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Detention
chivalric27 Reviews | 6.59/10 (27 Ratings, 0 Likes, 96 Favorites )
Hermione Granger always tries to gather knowledge, whatever the circumstances. Detention with her Potions master seems to be just another opportunity.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Detention
Sweet and Hermione`s machinations are quite sexy as well. Thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
That was an odd set up. I loved the ending, where he, at least, realized what that ache was, even if it didn't seem that she did. Her internal comment about sex being better with someone you didn't care about was odd, threw me for a loop for a minute. Nicely done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Only because he fell in love - and knows about it - doesn't mean she's in love, too. At the moment, she isn't. She wanted him, seduced him, and enjoyed the experience. Sex with Ron, whom she loves dearly, isn't good at all. Sex with Snape, who she hated until a little while ago, was brilliant. No surprise she commented as she did.There is a sequel, though, "Second Thoughts." A bit more emotions there, I guess.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
awww, how sweet. Poor Severus, he never stood a chance. At least he found someone to be happy with.
I'm slowly but surely getting trhough the long list of fics to read today. (I do love a good day off to laze about)
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
I think you shouldn't call the man poor ;-)) And so many thanks for not only reading, but reviewing as well!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
I think you shouldn't call the man poor ;-)) And so many thanks for not only reading, but reviewing as well!
This is very beautiful! Great work!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thanks! I should be able to post the sequel sort of soon-ish.
What a wonderful story. Even though you kept the story line sweet and simple, it still managed to convey a huge range of deep emotions that neither of them had thought would come about before they started their night of passion. One can only hope Hermione fully realises that she cant live without this man!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Wow, thanks for the review! I have the sequel ready, it just needs to get betaread. I hope to post it soon...
OMG!!! this one is so sweet!!! I almost cryyyyyyyy!!! You are AMAZING!!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
*lol* Thank you, dear!
Hmmm I assume a happy ending since it's kind of in the air. Good job!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
I think you assume correctly *g* Thanks for reviewing!
Very touching and sweet. I like how you described Severus' reaction to his own laughter. I would gladly visit this world again. You have provided a very enticing budding relationship. I don't know if it would have legs after this one night, but somehow I see Hermione returning to him after a few years ready to settle down. They both always knew she would return when she was ready. She just needed a little time away first. Well that's how I see it anyway. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Hello, JoAnne!
Many thanks for reviewing - your words triggered an idea and I am bound to write a sequel, set a few years later, as you have suggested. I hope you don't mind me dedicating it to you?
chivalric
Response from JoKK2 (Reviewer)
Mind? Never. That is a very sweet thought. I am touched. Thanks.
Really well thought through. Love it a lotThanksSavine
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Several years later - thanks for reviewing!
I loved it. It makes your chest ache. Very sweet. I love very sweet. I also love a Severus who survives that awful woman's story. I dislike her for that....always will. Didn't even bother to finish the book. You on the other hand are wonderful! I like your endings!!!! I'm hooked on your stories. I even read them again a day or two later and enjoy them just as much or more than the first time. Thank you. Your stories are the most cheerful things in my life right now. You will help me keep going. I just need a break sometimes and your stories do that for me. Writing this review made me cry. How silly is that? Breastlady (Susan)
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Hi, Susan!Honestly, I had no intention to make you cry, at least not with this story. It was the second I ever wrote, and I am glad there are still people out there who read it and enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing, dear. Reviews are the reason to write and to post; without them, I would have given up long ago. *hugs you*
Simply wonderful story!
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Thank you so much!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you so much!
I loved Hermione's plotting. Severus's reaction was wonderful, especially when he surprised himself by laughing! T loved the sweet ending.
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you so much. I like him laughing :-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you so much. I like him laughing :-)
I like the way you portrayed both characters. The ending was sweet!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thanks! It was the second story I ever wrote and my beta Dreamy_Dragon helped a lot about smoothing out the characters.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thanks! It was the second story I ever wrote and my beta Dreamy_Dragon helped a lot about smoothing out the characters.Thanks for reviewing!
Snape could give me detention anytime. Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Hehehe - after he's had a shower, any time!
A beautiful story. It's a bit hard to find the right words, but I'll try. :) It is a well written story, simple and straight forward, yet complex. gentle and soothing, that has you gasping in those jot moments.
It was exactly what I was in the mood to read, so thanks ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Oh, that was sweet. I really liked it. Will there be a sequel?
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Now why couldn't I have detentions like that in college. Oooo some of my professors were definate Snape material. Well done. Irish
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Don't worry - never happened to me, either. But then, I haven't been as brave as Hermione *g* Thanks for reviewing!
What an absolutely brilliant story!!!! It had it all, humour, lemons, some Ron bashing (for one who is allerlgic to the Ron/Hermione pairing that is an added plus:-)), a snarky potions master, a Hermione who knows what she wants, (great as long as it is Severus:-)), and the hint of love that both of them hadn't thougth of in advance, but that made it self known. I absolutely loved Hermiones jelousy over Severus previous lover, even though she doesn't aknowlegde or know that she was jelous yet:-))A brilliant, magnificiant piece of work! I know I am going to read this story several times:-))
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you so very much for this very lovely review! You made my day!
I love this, and the ending is beautiful!
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Thank you, dear!
See! Being brazen does pay off! Darling - well, engrosing story. I really loved this.
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
*beams* Thank you!
ooh, sweet! After a horrible New Years Eve, this was exactly what I needed, thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Really and truly - it was my pleasure. And I hope that the new year will be a good one for you. Thanks for reviewing!
Awww!!! Snape in love is a glorious thing :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Detention)
Sorry, I can't help it - in most of my stories he gets the girl *smirk* Thanks for reviewing!