Christmas Presents
chivalric32 Reviews | 6.44/10 (32 Ratings, 0 Likes, 51 Favorites )
Christmas is not the best time for Professor Snape, and then he is kidnapped on top of it.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Christmas Presents
Her Gryffindor courage was a good match for his Slytherin cunning, wasn't it? I'm so happy Hermione's Christmas present to Severus lead them to marriage and a family!Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Unless I pair Snape with Remus, it usually ends up in him marrying Hermione ;-)As usual, thanks for reading and reviewing!
This was gooood... Satisfying, even. Very satisfying.I've read hundreds, maybe thousands of fanfics, and after a while you just get so used to hearing of how Hermione has suddenly become this stunning beauty, with shiny curls, and perfect skin and so on. And I really have a hard time imagining Hermione that way. She's a hardworking girl who cares so much more about books and knowledge than beauty. I think if Hermione really was as gorgeous and perfect as too many fanfic-writers portrait her as, she would be more likely to be friends with Lavender and Parvati, rather than Ron and Harry.You really nailed the characters! All of them. No one seemed OOC, and that quite difficult to achieve. I'm very impressed. One thing, though; Severus mentioned that 'her friend Weasley had decided to marry Lovegood a few years later', yet later Hermione mentioned that she would see Lavender at the burrow. Did Severus remember wrong? Are we discussing different Weasleys? Or did Ron divorce Luna and marry Lavender? Tell me! Tell me!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
*hangs her head in shame*Sorry, dear, but it was/is simply a mistake I made. Initially, I had Ron marry Luna, but in other/later stories, I always paired him with Lavender and Neville with Luna. Obviously, I forgot to change that bit in this story, although I should have done it, as there is a sequel to it. Thanks for telling me - I'll fix it!Oh, and thanks for your lovely review! I, too, think Hermione isn't the perfect beauty. Still, Snape loves her ;-)
Awwwww this is so very heartfelt. I can just see Hermione being the odd friend out. I am glad she could find happiness with Severus.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Honestly - with whom else? Ron?
No way. The Snape for the good girl, I say!And thanks for reviewing, of course.
I didn't get to read this when you first posted it, but I just wanted to tell you how much I liked it. Merry Christmas in May! :-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
*lol*Thanks!
So, I guess this is Sasha who is on her way into the world? Great work! I'll keep reading...
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Yes, definitely. I like the name, and although the stories are not really related, I usually use this name for Hermione's and Severus's daughter.Thanks for reviewing!
Sweet, sweet story!!! I really like it when Severus really gets what he really deserves. He is such a lovable curmudgeon, with a heart of gold - that's how I've always thought about Snape since having read "Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone." And you have captured him perfectly.Beth
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Thanks! I have big problems to see him as the twisted, cold-hearted basterd he seems to be in so many fics. I don't like them too much, I must admit. There is nearly always a happy ending in there if I write the story...
I absolutely loved it. I've read it before but I could not help reading it again. Beautiful story. Thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
I thank you for reviewing and apologise for the late response.
I am so glad he gave her the present she wanted.
Lovely story
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
It doesn't happen often, but sometimes Snape does the right thing at the right time *g*
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
It doesn't happen often, but sometimes Snape does the right thing at the right time *g*
Thanks for reviewing!
How lovely. I'm glad that I found it again after having passed up the chance to read it when you first posted it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Glas you found and read it in the end, very glad you took the time to review - thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Glas you found and read it in the end, very glad you took the time to review - thank you!
hah. wow, wasn't the ending i was quite expecting was it? no, suppose not, but wonderful all the same. hah. i would've loved to see his expression.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Now, what would you have expected? you made me curious there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Now, what would you have expected? you made me curious there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, that was very sweet. I wasn't expecting the turnout, but I really liked it. Good job!~
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Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
You dind't think I would have allowed him to walk away, did you? I rarely write bitter stories...
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
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Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
You dind't think I would have allowed him to walk away, did you? I rarely write bitter stories...
Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Reading this while listening to Dvorak's Rusalka was absolutely stunning.
*sigh*
Danke!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Immer gern geschehen :-)
Asbolutely beautiful. Merry Christmas. x
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Thanks for reviewing! And a very merry Christmas to (all of) you, too.
I'm glad I opened this "present." I love a happy ending in keeping with the holiday spirit. Well done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
I thank you for reviewing and apologise for the late response.
Oh! This was lovely!
*contented sigh*
Simply lovely. :D
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
:-)Thank you so much!
whoa this was good
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
I thank you for reviewing and apologise for the late response.
That's a nice Chritmas tale. And exactly the mood I am in at the moment. Thank you so much.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Nice characterization of the both of them. Fluff-o-riffic ending.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Well, it's Christmas, and I was in the mood for a bit of fluff *g* Thank you so much for reviewing!
What a lovely, angsty, sweet Christmas story! Very well done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Angsty wasn't really my intention, but I am glad you liked it nevertheless. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Aww what a perfect Chrismas present and what a beautiful story. I love it! Well done. This will have me grinning all day!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Thank you so very much! I really like it when people grin at what I wrote :-)))
Great story and LOVED the happy ending!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
A christmas story without a happy ending? Bah, humbug! *ggg*Thanks for reviewing and liking it!
A nice Christmas story... thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Well, I couldn't possibly write a nasty one, could I? No, definitely not ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
What a sweet little fic. No smut needed. Nicely done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Hehehe - there might be a bit of cuddling in my other stories *g* Thanks for the nice review!
What a wonderfull story!!! It made me cry, feeling so sad for Hermione, and smile for their happiness at the end. I am so happy I found and read this tonight!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Thank you so very much for your very nice review, it means a lot to me! I bite my nails every time I post a story. And I must admit, I have a thing for happy endings...
love the story.
<3
Response from chivalric (Author of Christmas Presents)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!