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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Arguments
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1: One-shot Story

Arguments

chivalric

37 Reviews   |   37 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 3,602 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Snape is alive – only he doesn't believe it. Sometimes a little arguing is needed to open one's eyes.

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chivalric

Member Since 2007  |  65 Stories  |  Favorited by 776  |  213 Reviews Written  |  4,182 Review Responses

Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.

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0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Lol, love the prompts. I'd have never thought of him being stuck in a coma due to his occlumency shields- brilliant thinking. I liked this little one shot, it'd be a great piece to build more off of! ;)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you! For reading as well as for reviewing!

10/10

KarenDetroit

Silly me, I enjoyed that. Perfect Valentine's Day treat, dark and sweet.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. And if you are in the mood for sweet, try Valentine Mischief ;-)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thanks for reading and reviewing. And if you are in the mood for sweet, try Valentine Mischief ;-)

10/10

deedeebug95

loved it!! funny!!I'd paint runes ALL over Snapie poo,,,,,,with chocolate sauce!!!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

*beams* Chocolate, yes? Hmm, nice idea!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

*beams* Chocolate, yes? Hmm, nice idea!

10/10

sevibaby

I will say that this was really good.  It seems that only Granger can argue with Snape to this point. 

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you, dear!

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Nerdlee

That was extremely, satisfyingly amusing. I love your sense of humour. I loved this entire story. Just perfect. Thank you.~Mia

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Always my pleasure. I don't write as much as I used to - at least, not in this universe - but I am glad my stories are still read. And thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Nereide

Perfectly wonderful! :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you very much! It was the first challenge prompt I answered, and I am glad it went down well.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Diese story habe ich ursprünglich für einen Wettbewerb geschrieben (challenge entry). Sie hat den dritten oder vierten Platz erreicht, was mich immer noch sehr freut. Und natürlich bin ich froh dass Du die story magst ;-)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you very much! It was the first challenge prompt I answered, and I am glad it went down well.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Diese story habe ich ursprünglich für einen Wettbewerb geschrieben (challenge entry). Sie hat den dritten oder vierten Platz erreicht, was mich immer noch sehr freut. Und natürlich bin ich froh dass Du die story magst ;-)

10/10

TheBattyDragon

That was just too funny. Poor Snape.Thank you so much for sharing, I enjoyed it immensely.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Glad you liked it. The story unfolded itself whilst I read the prompt...

10/10

gabi1791

Hilarious!! (btw: I'm reading all of your stories which I haven't read so far.)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thanks for doing that - I am so glad you like what I come up with!

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ofelia

Nice twist better than the story bought version!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you so much!

9/10

Anonymous

Nice story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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i_read

Oh I love it! Scare him back by telling him he's naked and painted! Too late at night to write more but I just had to drop you a quick note and say I really enjoyed the dialogue that you wrote. Thanks!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

I had a lot of fun writing it, and I am very happy you like what I came up with. Thanks for the effort of reviewing despite the late time!

10/10

phoenix

Very nicely done. I loved the conversation in his head. That was wonderful and brilliant. And having him shamed out of his coma. LOL I just love that. Thanks for that bit of humor in there.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Wow, thank you! I'm currently suffering from a cold, and your review made me feel immensely better!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

OMG this was too funny.  And there is just too many parts to comment on, so know that I loved it.   Great job.Tamara aka

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Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thanks for your review, dear!

10/10

irishredlass

Well Done!  This begs for a sequel! Irish

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

:-) Be warned - I'm well known to blackmail my reviewers into betareading requested sequels!Thanks so much for reviewing.

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

This story was immensely entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed the banter between them. Great use of that prompt!  =)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you so much for your friendly words!

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sunny33

scared out of a coma by the thought of nudity, now that's original!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

We are talking of Snape here - I think he sometimes actually forgets that he is nude under his robes :-)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

That was cute and funny. Lovely banter!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Dearest Dreamy, thanks for reviewing!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Dearest Dreamy, thanks for reviewing!

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MollysSister

My favorite part was this "Hell, there were runes painted up and down his arms, across his chest, over his stomach and – Merlin! – even on every inch of his lower abdomen. "Tell me… you didn't… do it," Snape croaked, leaning heavily on the girl who had still wrapped her arms around his bony, pale figure." the Runes is a great idea, it all felt so magical. Tee hee. Thank yo mystery author

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you for your lovely review. I have a thing for runes, I must admit!

10/10

Lkmaide

Heeheeheehee  I like it!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you!

9/10

beaweasley2

I got to the lying naked part nad Harry did the undressing and nearly fell off my chair laughing!This was realy great! A nice version of this prompt. Well done.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

So glad you liked it - I love make people fall off their chairs *g* Thanks for reviewing!

8/10

ssdawn

I loved the banter back and forth; even though I felt like smacking Snape half way through! I love Hermione "getting" to him, even in a coma! Nice job!

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Believe me, I would just love the opportunity to give Snape a smack *smirk* Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

kittylefish

i liked your take on this oh-so-much!  very amusing.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thank you so much, reviews like yours motivate me to do some more writing :-)))

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GeminiScorp

I love the snarky dialogue! I do believe your Hermione is a match for our potions master. Thanks for sharing your wonderful story.

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Thanks for reviewing - I had a lot of fun writing/imagining the dialogue!

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septentrion

The dialogue was very funny and witty. Kuddos to you, mystery author. I guess Hermione wants something out of Snape (or maybe Snape himself).

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

Definitely the latter. Good girls always get the Snape!Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

Moreteadk

Hah! That was cute. That's got to be the craziest shaman plan I've seen so far.

Something tells me that Severus is going to absolutely hate reverse psychology for the rest of his life, though. :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Arguments)

She won't have to use it on him again, unless of course he decides he doesn't like her courting him. In this case, she wouldn't hesitate to do whatever she has to do to persuade him.Thanks for reviewing!

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