was a little broken too, grieving for two women. I hope that this clears things up for you a little. :)I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic.
Wow I wouldn't have dreamt of another ending. Well, maybe a more happy one knowing my romantic nature. But this ending is so brilliant that I like it even more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm so very glad that you liked it. :)
So Sev killed her to rid the world of her evil... but I don't really get why she killed the girl. I can totally see why she'd kill Ron however LOL May have to scan it again and see what I missed. A very good suspensful mystery.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Hermione killed the secretary because she was blackmailing her. She was going to reveal that Hermione had murdered someone during court. I don't think I made that quite clear enough in the fic. lol. Ah well, I shall remember to make things a little clearer next time. :)I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
How very twisted! So Severus was charged with her murder even though it was Hermione who killed the secretary. Who was the 2nd murder that Snape accused her of committing that the secratary was going to reveal? I really enjoyed the twist at the end. Thank you
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
It was a patient of hers. I was going to put that in, but I couldn't get it to work with the drabble format without losing points. I need more practice at that, I think. lol. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, my dear. :)
Can it be Umbridge dead instead? Has Hermione run off to start a new life? yes I have millon questions. I'll just shut up and go to the next chapter
You will be happy to know I have NO idea what has been discovered! I love coming along for the ride.
Hermoine was a cornor sued for malpractice??? The plot thickens and you have me captivated.
A mystery! I love a mystery! Is the POV from Snape? Happily hopping to the next chapter
Ooo, I wasn't expecting that but very nice. I was thinking Hermione was put under the Imperius curse at first, but I do like this ending much more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the ending. :)
Whoa. What an ending. I didn't see that coming at all. Great story.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it :)
A very surprising ending, I guess somewhere along the way Hermione lost her mind. I'm not sure why Severus killed her, perhaps he knew she would be sentanced to death and he wanted her to be spared the trial. I supposed he was sentanced to death because he took the law into his hands, he could have claimed self defense, but I think he wanted things quiet as well. What a sad ending for Severus it gave me chills. Happy Easter.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Yes. That was exactly the angle I was going for. :)I'm so glad that you enjoyed the fic. And a happy (belated) easter to you too. *hugs*
What a painful ending for them both...
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Indeed. But was it for the best...Thank you for the review. :)
The secretary?? Is this guilt over Ron's death? ZOMG!
I'm completely baffled LOL
I am putty in your hands, as usual.
So she is not dead which means she has disappeared and maybe has been kidnapped. Was Delores Umbridge in love with Ron and she wants Hermione to be punished for what she'd done to him? That would be much fun. And if it's not Hermione who is it? ANd where is the missing page in the report of the trial. That's too much questions for one single chapter. You're definitely the best.
Ouch! This is really getting good!