Part 3
The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger
Chapter 3 of 6
bound_by_passionHermione's body has been found, alone, in the snow. But who killed her? And why? Severus must follow the clues to find the deeply twisted truth.
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I woke the next morning to the sound of sirens. The downside to living near a motorway is that one often finds himself waking to sirens as yet another careless driver meets his maker upon the slippery tarmac. This occasion, I found out later, was no exception.
The bed felt empty, though it often was. As much as I wished otherwise, Hermione had never slept here. I had never quite plucked up the courage to ask her to spend the night. Or even for a simple kiss. I am more of a coward than most historians will have you believe.
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Regret, that is to say, is one of life’s more troublesome demons. It gnaws away at your insides, at your soul, without you even realising, until one day you find that all your humanity has gone. That you are left a mere husk of a man, with only the tired concept of love to see you to the end.
Perhaps, in retrospect, that is the reason why I so longed to find Hermione’s killer. I had nothing else. You may call me sentimental, and rightly so, but love is the most important thing in the world. And I loved her.
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I was walking towards the kitchen when the phone rang, the loud wail echoing down the empty hallway like a Banshee. A Muggle device, I realise, but the Ministry seemed to have become a lot more reliant on Muggle devices. Well, the useful ones, at any rate. Besides, it was far more convenient than the Floo: no fireplace was required.
Still drowsy, I answered, surprised to hear the voice of the Head Auror reply. Hermione’s case had been given to the Dayshift, rather than Night, like the Lab. And, apparently, they had been doing some detective work of their own.
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They had two prime suspects: the patient, and the secretary. The first had gone missing on the night the murder was assumed to have taken place. The man, James Turner, had filed a malpractice suit against Hermione after a complication arose in surgery. The case was to go to court the following Thursday, but the outlook wasn’t good. Perhaps James had taken justice into his own hands. The motive certainly fit.
The second, a meek woman named Rebecca Dawes, had been the last person to see Hermione alive. But the established motive, I thought, was rather too trivial for murder.
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Talks with the woman had revealed nothing particularly interesting. True, there was certainly no love lost between Hermione and Rebecca, but something told me that this woman was not a killer. Her objections seemed more likely to be voiced through words than actions.
Rebecca, it appeared, disagreed with Hermione’s personal life, rather than her professional one. She was very much of the opinion that a widow should act like a widow.
It had been almost eight years since Ronald’s death. But, unlike Rebecca, I couldn’t blame Hermione for trying to get on with her life. Nobody wants to be alone.
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Of course, it rankled somewhat that she never gave me a chance. But, looking back, I suppose it would have hurt more. One night, one week, one month; her relationships never lasted any longer. And I very much doubt I could have given her up once I got a taste of life with her. Friendship, for all of its drawbacks, had some advantages.
I said goodbye to the Head Auror and put the receiver down. My head buzzed with thoughts and ideas, all of them about Hermione. I had to solve the case. My sanity seemed to depend on it.
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After a breakfast of coffee, I changed and made my way to the Lab. A pile of paperwork awaited me, as did the evidence to be processed, cluttering up my usually immaculate desk. As it was, I found myself in too much of a state to care. I knew that the key to Hermione’s killer lay somewhere amongst the mess. It was now a question of finding it. Time was of the essence.
Then, you see, I believed that every second counted. That the killer was running. Of course, it was only later I found out how wrong I was.
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Nothing of any note had been revealed in the Autopsy, save that Hermione had had surgery. Not recently, as her medical records soon confirmed, but about four years ago. Her nose, forehead and left cheek had been remodelled, skin and plastic recreating that flawless finish she’d once had. Beauty is entirely superficial, and it seemed that she could no longer live with her scars. I thought no less of her for it. The war was hard on all of us, and perhaps it helped her to forget. It is terrible to be reminded each time one looks in a mirror.
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I ran the nail scrapings first, only to find a mixture of dirt and her own DNA carefully locked away in epithelial cells. The slightest trace of acetone came up on the slides, identified by the spike in the Magi-Spec reading. A common chemical found in nail varnish remover. The Muggle variety.
Hermione was of Muggle descent, so it did not seem unusual for her to use Muggle remover. What did seem unusual, however, was her need to use it. She never wore nail varnish. I dimly remembered her saying it gave her a rash.
Something else that did not fit.
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The wand had not been tampered with. It was as pristine as ever, without even a scratch on the handle, almost as if it had never been used.
But it had.
Out of the five spells cast, only the Unforgivable had been identifiable as out of the ordinary, the rest relating to her work: healing spells, most of a more complex nature than those ever used by our dear departed Poppy.
It would have taken hours to unravel their precise nature, but their general description gave me enough of an idea. Sometimes it pays to be vague. Sometimes it doesn’t.
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I spent three hours processing, checking every fibre, every substance, and still nothing had flagged up as unusual. No foreign DNA, no abnormal fibres, no fingerprints. I was left with nothing but the theory that, perhaps, in the last couple of hours before her death, she had worn nail varnish, and subsequently removed it. Which left the problem of the rash. Surely, if she was allergic, there would have been some sign of anaphylactic shock. But no. Her skin remained as pristine as ever. It was vexing, to say the least.
There was only one option that remained open.
Polyjuice.
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I took a strand of her hair, one with a skin tag, and began to process, slicing it in two and feeding the half without the skin tag under the microscope. The rest would go to DNA.
Polyjuice is an amazing potion. It can change the appearance of a man so completely that even his own mother would be fooled. A seemingly flawless potion then, frequently used; the opportunity to change victims at will has its appeal for several reasons.
However, Polyjuice like all other potions, has its tells. It is easily enough identified, providing you know where to look.
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Polyjuice cannot alter the keratin structure. It can only give the appearance of altering it. And, whilst keratin can be found in many places, the easiest to use is hair. The microscope would reveal its true nature.
I looked through the eyepiece, down to the hair below. The hair was interesting, but not in the way I imagined it would be. No Polyjuice. No potions at all, in fact. But that didn’t make it ordinary.
I picked up the phone. My heart was thumping in my chest. Suddenly, everything made sense. I had only one question left to answer.
‘Why?’
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger
71 Reviews | 7.14/10 Average
Different. I really enjoyed this. Kudos!
EXCELLENT!!!!!
...what on earth? I have no idea what happened. I get the gist, but... what?
morbidly fascinating!
very interesting and intense! i know you said murder but i still hoped it would end happy. As much as i wanted a happy ending i applaud your ability to keep us guessing to the end. I would never have guessed. excellent job! Thanks for writing.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it.
I was in the mood for something creepy today, and this story promised to be perfect for that; I wasn't disappointed. Well done.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad I managed to satisfy your mood. :)
Whoa! That was a very unexpected ending. Good suspenseful writing.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Okay, not at all what I was expecting, but cool anyway. Very downbeat ending, I like it. No fluff, no happily ever after, just cruel, harsh reality where shit happens. Excellent. many thanks!
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, even though there was no happy ending.
What about their motivation? It evades me. Ron - he was an alcoholic, and she suffered it for too long. Understood. Rebecca - hated secretary that she just could not live with, especially since she was getting mad with remorse (short relationships as a sign for this?). But the patient? Did she kill her patient too? Because you mention that she has been sued for a mishap in surgery, yet Severus says that she has killed with poison twice. Ron was poison, but Rebecca was Unforgivable, right? And Severus? Why did he kill her instead of taking her to custody? Was it because he had grieved for her already and was now upset that the real she destroyed his illusion of Hermione so completely? It does make sense in a way, but if I can, I would like your explanation too. This was moving and intriguing, passionate and chilling.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
She killed a patient in surgery. Overdose. Accidental (presumably). I was going to include it int he fic, but I couldn't make it work in the drabble format without sacrficing points. And as for Severus, I think it was more to do woth saving her than anything else. Hermione had become so broken that she would only ever hurt others. Helping by hurting. But, then again, I think Severus was a little broken too, grieving for two women. I hope that this clears things up for you a little. :)I'm glad that you enjoyed the fic.
Wow I wouldn't have dreamt of another ending. Well, maybe a more happy one knowing my romantic nature. But this ending is so brilliant that I like it even more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm so very glad that you liked it. :)
So Sev killed her to rid the world of her evil... but I don't really get why she killed the girl. I can totally see why she'd kill Ron however LOL May have to scan it again and see what I missed. A very good suspensful mystery.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Hermione killed the secretary because she was blackmailing her. She was going to reveal that Hermione had murdered someone during court. I don't think I made that quite clear enough in the fic. lol. Ah well, I shall remember to make things a little clearer next time. :)I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
How very twisted! So Severus was charged with her murder even though it was Hermione who killed the secretary. Who was the 2nd murder that Snape accused her of committing that the secratary was going to reveal? I really enjoyed the twist at the end. Thank you
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
It was a patient of hers. I was going to put that in, but I couldn't get it to work with the drabble format without losing points. I need more practice at that, I think. lol. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, my dear. :)
Can it be Umbridge dead instead? Has Hermione run off to start a new life? yes I have millon questions. I'll just shut up and go to the next chapter
You will be happy to know I have NO idea what has been discovered! I love coming along for the ride.
Hermoine was a cornor sued for malpractice??? The plot thickens and you have me captivated.
A mystery! I love a mystery! Is the POV from Snape? Happily hopping to the next chapter
Ooo, I wasn't expecting that but very nice. I was thinking Hermione was put under the Imperius curse at first, but I do like this ending much more.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the ending. :)
Whoa. What an ending. I didn't see that coming at all. Great story.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Thank you. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it :)
A very surprising ending, I guess somewhere along the way Hermione lost her mind. I'm not sure why Severus killed her, perhaps he knew she would be sentanced to death and he wanted her to be spared the trial. I supposed he was sentanced to death because he took the law into his hands, he could have claimed self defense, but I think he wanted things quiet as well. What a sad ending for Severus it gave me chills. Happy Easter.
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Yes. That was exactly the angle I was going for. :)I'm so glad that you enjoyed the fic. And a happy (belated) easter to you too. *hugs*
What a painful ending for them both...
Response from bound_by_passion (Author of The Murder of Miss Hermione Granger)
Indeed. But was it for the best...Thank you for the review. :)
The secretary?? Is this guilt over Ron's death? ZOMG!
I'm completely baffled LOL
I am putty in your hands, as usual.
So she is not dead which means she has disappeared and maybe has been kidnapped. Was Delores Umbridge in love with Ron and she wants Hermione to be punished for what she'd done to him? That would be much fun. And if it's not Hermione who is it? ANd where is the missing page in the report of the trial. That's too much questions for one single chapter. You're definitely the best.
Ouch! This is really getting good!